Hi I have commented a few times talking about my experiences and heart ache as it’s been a constant theme throughout my days and I’m still processing it I love to listen to your videos and I hope you know that your stuff is a fantastical experience and always swells up intoxication emotions so I thank you for sharing and to finally answer your question it’s my younger sister, we have both seen a lot of stuff and we process it differently but we depend on one another and without her I wouldn’t be here right now!
It’s day 1 after heartbreak And there’s a stale pounding in your head Your eyes are dried up, glossy and bloodshot red Because last night turned out to be the kind of movie With a disappointing end Your heart is heavy Yet your chest feels empty Wondering if there’s still time to salvage the pieces of you you had to leave behind Because no matter how many times you try to get up Something still pulls you down into that same sunken spot in your bed It’s day 1 after heartbreak And you’re still staring at the plaster in your ceiling Pretending your ceiling is a projector screen As you replay every good and bad moment on repeat in your head Wondering why you’re draining yourself ruminating on this When you know looking backward is distracting you from looking ahead It’s not like rehearsing the perfect “would’ve, could’ve, should’ve said” is going to take you back in time so you can change what you wish you never said Your mind plagues you with the distasteful question Of “what’s next?” But you don’t want to think about what’s next when you’re still discontent with what’s now Because it’s only day 1 after heartbreak It’s day 1 after heartbreak And you should know better to put your phone down Scrolling through old pictures and messages? Come on, it’s time to move on Set it down on your nightstand I know that temptation you’re battling in your head If saying “I miss you” was going to cut it, It would have worked the first time you hit “send” Rather than filling your mind with empty hope You need to fill yourself with energy Get up and feed yourself; It’s 4:30pm And the last meal you had was yesterday, Before you broke up with him But I know, you don’t have an appetite How can you expect yourself to get up, eat, and get dressed When you still haven’t even swallowed the reality that his name will never again appear at the top of your texts Rather than inhaling the tears that are dripping down your lips, you need to breathe You need new air in your lungs so your mind can work through this mess Don’t open his story, Open your window so you have circulation to get out of your head This is step 1 of moving on The first move to see the good that’s ahead Because even though you might not see it now, Time will reveal to you that this was the best beginning that had to end Because one day after heartbreak You’ll step outside and see saturated color again You’ll remember how sweet the crisp air tastes And that you can still enjoy the windy car drives Without your hand in his hand You’ll rekindle old friendships And travel to new and forgotten lands While appreciating the art of tearing up the canvas of yesterday’s future plans You’ll start picking up new hobbies Discover new genres That speak to you so well, it feels like they listen & you’ll create feel good playlists For Friday night bonfires that no longer remind you of him & One day after heartbreak You’ll have the gift of retrospect But even more than that, You’ll learn the art of accepting the past Intentionally forgiving yourself Finding comfort in the mix-ups and mishaps And you can find hope in knowing that Even if he was your first love That doesn’t mean he’s going to be your last But for now, it’s day 1 after heartbreak And there’s a stale pounding in your head Your eyes are dried up, glossy, and bloodshot red But don’t forget that tomorrow is the start of a better movie With a promising end.
Dickinson once wrote: “if I could stop one heart from breaking, I shall not live in vain”. I don’t know how many hearts Luna has healed, but it’s at least one.
