Maybe I Am Lonely│Spoken Word Poetry

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  • @Khartoum29
    @Khartoum29 6 ปีที่แล้ว +292

    "I'd rather disappear and go silent than feel like I'm bothering some one" i can relate to this and I'm still trying to figure this out.

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      Oh yes it's very hard to feel that way and I've been trying really hard not to do that these days

    • @applesong01
      @applesong01 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Here too...

    • @saruchhetri8540
      @saruchhetri8540 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Same here.

    • @ohdetslilzi4394
      @ohdetslilzi4394 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Same

    • @thoelalger2244
      @thoelalger2244 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Love apples

  • @jamlessarmi1821
    @jamlessarmi1821 5 ปีที่แล้ว +83

    "I sigh when I see a group of friends having the time of their lives or couple holding hands" that's me, then I try to cover my jealousy.

  • @mariea82
    @mariea82 4 ปีที่แล้ว +25

    “I hesitate to call or send a message because I feel like I’m annoying “ god I absolutely felt that , like 100% of the time which is why I hardly do it anymore 🙁

  • @Blueschy
    @Blueschy 5 ปีที่แล้ว +60

    This is exactly how I feel

    • @tiny3641
      @tiny3641 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Same :(

  • @darksidelovedarkness8135
    @darksidelovedarkness8135 3 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    "Not wanting to become clingy and dependent on others for a piece of happiness" This is one part I relate too, and I'm trying my hardest not to cling to others..

  • @insanedictater2271
    @insanedictater2271 5 ปีที่แล้ว +66

    Holy crap. That’s probably the most relatable poem I’ve ever heard! Bout word for word. Thanks for the smile at the irony!
    Lovin’ these poems! Please, keep em coming

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Aww thanks!

    • @kalaichelvithayalan9292
      @kalaichelvithayalan9292 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Elan life best Holland nicht singe ich tamil Mann spricht

    • @cyrileli9129
      @cyrileli9129 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MelsThoughts i can relate 💯🔥😢

  • @shahidarif7816
    @shahidarif7816 6 ปีที่แล้ว +55

    hey! you just gave words to my inner person now i can hear myself..

  • @aye_204
    @aye_204 5 ปีที่แล้ว +48

    hey love 🦋🖤
    “If you’re sad remember you’re just having a bad day not a bad life “
    “I don’t know you but I love you “💖🖤🐝
    Sincerely
    just a little reminder 🖤🍓🍇🐛

    • @anone03
      @anone03 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Oh this is nice..

    • @oluaamara
      @oluaamara 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Why doesn't the sad day want to end😔

    • @marthalongwe8863
      @marthalongwe8863 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I love you mel

  • @parkjaehyun9724
    @parkjaehyun9724 6 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    Your not alone.....
    I feel the same way....

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you ❤ I've been feeling this poem a lot these days

    • @parkjaehyun9724
      @parkjaehyun9724 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@MelsThoughts You can really feel the emotions

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm glad to hear that :) I try my best to write how I feel

  • @nursyarahadiba6128
    @nursyarahadiba6128 6 ปีที่แล้ว +30

    I understand the feeling, I feel it too. Thank you for saying the thing I cant put it in words

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Nur Syarah Adiba You're welcome :) I'm glad to hear that you liked it!

  • @-JAVY-
    @-JAVY- ปีที่แล้ว

    I've said every word u spoke this whole year. Every day. Every moment

  • @emilymartinez5502
    @emilymartinez5502 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I always feel alone. I always wanna call someone to feel better, but don't wanna be a burden. It's hard for me to share my thoughts when I'm too deepen with my emotional thoughts. I have friends, but who knows if they see me as their friend. I'm lonely.

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm sorry to hear that :( I've been feeling the same lately. I want to reach out to friends, but then I hold back because I feel like they won't want to talk to me. It's a hard and lonely thing to go through

    • @dheerajrajput2093
      @dheerajrajput2093 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      7011694595

  • @saramorando6545
    @saramorando6545 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This poem has touched my heart. This is how I feel but never could describe it.

