As an adult student I thank you for this video. Nice to get it fresh in mind before tomorrow morning. Good luck to everyone taking paper 1 tomorrow. You got this!!
structure .... Flashback - when you go back in time ,3 days ago etc.. Foreshadowing - when the writer gives clue about future ‘my heart was beating fast’ Zoom in - focus on one thing for example ‘pen’ , ‘specific character ‘ Zoom out - normally used to talk about setting Dialogue - when the character speak ‘hey there !’ New character New setting Change in tone Short sentence - to build up tense Long sentence - add details and slow down the narrative Short /long sentence - may show importance in both Shift in focus - talks about object then talks about another object for example ‘pen’ to ‘table’ Cyclical structure - similar stuff happening with beginning and ending Juxtaposition Extended metaphor Pace List Pov Overall tone Chronogical order Climax Repetition Links Mood , pathetic fallacy
I am in year 10 and I am struggling very much in English. I even go to extra classes on weekends but I still don't get anywhere. My tutor recommended that I watch your videos as it can help me get a grade 9 and once I saw these videos, I knew that you had just saved my grades! Thank you so much for posting this stuff as it helps a lot of people like me.
@@jimmykaboose8112 Onomatopoeia noun the formation of a word from a sound associated with what is named (e.g. cuckoo, sizzle ‘shush’). the use of onomatopoeia for literary effect.
thank you so much for the videos dude, you're a massive help and have somehow taught me more in three hours than my actual teacher has in 5 years 🤣 i can never actually sit down and do revision, so having someone go through it in a way i understand is so helpful!
the problem I have with structural devices is that they are hard to explain. It's often very hard to think of something to write about long/short sentences and most of the other things in the list.
Fantastic teacher you are , God bless you brother, may your success expands to nation in the name of Jesus Jesus of Nazareth Amen 🎉 Thank you for your wisdom
I understand all of it however would it be better to talk about the beginning middle and end say the same things but just add the three times before you start the sentence?
On another tutorial the lady did one paragraph writing about the whole text first she labelled the whole text with all the structural features then she wrote one big paragraph on all of the techniques throughout the whole text but mr everything english only used two quotes so i dont understand
IM REALLY SCARED SOMEONE PLEASE HELP! MY TEACHERS TAUGHT THAT WE HAVE TO DO STRUCTURE FROM BEGINNING, MIDDLE THEN END IN CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER, SO ISNT THAT 3 PARAGRAPHS!?!? please help like what do I honestly do
Sir, is there a difference between this one and last years ones as last year it was 3 pete paragraphs and I've practiced that a lot , is 3 pete paragraphs better or the two prteze;
This is the question I struggle on the most. You have no idea how helpful this is! Thank you
As an adult student I thank you for this video. Nice to get it fresh in mind before tomorrow morning. Good luck to everyone taking paper 1 tomorrow. You got this!!
I dont
@@turanjakhobi3417 Don’t lose self believe. Take a deep breath as you enter to compose yourself and tell yourself “I’ve got this!” 💪🏼💪🏼
@@turanjakhobi3417 you don't got this exam but you'll get it in games 🤣🤣
@@playerwith1664 ?
@@joshhoyle191 dont do that
can confirm , every of the 8 structural techniques u said came up. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for this.
structure ....
Flashback - when you go back in time ,3 days ago etc..
Foreshadowing - when the writer gives clue about future ‘my heart was beating fast’
Zoom in - focus on one thing for example ‘pen’ , ‘specific character ‘
Zoom out - normally used to talk about setting
Dialogue - when the character speak ‘hey there !’
New character
New setting
Change in tone
Short sentence - to build up tense
Long sentence - add details and slow down the narrative
Short /long sentence - may show importance in both
Shift in focus - talks about object then talks about another object for example ‘pen’ to ‘table’
Cyclical structure - similar stuff happening with beginning and ending
Juxtaposition
Extended metaphor
Pace
List
Pov
Overall tone
Chronogical order
Climax
Repetition
Links
Mood , pathetic fallacy
isnt extended metaphor and juxtaposition language?
@@OmniversalInsect yeah
@@OmniversalInsect both just gotta be careful how you phrase it
@@OmniversalInsect kinda
This is why I don't like English, something can be language or structure depending on the person
I am in year 10 and I am struggling very much in English. I even go to extra classes on weekends but I still don't get anywhere. My tutor recommended that I watch your videos as it can help me get a grade 9 and once I saw these videos, I knew that you had just saved my grades! Thank you so much for posting this stuff as it helps a lot of people like me.
keep revising so that when your exams come you can revise much less
This guy is going to finally get me through my English exam 🙏 finally! Mr English you are a brilliant teacher 👏
shush
@@jimmykaboose8112 Onomatopoeia
noun
the formation of a word from a sound associated with what is named (e.g. cuckoo, sizzle ‘shush’).
the use of onomatopoeia for literary effect.