This is exactly what everyone needs to hear after a breakup. Amazing job, you know your way around words, you are truly gifted at what you do. Keep doing it, you are helping a lot of people with this. Much love to you Skye Love ❤️
How I wish I have seen this sooner so it can help me in my healing process but still, watching it now feels awesome. Thank u so much for this!!! Someone recommended this to me:))
I keep coming back to this poem. Not for the sole reason of heartbreak, but the descriptions. For example, the plaster in the ceiling, pretending it’s a projector screen, replaying moments. “Don’t open his story, open your window…” - Very well written! :)
I love how extensive this feels. Heartbreak is a tough topic, but you go in depth. You go deep but the creativity is full as well. Thank God for you 🙏🏾
Thank you is just a small word for the amount of satisfaction this poem gave me - thank you ! She will surely not be my last :) U deserve better views, hope that one day you will get it - just keep dropping your poems :)
Me : literally sobbing hearing this poem Me : realising I've never in life been heart broken Me again: oh well But this the power that you hold within your hands to make people feel things that they've never felt before ❤
Already wrote a comment but forgot something so this one is for the algorithm: i like your poems. Not only the message but the way you read it. The tone of your voice ^^ I always disliked poems due to school. I don't want to over-analyse why someone put a semicolon here and why they used an enjambement there. I'd rather focus on whats being said instead of how it's expressed written. Plus i can't *know* why. I can assume why or i can ask the author (if they're still alive) but i can't know it for sure. Maybe they just felt like doing it? I sometimes write short stories. Nothing special. Just a nice tool to get my mind in order. But i don't think "lets put an alliteration there to express xyz" Thats what i like about your poems. They made me want to analyse it. But they also work fine without an analysis. English is my 4th language (even tho i speak it better than language 2&3) and a couple of days ago i started college. English is my major and, if everything goes as planned, ill become an english teacher. Hopefully, i won't have to force them through some horrible poems to over- analyse when there is so much more to poetry. Imho.
I’m enchanted! My English teacher just introduced us to you yesterday! You are an amazing poet I have to say ! My deepest apologies for my bad English! It’s not my native language but I like studying it! It’s a beautiful and by the way if I may ask are you alright? I’ve been worried about you because of shooting happened at a pub in the United States and I think you are from the United States! I’m not certain but I think Erica knows your accent! You haven’t been at a party, how are you? By the way whatever inspired you to write a poem so sorry you had to go through that! Whoever broke your heart clearly doesn’t deserve you! Did they even know they were with the best poet of the United States? Yes you definitely are my favourite poet! By the way are you okay? I think you should visit my country by the way! I’m from Italy, you are more than welcome here in Italy! We italians would love to have you here with us! Don’t worry if you don’t speak the language yet it’s not like we would judge you and I can help you with that by the way my real name is Lara
Hey luna, hope you're keeping well. How comes you removed 'if you love me, don't' I miss coming back to this video when I need strength. Need some more material! I hope to hear something soon
I'm not the best at stuff like this but there's a point in some relationship when couples breakup but get back, but I think this stuff here is a motivation to help move on Tbh im more about holding on if possible but...... What am I to say such things, just sharing some opinion that's all.
Question of the video: Where do you find your hope?
In all those blooming flowers giving Thier whole potential to bloom as something everyone will adore.
In the heart that continues to beat despite being broken.
Dog's unconditional love
Hi I have commented a few times talking about my experiences and heart ache as it’s been a constant theme throughout my days and I’m still processing it I love to listen to your videos and I hope you know that your stuff is a fantastical experience and always swells up intoxication emotions so I thank you for sharing and to finally answer your question it’s my younger sister, we have both seen a lot of stuff and we process it differently but we depend on one another and without her I wouldn’t be here right now!
My hope is my LORD.
Hi everyone! It's been so long... again! I am so glad we can reunite again :) Thank you for your support and patience.
No. Thank you!
Big fan 🙋luan
Lov ur work
Hello Luna,
How are you? Missing your poems dear. Pls upload it soon.
Ever consider putting your poems up on Spotify?
Hey Luna ..why aren't you posting something? 🥺
It's been 2 years
I listened to this throughout 2 of my breakups... come back Luna
It’s day 1 after heartbreak
And there’s a stale pounding in your head
Your eyes are dried up, glossy and bloodshot red
Because last night turned out to be the kind of movie
With a disappointing end
Your heart is heavy
Yet your chest feels empty
Wondering if there’s still time
to salvage the pieces of you
you had to leave behind
Because no matter how many times you try to get up
Something still pulls you down
into that same sunken spot in your bed
It’s day 1 after heartbreak
And you’re still staring at the plaster in your ceiling
Pretending your ceiling is a projector screen
As you replay every good and bad moment on repeat in your head
Wondering why you’re draining yourself ruminating on this
When you know looking backward is distracting you from looking ahead
It’s not like rehearsing
the perfect “would’ve, could’ve, should’ve said”
is going to take you back in time
so you can change what you wish you never said
Your mind plagues you with the distasteful question
Of “what’s next?”
