Incredible! This is clearly an advancement in your compositions. Good use of the parallel fifths, those that usually are forbidden, this time you used it in an isolated way, which makes it not awful. The only detail I can complain about, is that it is too repetitive, until the point that it makes it exhausting. Maybe you want to do the repetitions with more variation, additionally with more modulation, then it passes through different tonalities, something that would make it perfect. Despite that, it's a great work! 🎉👏
Incredible! This is clearly an advancement in your compositions. Good use of the parallel fifths, those that usually are forbidden, this time you used it in an isolated way, which makes it not awful.
The only detail I can complain about, is that it is too repetitive, until the point that it makes it exhausting. Maybe you want to do the repetitions with more variation, additionally with more modulation, then it passes through different tonalities, something that would make it perfect. Despite that, it's a great work! 🎉👏