I agree with the comments I saw about bringing the bari down, But I'd also say try to disperse the melody into the bari as well, I think there could be a beautiful part with a cacophony on rhythms and countermelody's going on in the top voices, with a sort of lumbering bari melody. Just a random thought I had, I've written a clarinet quartet for this piece and while the clarinet has a larger range than the saxophone, I think the same principles could be applied. Overall though I really loved the sound, the supporting voices felt strong and the melody was of course on point. This is just one of those pieces that's so iconic that to stand out you gotta put something unique in the score to make it stand out against the thousands of other people arranging this masterpiece. Keep up the good work!
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I changed the score a little bit, so when you buy it, you get an updated version!🎷
This just sounds like the word Italy
This is so fun! Thank you for sharing
I agree with the comments I saw about bringing the bari down, But I'd also say try to disperse the melody into the bari as well, I think there could be a beautiful part with a cacophony on rhythms and countermelody's going on in the top voices, with a sort of lumbering bari melody. Just a random thought I had, I've written a clarinet quartet for this piece and while the clarinet has a larger range than the saxophone, I think the same principles could be applied. Overall though I really loved the sound, the supporting voices felt strong and the melody was of course on point. This is just one of those pieces that's so iconic that to stand out you gotta put something unique in the score to make it stand out against the thousands of other people arranging this masterpiece. Keep up the good work!
😊 Thanks!
It's wonderful, Twan!
Thank you!
👌
I'ma need some tips. Lol
Bari is too high
In what measures? If you can provide me with the bar numbers, I can fix the issue :)
@@twanswagten I’d say the whole piece but if that was your intention then I’d totally understand.
But is it playable?
@@twanswagten intonation for is bad but I can adjust
@@elijahvaldivia3729 okay :)
Está mal esto