tip: some albums that helped me a LOT with songwriting and exposed me to a new style of songwriting and changed me FOREVER and I improved SO MUCH thanks to them are Evermore and Folklore by Taylor Swift!!
@@AnnieDang also as a songwriter myself since I was six and a half, your videos are SO HELPFUL for beginners!! in your other video about how to write songs for noobs you basically explained how I write my own songs and I was never able to dl that lol your channel is amazing and I love the way you did this vid!!
Wrote this song last week in one day [Verse 1] I missed your call cause it didn’t make sense And I just can’t recall when I liked your pretenses [Pre-Chorus] It’s under review so I can strike it through Keep forgetting you so I said bid adieu [Chorus] I just can’t lie Got no motivation so why even try I don’t know why I’m missing a call from you, got no reply [Verse 2] I tried to stop you from breaking my heart And I can’t find the pieces or the will to start [Pre-Chorus] You’ve come from anew but I’ve stricken you through I’ve forgotten ‘bout you and I’ve said bid adieu [Chorus] I just can’t cry Got no invitation so why even try I don’t know why I’m missing a call from you Got no reply [Bridge] Walking right past you I’m walking right past you Wish I would pick up the phone when it’s past due
I wanted to recommend Taylor swifts albums, folklore and evermore in terms of songwriting, they’ve inspired me so much, and the lyrics genuinely blow you away
Totally agree!! I started writing songs that are inspired by her songs and albums (mostly reputation, folklore,evermore) so far it's going much better than I could imagine!
I wrote this song last night. I love to write songs. **Verse 1:** I see you every day, but you don't know, How much I've fallen, how feelings grow, In stolen glances and hidden sighs, My heart beats faster when you're nearby. **Chorus:** Oh, my secret, my silent love, You're the one I'm dreaming of, In my heart, you hold a place, But you don't see my longing gaze. **Verse 2:** I write these words you’ll never read, A love letter for my heart's need, In every word, my feelings show, A secret world you'll never know. **Chorus:** Oh, my secret, my silent love, You're the one I'm dreaming of, In my heart, you hold a place, But you don't see my longing gaze. **Bridge:** If only I could find the way, To tell you all I wish to say, Would you smile, would you care, Or would my heart be left to bear? **Chorus:** Oh, my secret, my silent love, You're the one I'm dreaming of, In my heart, you hold a place, But you don't see my longing gaze. **Outro:** So here I am, with love unshown, Hoping one day, you'll be my own, Until then, I'll keep this song, A love letter where you belong.
I used to write poems, but since 2015, began to put melodies to them and converted them into songs. When I discovered you on you tube, I was inspired even more and am so thankful to you for your informative, musically educational and inspiring videos. Thanks very much indeed, Annie. God Bless you. I wish you and your family A Very Happy New Year 2022.
Songwriting is one of my favorites hobbies. It makes me feel so comfortable and help me go through hard times. I wrote this song a couple weeks ago. SZA was my main reference to write this. Out the mud by Guvvs Fool me once and fool me twice Done of being stupid Done of believing in your eyes You're the one that never tried You keep blaming on me And I fall another time "Didn't wanna did you dirty I just wanted to feel your body on me" Didn't want none isolation But you a guilty temptation I I I I I got it out the mud I I I I I got it out the mud I I I I I, I just wanted trust I I I I I, but you just wanted lust I wanna trust but you leave me blind in the haze I wanna trust but you leave me blind in the warzone You were busting out the window In the middle of the night, oh What if I complain, would you change? No, you won't You don't pick up the phone Make me run outta oxygen You make me feel like a gem back in the mud When I just wanted trust When I just wanted love And you just wanted lust I I I I I got it out the mud I I I I I got it out the mud I I I I I, I just wanted trust I I I I I, but you just wanted lust "Didn't wanna did you dirty I just wanted to feel your body on me" Didn't want none isolation But you a guilty temptation Didn't wanna be this lonely I just wanted to be the one that you need While the whole world shine above me I just wanted to be the one you need
One of the most important principles of writing that I know, which is not mentioned here, is, “Don’t tell, show.” You can hear this principle in action in two very fine songs of the late 1960’s, “Who Knows Where The Time Goes,” by Sandy Denny, and “Changes,” by Phil Ochs. Both songs deal powerfully with the same subject, the bittersweet passing of a relationship with time, without actually telling us about it directly. Both songs are available on TH-cam, and are must-listens for anyone who is serious about learning how to write great lyrics.
Lots of you asked for this, so here it is! It makes me so happy seeing all of you so eager to write and learn, so hopefully this helps! LOVE YALL! shoot me questions and i’ll try my best to get to them❤️ OTHER NEWS: Ameer and I have a song coming out soon on February 10th! Stay tuned
I sometimes write a song and be happy with it for a week or so, when I come back to it I realise that it actually sucks, anyone else feel like this happens?
@@skyzer_walker7180 That happens to me too sometimes, but then I just change what I don't like about it and keep what I do like about it or I start writing a brand new song.
Hi. I wrote this song about losing touch with a friend a couple of hours so please give me some constructive criticism! I wondered what crossed your mind Every time your eyes met mine Wish I could ignore the signs Cause what is we got lost in time? I felt us falter through the screen Reminders of us keep haunting me Because I know we’re Not friends, not enemies We’re strangers with memories I guess I just can’t believe You’re exactly what you said you’d never be. It feels like just yesterday Your white sweater, mine was gray Unexpectedly you pulled away Why didn’t you stay? Why didn’t I wait? I felt us falter through the screen Reminders of us keep haunting me Because I know we’re Not friends not enemies We’re strangers with memories I guess I just can’t believe You’re exactly what you said you’d never be It’s getting harder to pretend like we never happened Cause I’m faking a smile Saying it didn’t matter But my eyes still linger just a second too long Lay awake at night wondering where I went wrong Try to relight a spark when I know it’s gone cold Tell myself I’ll be fine if I just give it time, Even though I’m not the friend you wished for. I felt us falter through the screen Reminders of us keep haunting me Because I know we’re Not friends, not enemies We’re strangers with memories I guess I just can’t believe You’re exactly what you said you’d never be. Thank for reading! Hope you liked it!
heyy so me and my friend are both songwriters (well not exactly pros 😅) but yea I showed her tis song and both of us felt it deeply You're very talented, I wish you success
This a song I made for my friend's breakup xd Left on read at 4 am I'm sunken deep, stuck in my bed In a hole, I can't escape It's the same as yesterday. My energy wasted on someone like you. Sent one text a week; now I'm feeling blue Because we used to be best friends is this where our fairy tale ends? [softer] One-time summer fling... [Chorus] So why do I get this feeling when you're not around? Why do I get this feeling; that without you, I'd rather drown Rereading old texts funny how I thought you were the one But now you're gone, and now you're gone. [softer] One-time summer fling My love wasn't reciprocated you're a clear reminder of the mistakes I've been making so why do I feel like this? You're too hard to resist (softer and quieter tone) Maybe if I keep telling myself That this was just a summer love I can convince myself that I was enough That I was enough (emphasis) So why do I get this feeling when you're not around? Why do I get this feeling; that without you, I'd rather drown Rereading old texts funny how I thought you were the one But now you're gone, and now you're gone. One time summer fling.
Making my final escape Going down now every lane Using any turn Why do I never learn Not to get myself into these tragic situations Xeno, he’s at his peak aggression Goes way beyond just sinister intention The song is called endless till the end by me lol I’ll take what you said into account thanks
I wrote this song just now, in maybe 30-40 minutes? But I'm really proud of it! It's like a dark love song, The current title is: I am yours, you are mine. But if anyone has any title suggestions, you can tell me! Anyway, I'll stop talking, and give you the song! [Verse 1] Once upon a lifetime, I thought this day would never come. Where I would finally meet you, And I could be in love. I never could imagine What this world would would be, Without ya. You're the everything to me, And I need you to survive. [Pre-Chorus] I'll love for my entire life You're everything I need You're exactly what I'm looking for And all I ever want. I'll love for all enternity, And I'm sure you'll love me too~~ [Chorus] Even when you're dull sometimes, You're glowing with the brightest light. Even when you are the one who tears me up for good. I'll love you even now and then, I'll love you 'til the very end, I'll love you 'til the day I die. I'll love you on our final ride, Even if you don't reciprocate, I'll never let you go. [Verse 2] It's always a wonderful feeling, When you tell me what to do. I'll always, always do it, but only if it's you. When you are not here, I just sit here in the silence. My thoughts just stay here, still, And you always will be mine. [Pre-Chorus] I'll love for my entire life You're everything I need You're exactly what I'm looking for And all I ever want. I'll love for all enternity, And I'm sure you'll love me too~~ [Chorus] Even when you're dull sometimes, You're glowing with the brightest light. Even when you are the one who tears me up for good. I'll love you even now and then, I'll love you 'til the very end, I'll love you 'til the day I die. I'll love you on our final ride, Even if you don't reciprocate, I'll never let you go.
This is really beautiful! I tried singing it lol and I think this could make for a perfect hit song with a good melody!! I wish you the best for future songs!! :))
I don't actually write songs, but I do write a lot of fanfictions and books, and I currently have two drafts waiting on a song to be written, as they're both about artists that use their singing voice. This helped a lot!
this has really helped me for when I'm trying to write lyrics. I want to be an artist in the music industry and a lot of the time I get stuck on how to make verses for my songs. thank you. this helped me a lot.
“Dear universe, dear life I’m trying so hard, but there’s no light in sight Dear universe, dear life Why is it with me that you always pick your fights I’m trying to stay strong But there’s no motivation within me No one asked for this song But I’m putting it out for the lonely” That’s what I have so far :) Update: I thought of a little verse about what if feels like to have anger issues 2/11/23 You feel like the curse within me Every single time I go back to Angry (angry, angry, angry) I go back to angry (angry angry) It feels like a comfort When I’m suffering But really, Everything’s getting worse (gry, angry, angry)
not a noob but really good tips! one thing I recommend is instead of just writing, try to transcribe the feeling. like, make the reader completely understand the emotion you're trying to convey :)
The third verse suggestion is excellent. Thank you. I’m alright at writing completely new lyrics to an existing melody but the extra focus brought by actually extending the existing song is a great idea More lyrics videos please
When I'm bored I usually like to write songs and send them to my friends and I imagine it a popular song so I can get used to the lyrics easier. I also write stories, books and poems a lot so this helps a TON.
