Start Writing Complex IELTS Sentences | Band 9 Grammar
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- Let's take a simple idea and transform it into a Band 9 sentence. I'll show you how to form complex sentences of different types and levels of complexity, and increase your grammar score in IELTS Writing.
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00:00 Why complex sentences are important in IELTS Writing
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Madam please upload a video of comma's using....
Where are you from sister. Because you looks like Uzbek.
Some students who select commercial or law education as compare to science
Mam please respond me it's my 3rd time of exam
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I got my results 1 week ago. Got overall band of 8 with 8 in speaking, 7 in writing, 8.5 in reading, 8.5 in listening. Thank you Ms Asiya for ur amazing videos on IELTS. It helped me a lot! 😇❤
Congratulations Bro how you did it can you please advice me how you make it possible?
@@abhisheksingh9941 thanks a lot bro. for specific sections u need specific tricks and guidelines. I need to exlplain in details to help u.
@@TanzimMeraj Then Please Bro give it a brief. Help me bro I am not getting ideas in speaking and other sections are also not good
Congrats I got similar. L 8.5 R8 W7 S8
Any tips for listening n reading part 3 4 ?
Thankyou for these amazing videos . i got my results today. i got overall 7 and i needed 6.5. Your videos helped me to achieve this score. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Another excellent video filled with lots of relevant content. Thanks a lot, Asiya. Best regards from Brazil.
Thank you so much asiya because of your guidance i got my desire band in just 2 week. Thanks one again.
Your lesson is really natural and easy to understand, dear teacher Asiya. I benefitted a lot, thanks.
Excellent video ❤️ Thank you so much. It helps me a lot.
As always to the point.
I love her teachings
this video helped me a lot❤😊. so much grateful to you
You r just wow… never seen this kinda knowledge
Thank you so much! I just pass my exam 🙏
Miss Asiya thank you very much for an eye-opening video which helped me be more confident while writing essays. My current writing score is 7 and i am sure that i can enhance it to a band 9 with videos 🔥🔥🔥
Thanks a lot for this fabulous video now I believe that I can definitely score 9
Hi! I have a question as to whether it's a good strategy to use the CA1/CA2 essay structure for agree or disagree IELTS writing task 2 essay types. Mostly, I seem to be able to bump into structures such as MB1/MB2 with ideas and examples. If you could please clarify this, it would be much appreciated. Thanks
Informative video 👍 God bless you mam
thanks for providing this video. you are teach methods is excellent rather than I expected .if I say why is telling this,I got good ideas from you teach.
I love the videos you post because they are educational. 😅😅
Thank you very this is soo enable for me . Plz do more ....
Thank you very much mam,, you are providing great classes for free....
Asiya, thank you for you work, I bought your writing task 2 course a few months ago, and it was my best decision! It helped me get band 7 for writing! After taking the course, I was able to generate and organize my ideas. I got band 8 overall. Thanks a million!
I'm so happy to hear that. What a great result! All the best with whatever you took this exam for!
How can we buy course ?? Plz tell me more about this thing
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carry on this series
very useful 😍
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Thank you Asiya
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Thanks
Hiii Asiya you are a great tutor thanks alott I have been following your video for a quite long time as I was preparing for my ielts I have scored 6.5 band score overall.
How you prepared mam... Means what tips important tips plz tell me
Hello Asiya, just wanted to drop by and thank you for helping me with your videos! My results just came in and I got an overall score of 8!
(Speaking - 8.5; Reading - 8.5; Listening - 8.0; Writing - 7.5)
I was informed by my agent that I had to take an Academic IELTS exam only 5 days prior to the nearest exam date.
I didn't fret much or anything since I had a Cambridge based educational background (O and A Levels) and even scored an A in English AS Level. Though, as with most people, there's still a bit of anxiety that comes with preparing to take a test.
I was glad that I came across your videos - especially your tips on the Writing Test - because I was more accustomed to long-winded essays with several topic choices.
If anyone needs a testament to how helpful this channel is well, here ya go!
Good luck to all of you who'll be taking the exams and feel free to ask me about the exams!
(Also saved their "Advice to Improve" comments in case anyone wants a deeper look into the aspects considered when grading)
What about reading module?
@@ranaxaim6788 Since reading and listening modules are "limited" in the sense that we have minimal expression in the two, there weren't any unique comments on my reading module.
What I did to prepare for the exam was just going for it. I went through dozens of past reading modules on the internet and cross-checked my answers after that. Doing that slimmed down my mistakes from 8 on my first attempt to 2 on my last one.
I'll paste their comment and advice here:
Comment:
"They are skilled at using their very wide vocabulary knowledge to create meaning, from sentence level to text level, on a range of general, specialised, and technical topics. They are good at following complex arguments and distinguishing between main ideas and supporting details, and at understanding attitude, opinion and implication. They are good at using appropriate reading strategies, such as skimming and scanning, and at synthesizing information and drawing inferences."
Advice to Improve:
"Continue to develop your awareness of how to read different types of texts differently. What features does that particular type of text typically have? How is information structured and arranged in such texts? Use your knowledge of these and approach the reading task in an appropriate way. Limit the amount of time you give yourself to read a text.
