Good story. Lots of technical errors, like he is in a suit which is only just coping with the heat but Alara is ok, like the bars are red hot but Alara leans back against them. A dragon can fly not just in space but also hyperspace. One small spaceship versus warships. If only one dragon, where did it come from and why was it taken to the volcanic planet. What does it eat, obviously not human girls
0.12 beautiful story, a primo dad and awesome dragon, thanks.
Would like to see a part two where it explains what the dragon is longing for, what he is missing
I came to the comments to say that. Good start to what could be a great story.
What a great story, well written great job thank you.
Great story, thanks 🎉
Good story ! Had me cheering ! Makes me wonder if the dragon has friends that are looking for a new home where they would be welcomed.
Thank you. Enjoy the video. I love dragons. I have many statues of them. I have this one.
"Daddy? Can we keep him?"
Only thing missing from this story. 😅
Good story. Lots of technical errors, like he is in a suit which is only just coping with the heat but Alara is ok, like the bars are red hot but Alara leans back against them. A dragon can fly not just in space but also hyperspace. One small spaceship versus warships. If only one dragon, where did it come from and why was it taken to the volcanic planet. What does it eat, obviously not human girls
Tune in for part two
So, how does a dragon travel through hyperspace?
I find that I to would like to know what the dragon was missing part two dose not sound bad
Maybe a female missing it's young & mate? Could make for some interesting adventures if united. HINT please do a sequel or series.
Enjoyable story, but an abrupt ending. Author, you need to develop Pt #2 to continue the saga.
Getting real tired of narrator repeating the same parts after interrupting commercials