actually, i really really agree with the reading and analysis part, like, yesterday, all of a sudden i decided to look up the meaning of washing machine heart by mitski, since i loved listening to it, but never really thought of diving deeper into the song before, and i was honestly mind blown, her song writing is so amazing, and it genuinely taught me so much in such a short time- I didnt even have time to look it up properly, yet i learnt a lot!! and well, its not the first time ive tried to look up the meaning of a song, but this time i was just so astonished
So I'm 11 and I'm thinking of writing an album as a summer project.Its called Superhero? I've only written 2 of the songs so far....One of them is a rap and one is a soft ballad type song. Here are they songs: Intro:Man In A Mask Think you're so slick? Man in a mask with black sunglasses You know this Isn’t called giving back It's called burning cities to ash You think your Reputation is enough to save your crashing image With no circus clown running around you been losing all your business With no Public Enemy Number 1 you got no eyewitness To behold the honor of witnessing your dwindling wits ends Your so devoted to doing good That you’ll risk it all to save the hood Your so obsessed with fighting bad That you forget to kick it back Your so caught up with being right That if your wrong you’ll leave the fight 003 am I right? Your just a man in mask Looking for some action Small town big dreams Ain't ready for the main street Man in a mask Looking for revenge Searching for vengeance Good guys you avenge Bad guys Ha When will you understand? That waving a gun and firing some ones Ain't enough How bored are you really? To call shotgun on man Who tickle a cat In front of a jury Your so devoted to doing good That you’ll risk it all to save the hood Your so obsessed with fighting bad That you forget to kick it back Your so caught up with being right That if your wrong you’ll leave the fight 003 am I right? Your just a man in mask Looking for justice Feeling like a hero In a million dollar suit Your just a man in a mask Looking for equality But you seem to forget That criminals are a minority (I'm sorry, was that not your priority?) Man in a mask Man in a mask Man in a mask You live for the thrill You yearn for the praise You’d kill for chill You’d die for their shrill But at the end of the day Your just a man in a mask Who played their cards right Who picked and chose every single catfight Every move of yours so precise Every sentence describes your plight Your just a man in mask Looking for some action Small town big dreams Ain't ready for the main street Man in a mask Looking for revenge Searching for vengeance Good guys you avenge Bad guys Ha Your just a man in mask Looking for justice Feeling like a hero In a million dollar suit Your just a man in a mask Looking for equality But you seem to forget That criminals are a minority Real Hero Heroes don't have to wear capes they say Then why is that all I see on TV? Heroes don't have to have cheesy names Then why aren't they called Jane and Jake? Heroes don’t have to have superpowers Then what will separate them from you and I? Heroes don’t need to be loved and respected Then how come the real ones are pushed to the side? They all wear the same suits and capes The all have to the purpose To fight till their death To save what is left of humanity But will they stop for a crying child, that’s me? So I ask Who’s gonna hold me? When the storm is raging outside Who’s gonna take my hand? When it feels like the world is alight When the water comes seeping in They’ll be ready to fight Thats me hero A real hero A superhero Oh yeah Thats my hero A real hero A superhero Oh yeah If heroes are there to save the day What happens to those who couldn’t get away? If heroes can use their strength to move mountains Then why can’t they help those stuck under the rubble? If heroes can save worlds on fire Then why can’t they put out the one inside? If heroes can save cities from hurricanes Then why can’t they save me from the one inside? They all wear the same suits and capes The all have to the purpose To fight till their death To save what is left of humanity But will they stop for a crying child, that’s me? So I ask Who’s gonna hold me? When the storm is raging outside Who’s gonna take my hand? When it feels like the world is alight When the water comes seeping in They’ll be ready to fight And I know no Superman Is gonna pick me up when I fall And I know no Batman Could ever tell me I have it all And I know no Iron man Could wipe away my tears Cause they burn more bridges than they build Cause they break more hearts than they save My one true hero is the one who can make me smile on a rainy day My one true hero is the one who will hug me and tell me its ok Thats my hero A real hero A superhero Oh yeah A real hero,A superhero oh yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah Pls tell me what u think
This is a song I wrote 3 days ago and it’s about overthinking Back and forth Verse 1 I replay the noice I replay the sound I replay all of the memories Sometimes I feel the need to replay everything back from the start My mystery game Verse 2 I replay the noice I replay the sound Sometimes I need to look back and forth I replay I replay Verse 3 I replay the voices in my mind “Go away from her little child “ I replay all of the memories it starts Over and over again I replay the sound I replay the noice Mhmhmhm Oh oh ohh Verse 4 Sometimes I need to look back I need to remember the times that we had
This is so helpful! This is the kind of advice I've been looking for. When I'm suffering writer's block, I find it nice to listen to songs and analyze the lyrics after. I do this with everyone from Taylor Swift to Sufjan Stevens
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**Verse 1:** I see you there, across the room, Your eyes like stars, they pierce the gloom, My heart beats fast, a secret tune, Every moment spent with you feels like a bloom. **Chorus:** You’re my crush, my secret delight, In my dreams, you hold me tight, Every word, every glance, Makes my heart begin to dance. **Verse 2:** Your laughter rings, a melody sweet, Every time our eyes do meet, I lose my breath, my thoughts compete, To find the words that feel complete. **Chorus:** You’re my crush, my secret delight, In my dreams, you hold me tight, Every word, every glance, Makes my heart begin to dance. **Bridge:** If you knew the way I feel, Would you find this love is real? Take my hand, let’s start anew, With every day, I’ll cherish you. **Chorus:** You’re my crush, my secret delight, In my dreams, you hold me tight, Every word, every glance, Makes my heart begin to dance. **Outro:** So here’s my heart, I’ll take the chance, With you, my love, in life’s sweet dance, Let’s write a story, just you and me, Together, for all eternity.
I wrote this song about my ex. It's my first song. I have a few others that are a work in progress. I'm terrible at putting music to lyrics, so if my songs are ever released, then someone else can do that part. Enjoy, and I'm open to kindly-worded critiques. 'Sunshine' by Me That spot on the couch I can still see you there We cuddled and talked about our dreams With your arm 'round me and your fingers in my hair. Oh, to be as happy as you A month has passed, and I'm still blue I can't look at your texts, 'cause they make my heart ache They say the feelings will disappear, but how long must I wait? And I can't help but wonder Were you bored, sunshine? Wanted to love, sunshine? Decided to play with my heart and leave me crying, sunshine? Was it fun, sunshine? Watching me come undone, sunshine I know you're not breaking down like me, sunshine You pulled sweet nothings out of your ass Like "beautiful," "love," and "hun." Now you got me thinking If it was all just for fun. Christmas, prom, and both of our birthdays My head had it all planned I thought we'd last longer than fourteen days And you'd still be my man And I'm still out here wondering Were you bored, sunshine? Wanted to love, sunshine? Decided to play with my heart and leave me crying, sunshine? Was it fun, sunshine? Watching me come undone, sunshine I know you're not breaking down like me, sunshine I've cried my tears I burned the letter It's time to pick myself up And go down the road to getting better I always think 'bout you, sunshine Day and night, sunshine I really do wish that you'd leave my mind, sunshine I'm tryna move on, sunshine To find someone new, sunshine No one is quite like you But maybe that's a good thing, sunshine. Voila
I find that something that helps me is listening to songs without reading the lyrics. since when I sing it I'll sing a portion of it and then randomly make up the rest of the lyric. gives me a starting point for the rest of it.
I like that your writing had an unusual rhyme scheme by making “-round” from “around” slant rhyme with “town” and “spine” which all have this “ah” sound in common I don’t see this type of rhyming used enough outside of lyrical Hip Hop. As a songwriter for the last 10 years I could take these words and write multisyllable rhymes such as - Around the floor (instead of around) - My spinal cord (instead of spine) - A town resort (instead of town) Other 4 syllable rhymes that could work would be “like I don’t know”, “my final form”, “why I record”, “nice guys be cold”, “about rewards”, “swiped right before”, “lifestyle reform”, etc
I started to write this song hope it's good Friday night, under neon lights, With my bestie, feeling so right, We're ready to hit the town, Nothing's gonna bring us down. (Chorus) (Chorus melody) We're heading out to party, just you and me, Dancing like there's no tomorrow, wild and free, With my BFF, it's always a blast, In every moment, memories are cast. (Verse 2) Music's loud, the beat's so strong, We'll dance all night, we can't go wrong, In the crowd, but it's just us two, Living life, like we always do.
Also I just want to say if you don't want to be vulnerable (which you don't have to be if it's something private or you don't feel comfortable then don't write it) you can create a character and write something from their perspective and write how their feeling and everything so that people think it's relatable and touching still but it doesn't have to be something personal and it could be a part of a series :)
Alot of artists have done that and also if you want to write something personal it can be ambiguous cause there are plenty of songs that we believe are about one thing but are something entirely just remember to be descriptive and you can make up a story to diverge from the true meaning and make it interesting
I know this is a year old lol but something that helps me sometimes when I'm feeling stuck is looking back on old songs I've written and changing the lyrics to make them better. If you have a song with a good melody but you aren't proud of the lyrics, that doesn't mean throw the whole song away!
I created my first three songs for my animated edm band The Extraordinaires (Album 1 - The Great Thrills) 1.Faster Than A Bullet 2.Sunshine 3.Awesome Train
My eyes are empty, everything's dusty Not a soul's around, no leaf can be heard Silence occurred, vision blurred, Chills run down my spine! I run ahead, my passion drives All eyes on me, all eyes on me The room's full but feels vacant Strive to survive The world's been falling Keepin the expectations high Like a pie in the sky Tired of bawling and crawling The pressure's much to handle Back's tired Mind's lonely Heart's hopeless Nobody's been there to learn on, lean on It's been a hard time going on, going on The globe's so heartless Been merciless The highway's filled But the path's still to be build Claps echo, my success cheers Judgements fly, my failure cries Never been so aimless, frameless Have to walk alone To take the throne Time passes on, passes on It's been a hard time going on, going on It is my first attempt it is really simple but can you give me some advices and suggestions to write better Edit: English is my 3rd language
Thank you so much for this video, ive been wanting to start songwriting like years now ans sometimes people give great advice but too... vague, almost. So the hesitation doesn't go away quickly. So thank u, i appreciate you
Can someone help me rate this [ Verse 1] You've become a weakness I don't know how to run away from You've become the bleakness Ooh ohh oh I'm getting glum [ Pre-Chorus] Will I ever be rescued Oh oh please just don't argue I will take the blame for my attitude So, please don't let me be barbecued [ Chorus] Will I be left to the crowd It is what I've been hiding Hiding from So will you leave me to cry in the loud It is what I've been trying trying to mum Ohh ooh I've tried
Verse 1: Tell your friends about me,talk about my personality,body,and everything you like about me Pre chorus: but I just want you to be here…. my light…my hope,let the sunshine hit us and run run in the fiiiields! Chorus: Cause you’re the love of my life,never go,never live laugh smile without me,cuz you’re~no one to me but a fucking Angel,let the people talk blah blah blah about us but it don’t matter Verse 2: Dislike it?hate it?think we gonna break up and enjoy life?nah,she my life,she my everything and you’re just a thing in the mud or so~ Pre chorus: my light… my hope,let the sunshine hit us and run run in the fiiiields! Chorus: Cause you’re the love of my life,never go,never live laugh smile without me,cuz you’re~no one to me but a fucking Angel,let the people talk blah blah blah about us but it don’t matter Outro:oh baby do you feel it,my love,is only for you,so baby,do you like it? Hoooooo~o-o-o,hoooooo~o-o-oooh Meaning for the song: a famous person gets a lover and fans are mad about it,but they ignore them and keep talking about their love to annoy haters
Needed this little video! I haven't written a song, I feel in ages but it's probably only been a few years... 😐 I guess it's because I used to write so often, the inspiration is still there and I'm trying to make it all sound good. I feel restless and crazy. lol
so i wrote this song a year ago and that's probably the best lyrics ive ever writen (also ive been learning english for 10 years and there may be some mistakes here 😭😭) your eyes were brighter than our neighbors lights 3 years gone by felt like a lullaby by that time i thought you were mine your little lies came to the other side thankful for chrismas time when we were hearted, kind depreased in summertime cause days are running by gave you a christmas gift that laid under the tree calls, picking up the keys you said that you should leave no more sadness in me cause that's how it should be
2nd song: (Verse 1) Staring out the window pane, Lost in thoughts, driving me insane. Feeling like I'm stuck in rewind, Trying to leave the past behind. (Pre-Chorus) But every time I close my eyes, I see your face, can't disguise. The memories play like a movie scene, But I'm the one caught in between. (Chorus) Caught in a whirlwind of emotions, Lost in the echoes of our devotions. Trying to find my way through the night, But your shadow's still holding tight. (Verse 2) Walking down these empty streets, Echoes of our laughter, bittersweet. I'm trying to break free from your spell, But your ghost haunts me, can't you tell? (Pre-Chorus) Every song on the radio, Feels like you're here, don't wanna let go. But I know I gotta find my own way, Even if it hurts, I'll be okay. (Chorus) Caught in a whirlwind of emotions, Lost in the echoes of our devotions. Trying to find my way through the night, But your shadow's still holding tight. (Bridge) I'm tired of living in the past, Gotta break free, gotta move fast. I'll find myself in the wreckage, And rise above, like a phoenix. (Chorus) Caught in a whirlwind of emotions, Lost in the echoes of our devotions. Trying to find my way through the night, But your shadow's still holding tight. (Outro) But I'll keep pushing through the pain, Until I find the sun after the rain. I'll heal these wounds, I'll learn to fly, And leave your memory behind in the sky.