  • @shovansarker5403
    @shovansarker5403 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Those words are so relatable, I also don't wanna bother anyone when my closest people misunderstood me, rather it feels better to disappear. Thanks a lot for the poem :)

  • @al-kisah257
    @al-kisah257 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    mapuh kerah ghinii..
    huaaaaa...TOKSE DOHHHHH...
    PADE GU..TOKSE DOHHH..
    Peritt

  • @emnaellefi3083
    @emnaellefi3083 6 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    maybe i don't belong..maybe i'm afraid of being forgotten and replaced...

  • @kevinholliway8521
    @kevinholliway8521 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I just wanted to tell you that you are an amazing person and anyone who knows you in life are blessed your words make me feel like I'm not alone thank you so much Mel. 😎 a kindrid spirit.🙏

  • @Good_Y3llow
    @Good_Y3llow 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    In the depths of solitude, a lonely soul resides,
    Embracing the silence, where darkness quietly hides,
    A yearning for connection, a longing to be seen,
    Loneliness, a companion, where the heartache convenes.
    In the vast expanse of emptiness, a void unfolds,
    Where echoes of laughter and warmth have been untold,
    The stillness engulfs, a silent symphony,
    Loneliness dances, in melancholic harmony.
    No footsteps to follow, no hands to hold,
    Loneliness, a companion, in stories left untold,
    Aching for understanding, in a world so vast,
    Seeking solace amidst the shadows that contrast.
    Yet, in this solitude, a strength takes root,
    Loneliness, a muse, where resilience takes pursuit,
    A self-discovery in the quiet and the plight,
    Finding solace in one's own company, day and night.
    Loneliness, a teacher, revealing truths untold,
    Deepening empathy and compassion, to behold,
    A gentle reminder of our human connection,
    To reach out and bridge the gaps of isolation.
    In the depths of loneliness, a seed of hope is sown,
    For amidst the solitude, growth begins to own,
    For in this journey, where the heartaches persist,
    We find the strength within, to rise and persist.
    So embrace the solitude, let loneliness be,
    A catalyst for introspection, for the soul to see,
    That in the midst of loneliness, we are not alone,
    For empathy and understanding will guide us home.

  • @Diana-gt1rv
    @Diana-gt1rv 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Whoever feels like this, don’t be sad, just be yourself and always remember, you are loved and you are loved because you are precious and because you are special! 💖🥰

  • @hannah1234xo
    @hannah1234xo 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    What you said about feeling like you are bothering someone is what I feel all the time... I love your poetry. I write poetry too, keep it up.

  • @shreyanigam5576
    @shreyanigam5576 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Goodness... You are totally my soulmate... You are expressing my feelings that even I can't express... I'm a poet too... But I've never got enough words to explain me... But today listening to your poetry made me cry, not because you are like me, but because you could express me... The way I also couldn't... I love your poetry... Thanks for writing this...

  • @mirabasnet9546
    @mirabasnet9546 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I feel like u r speaking my inner words ... u r jst amazing

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :D

  • @vanejahvanejah2311
    @vanejahvanejah2311 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This video brings me tears😳Please don't stop doing videos

  • @Gypsyverses
    @Gypsyverses 6 ปีที่แล้ว +22

    This is actually beautiful!
    I wish I impress people through my videos as you impressed me!
    🐣

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thank you very much! 😊 I'm happy to hear that you liked it!

  • @heykari_5926
    @heykari_5926 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    'Loneliness brings along jealousy'. That's true, sometimes I compare my life to other. It's like I hurt my self. Loneliness is nothing, my mind said. But deep my heart can't lie.

