how are they retreating with no engines? A bit repetitive. too much exposition outside of the story about how great humans are. Show us, QUIT TELLING US. but thanks for trying to monetize this. This could be a good story.
"Thanks for sharing your feedback! I really appreciate your insights and agree that focusing more on action and less on exposition could enhance the story. It’s great to hear different perspectives, and I’m excited to see how it develops in future episodes!"
@@SciFiHub7262 Really, thank you for the honest thoughtful response. I come across as harsh, but unless you've seen the red marks on your writing that I have....it can be a bit brutal. Note, I never said it wasn't a good story, but one of the most challenging things for any writer to decide is which perspective will be used. 3rd person is fine, done right.
@@TheLunacyofOurTimes Thank you for your honest feedback! I truly appreciate your perspective as a writer. I understand that editing can be a tough process, and I value your insights on point of view. It’s always helpful to hear from someone with experience, and I’ll definitely consider your thoughts as I continue to improve my writing.
how are they retreating with no engines? A bit repetitive. too much exposition outside of the story about how great humans are. Show us, QUIT TELLING US.
but thanks for trying to monetize this.
This could be a good story.
"Thanks for sharing your feedback! I really appreciate your insights and agree that focusing more on action and less on exposition could enhance the story. It’s great to hear different perspectives, and I’m excited to see how it develops in future episodes!"
@@SciFiHub7262 Really, thank you for the honest thoughtful response.
I come across as harsh, but unless you've seen the red marks on your writing that I have....it can be a bit brutal.
Note, I never said it wasn't a good story, but one of the most challenging things for any writer to decide is which perspective will be used. 3rd person is fine, done right.
@@TheLunacyofOurTimes Thank you for your honest feedback! I truly appreciate your perspective as a writer. I understand that editing can be a tough process, and I value your insights on point of view. It’s always helpful to hear from someone with experience, and I’ll definitely consider your thoughts as I continue to improve my writing.
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