I Made Thor Love & Thunder Better
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This version will stay much longer in my head than original movie🙂😇
Kevin fiege be like : Salary discuss kare
🤣🤣🤣
I never expected that a doctor would come up with a really nice script than professional writers of international level.. 😂
dude it's wayyyy better than the actual story people would've totally loved this story in the actual movie.
Puri ki puri movie concept ankhon ke samne aa gaya, what a imagination 💖🔥, aur aakhir mein Necrosword wala post credit scene sunkar ek bada muskan aur goosebumps aay gaya hai, totally amazing 🤗❤️❤️
Next time Kevin feige calls Mohit and give him 250million dollar and tell him to make movies 😂😂
This sounded sooo much better. I dont know what MCU is doing while writing stories and scripts but if this kind of story as told by Mohit was shown on screen then Thor Love and Thunder would have been very good.
marvel focusing on 13-16 year olds, thats why the sugarcoated storylines in recent movies
@@vishwasmeshram9241 man I'm just 15 but I also found the movie very bad. Forceful humor, less screen time to gorr, no seriousness and etc
@@vishwasmeshram9241 not really dude even though they focus on youngsters, they could easily make a good story , when you make movies for a 13-16 year old you might make the movie soft ,like showing less blood and all that
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bro kisi writer ne nahi likhi yeh movie iska screenplay taika tatti ne likha hai hai isiliye itni shit movie bani hai woh director kaisa bhi ho uski writing ikdum bakwas hai
Mohit is be like 'hum hai ''Christopher Nolan''😂😂
I had read your original unedited comment 😁lol
Chiristuphuur lolan
@@Hercinove what was that😁🤣?
@Thor herald of none maybe he' is (loved his justice league cut) ,but you can't sleep on Nolan .
No,Lan 😂😂
I loved how Mohit was like "its Mohin time" when he was going to kill thor and gorr at the same time
i literally got goosebumps when you described the entrance of Gor!! Amazing
Him making every movie better
Salle puri video to dekh Lee 😅
Video dalte hi comment kar diya
Him🥺
Far faaaar faaaaaaaar betterrrr
8:23 Jeus ke beta ka kya hoga story line..wo thar ke doshman kaise bane ga
Mohit damage control krne se kuch nhi hoga, movie flop ho chuki h, move on
6:30 this scene got me hyped up fr like I could see this imagine it happening
if we saw his version than the movie will be G.O.A.T
Climax sequence really sounds good . Specially guardians of the galaxy part.
Marvel should appoint him as a permanent writer...just OP🔥
If the story would have gone this way, it would have shown evilness of GORR , the way we were craving for...and probably would have been my fav MCU movie
MCU is really not doing good these days , these kind of stories is what fans deserve 😍😍😍😍 thankyou Sir for sharing your version ❤️
एमसीयू सचमें इन दिनों अच्छा काम नहीं कर रहा , इस तरह की कहानियां ही तो हम फैंस चाहते हैं 😍😍😍😍 धन्यवाद भैया अपना वर्जन साझा करने के लिए ❤️
Marvel be like:- get this man a pen and book and let him make the greatest mcu story ever
Ye badhiya tha guru 😁
@@iamPrinceK good
Aiisshhhh
Mohit damage control krne se kuch nhi hoga, movie flop ho chuki h, move on
@@siddhant8430 bhai isme koi damage control to nahi tha bekar movies ki rewrite to sab karte hain nando v movies se lekar troyoboyo sab log re write kiye hain. Better ideas sun na itna bura idea to nahi lagta
They could have stretch this movie more because it was very short so they couldn’t narrate the story well. I like the way you make this concept
Your final postcredit scene was way better than Valhalla one
This version is way better than what we saw in theatres 👌
Zack Snyder vs theatrical version
@𝗩𝗞 𝟮𝟰*𝟳 𝗳𝗮𝗰𝘁𝘀 bhai sponsor krde movie b bana denge
यह संस्करण कहीं ज्यादा बेहतर है जिसे हमने थिएटरों में देखा था 👌
@𝗩𝗞 𝟮𝟰*𝟳 𝗳𝗮𝗰𝘁𝘀 फिल्म मेकिंग और स्टोरी/स्क्रिप्ट राइटिंग में फर्क होता है भैया... वैसे में बस ओरिजनल कॉमेंट का हिंदी अनुवाद कर रहा हूं
@𝗩𝗞 𝟮𝟰*𝟳 𝗳𝗮𝗰𝘁𝘀 Tere Kya baap lgte hai marvel wale ghatiya movie bnane per unhe criticism bhi na de
2nd post credit scene sounds really terrifying .
