THERE MUST BE A PART TWO!!! And this is a PERDECT opportunity to make stories about various jobs around the midnight mall and the security guard, janitor and animal store guy and how they got there and what they did.
29:44 Okay I know what I said but what I'm about to do isn't 4th wall quarterbacking, it's the reverse of that. I don't care if Remy would normally never say she's afraid. This is apparently the first time any of them has ever encountered the malicious paranormal so unless Remy was a Ghostbuster, this would be a perfectly acceptable time for her to break previously established character norms. The writer would've been better off if it was Remy's willingness to abandon the guys that made the protagonist suspicious. Maybe the protagonist (who's already demonstrated to be relatively resourceful) might have asked "Remy" about Ralph's location (there's no Ralph in this story) as a test...
THERE MUST BE A PART TWO!!! And this is a PERDECT opportunity to make stories about various jobs around the midnight mall and the security guard, janitor and animal store guy and how they got there and what they did.
That was kind of interesting, ended too soon
YOU CAN'T JUST END IT THERE
NOOOOO
great story , good reading
Im offended by the ending
❤❤❤❤ needs a part 2
Love this story😮The ending didnt see it coming👍
The extended ad for better help that i could not skip, felt like a personal attatck. 🤣😁🤡
Great rules story keep them coming
Tremendous storytelling
Thank you!
You wouldn’t want my soul it’s belongs to another 😂😂
That was pretty interesting but I don't recall her actually breaking any of the rules. She came close in a couple situations but she didn't
Well done. I liked this story!
So good! ❤❤❤
I love your intro,,
Great story
More parts to this story , Please.
Bravo sir 👏👏👏
What rule did she even break at the end
Save at MARC'S
7:19 Did you hear that, all you unreasonable *'4th WALL QUARTERBACKS'!?*
29:44 Okay I know what I said but what I'm about to do isn't 4th wall quarterbacking, it's the reverse of that. I don't care if Remy would normally never say she's afraid. This is apparently the first time any of them has ever encountered the malicious paranormal so unless Remy was a Ghostbuster, this would be a perfectly acceptable time for her to break previously established character norms.
The writer would've been better off if it was Remy's willingness to abandon the guys that made the protagonist suspicious. Maybe the protagonist (who's already demonstrated to be relatively resourceful) might have asked "Remy" about Ralph's location (there's no Ralph in this story) as a test...
Step One: Cut a hole in the box.
I very love rules stories.
She made it out alive, since she said the first time. A hard head make a soft behind, should have followed and take it seriously
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Nobody does better rules stories on YT !
SPOILER WARNING***
Good narration but in my opinion the ending wasn't very satisfying since the rules never mention a "Beware of imposters" warning.
What?? And then eat happened???
That was a shitty ending. Ugh