Yes! I'm Palestinian and I'm grateful to hear a story where Arabic people are presented without the negative stereotypes, just living average,mundane lives. That's most of us tbh, and it's high time people realized that.
Brother I am sorry for the jackasses who say or do rude things to you and yours. I am a Retired Soldier and I can tell you there really are good people in the US that will appreciate you for you and on your character and not where you come from originally, a lot of folks don't play the hate game and want to know you but unfortunately there are some unkind people and it's them not you!! God bless.
I must say that I greatly, greatly appreciate you actually telling the stories. There is so much Ai out there right now it's hard to find good channels. Keep doing you bro, you're going to make it
...and they would've gotten away with it, if it weren't for that meddling, bad-ass Iraqi family man. I thought this was going to be another mildly interesting "rules" creepypasta, and it turned out to be SO much more. You have another subscriber. Keep doing what you're doing.
Wow, totally different from a typical rules story. This one actually put in effort to write actual characters. Dope story, and just goes to show how characters really make or break a story
@@mrgrinless Of course! I found you a couple weeks ago randomly due to my obsession with rules stories and saw the Lady Jade one and have listened to a bunch of your stuff since lmao. I hope to see your channel continue growing!
Just joined, hopefully your channel grows fast! Thanks for a great story! When my husband and I were looking for a home we both agreed no Hoas, we have to many friends and their stories are awful!
I had a house built in a neighborhood that was was 3000 Sq ft and as soon as both of our children were out of school I said ok we are good and bought a new camper and the first day I brought it home and had it in my driveway to load it up to go camping the HOA showed up to tell us to move it or get rid of it ! A brand new camper and I had had enough so we sold the house with a 1/4 acre of land and bought a nice house with 5 acres of land as well as a large barn and a pond so it was a win and NO HOA!!!!
I never get scared from creepypastas. I just find them entertaining. This one though... was actually scary to me especially since I have a family myself. Thanks for the story.
Great narration. Appreciate that this wasn't the usual "Rules" story. The rest.. Is really bad. Given the political reasons we even cared about the Middle East after 2011 this is just another "Current Year" story that ignores nuance and real issues for a generic Boogie Man. So unimaginative. There was real potential here. I actually liked the family and the portrayal of what they had to deal with. I appreciate that the old guy wasn't portrayed as evil. As for the rest.. Like yeah we get it. Racism is bad. Not every story about racial and political issues NEEDS to involve the Twisted Cross. Like is that REALLY most minority Americans actual nightmare? Because MINE is the Government and Big Tech, but maybe 2019 taught me a different story than everyone else when my daughter was born. Is your response to the end of this as a reader REALLY "Oh my God so scary!"?
FANTASTIC story! Loved that it presented itself as a typical "rules horror" but then went in a different direction than usual. And of course, as many people have said, it's great to have a story that features Arab characters who have their culture and heritage present in (and even important to) the story, and who also aren't caricatures. Sad that this isn't even that far-fetched, and many immigrants and people of color have to deal with violent racism from not only their neighbors, but also authorities such as the police. It was nice that in this story they came out on top, and were able to have a friend/ally there to back them up and take down the White supremacist cops.
Wow great story sadly could very well be based on a true story. I knew the old man knew what type of time everyone else was on. When the husband said f*** the HOA he found an alllie the old man was a blessing.
Crazy story sir. It's amazing, and down right appalling what some people will do just to keep others out. Im not a fan of HOAs . They mean well, but i will not let others dictate how i live. And in this story use it as a cover up for something sinister and disgusting.
This story must have been written by a person who wasn’t able to understand the personality of an man who recently survived as a refugee from a war torn Muslim country. He’s like a white american man through & through.
Muslims have a certain reticence on them, as well as a tendency to not immediately waive of supertitious stuff. That’s only in the Philippines. How much more in war torn Syria? The man seems…..too westernized too early. Not only that, like a regular white American man.
I feel like the really scary thing about this story is that there are some areas in the US where this could actually happen. Some people are freaking monsters and they become that way because of idiotic racist, bigoted, religious ideologies.
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Wow another awesome rules story I have never heard before! How do you keep coming with these man!? These are awesome! 👏
I’m glad you’re enjoying them! More unique stories to come!
The only difference between this HOA and mine is no community childcare center.😂
Hahahaha!
I hear ya!! While I was listening, I was wondering how they got a copy of my homeowner association’s rules & regulations.😂
You guys have tunnels under your homes?
How in the fuck did you get my life story?