Here’s a song I wrote, hope you all like it! Song name = good enough . = one beat (Verse one) I saw you with her the other day, you were laughing and talking like I wasn’t there, You kept on telling me that you were just friends but yet I still see you with her all the time. Was our love just like a set up? Was it just so you could get with her? Did you ever really love me baby? . . . (Pre chorus) The amount of things I did just to try and be good enough for you . . . (Chorus) Just gotta put on a little makeup, go on and dress up, just eat a little more . . . . Change up my attitude, try not to cry so much and pretend that I’m fine . . . But apparently that’s not enough so maybe in my dreams, yeah maybe in my dreams I’ll be good enough . . . (Outro) Yeah maybe in my dreams, maybe in my dreams I’ll be good enough
Totally agree with setting limitations. It creates boundaries and forces you to think differently. Just like someone having limited resources creating the best invention the world wasn’t ready for. They were forced to squeeze out the creativity and solution bc of the tight space. Sometimes we need pressure to pour out. We need some boundaries to become better versions of ourself and or create unique and authentic pieces.
my unreleased song... When the summer time madness comes to an end I'm just out here lookin’ for new friends Cos everyone i had dont care about me guess our friendships werent meant to be Summer time madness oh, oh The summer time madness oh The summer time madness oh , oh Summer time madness Summer time madness The summer time madness it was just a headache All my nerves were just about to break No i wouldn't be here writing me a song That summer time madness was takin’ way to long Summer time madness oh, oh The summer time madness oh The summer time madness oh , oh Summer time madness Summer time madness I remember that july day None of my words had a single say I just had to play along make it seem ok Ok ok ok When that summer time madness came to an end I was running about with no more friend Everyone that i had dont care about me Or at least that's what i see
I want to get better at songwriting to aprove my writing skills it take time for me to learn writing ✍️ 🎵 for tips and music is my dream 💭 come true to hold the music idstury in my shoulders with patience for our team of course
I know this was 2 years ago and I’m just now watching it. When I was young I would write random songs and eventually thought I wasn’t good enough to keep trying so I threw it away. A couple years later today being 19.. song writing and singing/music in general is still something I enjoy.. people in the past still don’t think I’m a fit for it or will never make it and even if I don’t someday writing songs about my life and mental health is something I really enjoy and want to continue. I’m not a great singer but anyone can learn, and it’s really is hard to write a song not knowing where to start and end, but If I really want it, I need to work for it. Thank you for this video. I enjoyed it so much!! ❤
the bit about thinking of lyrics as poetry helped so much. i've got a really strong prose style, but always thought of lyrics as "just match these points to the melody" and not as, well, a story. thank you so much for this!
Thank you so much for making this, I was trying to write a song earlier and I think your advice in this video really helped me and will help me for many songs to come, wicked video
I wrote a song that's about my crush it's not done yet and I started today and I needed tips so thank you I'll give you the lyrics I have so far that I memorized, You've dated almost every girl in my class,but when you look at me you never thought to ask.And at all the dances I was alone, hoping someday you would take me home 😢❤
i thought that you could just write a song just like that but apparently not i have learned so much and i can't wait to start making music (notes i took) How to write a song 1.be very specific (setting,time of day,emotions 2. forget that it's a song at first a think of it a a poem 3. Read poetry 4. 5. syllables,word bank(a,b,c) 6. Listen to different kinds of music, listen to new artist 7. Get a song you like a out your lyrics to it 8. Be honest and vulnerable 9. Don't try and be perfect 10. Stay consistent
i am an ARMY! i am amazed with my idols's genius lyrics, i always wanted to be suga who writes songs that give hope to other people, this video helped me a lot to write to write, and some bts album really helped me to write lyrics, thanks mate!! for this beautiful video that helped me
trying to write a song with these tips in mind :)) verse) you vomit out flowers but your hearts cold and dry you say you care for me, weren't here last night don't really believe you, but I'll play nice pre chorus) trusted you for half a second then it clicked and now I get it real knowledge ain't hard to get it's you who's lost it's you who's lost chorus) your story isn't adding up is it sinking in it's so obvious little things missing now your stumbling tryna find one more excuse why should I stick around, for you?? it's a wip :)))
I really needed this vid! Been searching for this kind of vids bcause I recently got into songwriting and it just became too many thoughts too little words. Thank you :D
Thank you so much for this 😭💜 You and your channel deserve way more! I've been wanting to compose a song since years finally a video that helps me!!! You're the best ILY
I honestly didn't expect to get a new song idea from this but halfway through when you say "Or start every line with a different letter of the alphabet" i got a whole new idea! Once again your videos are saving me from the (metaphorical) ocean of writers block
Thank You! I am good at freestyling, but had trouble coming up with writing lyrics. Now it's clearer in my head beacause od you. I had big mess in my head, now it's easier. When I get up I'll write a song! Or at least I will try 😅
Maybe you could make sure you have something you can record yourself with handy (if I don't have anything I try to repeat what I thought over and over until I find a way to record it so I don't lose it lol) and then record. Listen back and then work from there
Wow! Thanks for those tips! It made me write them in my songwriting journal to refer to whenever I have writer's block. Because of the way you structured this video, I thought you were a TED Talks speaker! From how you used your visuals to how you connected with people when it came to being honest with their experiences, it really touched my heart to improve more! Hopefully, this video will reach a million views soon~! (As of the time I wrote this, it had 999k views.)
These are such good tips!! Especially the 3rd one. Giving yourself a few limitations really activates your creativity. As for discovering new music, there's also a lot you can learn fron the old music legends. i started listening to Fleetwood mac and i was blown away by the songwriting, they have a very distinct style
Your Video really helped me a lot. It was what i needed for my songwriting and now i do feel way better about it! I also wanted to say that i love how you create your Videos and just your vibe:) Your room looks amazing, so aesthetic!
Made a song: (Verse 1) Staring at the ceiling, lost in thought, Trying to piece together what we've wrought. Tangled emotions, like a twisted vine, Caught between love and a fragile line. (Pre-Chorus) Every word we said, every tear we cried, Echoes of a love that slowly died. Trying to find the strength to let go, But the memories linger, like an endless show. (Chorus) Oh, I'm living in a world of shades of gray, Trying to find the light, but losing my way.
of Olivia Rodrigo: (Verse 1) Staring out the window pane, Lost in thoughts, driving me insane. Feeling like I'm stuck in rewind, Trying to leave the past behind. (Pre-Chorus) But every time I close my eyes, I see your face, can't disguise. The memories play like a movie scene, But I'm the one caught in between. (Chorus) Caught in a whirlwind of emotions, Lost in the echoes of our devotions. Trying to find my way through the night, But your shadow's still holding tight. (Verse 2) Walking down these empty streets, Echoes of our laughter, bittersweet. I'm trying to break free from your spell, But your ghost haunts me, can't you tell? (Pre-Chorus) Every song on the radio, Feels like you're here, don't wanna let go. But I know I gotta find my own way, Even if it hurts, I'll be okay. (Chorus) Caught in a whirlwind of emotions, Lost in the echoes of our devotions. Trying to find my way through the night, But your shadow's still holding tight. (Bridge) I'm tired of living in the past, Gotta break free, gotta move fast. I'll find myself in the wreckage, And rise above, like a phoenix. (Chorus) Caught in a whirlwind of emotions, Lost in the echoes of our devotions. Trying to find my way through the night, But your shadow's still holding tight. (Outro) But I'll keep pushing through the pain, Until I find the sun after the rain. I'll heal these wounds, I'll learn to fly, And leave your memory behind in the sky.
Ok so i wrote this song a couple days ago, about my when i was going through depression. it's a work in progress and I'm open to critiques! Also need a title so if u have any ideas that would be great! [Verse 1] My head is heavy, my heart is numb A constant feeling of being undone The weight of the world is crushing me Can't seem to break free [Pre-Chorus] I'm drowning in this endless darkness Life feels like a never-ending mess Can't seem to find my way out Everything's a blur, I'm filled with doubt [Chorus] Depression, you're my constant companion Always lurking, never leaving The pain you bring is so real I pray for the day when you just disappear [Verse 2] There are days when I can barely breathe My mind races, my heart starts to bleed I try to push past this despair But it feels like no one's there [Pre-Chorus] I'm trying to keep my head above water But the currents keep getting stronger I'm desperate for a bit of light But you keep me trapped in this endless night [Chorus] Depression, you're my constant companion Always lurking, never leaving The pain you bring is so real I pray for the day when you just disappear [Bridge] I know there's hope beyond this pain I just need to find my way again I won't let you hold me down I'll find a way to turn things around [Chorus] Depression, you're my constant companion Always lurking, never leaving The pain you bring is so real But I'm ready to fight, to finally heal.
constant companion, endless darkness and pray are good titles in my opinion! if you'd prefer something that isn't in the song, i like 'a tale from a sad girl' or 'rising above my depression' (idek if those are good 😭). anyways your song is amazing!! such beautiful lyrics.
I've been working on a song for the past couple of days. I have come up with a name for it, it's nowhere near finished, but here it is: I still love you but god I wish I couldn't The way your brown eyes smile Watching as you ignore that last message, the three words you used to say back The eyes are the windows to your soul but how come I still trusted yours? this is getting old, you probably think as I ask how you are. Sometimes I still wonder if you think about me Not like I care Not like I've checked your profile 10 times this past week I deserve better but god, wouldn't it be fun? I know I told you that I'm done "im worth more", "you're not the one" Because you're not, my bar isnt that low, obviously But when I'm up at 3am, you obtain redeeming qualities I still love you but god I wish I couldn't The way your eyes meet mine every time we said we're just friends Blue and brown, mix it and you get the gray zone The balance between war and peace
you know i’m on top ima go in beast mode i just find myself searching like finding Nemo i just can’t be broken unless i go get the cheat code. 🔥 this is a hook i wrote
I have been writing songs for a long time. They have obviously gotten better, but I have never EVER thrown away a lyric or melody. If you want to write something, think on paper, then modify everything until it is good enough for you. Even though the final product might look completely different from the feeble lines you began with. Also, bring a notebook everywhere. I got a ton of inspiration being in Europe and I was so glad I brought my notebook places because I kept having random ideas that COULD NOT BE FORGOTTEN. Now I have a song!!!