Possible entry of Knull
sony have rights of knull
@@tc6771 Sony and Marvel can Collab this character just like Spiderman
Someone give this man a script for a movie 😂
Much better than the actual story! I love your concept of putting your own story for an average movie. Also loved the same that you've done for the Multiverse of Madness. We want these kind of MARVEL level stories, for which it known for...
Now MCU will hire Mohit for writing there movies😂❤️
Although I agree with you Bhai. But if my opinion would go, I would give Gorr at least a duology, like that of Thanos in Infinity War & Endgame.
Where first movie would explore Gorr, his origins, powers, intentions & his butchering. While the next movie would be about Thor vs Gorr & in the end I would also setup Knull for the future of Symbiote War storyline.
But without killing of Gorr, rather erasing his memories like that of comics, so that he may be utilized in future.
I Agree👍
ya... but as he told in this video, neither of us know what's the future of mcu.
so, if they played out that diluted ending, they must have some plans and future vision behind that.
This story's runtime would be like 2hr 55minutes.
@@sunderarao4729 No, It would barely increase 10 min that also when thor would see gods hanging on rope in starting. After that every changes will coordinate with original movie time.
Thor Love and Thunder should've been that extra 30 min longer, + they really wasted gorr, first the appearance was not comic accurate but i had hopes with his acting but turns out he didn't had that much screentime,
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Mohit bhaiya I really liked your script mainly the buthering and showing how powerful gorr and badass he is with necrosword which movie 🎥 didn't show us.I want @PJ Explained and @BnfTV to review your script on upcoming podcast of @men of culture.
Please make a video on:
Zeus in DC comics vs Zeus in Marvel comics.
If any how Kevin fiege listen your story he would approach you and hire you as the head writer for the screen play of all Marvel movies....
You are awesome bro 😘
Lots of love 😍❤️
Keep it bro man
I wondered How much talented are you.
That guardians entry was really unexpected and op 🔥
Yeah
I would not be surprised when marvel will use the script refrence from him.
Maja hi aa gya..
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Kuch bhi
Hey Mohit from Comicverse
I am from Marvel Studios
I am seeing you have made the story of our last two movies better than the original.
Would you like to write our next movie and double check the others which are already written🤣🤣🤣❤️
Hey i am mohit
Why not sir...😅
Mohit damage control krne se kuch nhi hoga, movie flop ho chuki h, move on
I really like the part of making Neckrosword disappear into space and following it's 2nd post credit scene (Knull), I didn't understood why you made changes to the importance of "Stormbreaker" as not being the "key" coz as you also stated Marvel have "plans" in future, this might be also their one of the plan to connect in future and gave the importance to Stormbreaker as the "Key"
story toh achi thi but i have some things to point out ki thor aur gor asguard kar ladte jab gorr itna strong nhi tha aur ek jabarjust action delne ko milta and no. 2 ki thor aur gor phir omnipotent city mein milte Jaise apne bataya but gor and thor ke bitccch mein ek fight sequence jisme thor gorr ki powers ko kam ankta hai and gorr usko overpowered kar deta hain and 3. is ki mereko eternity wala matter pasand kuch achi ending mein kuch heavy changes hote
Great man , loved it . At least in your story Gor is having some justice to his character and also the Necrosword .Movie me to joke bana diya ha Gor ka vi or Necrosword ka vi and yes you made it far better
Kaash Yhi Story Movie Mein Hoti With Same Screenplay Toh Movie Ko Aaj Itni Hate Nhi Milti🙂❤️
Well Done Mohit Bhaiya🙌❤️
Ok Honestly, this was the hype & Expectation i had for Love & Thunder while watching the movie but it disappointed me... But now thanks to your narration.. I can feel that same feeling i had expected for the movie ❤️⚡🙌
The sequence and playouts of Jane story.. The proper involvement of Guardians... The proper timings of jokes and proper given timing for seriousness now i can feel it too 🙌🙌❤️🙏🙏 Thanks Mohit urf ComicVerse.. Big Fan from Men Of Culture audience and now all of you 3 guys 💯❤️🙏
Mohit damage control krne se kuch nhi hoga, movie flop ho chuki h, move on
@@siddhant8430 we all are moved on... But ek mann mei santushti was requried now it got fullfilled 😅🙌
@@siddhant8430 itna hurt ho raha hai kya tujhe jo har comment mai aake ro raha hai
That gaurdian entry was too awesome man 😍
I was imagining the whole time and it was so amazing, just wanted to add that comic book wala detail too
Like after fighting with gorr when gorr tells thor about how selfish gods are Thor became unworthy and then Jane come to support Thor and made him worthy again
Me: Where is korg
Mohit: With rock🤣🤣
Recent every Marvel releases are being heavily edited, with such big production they should have many different story arc on similar plot like Mohit explained one, but are taking more of a neutral approach.😌😌😌
Don't know why??🤔🤔🤔
Hope they release the extended cut of these movies!!! 😎😎😎
You should approach Marvel for story writing ❤️🔥
Retired army man
A doctor
A nerd
A loving husband
A true friend
And now a superb screen play writer or script writer
This man got all my respect
He is retired army?
