Karma Jack Poison 👍👍👍

[@numbersix2576]

Lets do this 🤟

[@jeffatbkk]

Thanks

[@Shawn-mo6dh]

Its okay, not great. Good opening. Potential. I'd listen to it again. Keep trying you'll get there.🤘

[@jeffatbkk]

Thanks for your feedback. In search of writing the perfect song is an elusive lady.