Wrote this song a little bit ago and found it again im struggling with a title for it though Verse 1 I wish I could explain That i'm not alright But no one understands me So I keep my emotions inside My days are dull The skies are dark and gray Trying to get through life But I don't know The right way People tell me “It’ll all get better” And that “You’re just going through a phase” I'm trying to be happy But I put a mask on As I go through my days Chorus People always tell me “These problems are nothing” “Just wait till you’re older” I'm trying to find happiness Trying to find a source of closure I'm trapped in the darkness Im calling out for help But I just can't seem to find a way out I can’t do it by myself Verse 2 Im calling on the phone But no ones on the other line So I go through my days Trying to convince the world Im “fine” Im struggling with life My understandings thin It seems that whatever I do I just can't ever win Chorus People always tell me “These problems are nothing” “Just wait till you’re older” I'm trying to find happiness Trying to find a source of closure I'm trapped in the darkness Im calling out for help But I just can't seem to find a way out I can’t do it by myself Post Chorus I'm trying to get through these trials But I just keep falling down Im crying out for help But no one hears A sound
This is a song I just wrote, here goes A rose petal force in unintentional suicide I didn't want to take this springtime ride Birds flew in the sky singing you're gonna die Idiotic irony's belting cry I don't wanna leave you She's got blue, blue lips Mother of the lunar eclipse Splintered, bruised, bathed in boiling hot water She couldn't breathe any better than she did before Pool of melancholic acid retreating her mouth A contrast between spring morning and ego related truth She gurgeled on her spit And revealed the beneath of her cherry lipstick She's got blue, blue lips Mother of the lunar eclipse No delusions could she withdrawal And her frustration regretted her flesh of satan's call Her heart's beating faster with the karmic wisdom Of what she never knew Of the woeful impatient young lady she was She took more antihistamines And more antihistamines More antihistamines More More More And the spring scent retreated to her fortune And she was suffocated in the leftover scent of the winter mood Her darling came home He saw her asphyxiated on her perfume like disgrace Blasphemy in snowdrop disguise it was She's got blue, blue lips Mother of the lunar eclipse No delusions could she withdrawal She was stroked by the black swan's feathers Sorry it's kinda dark, I'm just horrible at making happy lyrics
naw but this is hella educational this is amazing thanks! Tryna get back into my passions after a couple years of depression lol, still depressed but i have new forms of expression
my problem is that i’ll write a part that i’m sooo proud of but then i can’t write the rest of the lyrics because they don’t live up to the expectations that i set from those first few lines 😭 edit: i did end up finishing a couple songs that i’m quite proud of 🤭
@@laasya_828 i’ve found it helpful to write those lyrics down in a separate note so you can just write down random ideas in there and come back to them if you think there are pieces that would fit together
Me to I want to make my own music so I can at least find the relatable song to me but it's hard for me to produce it and sing but I like to write my lyrics also if it's hard for your lyrics think about good lyrics you like or just write it right away
I'm so stubborn w/ the reading!! I took a creative writing class and it was helpful but I was so frustrated w/ the amount of reading we did in the beginning of class to be able to write. I get it now, and I appreciate it. Just a slow reader here, and some of these themes fly over my head, not to mention I've found myself writing ab the same stuff now.
My song! Hopefully people can work out the story Best Televised Romances I’ve put on a nice dress But I can’t fix the rest So what did you expect? You saw glimmers in the mud And thought you’d try your best But those gems were broken glass They were only glass Just cause I’m near, Doesn’t make me close. Never thought you’d feel so alone, Not now you’d won. Thought it’d be real damned nice Once it was over and done… You really thought it’d be easy To wipe away my misery By smiling nicely And telling me you love me…? Just what did you expect? So what did you expect? But just cause I won’t- Lay down my life for you Doesn’t mean I’ll run too Doesn’t mean I’ll run too Just cause I don’t- Tear down the world for you Doesn’t mean I’m wrong too Doesn’t mean I’m wrong too But who were you expecting to save? Some things, they never can be changed… But who were you expecting to save? Some things they-some things stay. I’ve put on a big smile Can’t you see I’m still trying? Maybe if it wasn’t so expected But you always liked it when It’s televised But now it is just tiring… You thought you could change me so easily? Blossom thorns with one click So why were you trying to fix me? Baby some things they stick so Who did you fall in love with The whole idea or only Part of it…? But just cause I won’t- Lay down my life for you Doesn’t mean I’ll run too Doesn’t mean I’ll run too Just cause I don’t- Tear down the world for you Doesn’t mean I’m wrong too Doesn’t mean I’m wrong too Just cause I don’t Burn down the sky for you Doesn’t mean I’d lie to you Doesn’t mean I’d lie to you Just cause I won’t Face all of hell for you Doesn’t mean I’ll hate you Doesn’t mean I’d leave too But who were you expecting to save? Just who were expecting to save? Somethings they never can be change Something’s stay, somethings they But who were you expecting to save? Some things they never can be changed So who were you expecting to save… Some things they- Some things stay
Wrote this song today, took about 3-2 minutes maybe 4, I've noticed I'm faster at writing songs than anything else I do, It isnt that good as I'm just a teenager, so I have no experience I feel you by my side I have this weird feeling Like it's a dream just out of my grasp Anytime I see you, my heart flutters What is this feeling- What is this feeling- Is this what loves feels like Is this what happens when you see the person going out of your grasp What is this feeling- It cant be love- I cant ruin everything What should I do Should I risk it all To see if you feel the same Would I risk it all to hear the words "I love you" Would I risk it all to see! What is this feeling- Is this what loves feels like Maybe I should risk it all to see- Maybe I should risk it all to see- Risk it all to see!
1. Gonna look up some Lyrics I like and dislike and look for similarities or just whatever I notice. 2. using a song's lyrics as a template sounds good to me. Thanks for helping me
I honestly think my lyrics are kinda cheesy but meaningful. I try to use vocals with soothing lofi beats. Time Lyrics [Verse] Try too follow me while I try too avoid mistakes Nothing adds up with every breath I take Let's take a run in the midnight rain Let’s make It through this overall pain Let's take a nap in a meadow full of sheep I wanna give you love but my love can be cheap [Chorus] Time Time is all it takes (Or maybe) Time Time makes more mistakes (Oh no) Time Time flows through a creek Time Time plays hide and seek
tip: some albums that helped me a LOT with songwriting and exposed me to a new style of songwriting and changed me FOREVER and I improved SO MUCH thanks to them are Evermore and Folklore by Taylor Swift!!
I LOVE THOSE ALBUMS! taylor’s writing is incredible and she’s really a master at her craft
@@AnnieDang SHE ISS
@@AnnieDang also as a songwriter myself since I was six and a half, your videos are SO HELPFUL for beginners!! in your other video about how to write songs for noobs you basically explained how I write my own songs and I was never able to dl that lol
your channel is amazing and I love the way you did this vid!!
Listen to Sufjan Stevens - Carrie And Lowell. The songwriting on that album blows away most other albums of it's time.
Yes.
as someone who’s been trying to write about topics that are really personal that i went/am going thru it really helped me! thank u aha
so glad this helped!❤️
Give me your ig can we talk
Wrote this song last week in one day
[Verse 1]
I missed your call cause it didn’t make sense
And I just can’t recall when I liked your pretenses
[Pre-Chorus]
It’s under review so I can strike it through
Keep forgetting you so I said bid adieu
[Chorus]
I just can’t lie
Got no motivation so why even try
I don’t know why
I’m missing a call from you, got no reply
[Verse 2]
I tried to stop you from breaking my heart
And I can’t find the pieces or the will to start
[Pre-Chorus]
You’ve come from anew but I’ve stricken you through
I’ve forgotten ‘bout you and I’ve said bid adieu
[Chorus]
I just can’t cry
Got no invitation so why even try
I don’t know why
I’m missing a call from you
Got no reply
[Bridge]
Walking right past you I’m walking right past you
Wish I would pick up the phone when it’s past due
That's soooo good dude...!!!
wow that’s amazing !
Love it
You should record it plzzzzzz
Dude it's amazing
I wanted to recommend Taylor swifts albums, folklore and evermore in terms of songwriting, they’ve inspired me so much, and the lyrics genuinely blow you away
yesss, especially folklore and evermore. i mean if you want to write so deep or more like poetries.
Yesss. Every time I listen to anything by Taylor Swift, I am inspired to write.
Totally agree!! I started writing songs that are inspired by her songs and albums (mostly reputation, folklore,evermore) so far it's going much better than I could imagine!
Yes! The lyrics are vivid and clear
that’s why i’m here and i knew i wasnt the only one 💀
I wrote this song last night.
I love to write songs.
**Verse 1:**
I see you every day, but you don't know,
How much I've fallen, how feelings grow,
In stolen glances and hidden sighs,
My heart beats faster when you're nearby.
**Chorus:**
Oh, my secret, my silent love,
You're the one I'm dreaming of,
In my heart, you hold a place,
But you don't see my longing gaze.
**Verse 2:**
I write these words you’ll never read,
A love letter for my heart's need,
In every word, my feelings show,
A secret world you'll never know.
**Chorus:**
Oh, my secret, my silent love,
You're the one I'm dreaming of,
In my heart, you hold a place,
But you don't see my longing gaze.
**Bridge:**
If only I could find the way,
To tell you all I wish to say,
Would you smile, would you care,
Or would my heart be left to bear?
**Chorus:**
Oh, my secret, my silent love,
You're the one I'm dreaming of,
In my heart, you hold a place,
But you don't see my longing gaze.
**Outro:**
So here I am, with love unshown,
Hoping one day, you'll be my own,
Until then, I'll keep this song,
A love letter where you belong.
Omg!!!! I luvvv it!!!!💗 I wish I could write songs like u....
@@Ru-eo7rq Tysm 💗
Girl that's amazing, I wanna hear someone singing it so baad😭❤️❤️
You have potential
I really want to sing this one...I will try to come up with some composition
I used to write poems, but since 2015, began to put melodies to them and converted them into songs. When I discovered you on you tube, I was inspired even more and am so thankful to you for your informative, musically educational and inspiring videos. Thanks very much indeed, Annie. God Bless you. I wish you and your family A Very Happy New Year 2022.
Aw Happy New Year!! wishing you all the best ☺️❤️
@@AnnieDang thanks very much indeed.
hi there, i would like to publish your music on my channel, maybe we can collab toghter, ur voice n my graphics n videos, where can i connect to you?
how do you write a poem tho help me
@@drew4770 same here lmao
Songwriting is one of my favorites hobbies. It makes me feel so comfortable and help me go through hard times. I wrote this song a couple weeks ago. SZA was my main reference to write this.
Out the mud by Guvvs
Fool me once and fool me twice
Done of being stupid
Done of believing in your eyes
You're the one that never tried
You keep blaming on me
And I fall another time
"Didn't wanna did you dirty
I just wanted to feel your body on me"
Didn't want none isolation
But you a guilty temptation
I I I I I got it out the mud
I I I I I got it out the mud
I I I I I, I just wanted trust
I I I I I, but you just wanted lust
I wanna trust but you leave me blind in the haze
I wanna trust but you leave me blind in the warzone
You were busting out the window
In the middle of the night, oh
What if I complain, would you change?
