What you got is smooth but it could use a few more tweaks to make it pop. The epiano, sine wave, square wave, bass, all dope. That other lead in the hook try replacing it with a smoother more subtle lead. The artists vocals/harmonies would do the rest. Also I'd layer some pads or string chords at a low volume to add ambience and fullness to the beat. It doesn't have to be loud, just felt more than heard. This has potential to be catchy with the right hook.
What you got is smooth but it could use a few more tweaks to make it pop. The epiano, sine wave, square wave, bass, all dope. That other lead in the hook try replacing it with a smoother more subtle lead. The artists vocals/harmonies would do the rest. Also I'd layer some pads or string chords at a low volume to add ambience and fullness to the beat. It doesn't have to be loud, just felt more than heard. This has potential to be catchy with the right hook.
Listened to it again. If you take the leads out, Artist will have way more room to make their own melody