But you don’t want to think about what’s next
when you’re still discontent with what’s now
Because
it’s only day 1 after heartbreak
It’s day 1 after heartbreak
And you should know better to put your phone down
Scrolling through old pictures and messages?
Come on, it’s time to move on
Set it down on your nightstand
I know that temptation you’re battling in your head
If saying “I miss you” was going to cut it,
It would have worked the first time you hit “send”
Rather than filling your mind with empty hope
You need to fill yourself with energy
Get up and feed yourself; It’s 4:30pm
And the last meal you had was yesterday,
Before you broke up with him
But I know, you don’t have an appetite
How can you expect yourself to get up, eat, and get dressed
When you still haven’t even swallowed the reality
that his name will never again appear
at the top of your texts
Rather than inhaling the tears that are dripping down your lips,
you need to breathe
You need new air in your lungs so your mind can work through this mess
Don’t open his story,
Open your window so you have circulation to get out of your head
This is step 1 of moving on
The first move to see the good that’s ahead
Because even though you might not see it now,
Time will reveal to you that this was the best beginning that had to end
Because one day after heartbreak
You’ll step outside and see saturated color again
You’ll remember how sweet the crisp air tastes
And that you can still enjoy the windy car drives
Without your hand in his hand
You’ll rekindle old friendships
And travel to new and forgotten lands
While appreciating the art
of tearing up the canvas
of yesterday’s future plans
You’ll start picking up new hobbies
Discover new genres
That speak to you so well, it feels like they listen
& you’ll create feel good playlists
For Friday night bonfires that no longer remind you of him
& One day after heartbreak
You’ll have the gift of retrospect
But even more than that,
You’ll learn the art of accepting the past
Intentionally forgiving yourself
Finding comfort in the mix-ups and mishaps
And you can find hope in knowing that
Even if he was your first love
That doesn’t mean he’s going to be your last
But for now, it’s day 1 after heartbreak
And there’s a stale pounding in your head
Your eyes are dried up, glossy, and bloodshot red
But don’t forget that tomorrow is the start of a better movie
With a promising end.
Dickinson once wrote: “if I could stop one heart from breaking, I shall not live in vain”.
I don’t know how many hearts Luna has healed, but it’s at least one.
So true!
there's something special in your poems
they leave me stuck somewhere far away..
After a million years..I am so happy you are finally back!! Yours poems r truly inspiring trust me.. you make my day better! Love u loads♥️
Thanks Prathama! Love you to the moon and back hehe
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Yes, yes....it's been awhile, but what a piece you've gifted us to digest upon your return. I loved it, thank you!
Hello stranger, I have just uploaded a new poem on my channel could you please check it out for me❣️it'll mean a lot✨
This is exactly what everyone needs to hear after a breakup. Amazing job, you know your way around words, you are truly gifted at what you do. Keep doing it, you are helping a lot of people with this. Much love to you Skye Love ❤️
How I wish I have seen this sooner so it can help me in my healing process but still, watching it now feels awesome. Thank u so much for this!!! Someone recommended this to me:))
You've no idea how much I needed this right now... ❤
I keep coming back to this poem. Not for the sole reason of heartbreak, but the descriptions. For example, the plaster in the ceiling, pretending it’s a projector screen, replaying moments. “Don’t open his story, open your window…” - Very well written! :)
Thank you :)
Hello stranger, I have just uploaded a new poem on my channel could you please check it out for me❣️it'll mean a lot✨
@@farwahehee8087 I gave the poem a listen, and your voice and words were very nice. Very good job! :)
@@AshleysThoughtTalks thankuuu
@@AshleysThoughtTalks ❣️❣️means a lot to me
It's been a year now and i still look at our old pictures to relive the old memories before it all ended. I miss her. I don't wanna move on. 🤍
💜I could say the same😥
welcome back! can't fail to love this one as well 💕
I love how extensive this feels. Heartbreak is a tough topic, but you go in depth. You go deep but the creativity is full as well. Thank God for you 🙏🏾
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her voice makes my heart warm
There's a glow in it!