@@rohitthapa42 no he served as a doctor in army
@@rohitthapa42 yes he served his services in army as a doctor
I got goosebumps when I heard about the post credit scene in which the necro sword is floating in space and echoing 'Find me'
it was really good bro i got goosebumps while imagining gorr torturing gods
Awesome amazing superb fantastic fabulous extraordinary wonderful brilliant ultimate next level spectacular legendary excellent incredible outstanding and mind blowing video bhaiya Jiii
Badhiya
@@muhduzair8932 😁👍🏻
People complaining about short runtime of dr strange 2 and thor 4 are the same who were criticising Eternals for its long runtime 🤡
The ending could be literally awesome
Suppose if thor killed gorr before him entering the eternity gate , thor could wish back iron man back and we would get our favourite one back
Bro..even I want Iron man back but this does not make any sense to me...cause thor cannot beat Gorr...so killing him just by taking out necro sword does not make any sense.
This is much better than what we saw there in the theater...
I like this story bro ❤️
Happy friendship day to all
They should hire you brother 🥺
This remake is more exciting & awesome than the Oringinal.
Thanks Mohit Bhaiya. 🙂🙃🙏👍
Mohit becomes Loki who can Rewrite the Story...
This story is 10X better than the real story.....salute man
Everything makes sense... but if they followed this story line they wouldn't have been able to set up Hercules.....
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They'd still be able to set up Hercules as he's a SuperHero in Marvel Comics not a villain, somewhat like an antihero or a careless arrogant god....
Just in a different manner...
i guess they would just when hercules would be shown in movies they have to just show how arrogant and careless he is and he doesnt care about lives just want to fulfill his motives no matter the cost this will show a tussle or friction him and avengers or rest of heroes which is i guess a good story plot
Right bro MCU have future plans
😂😂😂Dear Marvel, Please Hire Mohit as Writer For Next Thor Movie 👍👍
Damnn
Mil gya Marvel ka nya Script Writer 🌹🧿
Bohot sahii changes maza aagya 😊
Ig think marvel studios is trying to lower the standards their movies have created as they have very big plans for phase 5 n 6.
In movie. I like starting and ending only. Christan bale perform made me cry. So emotional scene
Amazing story...would have loved if this was actually done on the big screen 🔥🔥
8:25 Jeus ke beta ka kya hoga story line wo thor ke doshman kaise bane ga
@@syedsameer4069 you cannot satisfy every one
There has to one down if you making one up
Even Mohit said this in the end
@@hriteshmaikap7506 bro lakin wo thor ki next movie ke liye sat up tha and this is important
@@hriteshmaikap7506 mohit can said this because of thor gaor attack on omnipotent city..so jeus blame thor and he said Hercules to kill thor
@@syedsameer4069 sabko soch ek jaisi nhi hoti
It is his opinion video to which I agree
I imagined every scene till end... Enjoyed the script nice work😊😊
❤️ you made it 200% better
It's Way Better Than Original One 🔥👌
Pyarr ki kami thhi
Who want an animated version of this ?
