This guy has saved my English exam. I watched all his videos in the 2023 GCSEs and no joke my grade boosted sm with his help. I was predicted 3s and 4s but ended up with 6s and 7s. Thank you for these videos
To all the people doing GCSEs don’t worry i did my GCSEs last year I was an average student mostly got 6s and 5s in mocks did the standard amount of revision before the gcses came our with 7s and 8s trust me exam boards are not as stirct as your teachers
Hi. My teacher showed us this text about cinema and candies. It’s not so easy to work with it if you’re not English language speaker. Good luck to everyone for the last English exam next week. Thanks for your lessons. Why I didn’t know about them before?
@@ateezrry3258 yeh done the paper ran out of time for section A but section B i think i done good in that so hopefully i get a nice marker who gives 30 for section A adn 30 for section B
i wrote a point for 2018 paper 2: (thank you mr everything) The writer describes the sea as a powerful and scary being. This becomes apparent to the reader when the wave is described as a ‘fierce breaker’. The use of the personification here depicts the wave as real and able to cause harm towards the surfers, especially by the description of the breaker ‘towering behind them’ - causing the surfers to look minimal and tiny compared to the huge gargantuan sea. Furthermore, the use of the adjective ‘fierce’ connotes a daunting aspect of the sea that can generate human feelings of anger and range - accentuating the sea as dangerous and the surfers as vulnerable. On the other hand, the writer describes the surfers as able to escape despite the imminent danger. This can be seen when the surfers’ heads were ‘bobbling about like corks in smooth water’. The use of the simile hear by the writer portrays the inevitable ability for the surfers to not become overwhelmed by the magnitude of the sea and how this can be seen as common practice. The idea of this ordinary behaviour becomes apparent by the use of the verb ‘bobbing’. This colloquial term, while decreasing tension for the reader, inserts a sense of normality and serenity; further developed by the use of the noun ‘corks’ implies drinking in an average day out with some friends - contrasting to the supposed threat of the sea. In addition, the writer labels the surfers with a sense of honour and great. This is first suggested by describing them as riding ‘majestically’ and ‘uttering exultant cries.’ The use of the adjectives ‘majestically’ and ‘exultant’ use loud and strong vocabulary to exemplify feelings of power and freedom over the seas - almost to say the powerful sea can never diminish them.
structure for repetition = cyclical structure repetition for language = it just comes up once or like an anaphora which is still an english language device / technique
@@AliAbbasi-nn4on Paper 2 is easier. Only 1 language question and 5 is just debating things we see on tiktok. 1 is easy if u pay attention then 2&4 is yr 5 stuff
Even If you did bad on one if you ace this paper and get 50 marks ontop of what you got for paper one let me make an example. If you flopped paper 1 and only got 25/80 marks a grade 4 with both papers is around 70 marks. If you ace this paper 2 and get 50 marks you have a grade 4. You got this!
My personal and my friends response from whom so many times run out of time just because they started with q5 is to fo everything in order do not start with q5 better not so many people follow this advice just run out of time for other questions
@@ettixy but the point is that you can do the heavy hitting questions first as they are more marks. its more preferred to miss time for other questions than questions 4 and 5
@@maryomaarts495 idk the structure I think I kinda just freestyled it. But it is like “one way the writer uses language to describe ________ is by using hyperbole” (for example). Then I listed a quotation and described how the writer is exaggerating his point (that was for the first paragraph. For the second paragraph, I listed the technique, referred to the quote, and described what the writer was trying to describe. For my third paragraph, it made my point, listed my quote, and linked it to imagery. For my fourth paragraph I also linked it to imagery, listed the technique, listed my quote, and explained the effect on the reader. - sorry for the long message.
for example if it was a similie of 'the man was growling like a bear',for the effect you can say the fact that the man is compared to a bear shows that the man is agressive or is animal like. for a word,using the same simile,you can say the agressive verb 'growling' makes the reader feel uneasy of makes the reader look at the man like an animal or something like that.
effect of the technique you have used. for example in the similie 'the man was growling like a bear',the effect would be that the readee may feel uneasy or may look at the man in the loght of an animal or somwthign like that
You don't need to talk about the effect on the reader. you would write about the effect of the quote/technique (of the quote). For example, you could say that the hyperbole emphasises the chewiness and the noun 'chisel' symbolises how writer needs external and powerful tools to help restore him back to normal. (just waffle about the quote you pick out tbh.)