No, you won't
You don't pick up the phone
Make me run outta oxygen
You make me feel like a gem back in the mud
When I just wanted trust
When I just wanted love
And you just wanted lust
I I I I I got it out the mud
I I I I I got it out the mud
I I I I I, I just wanted trust
I I I I I, but you just wanted lust
"Didn't wanna did you dirty
I just wanted to feel your body on me"
Didn't want none isolation
But you a guilty temptation
Didn't wanna be this lonely
I just wanted to be the one that you need
While the whole world shine above me
I just wanted to be the one you need
did you write this??? bc holy crapp it’s good 🥲🥲
@@urfav.izz9 yes, I did. I appreciate a lot that you like it.
@@guvvs1644 you should be a songwriter. i love this
💀💀💀
@@vqlleyofthedolls what? If your that jealous of bot having a love life then just stay single yk-
One of the most important principles of writing that I know, which is not mentioned here, is, “Don’t tell, show.” You can hear this principle in action in two very fine songs of the late 1960’s, “Who Knows Where The Time Goes,” by Sandy Denny, and “Changes,” by Phil Ochs. Both songs deal powerfully with the same subject, the bittersweet passing of a relationship with time, without actually telling us about it directly. Both songs are available on TH-cam, and are must-listens for anyone who is serious about learning how to write great lyrics.
I was not expecting to see Phil's name on any videos like this! God was he brilliant!
Lots of you asked for this, so here it is! It makes me so happy seeing all of you so eager to write and learn, so hopefully this helps! LOVE YALL! shoot me questions and i’ll try my best to get to them❤️
OTHER NEWS: Ameer and I have a song coming out soon on February 10th! Stay tuned
I sometimes write a song and be happy with it for a week or so, when I come back to it I realise that it actually sucks, anyone else feel like this happens?
Yesss all the time
@@skyzer_walker7180 omg yes every time aghh
@@skyzer_walker7180 That happens to me too sometimes, but then I just change what I don't like about it and keep what I do like about it or I start writing a brand new song.
Yep!!
Hi.
I wrote this song about losing touch with a friend a couple of hours so please give me some constructive criticism!
I wondered what crossed your mind
Every time your eyes met mine
Wish I could ignore the signs
Cause what is we got lost in time?
I felt us falter through the screen
Reminders of us keep haunting me
Because I know we’re
Not friends, not enemies
We’re strangers with memories
I guess I just can’t believe
You’re exactly what you said you’d never be.
It feels like just yesterday
Your white sweater, mine was gray
Unexpectedly you pulled away
Why didn’t you stay? Why didn’t I wait?
I felt us falter through the screen
Reminders of us keep haunting me
Because I know we’re
Not friends not enemies
We’re strangers with memories
I guess I just can’t believe
You’re exactly what you said you’d never be
It’s getting harder to pretend like we never happened
Cause I’m faking a smile
Saying it didn’t matter
But my eyes still linger just a second too long
Lay awake at night wondering where I went wrong
Try to relight a spark when I know it’s gone cold
Tell myself I’ll be fine if I just give it time,
Even though I’m not the friend you wished for.
I felt us falter through the screen
Reminders of us keep haunting me
Because I know we’re
Not friends, not enemies
We’re strangers with memories
I guess I just can’t believe
You’re exactly what you said you’d never be.
Thank for reading! Hope you liked it!
heyy
so me and my friend are both songwriters (well not exactly pros 😅) but yea
I showed her tis song and both of us felt it deeply
You're very talented, I wish you success
@@laasya_828 aww thank you!
Oh my gosh honestly this is amazing! I really felt it :,) pls teach me haha
This is so nice! :D wonderful, I love it!
"Not friends, not enemies/We’re strangers with memories" - That's an incredible line, genuinely. Well done!
This a song I made for my friend's breakup xd
Left on read at 4 am
I'm sunken deep, stuck in my bed
In a hole, I can't escape
It's the same as yesterday.
My energy wasted on someone like you.
Sent one text a week; now I'm feeling blue
Because we used to be best friends
is this where our fairy tale ends?
[softer] One-time summer fling...
[Chorus]
So why do I get this feeling when you're not around?
Why do I get this feeling; that without you, I'd rather drown
Rereading old texts funny how I thought you were the one
But now you're gone, and now you're gone.
[softer] One-time summer fling
My love wasn't reciprocated
you're a clear reminder of the mistakes I've been making
so why do I feel like this?
You're too hard to resist
(softer and quieter tone)
Maybe if I keep telling myself
That this was just a summer love
I can convince myself
that I was enough
That I was enough (emphasis)
So why do I get this feeling when you're not around?
Why do I get this feeling; that without you, I'd rather drown
Rereading old texts funny how I thought you were the one
But now you're gone, and now you're gone.
One time summer fling.
ohhh I really like this,
I like this way more than the top comment (no offence to that person, but I find this better)
@@moonmush Thank you :))
brooo....
Its dammn good👍👍🙂🙂
I read the song in Tate McRae singing voice
Making my final escape
Going down now every lane
Using any turn
Why do I never learn
Not to get myself into these tragic situations
Xeno, he’s at his peak aggression
Goes way beyond just sinister intention
The song is called endless till the end by me lol
I’ll take what you said into account thanks
honestly, any taylor swift albums or songs are AMAZING to observe. as a swiftie, i love songwriting, and looking at ms. swifts lyrics. she is amazing.
totally agree!! I love her songwriting!
I wrote this song just now, in maybe 30-40 minutes? But I'm really proud of it! It's like a dark love song,
The current title is: I am yours, you are mine.
But if anyone has any title suggestions, you can tell me!
Anyway, I'll stop talking, and give you the song!
[Verse 1]
Once upon a lifetime,
I thought this day would never come.
Where I would finally meet you,
And I could be in love.
I never could imagine
What this world would would be,
Without ya.
You're the everything to me,
And I need you to survive.
[Pre-Chorus]
I'll love for my entire life
You're everything I need
You're exactly what I'm looking for
And all I ever want.
I'll love for all enternity,
And I'm sure you'll love me too~~
[Chorus]
Even when you're dull sometimes,
You're glowing with the brightest light.
Even when you are the one who tears me up for good.
I'll love you even now and then,
I'll love you 'til the very end,
I'll love you 'til the day I die.
I'll love you on our final ride,
Even if you don't reciprocate,
I'll never let you go.
[Verse 2]
It's always a wonderful feeling,
When you tell me what to do.
I'll always, always do it, but only if it's you.
When you are not here,
I just sit here in the silence.
My thoughts just stay here, still,
And you always will be mine.
[Pre-Chorus]
I'll love for my entire life
You're everything I need
You're exactly what I'm looking for
And all I ever want.
I'll love for all enternity,
And I'm sure you'll love me too~~
[Chorus]
Even when you're dull sometimes,
You're glowing with the brightest light.
Even when you are the one who tears me up for good.
I'll love you even now and then,
I'll love you 'til the very end,
I'll love you 'til the day I die.
I'll love you on our final ride,
Even if you don't reciprocate,
I'll never let you go.
I love ittt!!!
@@xHeisenBadger Thank You ^^
This is really beautiful! I tried singing it lol and I think this could make for a perfect hit song with a good melody!!
I wish you the best for future songs!! :))
@@rochersfamily1020 Thank You!
This is so good omfg
Even though this is a dark love song, thid gave me an idea on how I could make a love song for my partner aaaa😭
I still stand by what I say: you're the best writer I know! Seeing your videos get exponentially better with every upload is THE BEST AND I'M SO PROUD
Thank you for being my best support 🥺💖 i’m so proud of YOU as well!
I don't actually write songs, but I do write a lot of fanfictions and books, and I currently have two drafts waiting on a song to be written, as they're both about artists that use their singing voice. This helped a lot!
this has really helped me for when I'm trying to write lyrics. I want to be an artist in the music industry and a lot of the time I get stuck on how to make verses for my songs. thank you. this helped me a lot.
“Dear universe, dear life
I’m trying so hard, but there’s no light in sight
Dear universe, dear life
Why is it with me that you always pick your fights
I’m trying to stay strong
But there’s no motivation within me
No one asked for this song
But I’m putting it out for the lonely”
That’s what I have so far :)
Update: I thought of a little verse about what if feels like to have anger issues 2/11/23
You feel like the curse within me
Every single time I go back to
Angry (angry, angry, angry)
I go back to angry (angry angry)
It feels like a comfort
When I’m suffering
But really,
Everything’s getting worse (gry, angry, angry)
damnnn that’s good
@@JennaRose10 tbh I totally forgot about this, but ty for reminding me to finish it :D
@@alliumduo1675 glad i could help 😅
Thisssss! Bro that actually pretty good !!
Love it and the song It's just to relatable!🤧💗.
not a noob but really good tips! one thing I recommend is instead of just writing, try to transcribe the feeling. like, make the reader completely understand the emotion you're trying to convey :)
The third verse suggestion is excellent. Thank you. I’m alright at writing completely new lyrics to an existing melody but the extra focus brought by actually extending the existing song is a great idea
More lyrics videos please
When I'm bored I usually like to write songs and send them to my friends and I imagine it a popular song so I can get used to the lyrics easier. I also write stories, books and poems a lot so this helps a TON.
actually, i really really agree with the reading and analysis part, like, yesterday, all of a sudden i decided to look up the meaning of washing machine heart by mitski, since i loved listening to it, but never really thought of diving deeper into the song before, and i was honestly mind blown, her song writing is so amazing, and it genuinely taught me so much in such a short time- I didnt even have time to look it up properly, yet i learnt a lot!! and well, its not the first time ive tried to look up the meaning of a song, but this time i was just so astonished
This video has helped me created memorable lyrics for my goregrind death metal band. thankyou
So I'm 11 and I'm thinking of writing an album as a summer project.Its called Superhero?
I've only written 2 of the songs so far....One of them is a rap and one is a soft ballad type song.
Here are they songs:
Intro:Man In A Mask
Think you're so slick?
Man in a mask with black sunglasses
You know this
Isn’t called giving back
It's called burning cities to ash
You think your
Reputation is enough to save your crashing image
With no circus clown running around you been losing all your business
With no Public Enemy Number 1 you got no eyewitness
To behold the honor of witnessing your dwindling wits ends
Your so devoted to doing good
That you’ll risk it all to save the hood
Your so obsessed with fighting bad
That you forget to kick it back
Your so caught up with being right
That if your wrong you’ll leave the fight
003 am I right?
Your just a man in mask
Looking for some action
Small town big dreams
Ain't ready for the main street
Man in a mask
Looking for revenge
Searching for vengeance
Good guys you avenge
Bad guys
Ha
When will you understand?
That waving a gun and firing some ones
Ain't enough
How bored are you really?
To call shotgun on man
Who tickle a cat
In front of a jury
Your so devoted to doing good
That you’ll risk it all to save the hood
Your so obsessed with fighting bad
That you forget to kick it back
Your so caught up with being right
That if your wrong you’ll leave the fight
003 am I right?
Your just a man in mask
Looking for justice
Feeling like a hero
In a million dollar suit
Your just a man in a mask
Looking for equality
But you seem to forget
That criminals are a minority
(I'm sorry, was that not your priority?)
Man in a mask
Man in a mask
Man in a mask
You live for the thrill
You yearn for the praise
You’d kill for chill
You’d die for their shrill
But at the end of the day
Your just a man in a mask
Who played their cards right
Who picked and chose every single catfight
Every move of yours so precise
Every sentence describes your plight
Your just a man in mask
Looking for some action
Small town big dreams
Ain't ready for the main street
Man in a mask
Looking for revenge
Searching for vengeance
Good guys you avenge
Bad guys
Ha
Your just a man in mask
Looking for justice
Feeling like a hero
In a million dollar suit
Your just a man in a mask
Looking for equality
But you seem to forget
That criminals are a minority
Real Hero
Heroes don't have to wear capes they say
Then why is that all I see on TV?
