this randomly popped up on my recommended and it was pretty cool! the framing/shots were quite pretty but the acting and script was a bit awkward. idh much technical knowledge abt filmmaking but i think there's definitely potential
nice effort dude. the story deserved a little bit more elaboration to provide better chance for role expressions. picking in middle and abrupt ending of such storyline didn't give enough space to describe the basic conditions, unfulfilled expectations of mutual relationship, which in turn ends up in breakups. Carry-on, vast horizon is open for you. good luck.
this randomly popped up on my recommended and it was pretty cool! the framing/shots were quite pretty but the acting and script was a bit awkward. idh much technical knowledge abt filmmaking but i think there's definitely potential
ty! i agree lol a lot of that stuff would’ve gotten flattened out if we had more time but i’m glad u like the cinematography- that was my main focus
hard bro
nice effort dude. the story deserved a little bit more elaboration to provide better chance for role expressions. picking in middle and abrupt ending of such storyline didn't give enough space to describe the basic conditions, unfulfilled expectations of mutual relationship, which in turn ends up in breakups. Carry-on, vast horizon is open for you. good luck.
ty for the feedback! definitely will apply it going forward
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Cool video! I’d like some fries ppease
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