Iraqi-American here, never thought id hear a story where we are represented as normies. ty for the wonderful story you have earned my sub.
Thanks for listening and welcome to the channel!
Yes! I'm Palestinian and I'm grateful to hear a story where Arabic people are presented without the negative stereotypes, just living average,mundane lives. That's most of us tbh, and it's high time people realized that.
Cool twist to the story thought it was gonna be another one of the supernatural ones but totally natural human nature, I hate racism...
Brother I am sorry for the jackasses who say or do rude things to you and yours.
I am a Retired Soldier and I can tell you there really are good people in the US that will appreciate you for you and on your character and not where you come from originally, a lot of folks don't play the hate game and want to know you but unfortunately there are some unkind people and it's them not you!! God bless.
this was one the best horror story's I have ever listened to.
Thanks so much for your kind words! Welcome to the channel!
I must say that I greatly, greatly appreciate you actually telling the stories. There is so much Ai out there right now it's hard to find good channels. Keep doing you bro, you're going to make it
Thanks so much!
I think I told him the same thing once
This was a great story
Thank you for including a story about an Arab family that isn't portrayed in a negative way.
Yeah it was nice
Yes, that was wonderful.
See what happened in Germany, enough
That's HOAs and cops for ya.
Yep!
Best story I've heard in awhile. Thanks Mr. G!
Thanks so much!
...and they would've gotten away with it, if it weren't for that meddling, bad-ass Iraqi family man.
I thought this was going to be another mildly interesting "rules" creepypasta, and it turned out to be SO much more. You have another subscriber. Keep doing what you're doing.
Wow!!! This one like countless others of your stories and narrations kept me on my toes! Loved it! Keep them coming!!
Thanks so much!
GREAT story!!!! It's so crazy how people flee from war only to come here to have to fight an even worse war!
Dang man this was not what expected, a brilliant story!
Thank you!
Awesome story - did not expect that ending :)
Wow, totally different from a typical rules story. This one actually put in effort to write actual characters. Dope story, and just goes to show how characters really make or break a story
Thanks for listening and welcome to the channel!
@@mrgrinless Of course! I found you a couple weeks ago randomly due to my obsession with rules stories and saw the Lady Jade one and have listened to a bunch of your stuff since lmao. I hope to see your channel continue growing!
Just joined, hopefully your channel grows fast! Thanks for a great story! When my husband and I were looking for a home we both agreed no Hoas, we have to many friends and their stories are awful!
Good decision, they’re no fun at all!!
Thanks so much for your kind words!
my favorite so far! I got so caught up in the story that I even yelled out a few expletives 😂 Great work!
This should be made into a movie 1000000000%
I totally agree!
YOU SIR DESERVES MORE SUBSCRIBERS!
Thank you so much for your kind words!
This story was AMAZING ❤ I was way too enthralled to sleep, but I don't mind as it was for an epic story 😍
2 badass Dads vs the HOA love it
Wow you truly are the best story teller ❤
This story was pretty epic. I'm not even middle eastern but I'm black and heard about the terrors of HOA in some communities.
"hey there" BOOM! best part!
Wow! Incredible story!! Narration brilliant!!
Glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for another long one Mr Grinless! 💛
Thanks for listening!
Very impressed with your storytelling abilities as well your unique stories. Subbed! 💚
Welcome aboard!
Ohhhhhhh another long Rules one!! I can't wait to listen!
Thanks for listening!
I had a house built in a neighborhood that was was 3000 Sq ft and as soon as both of our children were out of school I said ok we are good and bought a new camper and the first day I brought it home and had it in my driveway to load it up to go camping the HOA showed up to tell us to move it or get rid of it ! A brand new camper and I had had enough so we sold the house with a 1/4 acre of land and bought a nice house with 5 acres of land as well as a large barn and a pond so it was a win and NO HOA!!!!
Thanks for sharing!
@@mrgrinless yes sir
Wow...what a twist! I started listening to this thinking the goatmen were supernatural.....turns out the entire neighborhood were just monsters!
I never get scared from creepypastas. I just find them entertaining. This one though... was actually scary to me especially since I have a family myself. Thanks for the story.
Glad you enjoyed it!
I really, really enjoyed your narration to this story. You had me fully captivated!
@@wintermoonomen Glad you liked it!
wow this was an awesome narration. i think this is one of my favorite stories :)
Wow, thank you!
Oh man this story right here. I love it!
Thanks for listening!
Another banger from one of my favorite narrators ❤
Thanks for listening!
Now THAT was GOOD...!!