@@jimmykaboose8112 you shush
@@hadley8533 shush
@@jimmykaboose8112 shush
It is only through these videos that I believe and hope for my exam.
thank you so much for the videos dude, you're a massive help and have somehow taught me more in three hours than my actual teacher has in 5 years 🤣
i can never actually sit down and do revision, so having someone go through it in a way i understand is so helpful!
this guy unlike other teacher, this tell us the answer how should it be write with the evidence we found, he also tell us how to find evidence
With just about 2hours to the paper, am more confident than before. Thanks a lot
Same here. Good luck man
I'm in the same boat. Good luck to you two!
Holy shit we all are wankers arent we
Please keep video long as everything you say makes me want to learn more.
I've watched this video 3 times already just get the whole idea and structure technique whilst doing that taken valid points and notes
Because of you i passed my November retake , Thank youuuuu🙏🏾🙏🏾 may god bless you.
the problem I have with structural devices is that they are hard to explain. It's often very hard to think of something to write about long/short sentences and most of the other things in the list.
true i got the same problem
Fantastic teacher you are , God bless you brother, may your success expands to nation in the name of Jesus Jesus of Nazareth Amen 🎉
Thank you for your wisdom
Last minute revision, thanks man
Honestly saved me for my exam!!!!!!!
Mr. Everything English, a real one
got me from a 3 to 5 with watching a few videos great channel
what grade did u get then in english language
mad respect for doing this. mad respect
absolute elite video, this the question I always do rubbish on haha. Cheers mate 👍
Thank you for your wonderful teaching. However, our gcse paper1, q3, ask for both language and structure. Therefore I get very confused.
Which exam board?
@@sugar2270 the exam board is Pearson EDEXCEL
This is AQA
Pearson edexcel board ask for both language and structure In q3.
Good luck for everyone today let's prove those examiners wrong!
didnt get higher then a 3 in my English language mocks hopefully i can fix it up tommorow
guys how to understand where is zoom out?
and shift in focus
SIR! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE CAN YOU MAKE A TOP 10 JEKYLL AND HYDE QUOTES VIDEO BECAUSE I AND A LOT OF OTHERS DESPERATELY NEED IT! THANKS!
He has
Jekyll and hyde quotes are easier because they mostly come from the main two/one character
thanks so much sir, appreciate your support and love.
Will you do this for paper 2 sir
Or english lit.
Or both
prtzel method in gonna use
for q2
Last minute revision 🤩 exam in an hr and 20 mins
so The PRETZEL structure the best for q2 and 3 for easy marks
and 4
The English exam is on my birthday. Best 16th birthday ever...
Peak
chemistry paper 1 on mine
happy birthday
@@Rosaria1 Thank you
I'm so scared of tomorrow, I don't speak English perfectly so I'm scared of what might happen
This guy is carrying my GCSE grades for 2022 😏
What did u get
What grade did u get?
Can you make a video for Q4 please?
he’s doing it tmrw
Thank you sir, this really helped in my exam today
Mock tomorrow😭 i got geog aswell
guys who wrote their q3 with this type of answer, how many did you get? its looks so different from the type of answer the teacher gave me
we have 7 days ty h=for helping me sir your better then my school teacher
Who's here on Tuesday 17th
Would the second paragraph be a different point ? Or can I use the same point but with different structural technique?
Probably better to change the point because the mark scheme expects a reference to the beginning and the middle/end of the extract.
@@abdur-raheem5316 so we you basically have to pick two point in the extract? so:
beginning/middle
beginning/end
for example??
@@mdlxni7236 That would be the most effective decision :))
4:57 Bye 👋🏼
Lmao im 3 hours before the exam and this is the only lesson ive had this year on english
This is the only lesson I payed attention to. All other English lessons I either got into trouble or didn’t bother turning up
@@zishan5067 lol same
@@zecdi good luck on the exam bro 😂 it’s in 1 hour and 40 minutes minutes
Sir I love the prtezel method but I don’t know how to explain a quote
Yh
You videos are very helpful
I understand all of it however would it be better to talk about the beginning middle and end say the same things but just add the three times before you start the sentence?
Thanks for making these videos
is this AQA?
I’m wondering why you only did one paragraph??
I BEEN WRITING ABOUT LANGUAGE TECHNIQUES THIS WHOLE TIME LMFAOOOO
Will you still get marks for reference if you state line numbers?