Heroes don't have to have cheesy names
Then why aren't they called Jane and Jake?
Heroes don’t have to have superpowers
Then what will separate them from you and I?
Heroes don’t need to be loved and respected
Then how come the real ones are pushed to the side?
They all wear the same suits and capes
The all have to the purpose
To fight till their death
To save what is left of humanity
But will they stop for a crying child, that’s me?
So I ask
Who’s gonna hold me?
When the storm is raging outside
Who’s gonna take my hand?
When it feels like the world is alight
When the water comes seeping in
They’ll be ready to fight
Thats me hero
A real hero
A superhero
Oh yeah
Thats my hero
A real hero
A superhero
Oh yeah
If heroes are there to save the day
What happens to those who couldn’t get away?
If heroes can use their strength to move mountains
Then why can’t they help those stuck under the rubble?
If heroes can save worlds on fire
Then why can’t they put out the one inside?
If heroes can save cities from hurricanes
Then why can’t they save me from the one inside?
They all wear the same suits and capes
The all have to the purpose
To fight till their death
To save what is left of humanity
But will they stop for a crying child, that’s me?
So I ask
Who’s gonna hold me?
When the storm is raging outside
Who’s gonna take my hand?
When it feels like the world is alight
When the water comes seeping in
They’ll be ready to fight
And I know no Superman
Is gonna pick me up when I fall
And I know no Batman
Could ever tell me I have it all
And I know no Iron man
Could wipe away my tears
Cause they burn more bridges than they build
Cause they break more hearts than they save
My one true hero is the one who can make me smile on a rainy day
My one true hero is the one who will hug me and tell me its ok
Thats my hero
A real hero
A superhero
Oh yeah
A real hero,A superhero oh yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah
Pls tell me what u think
Thank u!!!!
Oh my gosh 😭 I'm 14 and I couldn't do as good as this! This is amazing aaaa
This is a song I wrote 3 days ago and it’s about overthinking
Back and forth
Verse 1
I replay the noice
I replay the sound
I replay all of the memories
Sometimes I feel the need to replay everything back from the start
My mystery game
Verse 2
I replay the noice
I replay the sound
Sometimes I need to look back and forth
I replay
I replay
Verse 3
I replay the voices in my mind
“Go away from her little child “
I replay all of the memories it starts
Over and over again
I replay the sound
I replay the noice
Mhmhmhm
Oh oh ohh
Verse 4
Sometimes I need to look back I need to remember the times that we had
this is really good omg im so overthinking too so i feel u
actually thanks you just gave me an ideaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ty very muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
This is so helpful! This is the kind of advice I've been looking for. When I'm suffering writer's block, I find it nice to listen to songs and analyze the lyrics after. I do this with everyone from Taylor Swift to Sufjan Stevens
You're the definition of ✨️aesthetic✨️. Litrally I was looking for a person like you sooo much. And all your vedios helped me you are the one that made me to start writing song. Love you ♥️
😭🧡omg thank you! you are SO KIND! and i’m rooting for you, Nasrin! keep writing and being you🧡
**Verse 1:**
I see you there, across the room,
Your eyes like stars, they pierce the gloom,
My heart beats fast, a secret tune,
Every moment spent with you feels like a bloom.
**Chorus:**
You’re my crush, my secret delight,
In my dreams, you hold me tight,
Every word, every glance,
Makes my heart begin to dance.
**Verse 2:**
Your laughter rings, a melody sweet,
Every time our eyes do meet,
I lose my breath, my thoughts compete,
To find the words that feel complete.
**Chorus:**
You’re my crush, my secret delight,
In my dreams, you hold me tight,
Every word, every glance,
Makes my heart begin to dance.
**Bridge:**
If you knew the way I feel,
Would you find this love is real?
Take my hand, let’s start anew,
With every day, I’ll cherish you.
**Chorus:**
You’re my crush, my secret delight,
In my dreams, you hold me tight,
Every word, every glance,
Makes my heart begin to dance.
**Outro:**
So here’s my heart, I’ll take the chance,
With you, my love, in life’s sweet dance,
Let’s write a story, just you and me,
Together, for all eternity.
I wrote this song about my ex. It's my first song. I have a few others that are a work in progress. I'm terrible at putting music to lyrics, so if my songs are ever released, then someone else can do that part. Enjoy, and I'm open to kindly-worded critiques.
'Sunshine' by Me
That spot on the couch
I can still see you there
We cuddled and talked about our dreams
With your arm 'round me and your fingers in my hair.
Oh, to be as happy as you
A month has passed, and I'm still blue
I can't look at your texts, 'cause they make my heart ache
They say the feelings will disappear, but how long must I wait?
And I can't help but wonder
Were you bored, sunshine?
Wanted to love, sunshine?
Decided to play with my heart and leave me crying, sunshine?
Was it fun, sunshine?
Watching me come undone, sunshine
I know you're not breaking down like me, sunshine
You pulled sweet nothings out of your ass
Like "beautiful," "love," and "hun."
Now you got me thinking
If it was all just for fun.
Christmas, prom, and both of our birthdays
My head had it all planned
I thought we'd last longer than fourteen days
And you'd still be my man
And I'm still out here wondering
Were you bored, sunshine?
Wanted to love, sunshine?
Decided to play with my heart and leave me crying, sunshine?
Was it fun, sunshine?
Watching me come undone, sunshine
I know you're not breaking down like me, sunshine
I've cried my tears
I burned the letter
It's time to pick myself up
And go down the road to getting better
I always think 'bout you, sunshine
Day and night, sunshine
I really do wish that you'd leave my mind, sunshine
I'm tryna move on, sunshine
To find someone new, sunshine
No one is quite like you
But maybe that's a good thing, sunshine.
Voila
This is beautiful.
@Opeoluwa K Really?! Thank you! That means a lot to me ❤❤❤❤
this sounds so beautiful
@fluffysaik You're so sweet ty ❤❤❤
that's amazing!!!!!!
I find that something that helps me is listening to songs without reading the lyrics. since when I sing it I'll sing a portion of it and then randomly make up the rest of the lyric. gives me a starting point for the rest of it.
I like that your writing had an unusual rhyme scheme by making “-round” from “around” slant rhyme with “town” and “spine” which all have this “ah” sound in common
I don’t see this type of rhyming used enough outside of lyrical Hip Hop. As a songwriter for the last 10 years I could take these words and write multisyllable rhymes such as
- Around the floor (instead of around)
- My spinal cord (instead of spine)
- A town resort (instead of town)
Other 4 syllable rhymes that could work would be “like I don’t know”, “my final form”, “why I record”, “nice guys be cold”, “about rewards”, “swiped right before”, “lifestyle reform”, etc
Yooooo i love these examples!!!
@@AnnieDang Thank you! You’ve definitely done a great job covering the important points. I absolutely loved this video of yours Annie!
I started to write this song hope it's good
Friday night, under neon lights,
With my bestie, feeling so right,
We're ready to hit the town,
Nothing's gonna bring us down.
(Chorus)
(Chorus melody)
We're heading out to party, just you and me,
Dancing like there's no tomorrow, wild and free,
With my BFF, it's always a blast,
In every moment, memories are cast.
(Verse 2)
Music's loud, the beat's so strong,
We'll dance all night, we can't go wrong,
In the crowd, but it's just us two,
Living life, like we always do.
Also I just want to say if you don't want to be vulnerable (which you don't have to be if it's something private or you don't feel comfortable then don't write it) you can create a character and write something from their perspective and write how their feeling and everything so that people think it's relatable and touching still but it doesn't have to be something personal and it could be a part of a series :)
Alot of artists have done that and also if you want to write something personal it can be ambiguous cause there are plenty of songs that we believe are about one thing but are something entirely just remember to be descriptive and you can make up a story to diverge from the true meaning and make it interesting
I know this is a year old lol but something that helps me sometimes when I'm feeling stuck is looking back on old songs I've written and changing the lyrics to make them better. If you have a song with a good melody but you aren't proud of the lyrics, that doesn't mean throw the whole song away!
I created my first three songs for my animated edm band The Extraordinaires (Album 1 - The Great Thrills)
1.Faster Than A Bullet
2.Sunshine
3.Awesome Train
Do you have your songs anywhere? Like online where I could listen to them?
My eyes are empty, everything's dusty
Not a soul's around, no leaf can be heard
Silence occurred, vision blurred,
Chills run down my spine!
I run ahead, my passion drives
All eyes on me, all eyes on me
The room's full but feels vacant
Strive to survive
The world's been falling
Keepin the expectations high
Like a pie in the sky
Tired of bawling and crawling
The pressure's much to handle
Back's tired
Mind's lonely
Heart's hopeless
Nobody's been there to learn on, lean on
It's been a hard time going on, going on
The globe's so heartless
Been merciless
The highway's filled
But the path's still to be build
Claps echo, my success cheers
Judgements fly, my failure cries
Never been so aimless, frameless
Have to walk alone
To take the throne
Time passes on, passes on
It's been a hard time going on, going on
It is my first attempt it is really simple but can you give me some advices and suggestions to write better
Edit: English is my 3rd language
Thank you so much for this video, ive been wanting to start songwriting like years now ans sometimes people give great advice but too... vague, almost. So the hesitation doesn't go away quickly. So thank u, i appreciate you
i appreciate you so much for being here!! wishing you the best with your writing!🧡
I used this alphabet method. I made a song, it sounds so good!! and it makes sence with it! I used every letter except, X and Z. Its very easy to use!
Can someone help me rate this
[ Verse 1]
You've become a weakness
I don't know how to run away from
You've become the bleakness
Ooh ohh oh I'm getting glum
[ Pre-Chorus]
Will I ever be rescued
Oh oh please just don't argue
I will take the blame for my attitude
So, please don't let me be barbecued
[ Chorus]
Will I be left to the crowd
It is what I've been hiding
Hiding from
So will you leave me to cry in the loud
It is what I've been trying
trying to mum
Ohh ooh I've tried
It's not complete...smthng is missing..
What a great video! Thank you for the advice! I'm so excited to see your channel continue to grow :)
this is so sweet! Thank you❤️🥺
Verse 1:
Tell your friends about me,talk about my personality,body,and everything you like about me
Pre chorus:
but I just want you to be here….
my light…my hope,let the sunshine hit us and run run in the fiiiields!
Chorus:
Cause you’re the love of my life,never go,never live laugh smile without me,cuz you’re~no one to me but a fucking Angel,let the people talk blah blah blah about us but it don’t matter
Verse 2:
Dislike it?hate it?think we gonna break up and enjoy life?nah,she my life,she my everything and you’re just a thing in the mud or so~
Pre chorus:
my light…
my hope,let the sunshine hit us and run run in the fiiiields!