As an exercise, try to find several texts on the same topic so that you can compare opinions, views, definitions and conceptualisations of ideas. Academics often make fine distinctions, so see if you can determine these. You may even try to see if you can capture those differences by writing a one sentence summary."
@@gurleenkaur-vm1zk For writing, I recommend going through all of Asiya's videos on this channel, they helped me a great ton!
Expand your general knowledge and read various different articles to get used to their "vibe".
Task 1 is a no-brainer to most but if you're like me and have difficulty in writing simpler, obvious essays then I highly recommend practicing it and following Asiya's guidelines.
Task 2 is...unpredictable. My question was on my opinion of open offices (i.e. without separating desk barriers) where I had to weigh in the advantages and disadvantages. Obviously, I don't know much about it but that's what you have to do in Task 2 - presenting the simplest of points in rhetorical fashion in a way that makes readers believe you know what you are talking about (even if you don't).
I separated my argument into 2 disadvantages and 1 advantage:
1) Removing barriers reduces focus as they'll be distracted by the other person's idle antics or work (I brought up school seating rearrangements as an example).
2) Removing desk barriers may increase the budget but only by a negligible amount so this would only be beneficial to start-up companies.
3) Removing barriers may promote team work however research has shown that multi-tasking is less efficient than individually working on one thing at a time (I dubbed it as a disadvantage disguised as an advantage).
My personal advice and method I used to prepare for Task 2 was to binge watch Kurzgesagt videos and picture the narrator narrating my Task 2 essay as I write it.
Take a look at the comments on my essays as well. They talked of some interesting sentence structures and grammar mistakes from my essays.
Comments on my essays:
"All parts of the task are covered.
(GT) The letter has a clear purpose and a consistent, suitable tone.
Test takers can support their main ideas with details and examples, although these might be too general and lack focus. The writing is well-organised and leads logically to its conclusion. They can use a variety of linking words, with some over- or under-used. In Task 2 every paragraph has one main topic. They can flexibly use a range of vocabulary and some less common words with some style, despite occasionally choosing the wrong word or making mistakes in spelling or in the form of a word. They are able to use a variety of complex sentences, and many of their sentences are correct. However they still make a few mistakes with grammar and punctuation."
Advice to Improve:
"Practice producing different types of writing. When writing informational and argumentative pieces, take care to develop your points thoroughly, providing as many relevant supporting ideas and details as necessary. Don't develop your points separately. Instead, ask yourself: how might I develop my idea so that it logically leads me to my next idea? Then, also ask yourself: does my use of paragraphing help to highlight the flow of my ideas? Have I also used other means besides paragraphing to do this?
Use a good variety of structures, choosing appropriate ones to help the overall effect of your writing. Also try to use a wide range of vocabulary when you write, always using the best possible word. For words and phrases that are newer to you, look them up online to see how other writers use them and what other words they often appear together with. Finally, check your writing, paying special attention to those words and grammar structures you're not as confident about."
@@moonboy8552 thank you bro appreciate it very very much 🔥
Thanks a lot to this channel and Asiya , I got my results last month with a 7.5 band score . I am really glad I subscribed to this channel, thanks a lot again ❤️.
Can u please till me what was the writing about? And also the speaking part 2
Also congrats for your score
Got my IELTS results yesterday. S 7.5 R 7.5 L 7.5 W 6.0 and Overall 7.0. Thank you so much Asiya. Your videos helped me alot. ♥️
Good vedio. Thanks.SRK English. IELTS trainer. Dhaka.Bangladesh..
Can you suggest any websites related to ielts reading practice module
I admire you always, and i will follow you until u stop ur program.
Good information
great video
Let's get started! 😊
Asiya, for me, you are a blessing 💋
Could we use albeit instead of although?
Osm video
Hlo, plz tell me if a student wrote opposite to the given statement, is there any chances of getting 6 scores in writing
Please make video to make reading easier..♥️♥️
Just got my results L 6.5 S 6 W 6.5 R 7, thankyou
Hi teacher, those tips are useful to Duolingo English Test also?
Mam can u please make detail vedio on punctuation,?
5:53 Some students, who have an aptitude for Science, choose to study business or law because of the salary these subjects have to offer.
Need more writing class, essay
Writing module is toughest part can you elaborate book 16 task 2 essay
I wish to speak as good as you do ☺️☺️❤️❤️❤️
Keep speaking and you'll definitely get there ;)
A big thank you asiya I got my results L 8.5 R 8 W 7 S 8. BAND 8
How did you practice mam plz tell me
@@v6news242 hi watched videos from this channel and e2 youtube channel. They both have good tips.
What you have practicised pls tel that tips
I am not able to understand how students acheive such a high score in Speaking yet struggle to go past 7 in Writing.
@@RS-wp7lt I ran out of time in the essay
Can we use idioms in writing task 2
Although, students had a chance to choose science as a subject. But they ended selection with business either law. How good is this?