It hits different when you were the one to break up but you feel the same way
Ps.I love your poems :)
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OMG I cant belive you posted again ive been wairing this is so good thank you for making this video ❤
Hi Liza! Thanks for being here!
Luna i need you to come back i miss youre poems so much please come back 🙏
Thank you! Truly amazing.
Thank you is just a small word for the amount of satisfaction this poem gave me - thank you !
She will surely not be my last :)
U deserve better views, hope that one day you will get it - just keep dropping your poems :)
You posted after so long!
Hello!
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I missed your poems dearly ❤️..so glad to see you back
It's been a moment but you still managed to hit home. I've missed your artwork and I'm glad to have the honor to experience this gem.
Hello stranger, I have just uploaded a new poem on my channel could you please check it out for me❣️it'll mean a lot✨
@@farwahehee8087 your poem is very good 💖, I love your word choices and cadence.
@@shelbonzo9448 thanku
Welcome back, dear poet. ❤️❤️
Please come back. Please.
I have just become a fan of your channel. Keep on making these beautiful poems👏
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i've missed your beautiful poetry! so aesthetic as always 💜
Thanks, Eoz!
Listening it after break up. Man hits harder then before
LOVE YOU SO MUCH, I MISSED YOU SM. YOU POSTED AFTER SO LONG 😭❤️
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chills, actual chills.
it's Luna the mystery girl with another relatable and great one
♥️yeeeaah first
wish you'd come back
Why I am feeling so damn overwhelmed though I never had a breakup.. (Luna's Magic)
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You have inspired me to upload my poetry on this platform. Thank you!
Beautiful poem and recitation. ♥️🌹
Welcome back 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 your poetry always beautiful as ever 🥺
Hello stranger, I have just uploaded a new poem on my channel could you please check it out for me❣️it'll mean a lot✨
Missed your poetry🤧you make me tear up😍
Hello stranger, I have just uploaded a new poem on my channel could you please check it out for me❣️it'll mean a lot✨
@@farwahehee8087okay 🤗 my pleasure
You are just AMAZING.🙂
I knew you were featured on channel makers and I just had to find you...loving your videos!!! Been trying to do something similar
No way?? Which video? Lol
@@lunapoems he did a video about interesting anomolies on TH-cam... yours was one! He was super encouraging and loved your videos (so do I!)
Goshhhh this masterpiece is sooo good
You got me through the death of my best friend. Thank you so much.
Beautiful recitation! Love your poems ❤️
I love the memories... I have no regrets
Because loving is beautiful...
But this speaks the truth so deeply I feel exposed
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Hello stranger, I have just uploaded a new poem on my channel could you please check it out for me❣️it'll mean a lot✨
Thank you for this beautiful poem, truly amazing words ❤ 📖✍⚘⚘🍁⚡⚘⚘‼️
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I love her words
This is so beautiful plz lunaaaaaa 😭😭😭😭😭 this hit at the exact spot ouch 😭😭😭😭
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killin it 👏as usual ❤
😆❤️❤️❤️
Don't forget that tomorrow is a better movie with a promising end.🖤
Hello stranger, I have just uploaded a new poem on my channel could you please check it out for me❣️it'll mean a lot✨
You're the best and you made it worth the wait ❤️
Hello stranger, I have just uploaded a new poem on my channel could you please check it out for me❣️it'll mean a lot✨
This helped me get through my day thanks much:)
We miss youu and your poems. 🩵🩷🤍
Hey, it's been long. Please come back.
FINALLY!!! Yassss😭😭😭❤️
It's so beautiful just pierced through my chest thats,all ❣️
I've missed this poetry
I’ve missed you :’)
First 🙌🏻
Damnit Luna!👏🏽
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Luna please post your one poem "when I grow up" I really loved that one. 🥺🙏🙏
Amazing 🥰🥰
thank you
It's day 10...
I MISS YOU AND YOUR POEMS 😢💌
I’ve missed you too Aubrey!!!