Chorus:
Cause you’re the love of my life,never go,never live laugh smile without me,cuz you’re~no one to me
but a fucking Angel,let the people talk blah blah blah about us but it don’t matter
Outro:oh baby do you feel it,my love,is only for you,so baby,do you like it? Hoooooo~o-o-o,hoooooo~o-o-oooh
Meaning for the song: a famous person gets a lover and fans are mad about it,but they ignore them and keep talking about their love to annoy haters
Needed this little video! I haven't written a song, I feel in ages but it's probably only been a few years... 😐 I guess it's because I used to write so often, the inspiration is still there and I'm trying to make it all sound good. I feel restless and crazy. lol
so i wrote this song a year ago and that's probably the best lyrics ive ever writen (also ive been learning english for 10 years and there may be some mistakes here 😭😭)
your eyes
were brighter than our neighbors lights
3 years gone by
felt like a lullaby
by that time i thought you were mine
your little lies came to the other side
thankful for chrismas time
when we were hearted, kind
depreased in summertime
cause days are running by
gave you a christmas gift
that laid under the tree
calls, picking up the keys
you said that you should leave
no more sadness in me
cause that's how it should be
I LOVE IT
@@user-tk1qx tysm
Cute
do you have a melody for it? It reads more like poetry than something to sing, imo.
This seems like a Lofi song, powfu or something. It's 🔥🔥
2nd song:
(Verse 1)
Staring out the window pane,
Lost in thoughts, driving me insane.
Feeling like I'm stuck in rewind,
Trying to leave the past behind.
(Pre-Chorus)
But every time I close my eyes,
I see your face, can't disguise.
The memories play like a movie scene,
But I'm the one caught in between.
(Chorus)
Caught in a whirlwind of emotions,
Lost in the echoes of our devotions.
Trying to find my way through the night,
But your shadow's still holding tight.
(Verse 2)
Walking down these empty streets,
Echoes of our laughter, bittersweet.
I'm trying to break free from your spell,
But your ghost haunts me, can't you tell?
(Pre-Chorus)
Every song on the radio,
Feels like you're here, don't wanna let go.
But I know I gotta find my own way,
Even if it hurts, I'll be okay.
(Chorus)
Caught in a whirlwind of emotions,
Lost in the echoes of our devotions.
Trying to find my way through the night,
But your shadow's still holding tight.
(Bridge)
I'm tired of living in the past,
Gotta break free, gotta move fast.
I'll find myself in the wreckage,
And rise above, like a phoenix.
(Chorus)
Caught in a whirlwind of emotions,
Lost in the echoes of our devotions.
Trying to find my way through the night,
But your shadow's still holding tight.
(Outro)
But I'll keep pushing through the pain,
Until I find the sun after the rain.
I'll heal these wounds, I'll learn to fly,
And leave your memory behind in the sky.
Here’s a song I wrote, hope you all like it!
Song name = good enough
. = one beat
(Verse one)
I saw you with her the other day, you were laughing and talking like I wasn’t there,
You kept on telling me that you were just friends but yet I still see you with her all the time. Was our love just like a set up? Was it just so you could get with her? Did you ever really love me baby? . . .
(Pre chorus)
The amount of things I did just to try and be good enough for you . . .
(Chorus)
Just gotta put on a little makeup, go on and dress up, just eat a little more . . . .
Change up my attitude, try not to cry so much and pretend that I’m fine . . .
But apparently that’s not enough so maybe in my dreams, yeah maybe in my dreams I’ll be good enough . . .
(Outro)
Yeah maybe in my dreams, maybe in my dreams I’ll be good enough
Totally agree with setting limitations. It creates boundaries and forces you to think differently. Just like someone having limited resources creating the best invention the world wasn’t ready for. They were forced to squeeze out the creativity and solution bc of the tight space. Sometimes we need pressure to pour out. We need some boundaries to become better versions of ourself and or create unique and authentic pieces.
my unreleased song...
When the summer time madness comes to an end
I'm just out here lookin’ for new friends
Cos everyone i had dont care about me
guess our friendships werent meant to be
Summer time madness oh, oh
The summer time madness oh
The summer time madness oh , oh
Summer time madness
Summer time madness
The summer time madness it was just a headache
All my nerves were just about to break
No i wouldn't be here writing me a song
That summer time madness was takin’ way to long
Summer time madness oh, oh
The summer time madness oh
The summer time madness oh , oh
Summer time madness
Summer time madness
I remember that july day
None of my words had a single say
I just had to play along make it seem ok
Ok ok ok
When that summer time madness came to an end
I was running about with no more friend
Everyone that i had dont care about me
Or at least that's what i see
oh my god- this is amazing-
This is soo good!!! Have you thought about releasing it??
I want to get better at songwriting to aprove my writing skills it take time for me to learn writing ✍️ 🎵 for tips and music is my dream 💭 come true to hold the music idstury in my shoulders with patience for our team of course
this is so beautiful!
loved it!!
I know this was 2 years ago and I’m just now watching it. When I was young I would write random songs and eventually thought I wasn’t good enough to keep trying so I threw it away. A couple years later today being 19.. song writing and singing/music in general is still something I enjoy.. people in the past still don’t think I’m a fit for it or will never make it and even if I don’t someday writing songs about my life and mental health is something I really enjoy and want to continue. I’m not a great singer but anyone can learn, and it’s really is hard to write a song not knowing where to start and end, but If I really want it, I need to work for it. Thank you for this video. I enjoyed it so much!! ❤
thank you for the video!! 🥺💚 it came surprisingly when i most needed some help!
the bit about thinking of lyrics as poetry helped so much. i've got a really strong prose style, but always thought of lyrics as "just match these points to the melody" and not as, well, a story. thank you so much for this!
Thank you so much for making this, I was trying to write a song earlier and I think your advice in this video really helped me and will help me for many songs to come, wicked video
I wrote a song that's about my crush it's not done yet and I started today and I needed tips so thank you I'll give you the lyrics I have so far that I memorized, You've dated almost every girl in my class,but when you look at me you never thought to ask.And at all the dances I was alone, hoping someday you would take me home 😢❤
This was so helpful! I love your videos so much! Always very well made and full of great information!:)
Thank you Holly!!❤️
i thought that you could just write a song just like that but apparently not i have learned so much and i can't wait to start making music (notes i took)
How to write a song
1.be very specific (setting,time of day,emotions
2. forget that it's a song at first a think of it a a poem
3. Read poetry
4.
5. syllables,word bank(a,b,c)
6. Listen to different kinds of music, listen to new artist
7. Get a song you like a out your lyrics to it
8. Be honest and vulnerable
9. Don't try and be perfect
10. Stay consistent
i am an ARMY! i am amazed with my idols's genius lyrics, i always wanted to be suga who writes songs that give hope to other people, this video helped me a lot to write to write, and some bts album really helped me to write lyrics, thanks mate!! for this beautiful video that helped me
Hi army sameeee :>
thank you very much for this. i want to get into songwriting because i want to spread hope and save people with my music.
Love seeing that you have “the power of now” one of the best books ever written. You can learn so much
Oh my gosh. I saw your 'no one's here' translation to song lyrics and let me tell you I think I adore you.
Thank you so much! This really helped me! And by listen to a new genre i actually found some songs i really love!
trying to write a song with these tips in mind :))
verse)
you vomit out flowers but your hearts cold and dry
you say you care for me, weren't here last night
don't really believe you, but I'll play nice
pre chorus)
trusted you for half a second
then it clicked and now I get it
real knowledge ain't hard to get
it's you who's lost
it's you who's lost
chorus)
your story isn't adding up
is it sinking in
it's so obvious
little things missing
now your stumbling
tryna find one more excuse
why should I stick around, for you??
it's a wip :)))
Damn 🥺
I really needed this vid! Been searching for this kind of vids bcause I recently got into songwriting and it just became too many thoughts too little words. Thank you :D
OMG SO EXCITING!! wishing all the luck on this new journey ❤️
@@AnnieDang Thank youuuuuu!!!!!!
Thank you bestie for the tips to make music your a real one🎧🪘🎹🎶🎵🎼📃
your new videos are so refreshing to watch and I particular love the little graphics - can you please make a video on how you edit?
aw thank you 😭❤️!!! I’ll make a video on how i edit maybe sometime in the future :)
@@AnnieDang :)
Thank you :3 (im a crappy song writer and this helped ALOT)
Thank you so much for this 😭💜
You and your channel deserve way more!
I've been wanting to compose a song since years finally a video that helps me!!!
You're the best ILY
I honestly didn't expect to get a new song idea from this but halfway through when you say "Or start every line with a different letter of the alphabet" i got a whole new idea! Once again your videos are saving me from the (metaphorical) ocean of writers block
Thank You! I am good at freestyling, but had trouble coming up with writing lyrics. Now it's clearer in my head beacause od you. I had big mess in my head, now it's easier. When I get up I'll write a song! Or at least I will try 😅
Maybe you could make sure you have something you can record yourself with handy (if I don't have anything I try to repeat what I thought over and over until I find a way to record it so I don't lose it lol) and then record. Listen back and then work from there
Wow! Thanks for those tips! It made me write them in my songwriting journal to refer to whenever I have writer's block. Because of the way you structured this video, I thought you were a TED Talks speaker! From how you used your visuals to how you connected with people when it came to being honest with their experiences, it really touched my heart to improve more! Hopefully, this video will reach a million views soon~!
(As of the time I wrote this, it had 999k views.)
7:14
Put in the hours
And take what's ours
lmao😭
I write poems since childhood and recently I'm so into song writing and that's when I've found your video. Thanks a lot.
I find that Mckenna Grace's songs have incredibly good lyrics. Would love to see you cover some of her songs :)
These are such good tips!! Especially the 3rd one. Giving yourself a few limitations really activates your creativity.
As for discovering new music, there's also a lot you can learn fron the old music legends. i started listening to Fleetwood mac and i was blown away by the songwriting, they have a very distinct style
Your Video really helped me a lot. It was what i needed for my songwriting and now i do feel way better about it! I also wanted to say that i love how you create your Videos and just your vibe:) Your room looks amazing, so aesthetic!
Hey Paulina! so glad this helped you❤️ and thank you for being so kind🥺
Made a song: (Verse 1)
Staring at the ceiling, lost in thought,
Trying to piece together what we've wrought.
Tangled emotions, like a twisted vine,
Caught between love and a fragile line.
(Pre-Chorus)
Every word we said, every tear we cried,
Echoes of a love that slowly died.
Trying to find the strength to let go,
But the memories linger, like an endless show.
(Chorus)
Oh, I'm living in a world of shades of gray,
Trying to find the light, but losing my way.
of Olivia Rodrigo:
(Verse 1)
Staring out the window pane,
Lost in thoughts, driving me insane.
Feeling like I'm stuck in rewind,
Trying to leave the past behind.
(Pre-Chorus)
But every time I close my eyes,
I see your face, can't disguise.
The memories play like a movie scene,
But I'm the one caught in between.
(Chorus)
Caught in a whirlwind of emotions,
Lost in the echoes of our devotions.
Trying to find my way through the night,
But your shadow's still holding tight.
(Verse 2)
Walking down these empty streets,
Echoes of our laughter, bittersweet.
I'm trying to break free from your spell,
But your ghost haunts me, can't you tell?
(Pre-Chorus)
Every song on the radio,
Feels like you're here, don't wanna let go.
But I know I gotta find my own way,
Even if it hurts, I'll be okay.
(Chorus)
Caught in a whirlwind of emotions,
Lost in the echoes of our devotions.
Trying to find my way through the night,
But your shadow's still holding tight.
(Bridge)
I'm tired of living in the past,
Gotta break free, gotta move fast.
I'll find myself in the wreckage,
And rise above, like a phoenix.
(Chorus)
Caught in a whirlwind of emotions,
Lost in the echoes of our devotions.
Trying to find my way through the night,
But your shadow's still holding tight.