  • @angelabrown7966
    @angelabrown7966 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You need a friend, I'll be that person. BECAUSE, I believe you're a blessing whether your happy 😊 or sad 😥. Everyone is precious & unique in your own way. And You're truly, deeply respected & appreciated by the one's closest to your heart. Never underestimate your value, worth. BECAUSE, whenever your not around, you're truly missed. Everyone has issues. And sometimes (friends) may seem neglectful,but I believe they're having problems also. You're a blessing not a burden. And if you need,time for yourself cool. But don't distance yourself. BECAUSE, family & true friends will always be there holding your hand & waiting. If you feel lonely, do whatever you can to improve that situation. Fill your life with friends, hobbies, projects. Engaged yourself with things, you like doing. Don't ever give up, because life is a beautiful thing. And situations change , just like the weather. We all experience the ups & downs about life. Nomatter the situation, we're stronger than we think. And nomatter where you're at, Theirs someone that appreciates & recognize (you), as a precious friend. Have faith & cling to hope. It will guide& maintain your strength & courage. God will listen & bless your life with the things you deserve. You're worthy of kindness, respect & friendship. You just have to believe in yourself.

  • @lejlav__
    @lejlav__ 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am bawling my eyes out rn, this is so fuxxing relatable

  • @dalejoreye839
    @dalejoreye839 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow!! Beautiful. I can relate.

  • @maliksmith6561
    @maliksmith6561 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    You literally just said everything I’m going through. I’m not good with saying what I feel. But Loneliness is the worst

  • @cassiusfelix2805
    @cassiusfelix2805 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    you can feel lonely even if your with someone that's the scary part.

    • @yennguyen-uj3ri
      @yennguyen-uj3ri 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      You’re right, I’m married for 24 years and most of the time I feel lonely

  • @mellisakirabo3547
    @mellisakirabo3547 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    The words in this poem were one of the last words or sentences that XXXTENTACION aka X the late rapper whose death was unxpected said before his death and it makes me feel lighter that my name sake MELISSA wrote most of them in this poem coz l felt dead after his death coz he really motivated me and made me feel loved and less alone but ever since he died l have never felt the same I was heartbroken coz he really motivated many depressed youths like me but now am looking up to ur poems coz they legit remind me so much about him😞😕😭😭🤧
    RIP XXXTENTACION 💗💯

  • @KorgenJurai
    @KorgenJurai 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is so relatable.

  • @SHASHANKKESARWANI-jp2ol
    @SHASHANKKESARWANI-jp2ol 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is exactly me, every single word describes me perfectly

  • @maganouusiku2202
    @maganouusiku2202 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I’d rather disappear and go silent than feel like I’m bothered someone “... oh this talks to me 🙌🏾

  • @cassandramarkiewicz8221
    @cassandramarkiewicz8221 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I love this, thank you.

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Live Happy Thank you for checking it out! 😊 you're very welcome!

  • @hailiethompson2034
    @hailiethompson2034 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I have this one on repeat! I can relate so much, I really love your work. It’s beautifully done.
    Love it 😊

  • @rhanneaudreydelacuesta8897
    @rhanneaudreydelacuesta8897 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    God! Stop being so relatable😥😟😭Finally...you express what I really wanted to say Thank you😊

  • @joegonzalez6189
    @joegonzalez6189 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    This is nice. I might have to start posting my own I have a book of them.

  • @pompomkitty306
    @pompomkitty306 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Soooooooooo relatable!!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

  • @marianaschuler182
    @marianaschuler182 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you, Melissa 💜 you hugged me

  • @sinukumari4246
    @sinukumari4246 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Why i found you this late ??
    All these lines ,it' like i'm feeling them in my skin,as i go through the same...Thank you so much for voicing out so many people's feelingz into words..

  • @hantuemm
    @hantuemm 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    wow i never related to anything more than this. this is written really awesome.

  • @zoh3ri638
    @zoh3ri638 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is the same feeling I'm going through. Even though I didn't get the answers I needed at least I know I am not alone. Thank you.

  • @anipiece3758
    @anipiece3758 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Why it is so relatable

  • @yesuilee1092
    @yesuilee1092 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I'm not feeling useless but I'm just feeling like I will annoyed someone even with just my existence in the same room so yes maybe I am lonely

  • @F3ARTHEKHAOSJBaiz
    @F3ARTHEKHAOSJBaiz 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    i feel this so much .... 😥

  • @samhitagollakota
    @samhitagollakota 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I'm in tears, thank you for this.

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You're very welcome! :)

  • @sahanagv5136
    @sahanagv5136 ปีที่แล้ว

    This touched my heart❤

  • @skriaz2501
    @skriaz2501 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    I feel exactly same....each words decribes me....!!!