When we look into the reasons why students prefer law or business to science,we see the students who choose these two fields are generally considered conscientous, passionned and money oriented rather than the students who have a tendency to science, however the students who incline to science may be regarded as meticulous, patient and stable. Having said that, we reach those results which have been based on observations though there has yet to conduct research concerning these kinds of choices, which should have done up to now.
What do you think about my writing?
Thanks in advance.
Wow👌
@@GamingZone-kq2fx Tons of thanks
When we look into the reasons why students prefer law or business to science, we see those students who choose these two fields are generally considered conscientious, passionate and money oriented rather than students who have a tendency towards science. However, students with a predisposition towards science might be regarded as meticulous, patient and stable. Having said that, we arrive at these conclusions, based on observations, though fundamental research about such essential choices remains inconsequential.
Students who have excellent academic scores usually tend to prefer business or law over science as these course related jobs tend to have high income as compared to science.
Is this sentence correct? How many bands can I get with this kind of sentences??
Today's my IELTS test
hey asiya, in last 9 band sentence you are not using coma before who and after ambitious. I did not understand. could u please reply me why you not using. btw thanks for sharing good information. thank you very much. best regards from India.
Does somebody know whether she public a ielts books
I love you mam ❤️
I have achieved 8.5 bands 💞🙏
Wow, what a result! Well done!!!
Hello mam I gave Ielts exam 3 time but I didn’t get required score and now I am preparing for last time so could you please give me advice or help if it possible because now I am feel very exhaust and I feel I’ll give up
Some students who are more particularly in studying business or law, think that science orientated profession services were not equally paid as much as business management and judiciary related duties offer.
Sentence you ask for maam please check (Although there are students in the science stream, majority of pupils prefer where the rush is, for instance, business or law) please tell me if I'm correct I have exam in few weeks
Could you please, make a video on to what extent do your agree/disagree essay type !
You are amazing ..
Thank you so much for watching my lessons, Tushar! I'm afraid this essay type is only in our courses...
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A concerned group of students prefer business or law studies over science one's, due to a relatively high-paid systems of the two domains
Hii madam i can achive 6 band in writing easily but i want to increase it in 10 days because my test is very close....
I want to achieve 7 in writing and rest of modules 😀😀😀
My son, who wears t-shirt, which color is red, is 5 yeas old.
Can I write it?
I wrote this i hope if could anyone check it.
Some students prefer to study law or business rather than studying sciences because they have higher salaries than science. Which is more looking by people nowadays.
Some students who have an aptitude for science subjects still prefer enrolling in bussiness or law to science as being considered less prestigious.
Majority of students choose to study in the decipline of business, social science instead of science and engineering as because of content difficulties, expenses and less scope of career in science compared to business and others.
I would like to buy the academic pack and do not have a credit card. I have a visa card. I know I have to select "Purchase with Credit Card" and follow the instructions. But where can I find it ? I mean the “Purchase with Credit Card”. Can someone help, please?
Hi! If you open the Academic Pack learn.fastrackielts.com/bundles/ielts-academic-pack and click BUY, you'll be encouraged to create an account by entering your email and password of your choice. Then, you'll see where to enter your card details :) If you need any help, just email support@fastrackedu.co.uk
Please check mam Complex sentence with relative clause --some people prefer to private cars rather than public transport, which may be considered less convenient.
Some people who have private cars can go anywhere they would like to go
I didn't understand the use of comma can someone explain
I got my 8.5 band overall
can u please advice me about practising material of ielts
Have you seen the video about "IELTS materials"?
Anybody help me in writing module
Wish me luck for my exam❤️
Mam please check - - some adults may indulge in criminal activities because they could not find jobs for themselves.
Please mam tell me is it right or wrong?
We want you to send us more vidios
i will sit for the ielts Exam in September for January intake rather than April Intake.
Though some students have an aptitude for science, they tend to chose business or law.
❤ constructive video
who for person , which for thing . , before but . , before although if middle written
I get it but don't know why I can't write properly when I try to write practically.
Some student who have aptitude to study science often choose to study business or law.
1. I was unable to reach home on time because it was raining hard.
2. Inflation is rising at an alarming rate although government spending goes down.
Rather than studying science, few students choose to study business or law.
Is it correct ?
"Few" means not enough ;)
Some students choose to study business or law rather than science because a group of students do have not enough money to study science.
Is it correct?
Some students who wants to be paid significantly chooses business or law , although they have an aptitude for science.
Thank you so much Asiya......I Got 6.5 Overall Band Score within 20 days preparation. This is only because of your videos and Cambridge official practice tests.
How did you practice bro plz tell me bro
Some students choose to study buisness or law rather than science because generally sciences are considered to be difficult.
"sciences" is this a word???
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Some students who are excellent in their academic scores choose to study business or law because business managers or solicitors are paid significantly higher than scientists.
Some students prefer studyiy business and law over science due to higher opportunity at securing a job
make a video on 2022 jan exam preparation. please!
It will be released on 3 Jan :)
Some students who don't like to study physics and chemistry choose to study business rather than science.