Very nice to see how speaking and creating poems can make something good to grow and shine and get more real by naming it so artistically. Keep your good feelings, you deserve it!
At the top I see her Beautiful, prosperous: her Enchanting, powerful: her She stays there In her magnificence Smiling at me In her hands She holds a valorous treasure I see there so much light So much love So much happiness I reach out to her, but she is too far She is at the top of the mountain Little me is too fragile Little me is too small I look around me, Multiple people surround me I cry for help But no one is there for me Then, I see her With her powerful confidence She throws a rope at me From the top to the ground I stand on Excited, I climb and climb and climb Then, I put my foot on the wrong stone And I fall, and fall and fall I try again, I almost reach her Then the wind blows at me violently and makes me fall again Even harder, even stronger, even more It hurts, I’m hurt I desperately cry I can’t do this anymore Why is it so hard? She looks at me compassionately While everyone indifferently She leaves the treasure at the top And slowly walks down the mountain Finding her way back to me I try to dissuade her “Stop, don’t lose it all I am too small I am too weak I’m not worth it” She doesn’t hear me My voice is gone I stay on the ground, hurt and lost And she finally reaches me With the same beautiful smile She reassures me “I have not lost anything I am you If I can do it, you can too Follow me to the top of the mountain I am here for you” She takes my hand And shows me the way Together, everything is easier We find the best way, we make the right choice The journey is long, but the top is near I see the light, I see the joy, I see the love I have reached it I am at the top Hand by hand With her I am mesmerised by the view The horizon is infinite The beauty is enormous I have the treasure in front of me I look around and I can’t find her Where is she? I want to thank her! I see a mirror next to the treasure I look at it, I’m in awe “I am her”
Very nice to see how speaking and creating poems can make something good to grow and shine and get more real by naming it so artistically. Keep your good feelings, you deserve it!
Thank you🫶🏻
At the top
I see her
Beautiful, prosperous: her
Enchanting, powerful: her
She stays there
In her magnificence
Smiling at me
In her hands
She holds a valorous treasure
I see there so much light
So much love
So much happiness
I reach out to her, but she is too far
She is at the top of the mountain
Little me is too fragile
Little me is too small
I look around me,
Multiple people surround me
I cry for help
But no one is there for me
Then, I see her
With her powerful confidence
She throws a rope at me
From the top to the ground I stand on
Excited, I climb and climb and climb
Then, I put my foot on the wrong stone
And I fall, and fall and fall
I try again, I almost reach her
Then the wind blows at me violently
and makes me fall again
Even harder, even stronger, even more
It hurts, I’m hurt
I desperately cry
I can’t do this anymore
Why is it so hard?
She looks at me compassionately
While everyone indifferently
She leaves the treasure at the top
And slowly walks down the mountain
Finding her way back to me
I try to dissuade her
“Stop, don’t lose it all
I am too small
I am too weak
I’m not worth it”
She doesn’t hear me
My voice is gone
I stay on the ground, hurt and lost
And she finally reaches me
With the same beautiful smile
She reassures me
“I have not lost anything
I am you
If I can do it, you can too
Follow me to the top of the mountain
I am here for you”
She takes my hand
And shows me the way
Together, everything is easier
We find the best way, we make the right choice
The journey is long, but the top is near
I see the light, I see the joy, I see the love
I have reached it
I am at the top
Hand by hand
With her
I am mesmerised by the view
The horizon is infinite
The beauty is enormous
I have the treasure in front of me
I look around and
I can’t find her
Where is she? I want to thank her!
I see a mirror next to the treasure
I look at it,
I’m in awe
“I am her”