  • @leidaefes6115
    @leidaefes6115 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    "i sigh whenever i see a group of friends having the time of their lives.." and then i started crying

  • @kaisiigeorge8958
    @kaisiigeorge8958 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Simply amazing~mel....luv it👍

  • @MS-pl5gv
    @MS-pl5gv 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Each and every word said here relates to me… i wish that i could meet the person who has written this …😞

  • @siankyoung
    @siankyoung 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I send you love.xx I have seen the darkness of loneliness

  • @melindapemberton999
    @melindapemberton999 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mel mitch and I love your poems butbi know how you have felt in my years long time ago but with Gods helped me I'm so.much better but everyone gets depressed one time another if they say they dont say they dont telling you the truth cause everyone gets that way one time or another but it isn't exactly depression is it but it ant I forget what the dr cause that but everyone has been though it so I'm proud of you whatvyiu have complexed you on the race so stay girl I'm very proud of you me and mitch is both is so keep writing the poems and we will keep reading them im.proud of you my friend thanks

  • @abdullahsherq8550
    @abdullahsherq8550 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wish I had someone who could read my mind like you.. THANK YOU!!!

  • @queenofheart1603
    @queenofheart1603 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sometimes when you share your deeds what you have done is batter then to keep it because you said you have a family and a few friends but because of that happen you are not ok and feeling alone you need to talk instead to keep. That’s better for you live a batter life which you and everyone deserve

  • @kirstyy7572
    @kirstyy7572 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Every words that you've said hits me:

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    you have a beautiful story to tell

  • @lawrenciasoglo5922
    @lawrenciasoglo5922 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This feeling where you with friends but still feel lonely

  • @minerva7699
    @minerva7699 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love this. Something I can resonate.

  • @DarkWolf-lz5xf
    @DarkWolf-lz5xf 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    this is so true. Even though I'm surrounded by family and I have a boyfriend, I still feel lonely.

  • @Kei-ew8uh
    @Kei-ew8uh 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Mom: are you ok?
    Me: yeah, I'm ok.
    Mom: I'm glad you're ok
    Me: 🙃

  • @mansikhandekar7138
    @mansikhandekar7138 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    this touched me

  • @mahmoudmarouene1402
    @mahmoudmarouene1402 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    That's exectly what i feel and i could never describe it
    I really hate myself
    I love your peoms keep going ♥️

  • @tamryngreen6265
    @tamryngreen6265 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am connected to this

  • @zarachoudhry4784
    @zarachoudhry4784 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    This melt my heart

  • @tammy5938
    @tammy5938 ปีที่แล้ว

    Not everyone wants to leave,they figure you don't give a damn about them anymore, so why try, it hurts to love and be turned down

  • @gracelibre7635
    @gracelibre7635 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    It was me.❤ maybe I'm a weird human being. I prefer to distance myself to my family, friends and everyone else. I don't know how to be me to anyone. I don't want anyone to judge me as I am. I can relate on this.Maybe I have to find myself alone. So when the times come and I'm ready to talk to someone I won't hide my true feelings anymore.💙🙏

  • @tabathagilbert201
    @tabathagilbert201 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    You need your soulmate and it could be the best thing because a soulmate will love you for who you are.

  • @jamiepersona
    @jamiepersona 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This hit me hard.. very relatable

  • @theunknown9745
    @theunknown9745 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is exactly what I feel.

  • @chembomuke2419
    @chembomuke2419 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Art❤️

  • @judylockhart9503
    @judylockhart9503 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I feel this too

  • @poatoesforlifefood6839
    @poatoesforlifefood6839 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I have two siblings but they hate me when i look back at my favorite kid show of three siblings i cry becuase i cannt be like them it hurts but its ok becuase i cannt break if i am already broken.

  • @shreyaseemistri3517
    @shreyaseemistri3517 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks for sharing my thoughts to me❤️

  • @yourfavoritebandaid
    @yourfavoritebandaid 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I relate to this so much its sad.

