Beautiful and interesting film! My favourite parts were when she had her legs crossed as she sat on the loo & near the end when she lit a cigarette up.
@@olipina1699 there are a lot of people with a smoking fetish, who likes to see girls smoking. You have beautiful hands, and you are an attractive woman. Look like you have good camera skills. I think you can make great smoking videos. Video in which you just smoke, and you focus on hands, your mouth, your expression, context, camera angles. I think you can do in a way you can express your creativity. Think about that.
Watched many shortfilms so heres my conclusion beeing brutally honest: Pros: 1. Good Lighting used and close up shots 2. Great Sounddesign Cons: 1. You look actually too pretty as weird as it sounds but its not so easy too focus on the film, maybe less makeup idk. 2. Camera work would need some improvement, maybe focus on having professional show you the best shots 3. Very hard to understand the core point, no visible storyline. Rather have a storyline and involve the core points into the film instead of having the film about the style mediums. 4. Don’t make it too confusing, the guy inside the clock was not making any sense for me, either use a regular old clock or make the point of him beeing inside a clock more obvious.
thank you! this was a school project. the point was to have it be an experimental film and the number one rule was NO storyline. although i have left it up to interpretation, my main concept was to convey the passage of time by wasting it; doing meaningless things all day that don’t take you anywhere. the guy was our clock conveying the hours going by with his eyes (again following the guidelines of experimental film) and i agree our actor is far too beautiful for an artsy role like this hahah. i appreciate the feedback!
@@zacharhia i wanted to portray dissociation through her morning routine ,to stay on theme with the fact that everything she does in her day doesn’t provide any long term benefits and alluding to present day consumerism and communism aswell, so i conveyed that through her drinking coffee!
I was very close to a breakthrough on my cure for cancer before watching this, but I found this video so pointless, so disturbing, so boring, so utterly devoid of entertainment value, that I've begun to question the motivation to save billions of humans worldwide. Who should I sue for recompense for the 2 minutes and 38 seconds of my life that I have wasted watching this? The DP Olivia Pina; the editor, Olivia Pina; the producer Olivia Pina; the editor Olivia Pina; the assistant director, Garret Doelman, or Alphabet's new TH-cam Product Chief Neal Mohan?
i came here by youtube algorithm and resonate with crossing my legs while pooing. i love ur film's concept and color
thank you so much!!!
Don't know how I got here, but i was entertained!
yay!!
I am kind of blown away by how much is conveyed in three minutes. It would probably take me fifteen minutes to unpack my interpretation. Good work.
i’m very flattered! thank you so much, that means a lot!
Beautiful and interesting film! My favourite parts were when she had her legs crossed as she sat on the loo & near the end when she lit a cigarette up.
All girls need to light up a cigarette to be more beautiful!!!!!!!!!!
Nice work, really well edited.
thank you!!!
Very good , i like your hair🙂
Make a smoking video
what
She would make a fantastic smoking video!
Make a video where you smoking a cigarette@@olipina1699
Word
@@olipina1699 there are a lot of people with a smoking fetish, who likes to see girls smoking. You have beautiful hands, and you are an attractive woman. Look like you have good camera skills. I think you can make great smoking videos. Video in which you just smoke, and you focus on hands, your mouth, your expression, context, camera angles. I think you can do in a way you can express your creativity. Think about that.
Watched many shortfilms so heres my conclusion beeing brutally honest:
Pros: 1. Good Lighting used and close up shots
2. Great Sounddesign
Cons: 1. You look actually too pretty as weird as it sounds but its not so easy too focus on the film, maybe less makeup idk.
2. Camera work would need some improvement, maybe focus on having professional show you the best shots
3. Very hard to understand the core point, no visible storyline. Rather have a storyline and involve the core points into the film instead of having the film about the style mediums.
4. Don’t make it too confusing, the guy inside the clock was not making any sense for me, either use a regular old clock or make the point of him beeing inside a clock more obvious.
thank you! this was a school project. the point was to have it be an experimental film and the number one rule was NO storyline. although i have left it up to interpretation, my main concept was to convey the passage of time by wasting it; doing meaningless things all day that don’t take you anywhere. the guy was our clock conveying the hours going by with his eyes (again following the guidelines of experimental film) and i agree our actor is far too beautiful for an artsy role like this hahah. i appreciate the feedback!
Great!
this is so cool
thank you so much!
soooo cooooolllll i loved that clock
masterpiece
thank you!
Ok, I'm here for it.
thank you!
@@olipina1699 Read your reply to another comment about the backstory of this short. What was the coffee spilling meant to symbolize?
@@zacharhia i wanted to portray dissociation through her morning routine ,to stay on theme with the fact that everything she does in her day doesn’t provide any long term benefits and alluding to present day consumerism and communism aswell, so i conveyed that through her drinking coffee!
@@olipina1699 awesome. Thanks for sharing!
@@zacharhia anytime!
Brilliant. Lynch will be jealous.
I was very close to a breakthrough on my cure for cancer before watching this, but I found this video so pointless, so disturbing, so boring, so utterly devoid of entertainment value, that I've begun to question the motivation to save billions of humans worldwide. Who should I sue for recompense for the 2 minutes and 38 seconds of my life that I have wasted watching this? The DP Olivia Pina; the editor, Olivia Pina; the producer Olivia Pina; the editor Olivia Pina; the assistant director, Garret Doelman, or Alphabet's new TH-cam Product Chief Neal Mohan?
awww yay!!! i’m so glad❤️❤️❤️
@@olipina1699 You're welcome?