ahahahah funny how there's no walkthroughs or guidance for question 1 for english language paper 1 /2 (both papers) via TH-cam - foundation pupils may really need it though........... Yes I'm well aware that there's no tiers in english but still
@@4ty_pupahg396 Surely brother it is a decent structure but what I’ve learnt from my own tutors is to do A LITTLE bit more than the average essay. I tend to ZOOM into specific details of a quote or alternatively use this quote to fit into some sort of a THEME in the text for me to extrapolate from. So PEA is gud but it’s better to do a little bit more than average And this is from someone who averages 8’s and 9’s in English Language. But overall I’m confident that you will do well bro dw 🫡
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Me 😅 good luck everyone🍀:)
Mr Everything English is the best english teacher
yeah he's even better than Mr Everything English
@@INeedGooderGrades real
Half term to revise for the exams that are left, ofcs i had to watch Mr Everything English.
Bro didn't graduate English Language, English Language graduated from him
Mr Everything Engkish tayght me more than my actual English teacher lol
so true
So true !!!
Clearly not to spell😅
@@SamuelGerrish-us8gn It's just a typo
@@Mannequinned it's just a joke
This guy has saved my English exam. I watched all his videos in the 2023 GCSEs and no joke my grade boosted sm with his help. I was predicted 3s and 4s but ended up with 6s and 7s. Thank you for these videos
Good job 👍👏
Amazing job man I'm the next one :(
Last minute chain.I guarantee this will carry on for 5 years
more than that fam
same lol
@@BattoBatto-wr6mg we're the REAL last minute revisers
@@setra_45agreed
@@setra_45agreed were the real ones
thank you mr everything english, you have been a great help throughout the year, ill come back and tell you my results, keep doing what your good at!
To all the people doing GCSEs don’t worry i did my GCSEs last year I was an average student mostly got 6s and 5s in mocks did the standard amount of revision before the gcses came our with 7s and 8s trust me exam boards are not as stirct as your teachers
Yep we should focus on what’s more important like worshipping Allah before we are returned to Him so we can have a great reward with Him
I’m on a 3 is there any hope 🥲 I need a 5
@@reoqq3842 yes
@@_z.ao_3175I was on a 3 and got a 7 of course there is hope do the basics right and you’ll go far
like 1 month prior to the exams or like cramming in 1 day prior before the day of the official examination?
1 Hour of Mr Everything English > 5 years of secondary
(I appreciate it sir !)
why am i awake
@@SaiyanWarriorreal
@@caidzz9248 gna be doing the exam off 90 mins of sleep and a nap I took in the afternoon 💀
@@SaiyanWarrior i’m leaving school STRAIGHT after that exam fr. Been spending the last 40 mins watching these vids, hopefully ima cook 🙏🏼🙏🏼
@@caidzz9248 I'm gonna stay in since i got biology on Friday. I need to go intervention 🥲
I've spent 2 hours since 2am watching these vids
When ur to cooked but u decide a hour revision before ur exam might same u
we will cook🙏
Did you cook or did you get cooked?
Did you pass?
Who’s here 4 the morning?
Thank you so much I watched all your videos for each question for my year 10 mocks and walked out with a 9 in english language
Bro im going insane
Jesus loves you
What was your results in the englishes
who else is watching this an hour before the exam😭
Last minute anyone?
Same bruv
Yep
real last minute people🔃
Doing revsion 1hr and 30 mins before the exam😮😢
It’s never too late
it’s wraps man 😂
Thank you so much! Really helpful video, will tune into the next one :)
Hi. My teacher showed us this text about cinema and candies. It’s not so easy to work with it if you’re not English language speaker.
Good luck to everyone for the last English exam next week.
Thanks for your lessons. Why I didn’t know about them before?
maybe because you need to employ social media more often??? perhaps that's the case.....
@@INeedGooderGrades well aren't you a ray of sunshine!
@@idkbro931 Yeah I am I dont care if that was a rhetorical question lol
@@INeedGooderGrades whatever you need to say to get to sleep at night x
@@idkbro931 transpiration vs translocation which one is better?
I’m doing this morning on exam day 😅
Good luck everyonee
i just started to revise right now
I ❤️ mr everything English he’s my daddy
Really??, or are u just gay!