She erased the poem "if you fall in love with me, don't".💔
Beautiful voice
Me : literally sobbing hearing this poem
Me : realising I've never in life been heart broken
Me again: oh well
But this the power that you hold within your hands to make people feel things that they've never felt before ❤
🥺❤️ I’m glad to liked it
@@lunapoems liked?? I loved it and not only this one every. Single. One. Of. Your. Poems
Keep up with your amazing work
@@skittles8297 thank you so much!
Its such an empowering poem!
nice!
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I miss your beautiful poetry Luna😢 Where are you? Still searching for your latest videos! I hope you are okay. Take care
I broke up yesterday...
I've been listening to this poem from when it was uploaded
But I never really wanted to feel this so deeply
I really missed your poetries. I don't know what else is there to say...
beautiful
Wow this reminds me of Nocturna, Stay awake
Why u not posting new videos ??? Please 🙏 post some things
THIS is honestly
Today is officially my Day 1 after a heartbreak.
Already wrote a comment but forgot something so this one is for the algorithm:
i like your poems. Not only the message but the way you read it. The tone of your voice ^^
I always disliked poems due to school. I don't want to over-analyse why someone put a semicolon here and why they used an enjambement there.
I'd rather focus on whats being said instead of how it's expressed written. Plus i can't *know* why. I can assume why or i can ask the author (if they're still alive) but i can't know it for sure. Maybe they just felt like doing it?
I sometimes write short stories. Nothing special. Just a nice tool to get my mind in order. But i don't think "lets put an alliteration there to express xyz"
Thats what i like about your poems. They made me want to analyse it. But they also work fine without an analysis.
English is my 4th language (even tho i speak it better than language 2&3) and a couple of days ago i started college. English is my major and, if everything goes as planned, ill become an english teacher.
Hopefully, i won't have to force them through some horrible poems to over- analyse when there is so much more to poetry. Imho.
🥺❣️❣️
I miss your voice 😩
i misssed this so muchhh luna!!!! it's so fuckin good
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Hey ive a question sry if i missed the info but where is the "if you fall in love with me, dont." Vid? Last time i checked i couldn't find it?
🖤
Dear Luna.i am really into your poems and why don’t you active anymore ?😢
My first love is my super fav one ❤
We love 💕 you luna
I love you too!!!!
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❤️
I’m enchanted! My English teacher just introduced us to you yesterday! You are an amazing poet I have to say ! My deepest apologies for my bad English! It’s not my native language but I like studying it! It’s a beautiful and by the way if I may ask are you alright? I’ve been worried about you because of shooting happened at a pub in the United States and I think you are from the United States! I’m not certain but I think Erica knows your accent! You haven’t been at a party, how are you? By the way whatever inspired you to write a poem so sorry you had to go through that! Whoever broke your heart clearly doesn’t deserve you! Did they even know they were with the best poet of the United States? Yes you definitely are my favourite poet! By the way are you okay? I think you should visit my country by the way! I’m from Italy, you are more than welcome here in Italy! We italians would love to have you here with us! Don’t worry if you don’t speak the language yet it’s not like we would judge you and I can help you with that by the way my real name is Lara
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lunas back ❤️❤️
Hello stranger, I have just uploaded a new poem on my channel could you please check it out for me❣️it'll mean a lot✨
Where did you go…been 2 years already…
🥺
Hey Luna, where are u, we need your poems
Luna, I hope you're ok
Hey luna, hope you're keeping well. How comes you removed 'if you love me, don't' I miss coming back to this video when I need strength. Need some more material! I hope to hear something soon
Yeah! I make poetry myself and she inspires me a lot
When's the announcement vid for the winners of the poem competition
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There is nothing as a promising end
i don't think there ever is one
I'm not the best at stuff like this but there's a point in some relationship when couples breakup but get back, but I think this stuff here is a motivation to help move on
Tbh im more about holding on if possible but...... What am I to say such things, just sharing some opinion that's all.
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Lunaaaa 🥺 how did you know 💔😭
Come back. Please
i need a friend, honestly, it's been too long now
hey, are you alright?
i truly hope you are. your words were too raw for me to ignore this
been 3 years
miss you