(Outro)
But I'll keep pushing through the pain,
Until I find the sun after the rain.
I'll heal these wounds, I'll learn to fly,
And leave your memory behind in the sky.
This is so relatable
Ok so i wrote this song a couple days ago, about my when i was going through depression. it's a work in progress and I'm open to critiques! Also need a title so if u have any ideas that would be great!
[Verse 1]
My head is heavy, my heart is numb
A constant feeling of being undone
The weight of the world is crushing me
Can't seem to break free
[Pre-Chorus]
I'm drowning in this endless darkness
Life feels like a never-ending mess
Can't seem to find my way out
Everything's a blur, I'm filled with doubt
[Chorus]
Depression, you're my constant companion
Always lurking, never leaving
The pain you bring is so real
I pray for the day when you just disappear
[Verse 2]
There are days when I can barely breathe
My mind races, my heart starts to bleed
I try to push past this despair
But it feels like no one's there
[Pre-Chorus]
I'm trying to keep my head above water
But the currents keep getting stronger
I'm desperate for a bit of light
But you keep me trapped in this endless night
[Chorus]
Depression, you're my constant companion
Always lurking, never leaving
The pain you bring is so real
I pray for the day when you just disappear
[Bridge]
I know there's hope beyond this pain
I just need to find my way again
I won't let you hold me down
I'll find a way to turn things around
[Chorus]
Depression, you're my constant companion
Always lurking, never leaving
The pain you bring is so real
But I'm ready to fight, to finally heal.
constant companion, endless darkness and pray are good titles in my opinion! if you'd prefer something that isn't in the song, i like 'a tale from a sad girl' or 'rising above my depression' (idek if those are good 😭). anyways your song is amazing!! such beautiful lyrics.
@@lululemon8427 thank you and i like 'a tale from a sad girl'
@@jewelx1988 yay! glad i could be of help. if you ever release this, i'd love to listen! good luck
I've been working on a song for the past couple of days. I have come up with a name for it, it's nowhere near finished, but here it is:
I still love you but god I wish I couldn't
The way your brown eyes smile
Watching as you ignore that last message, the three words you used to say back
The eyes are the windows to your soul but how come I still trusted yours?
this is getting old, you probably think as I ask how you are.
Sometimes I still wonder if you think about me
Not like I care
Not like I've checked your profile 10 times this past week
I deserve better but god, wouldn't it be fun?
I know I told you that I'm done
"im worth more", "you're not the one"
Because you're not, my bar isnt that low, obviously
But when I'm up at 3am, you obtain redeeming qualities
I still love you but god I wish I couldn't
The way your eyes meet mine every time we said we're just friends
Blue and brown, mix it and you get the gray zone
The balance between war and peace
you know i’m on top ima go in beast mode
i just find myself searching like finding Nemo
i just can’t be broken unless i go get the cheat code. 🔥
this is a hook i wrote
Thank you for helping me this is just what I needed to write a song I really appreciate your video 😊
Ok but she’s so pretty lmao
I have been writing songs for a long time. They have obviously gotten better, but I have never EVER thrown away a lyric or melody. If you want to write something, think on paper, then modify everything until it is good enough for you. Even though the final product might look completely different from the feeble lines you began with. Also, bring a notebook everywhere. I got a ton of inspiration being in Europe and I was so glad I brought my notebook places because I kept having random ideas that COULD NOT BE FORGOTTEN. Now I have a song!!!
Wrote this song a little bit ago and found it again im struggling with a title for it though
Verse 1
I wish I could explain
That i'm not alright
But no one understands me
So I keep my emotions inside
My days are dull
The skies are dark and gray
Trying to get through life
But I don't know
The right way
People tell me
“It’ll all get better”
And that
“You’re just going through a phase”
I'm trying to be happy
But I put a mask on
As I go through my days
Chorus
People always tell me
“These problems are nothing”
“Just wait till you’re older”
I'm trying to find happiness
Trying to find a source of closure
I'm trapped in the darkness
Im calling out for help
But I just can't seem to find a way out
I can’t do it by myself
Verse 2
Im calling on the phone
But no ones on the other line
So I go through my days
Trying to convince the world
Im “fine”
Im struggling with life
My understandings thin
It seems that whatever I do
I just can't ever win
Chorus
People always tell me
“These problems are nothing”
“Just wait till you’re older”
I'm trying to find happiness
Trying to find a source of closure
I'm trapped in the darkness
Im calling out for help
But I just can't seem to find a way out
I can’t do it by myself
Post Chorus
I'm trying to get through these trials
But I just keep falling down
Im crying out for help
But no one hears
A sound
This is a song I just wrote, here goes
A rose petal force in unintentional suicide
I didn't want to take this springtime ride
Birds flew in the sky singing you're gonna die
Idiotic irony's belting cry
I don't wanna leave you
She's got blue, blue lips
Mother of the lunar eclipse
Splintered, bruised, bathed in boiling hot water
She couldn't breathe any better than she did before
Pool of melancholic acid retreating her mouth
A contrast between spring morning and ego related truth
She gurgeled on her spit
And revealed the beneath of her cherry lipstick
She's got blue, blue lips
Mother of the lunar eclipse
No delusions could she withdrawal
And her frustration regretted her flesh of satan's call
Her heart's beating faster with the karmic wisdom
Of what she never knew
Of the woeful impatient young lady she was
She took more antihistamines
And more antihistamines
More antihistamines
More
More
More
And the spring scent retreated to her fortune
And she was suffocated in the leftover scent of the winter mood
Her darling came home
He saw her asphyxiated on her perfume like disgrace
Blasphemy in snowdrop disguise it was
She's got blue, blue lips
Mother of the lunar eclipse
No delusions could she withdrawal
She was stroked by the black swan's feathers
Sorry it's kinda dark, I'm just horrible at making happy lyrics
@@tamzinwatterott1134love it
Very informative. Thank you for the share! Love your voice here!
naw but this is hella educational this is amazing thanks! Tryna get back into my passions after a couple years of depression lol, still depressed but i have new forms of expression
my problem is that i’ll write a part that i’m sooo proud of but then i can’t write the rest of the lyrics because they don’t live up to the expectations that i set from those first few lines 😭
edit: i did end up finishing a couple songs that i’m quite proud of 🤭
sameee tho-
I have so many song drafts with only the first verse written and rest is just non-eXistinG lol
@@laasya_828 i’ve found it helpful to write those lyrics down in a separate note so you can just write down random ideas in there and come back to them if you think there are pieces that would fit together
Me to I want to make my own music so I can at least find the relatable song to me but it's hard for me to produce it and sing but I like to write my lyrics also if it's hard for your lyrics think about good lyrics you like or just write it right away
@@minhyuksssmilehey can we work together
I'm so stubborn w/ the reading!! I took a creative writing class and it was helpful but I was so frustrated w/ the amount of reading we did in the beginning of class to be able to write. I get it now, and I appreciate it. Just a slow reader here, and some of these themes fly over my head, not to mention I've found myself writing ab the same stuff now.
Thank you for this, Annie. I’m trying to write a song for music class . And this will help me lots, given credits to you 😊😊😘🥰😍
When I write songs I just go into a dictionary to find a word that rhymes and end up not knowing what I’m even talking about,this was helpful
I wanna make a song about my dog named luna she was 3 years old and i had her when she was a baby but my dad got rid of her she was a german shepherd
Not good
U could make it sound like it's about the moon ♥
You are wonderful and inspiring. I was stuck today but your video helped massively. A huge thanks x
My song! Hopefully people can work out the story
Best Televised Romances
I’ve put on a nice dress
But I can’t fix the rest
So what did you expect?
You saw glimmers in the mud
And thought you’d try your best
But those gems were broken glass
They were only glass
Just cause I’m near,
Doesn’t make me close.
Never thought you’d feel so alone,
Not now you’d won.
Thought it’d be real damned nice
Once it was over and done…
You really thought it’d be easy
To wipe away my misery
By smiling nicely
And telling me you love me…?
Just what did you expect?
So what did you expect?
But just cause I won’t-
Lay down my life for you
Doesn’t mean I’ll run too
Doesn’t mean I’ll run too
Just cause I don’t-
Tear down the world for you
Doesn’t mean I’m wrong too
Doesn’t mean I’m wrong too
But who were you expecting to save?
Some things, they never can be changed…
But who were you expecting to save?
Some things they-some things stay.
I’ve put on a big smile
Can’t you see I’m still trying?
Maybe if it wasn’t so expected
But you always liked it when
It’s televised
But now it is just tiring…
You thought you could change me so easily?
Blossom thorns with one click
So why were you trying to fix me?
Baby some things they stick so
Who did you fall in love with
The whole idea or only
Part of it…?
But just cause I won’t-
Lay down my life for you
Doesn’t mean I’ll run too
Doesn’t mean I’ll run too
Just cause I don’t-
Tear down the world for you
Doesn’t mean I’m wrong too
Doesn’t mean I’m wrong too
Just cause I don’t
Burn down the sky for you
Doesn’t mean I’d lie to you
Doesn’t mean I’d lie to you
Just cause I won’t
Face all of hell for you
Doesn’t mean I’ll hate you
Doesn’t mean I’d leave too
But who were you expecting to save?
Just who were expecting to save?
Somethings they never can be change
Something’s stay, somethings they
But who were you expecting to save?
Some things they never can be changed
So who were you expecting to save…
Some things they-
Some things stay
I sing this and It's really good! Ngl! I LOVE IT 💗🤧
Luv it!!!!💗 can I use it??? If u want...
This is sooooo helpful! Thank you!!! I just got goosebumps learning, thank you so much!
Wrote this song today, took about 3-2 minutes maybe 4, I've noticed I'm faster at writing songs than anything else I do, It isnt that good as I'm just a teenager, so I have no experience
I feel you by my side
I have this weird feeling
Like it's a dream just out of my grasp
Anytime I see you, my heart flutters
What is this feeling-
What is this feeling-
Is this what loves feels like
Is this what happens when you see the person going out of your grasp
What is this feeling-
It cant be love-
I cant ruin everything
What should I do
Should I risk it all
To see if you feel the same
Would I risk it all to hear the words "I love you"
Would I risk it all to see!
What is this feeling-
Is this what loves feels like
Maybe I should risk it all to see-
Maybe I should risk it all to see-
Risk it all to see!
I’d listen to it!
I love it !! :)
Thank You So much Making this Video This Helps Me alot :)
By The way I making a song And I m Age 9....
Tip if you want: if you want to add a word to your lyrics but it doesn't fit you can look up a synonym of it so it can fit your lyrics
She really taught me so much it’s so much easier to write songs now❤
I've been struggling with writing lyrics and that really helped me, tysm:)!
nice video as always, thank you annie!! 🤍
Thanks for it it really works
1. Gonna look up some Lyrics I like and dislike and look for similarities or just whatever I notice.
2. using a song's lyrics as a template sounds good to me.
Thanks for helping me
I honestly think my lyrics are kinda cheesy but meaningful. I try to use vocals with soothing lofi beats.
Time Lyrics
[Verse]
Try too follow me while I try too avoid mistakes
Nothing adds up with every breath I take
Let's take a run in the midnight rain
Let’s make It through this overall pain
Let's take a nap in a meadow full of sheep
I wanna give you love but my love can be cheap
[Chorus]
Time
Time is all it takes
(Or maybe)
Time
Time makes more mistakes
(Oh no)
Time
Time flows through a creek
Time
Time plays hide and seek