Never too late 😅
im finished
this lit juxtaposes mr sales cuz he just says to write a lot cuz we’re bound to pick up marks
That’s such a incorrect thing to say tf 😭😭
@@gothakaid4259 no i swr i’ll try find a vid for u but he always says to ‘write a lot’ wait i’ll look for it rn
he's a waffler icl
@@M-C643Depends, everything english is good for the lower bound students mr salles is good if u wanna be the best at english
@@leecorp6076 I used a very similar video from this channel for my mocks and got a 9, followed his structure and everything.
Im cooked
Chat am I cooked I’m watching the whole thing rn cause I was takin a day off yesterday
Bro same
no bro u got this jus lock in rn an fill the gaps in ur learning
it’s okay just remember the structure and you should be good😭
@@ateezrry3258 yeh done the paper ran out of time for section A but section B i think i done good in that so hopefully i get a nice marker who gives 30 for section A adn 30 for section B
@@Olliepp how was the paper ?
Watching this 30mins before exam😬
Thank god I never have to do English again, one year since my last exam, thank god
Congrats
do a level english literature and a level english language and a level rs and a level spanish you will have fun trust me...........
@@INeedGooderGradesnah
@@duckyfluff3886 it's a phenomenal combination...
i wrote a point for 2018 paper 2: (thank you mr everything)
The writer describes the sea as a powerful and scary being. This becomes apparent to the reader when the wave is described as a ‘fierce breaker’. The use of the personification here depicts the wave as real and able to cause harm towards the surfers, especially by the description of the breaker ‘towering behind them’ - causing the surfers to look minimal and tiny compared to the huge gargantuan sea. Furthermore, the use of the adjective ‘fierce’ connotes a daunting aspect of the sea that can generate human feelings of anger and range - accentuating the sea as dangerous and the surfers as vulnerable.
On the other hand, the writer describes the surfers as able to escape despite the imminent danger. This can be seen when the surfers’ heads were ‘bobbling about like corks in smooth water’. The use of the simile hear by the writer portrays the inevitable ability for the surfers to not become overwhelmed by the magnitude of the sea and how this can be seen as common practice. The idea of this ordinary behaviour becomes apparent by the use of the verb ‘bobbing’. This colloquial term, while decreasing tension for the reader, inserts a sense of normality and serenity; further developed by the use of the noun ‘corks’ implies drinking in an average day out with some friends - contrasting to the supposed threat of the sea.
In addition, the writer labels the surfers with a sense of honour and great. This is first suggested by describing them as riding ‘majestically’ and ‘uttering exultant cries.’ The use of the adjectives ‘majestically’ and ‘exultant’ use loud and strong vocabulary to exemplify feelings of power and freedom over the seas - almost to say the powerful sea can never diminish them.
yoo tht is damn good
@@addiagulistan2259 thanks bro
@@Shimeez That's definitely 10-12 marks. Well done!
@@h_0722 thanks!
damn if this is what it takes to get a 9 then it's long for me, this is so good
last minute
I think I’m a bit late
Girl same
@@grace8167maybe
don't worry about it I'm a bit worse😭
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effect on reader?
hello sir, is repetiton language or structural device? thank you
it can be used for both
structure for repetition = cyclical structure repetition for language = it just comes up once or like an anaphora which is still an english language device / technique
i did so bad for paper 1 i need to pull through for paper 2
Same bro I have to lock in and make mum proud
Paper 1 was the easier one so lock in
@@AliAbbasi-nn4on Paper 2 is easier. Only 1 language question and 5 is just debating things we see on tiktok. 1 is easy if u pay attention then 2&4 is yr 5 stuff
Even If you did bad on one if you ace this paper and get 50 marks ontop of what you got for paper one let me make an example. If you flopped paper 1 and only got 25/80 marks a grade 4 with both papers is around 70 marks. If you ace this paper 2 and get 50 marks you have a grade 4. You got this!
Thanks a lot, Should we plan the questions ? and should we start with question 5 and then do the rest
i think he does advocate planning the questions, him and mr salles both also advise to start with question 5, then do 4,3,2 and 1
My personal and my friends response from whom so many times run out of time just because they started with q5 is to fo everything in order do not start with q5 better not so many people follow this advice just run out of time for other questions
@@ettixy but the point is that you can do the heavy hitting questions first as they are more marks. its more preferred to miss time for other questions than questions 4 and 5
@@DaGrizzlyBear okay i will plan the questions first then answer and do q5 first. Thanks
Wallhiaaa I love him so much
I’m burnt
Not cooked
will this video work for edexcel?
Hi. I want a guidance about gcse english entry exams. Can you guide me plz that what kind of questions will come in entry exams??
