You did a good job.I would have edited it a little differently 3 times you said the same thing cutting technology laser beams cut through the void or the darkness.And I don't remember the other one
I’m not much a fan of this story. Humans where urban explorers caught on private property. Then after being asked to leave they get caught again. After that instead of apologizing we just start blasting. Yeah… not the good guys this time.
An AI is a poor substitute for a human author. Humans generalationaly obsessed now with having a strong ready military even now would go to the stars with a mediocre military?? Having to suddenly upgrade its military once a conflict started?? Might work in a sci-fi novel, (not really) but reality would prove it a poor stance. Little things like this makes the stories poor comparisons to human written stories? So why still listen and comment?? Does not hurt to help you learn.
Why did we continue exploring when warned not too? I think the universe might be big enough to go elsewhere and search?
Oh to be 13 again and be thrilled by such a story.
You did a good job.I would have edited it a little differently 3 times you said the same thing cutting technology laser beams cut through the void or the darkness.And I don't remember the other one
Also a couple leaps of logic.They had once skirmished they're already battle lines?
Still well told story keep it up
@user-gv6mr5mu8f yeah, the galactic human council was too quick to this war.
I’m not much a fan of this story. Humans where urban explorers caught on private property. Then after being asked to leave they get caught again. After that instead of apologizing we just start blasting. Yeah… not the good guys this time.
How did a skirmish turn into a war so quickly?
The humans are not a good commune.
AI seems to get worse, repetitive malfunction, boring
An AI is a poor substitute for a human author. Humans generalationaly obsessed now with having a strong ready military even now would go to the stars with a mediocre military?? Having to suddenly upgrade its military once a conflict started?? Might work in a sci-fi novel, (not really) but reality would prove it a poor stance. Little things like this makes the stories poor comparisons to human written stories? So why still listen and comment?? Does not hurt to help you learn.
Stopped listening after 7 minutes