I can see your improving on the pronunciation which is very good but now you're not involving enough information. You now have to explain in enough detail for the viewer to understand on a deeper, lore-connected matter. But I do love that your improving and as always take care of yourself.
Thank you so much for the feedback. I really appreciate it. I will try my best to include more detail and go into greater depth on future videos. Thank you for the support.
I can see your improving on the pronunciation which is very good but now you're not involving enough information.
You now have to explain in enough detail for the viewer to understand on a deeper, lore-connected matter.
But I do love that your improving and as always take care of yourself.
Thank you so much for the feedback. I really appreciate it. I will try my best to include more detail and go into greater depth on future videos. Thank you for the support.
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You don't have to follow anything I said, I simply gave you tips🙂
Thanks for the advice, it was very helpful
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