Does it have to be PRTEZEL structure? or can it be PEEL/PEAZL since thats what im used to
if ur used to it stick to it, dont change it the night before the exam, instead master ur structure before tomorrow rather than learning a new one
@@AbdulazizAbdulrahman_ Thanks bro
@@KasimCR7 no worries man hope u smash it
@@AbdulazizAbdulrahman_ so its the same thign right? because i use PEAZL
Is it fine if I don’t use PRTEZEL as I have never used it before and I got 9/12 on Q3 in my mock, with a structure I have always used?
Yes
@@Yousufwtf thanks
Bro flexed a lil😂😂
Would you please tell me the structure you have used? , because I don't like to use PRTEZEL as well.
@@maryomaarts495 idk the structure I think I kinda just freestyled it. But it is like “one way the writer uses language to describe ________ is by using hyperbole” (for example). Then I listed a quotation and described how the writer is exaggerating his point (that was for the first paragraph. For the second paragraph, I listed the technique, referred to the quote, and described what the writer was trying to describe. For my third paragraph, it made my point, listed my quote, and linked it to imagery. For my fourth paragraph I also linked it to imagery, listed the technique, listed my quote, and explained the effect on the reader. - sorry for the long message.
How can you explain the effect of a language device and a word ??
for example if it was a similie of 'the man was growling like a bear',for the effect you can say the fact that the man is compared to a bear shows that the man is agressive or is animal like. for a word,using the same simile,you can say the agressive verb 'growling' makes the reader feel uneasy of makes the reader look at the man like an animal or something like that.
@@taqwaali3963 ah ok thankyou very much
What’s the difference between effect and inference?
effect is the effect of the technique on the reader. inference is what you understand from the text .
Thanks blud
15 minutes till my exam 😭😭
is english language today or tommorow?
Nah today is bio paper 2 tomorrow is language
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Iam so stressed for mocks English and you help a lot
just chill
huh isnt it gcses instead of mocks - unless u mean the ones in november 💀
Bus revision 😭😭
What is effect?? Can someone explain to me and give me an example too??
effect of the technique you have used. for example in the similie 'the man was growling like a bear',the effect would be that the readee may feel uneasy or may look at the man in the loght of an animal or somwthign like that
how does it affect YOU as a reader
@@taqwaali3963 ohh k thx
Is reference the same as a quote from the text?
yeah, just anything from the text is a reference
Do you make videos for maths tuition as well?
🙄
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Is this useful for Edexcel Paper 2 English Language, please?
sir im guilty of waffling sometimes
what would you say the effect on the reader would be for how chewy they are?
You don't need to talk about the effect on the reader. you would write about the effect of the quote/technique (of the quote). For example, you could say that the hyperbole emphasises the chewiness and the noun 'chisel' symbolises how writer needs external and powerful tools to help restore him back to normal. (just waffle about the quote you pick out tbh.)
Simple
Sir, for PRTEZEL can u use clauses to analyse in question 3
What do you mean by clauses?
I'll do PEAZ: Point Evidence Analyse Zoom
Saved me again bro😂
ahahahah funny how there's no walkthroughs or guidance for question 1 for english language paper 1 /2 (both papers) via TH-cam - foundation pupils may really need it though........... Yes I'm well aware that there's no tiers in english but still
What about PEA
Nah G what about P
@@deeperrealmstv3114point evidence analysis, isn’t that a good structure?
@@4ty_pupahg396 Surely brother it is a decent structure but what I’ve learnt from my own tutors is to do A LITTLE bit more than the average essay. I tend to ZOOM into specific details of a quote or alternatively use this quote to fit into some sort of a THEME in the text for me to extrapolate from.
So PEA is gud but it’s better to do a little bit more than average
And this is from someone who averages 8’s and 9’s in English Language.
But overall I’m confident that you will do well bro dw 🫡
I might be cooked
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"Sheeps" haha, come on Bro,
1st comment 😃
2nd comment first the worst second the best
@@muslimboy12169 😂
third with a hairy chest
you spelt Pretzel wrong, you spell it as prtetzel
Hes right, he just uses pretzel so its easier to remember
Why did you spell PRETZEL as PRTEZEL. It's not really PRETZEL is it ?
Probably because it’s easier to remember
because that's the order you're supposed to write the techniques in during the exam
Calm down mate 😂
13:12 actually, he is the mark scheme 😁
nah I'd win
second I guess
Never seen that emoji before where did u get it
@@Alex_dse No Idea