Thanks so much! Welcome to the channel!
Wow! Excellent story!
Thanks for listening!
Great narration. Appreciate that this wasn't the usual "Rules" story.
The rest.. Is really bad. Given the political reasons we even cared about the Middle East after 2011 this is just another "Current Year" story that ignores nuance and real issues for a generic Boogie Man. So unimaginative.
There was real potential here. I actually liked the family and the portrayal of what they had to deal with. I appreciate that the old guy wasn't portrayed as evil.
As for the rest.. Like yeah we get it. Racism is bad. Not every story about racial and political issues NEEDS to involve the Twisted Cross.
Like is that REALLY most minority Americans actual nightmare? Because MINE is the Government and Big Tech, but maybe 2019 taught me a different story than everyone else when my daughter was born.
Is your response to the end of this as a reader REALLY "Oh my God so scary!"?
Thanks so much for your kind words!
Thank you, excellent story.
Glad you enjoyed it!
FANTASTIC story! Loved that it presented itself as a typical "rules horror" but then went in a different direction than usual. And of course, as many people have said, it's great to have a story that features Arab characters who have their culture and heritage present in (and even important to) the story, and who also aren't caricatures.
Sad that this isn't even that far-fetched, and many immigrants and people of color have to deal with violent racism from not only their neighbors, but also authorities such as the police. It was nice that in this story they came out on top, and were able to have a friend/ally there to back them up and take down the White supremacist cops.
Thanks so much for you kind words and sharing! Glad you enjoyed it!
This was really a creepy story 😢 Because it's based on actual hate.
Glad I don't live in an HOA, about like this story
Hahah right! Thanks for listening!
two thoughts, the first, what a wonderful story, you are a great story teller. As well, This was such a different story, I loved it. thank you!
Glad you enjoyed it!
I knew it! Damn HOAs. 😮
They’re terrible!
well well well what do we have here!? the algorithm is finally working for me! Great channel!
Welcome to the channel!
Yay! The first thing I saw when I logged in!
Thanks for listening!
Love this
Thanks for your kind words!
Wow! What a story! Unfortunately, it's more than a "maybe" chance of happening. Thank you for a riveting experience.
Awesome story! 😊
Thank you! 😊
Very, very good job bro!
Thank you! Cheers!
love these stories
This story was awesome
Thanks so much!
@@mrgrinless so welcome and I’m a fellow TH-camr
❤❤❤❤ love your stories
Thank you!
Cool twist to the story thought it was gonna be another one of the supernatural ones but totally natural human nature, I hate racism....
Thanks for sharing!
When you first start the story you say you want my soul I have no soul
Hahahaha
Yelp just made me hate the hoa even more lol
Hahahah!
Wow great story sadly could very well be based on a true story. I knew the old man knew what type of time everyone else was on. When the husband said f*** the HOA he found an alllie the old man was a blessing.
nothing is scarier than actual humans. diabolical things scare me more than any spirit or entity could.
Couldn't agree more!
I am very impressed with your stories and I also really like your voice
Thanks so much!
This is the one right here 👍
Thanks for listening!
That was a fun one!
Thanks for listening!
Ohh this was a good one.. haha
Thanks so much!
Crazy story sir. It's amazing, and down right appalling what some people will do just to keep others out. Im not a fan of HOAs . They mean well, but i will not let others dictate how i live. And in this story use it as a cover up for something sinister and disgusting.
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Thanks for listening!
*isn't superstitious*
*Is also religious, the number one most superstitious thing ever*
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Thanks for listening!
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Thanks for listening!
Creeeeepy!!!
Thanks for listening!
I could be wrong..but Nazis never bothered Iranian people...but great story
Oh yeah, the "white man bad" story. Author had a typical reddit moment xD.
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Thanks for listening!
This story must have been written by a person who wasn’t able to understand the personality of an man who recently survived as a refugee from a war torn Muslim country. He’s like a white american man through & through.
He's so fucking coward
Why is that?
Muslims have a certain reticence on them, as well as a tendency to not immediately waive of supertitious stuff. That’s only in the Philippines. How much more in war torn Syria? The man seems…..too westernized too early. Not only that, like a regular white American man.
Dajinns? Really?
Idk if it was just me but had a hard time with the 2 parents just didnt like them and kinda ruined the story for me
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Thanks for listening!
I feel like the really scary thing about this story is that there are some areas in the US where this could actually happen. Some people are freaking monsters and they become that way because of idiotic racist, bigoted, religious ideologies.
Good point!