A good detective will have a good idea of your movements just based on the cell phone towers your phone pinged. People who write these stories need to take this into account.
I could see this getting a rewrite to take care of a couple plot gaps and the shifting PoV that sometimes gets confusing and this being a possible movie plot. Then it would be a matter of filling out the character development and conversation lines to turn it into a working script.
That ending was a good laugh.😂
Enjoyed the plot. Took an unexpected turn, at the end.
Nice work.
A good detective will have a good idea of your movements just based on the cell phone towers your phone pinged. People who write these stories need to take this into account.
Well we see who was protecting him.
birdwatcher not watching birds
When AI writes the story, the perspective and identity of the narrator change randomly.
Perfect ending
I could see this getting a rewrite to take care of a couple plot gaps and the shifting PoV that sometimes gets confusing and this being a possible movie plot. Then it would be a matter of filling out the character development and conversation lines to turn it into a working script.
So who chopped the brake hoses and played with the air bags? Of course, Emily and the Philly family.
Wonder if the 2nd wife put together who killed her husband. Actually did they even rule it a homicide?
Halfway through this story I realized that it was BULL SHIT
What a load of bullshit
And yet, you read it.
Lighten up, Francis
Wow this dude was weak lol sad and pathetic wow lol
Stupid story..
Hahaha
This story gey
So much gey in this story
Why y’all always say you work too much?🤔🤔🤔🤔🫣🤔🤔🤔