  • @mr.royhari2202
    @mr.royhari2202 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Just enjoying the travel have the fun not easy but trying to take it easy it's normal ready to me.
    If I can yiu can right? just throw thats words pick what you want stick,it its free to everybody.

  • @himanshipal3469
    @himanshipal3469 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I'm in tears right now because it's looks like this poetry was about me. 😥😥😥💔💔💔

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Don't cry, but at least you know you're not alone with this feeling

  • @RhythmAddictedState
    @RhythmAddictedState 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I can relate so much, thank you!

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      No thank you for checking it out! :)

  • @infoandmotivationaltv5636
    @infoandmotivationaltv5636 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    You will neither be replaced or forgotten bcz now you are reason of my life
    I love you my sweetheart Angel KD 😘
    Never lose hope

  • @britanicoangelynkayepatris608
    @britanicoangelynkayepatris608 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    maybe i am lonely. every time I'm with them i always feel that i don't exist.

  • @pangetko22
    @pangetko22 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Your poem hit me this is me 😢😢😢

  • @nicodemuspeterson6263
    @nicodemuspeterson6263 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    thank you

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      NightMaiden Any time 😊❤

  • @queenofheart1603
    @queenofheart1603 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Open your heart

  • @infoandmotivationaltv5636
    @infoandmotivationaltv5636 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Your company is my best priority

  • @angelabrown8423
    @angelabrown8423 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Dear friend, I want you to share your feelings with family and friends.Theirs no shame admitting that you feel sad, alone.And don't ever feel like your annoying, because your not.Friend, most people, feel like you do.I don't want you,to ever give up, on yourself.Remain strong and hold on to your dreams.Someday your dreams will come true.The despair your feeling, just let it go.if you ever need someone as a friend .I'm here.Please have faith.

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Angela Brown Thank you for the kind words ❤ I appreciate them very much!

    • @manozkunwar4561
      @manozkunwar4561 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Angela Brown yeah me

  • @queenofheart1603
    @queenofheart1603 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Listen I am happy if anyone happy in their life because of me
    Next that’s called need is indeed so don’t take it personal ever . If you have a place in your heart for someone then feel it the other person has the same feelings for you . Listen to your heart about your family and friends and others you do like you will get the answers

  • @theunknown9745
    @theunknown9745 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wowww. Thanks.

  • @queenofheart1603
    @queenofheart1603 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Everyone is lonely own their own because everyone has a past so don’t worry

  • @herlife2585
    @herlife2585 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    🤧😭😭😭i m already crying

  • @narmees769
    @narmees769 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Every words are relatable!!Hey, are you me??🥺

  • @dhrubapatgiri3986
    @dhrubapatgiri3986 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    We are not alone😥❤️

  • @ريانامحمد-ض8ر
    @ريانامحمد-ض8ر 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    It's really amazing poem..

  • @subhabratadatta790
    @subhabratadatta790 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    This touched my heart

  • @thatoneteenager3724
    @thatoneteenager3724 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    I find my cat as a distraction to my loneliness, but in the middle night, i cant distract it.

  • @kushoautar353
    @kushoautar353 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Beautiful words

  • @jack-dd4oo
    @jack-dd4oo 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I feel like a piece of poop.
    My life’s like a hatred loop.
    I tend to look for solutions.
    But it always turns out to pollution.
    Not just any pollution, it’s one in my heart.

    • @jack-dd4oo
      @jack-dd4oo 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      omggg bro made me cry

    • @jack-dd4oo
      @jack-dd4oo 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      such talent

    • @jack-dd4oo
      @jack-dd4oo 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      man keep up the good work

    • @jack-dd4oo
      @jack-dd4oo 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      i feel i broooo

    • @jack-dd4oo
      @jack-dd4oo 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      i feel i bro? learn some grammar you doofus

  • @kreetika1153
    @kreetika1153 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I am on same phase😔I dont like crowd ! depressed in lone😐️I dont want to talk anyone! Cant stay peacefully lone too Dont know whats going on😑

  • @jskk0507
    @jskk0507 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Same feeling🤞🤗

  • @ditishti4972
    @ditishti4972 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Better be lonely than with wrong people.