Icl I would quote
whats does prtezel or whatrver it is stand for
P-point
R-refrence
T-technique
E-explain
Z-zoom in
E-explain
L-link
Idk anymore xd u suppose to structure like beginning mid end or is this Gonna be fine?
On another tutorial the lady did one paragraph writing about the whole text first she labelled the whole text with all the structural features then she wrote one big paragraph on all of the techniques throughout the whole text but mr everything english only used two quotes so i dont understand
there isnt one way of doing this
Me: watching this 2 days before my exam because I’ve decided last minute I’m not going to drop out 🤭
I’m watching it a day before the exam 😭
@@9shhdjene19 same queen
@@isobeldftgvffv5337 we're all in this boat huh?
@@Gabriel-zy6xv yes. its sinking
@@harveywhite3001 now sank
God bless u man
Hi sir, can you make videos on how English lit papers?
IM REALLY SCARED SOMEONE PLEASE HELP! MY TEACHERS TAUGHT THAT WE HAVE TO DO STRUCTURE FROM BEGINNING, MIDDLE THEN END IN CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER, SO ISNT THAT 3 PARAGRAPHS!?!?
please help like what do I honestly do
thank you!
Will the livestream be recorded tomorrow?
Thank you so much sir
good luck soldiers.
thank you so much!!
Sir, is there a difference between this one and last years ones as last year it was 3 pete paragraphs and I've practiced that a lot , is 3 pete paragraphs better or the two prteze;
2 is better
@@ceriann10 yeah ik that but i can do the pete one so much quicker so iwas just wondering
2 PRTEZEL ones
what about the bullet points?
could you have said sibilance for the first technique or is that too much language?
Avoid language completely! you get no marks for language here!
for the Tuesday live stream which years paper are you doing?
2019 November
Thanks a lot 🙏
I'm confused, we are doing Excel this year 2022. Question 3 is 6marks. Can you do an Excel paper
Eagerly waiting
Can you please explain to me how to link what I zoom in with the first point I am struggling with that😔
so when you zoom in to something, you link it back to the main point by explaining how the zooming in affects you and how it interests you as a reader
@@masteroogway3739 ,thank you even though is late
Aren’t you meant to structure your answer as establishment, development and conclusion (beginning, middle and end)
You don’t have to
Yes, you should!
I thought we were supposed to talk about the beggining and end or is that just suggested?
beggining middle end
actual legend
Looooool gl
@@user-kc3fw9gm2j good luck to you to
@@user-kc3fw9gm2j i fucking flopped it
@@bria4776 well u got p2 so u need to start now if you want to pass
@@user-kc3fw9gm2j tru i’m just worried abt maths
these paragraphs are amazing but why hasnt he embedded a single qoute . he has not really given an exact reference
What mark scheme is this?
Don’t we have to use quotation mark
yh, i personally would as i was taught to use it in my exam
do some igcse videos!
What year is this paper from?
Use the same technique in different past papers only way your gonna improve
what does pretzel stand for
Pretzel stands for
Point
Reference
Evidence
Technic
Zoom
Explanation
Link
Are you not meant to speak about the beginning middle and end?
Yeah i think that aswell i think ue got confused with paper 2 question 3
what do you zoom in on on structure questions?
Usually there’s a description on the setting so probably on that
@@sakadagoat2864 ty
he means like what does the writer zoom our focus on in the source
wgars prtzel stand for
Point, reference, technique, explain, zoom in, explain and link
Point reference technique zoom effect link
4:58 😂❤
Can you tell me if this is edexcel or aqua ?
you mean AQA not aqua
We sit aqua man exams
@@xe92222 lmfao
@@ayahseveryday7353 😂😂
Got in in a couple hours
thank u
why don't you just drop everything at once, we cant wait till tomorrow evening for the second one, time is going sir
Because he likes the people watching to stay focused when watching and not many kids will stay focused on a 1-2 hour video
@@rc-oh5fc I know, but he can still drop them like in segments all together. In different videos
How many paragraphs are required. 2?
Yeah.
You should try 3. Structure is about the beggining, middle and end.
So 2 paragraphs rather than 3 are u sure
its only 8 mark so yh
3 paragraphs are fine but 2 paragraphs will do if you don't have enough time to do 3 in 10 minutes.
Pay me my 1000 quids rn
is this 8/8
Bro uses the rule of 3 when talking 💀💀💀
are u here for tmr lmao im dreading it]
If my classmates use the same plot will it be counted as plagiarism?
made a spelling mistake by by zoom in.
Sir would you get a high mark with two paragraphs for this question
Yes
@@hayyanazad no way it can be true
goat.
fr
Last min revision lol
actual bossman
Jzk
my exam is tomorrow