HISHE Dubs
This version was really interesting and would have loved to watch this instead of the original.. good work..
Imagine if Sam raimi direct this movie
Then this because very great
Atleast gorr get enough screen time and we also see his butchering
यह संस्करण सचमें काफी अच्छा था और ओरिजनल की जगह देखने में ज्यादा मजा आता... अच्छा काम किया...
Mohit can make heropanti 2 better also 😂😂
Nice one
Bhai ne edible food ko khane layak banaya he
Tatti ko xhini ghol ke muffin Nahi Bana sakte uey
It was brilliant bro but I don't agree with ending as love using stormbreaker
Bro Your script is way better than actual movie
Better story than Original 💯🔥
Just like justice league
Guardians entry was epic 🔥
In Last credit scene they could've introduce knull 🔥
He is truly a Superhero Nerd
Seriously bahut achha laga bro... Post credit scene to wow👌👌
The first words of gorr in omnipotence city
Goosebumps 💀💀💀
Just listening this story is more enjoyable and interesting than whole movie
Gorr's reveal from your story gave me goosebumps...and incorporating Portunus in the plot rather than the children would have been more interesting since it showed Gorr's hate for the Gods, instead of him kidnapping kids......loved your take👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
If this would have happened in Thor: love and thunder, movie would be so much more fantastic! This was the best story believe me.. And we even want your version of doctors strange in the multiverse of madness
mohit bhai ek no. ki writing skills ka mushup bnaya hai....MCU wale etna dhikha dete to katai jaeher bann jata...aur log pee bhilete....
This version was awesome and its better than original one. I hope they make this version atleast in animation.
See, this is how a well and tight written script is like...
They Should Make A R Rated Stand Alone Gorr Movie
To be honest it would make more sense for both the Thors to destroy the necrosword rather than send it away. They would not want anyone to get it and get corrupted by it...
man,this was much much better than the actual movie.
Far better than the actual movie.
Man you should go to the marvel studio and teach them some lessons! You make it more more better ♥️
This is the 'Thor : Love and Thunder' that I wished to see... 😌
Get this man a writer chance in MCU ❤️
bro loved it..................Way better than og script...........Any plans of becoming a scriptwritter for mcu???????????
Listening to gorr's entry gave me chills✨
This is better than any movie I see
I will request Marvel to hire this man . He knows how to fulfil fans demand and request 😀
You deserve to be script writer for comic movies❤️💞
This version will stay much longer in my head than original movie🙂😇
Mohit bhaiya ghumne phirne ke bad aap to kuch jyada hi chamak rahe ho samjh rahe ho na (bee)moon 🤣🤣
Damn what a timing i was watching yesterday's podcast and Pj wanted to watch comedy movie and you recommend him to watch thor love and thunder and at that exact moment i got notification 🤣🤣
Well that's actually a good story of Thor Love & Thunder.I think Kevin Frige should watch this video and hire you as their story writer.
There's another thing which could be added in final battle of Thor,Jane and Gorr, when both were fighting and Thor was losing against Gorr then there should Hercules who will help them in winning the battle, Since Gorr is overpowered and Jane is a human and was dying of Cancer then she was also losing against Gorr and Thor fell helpless, then Hercules would come and hitted Gorr with his weapon and Gorr was flying across that Tribunal hall.. and after that Thor and Hercules hold each hand of Gorr, Necrosword is still in Gorr's hand and giving him more power,now even Hercules find it difficult to hold Gorr and then Jane come forward and hit Gorr hand so hardly that Necrosword will be separated from Gorr's hand and goes into Bifrost portal or space. Gorr's hand is badly hurt by that and is bleeding with black blood and now Gorr become so angry he hold Thor and Hercules with his hands,(holding Thor with his bleeding hand so that Thor looks little weaker than Hercules) and threw them across Tribunal hall and seeing that Jane attacks Gorr with hammer but Gorr doges it, hammer goes elsewhere and Gorr grabs Jane neck with his hands having big nails and goes into the portal which lead to Eternity, seeing that Thor come flying into that portal and portal closes. Hercules and Guardians were looking at them, now monsters are dead without Gorr and Necrosword.At the Place of Eternity Thor sees Jane in human form covering with blood and he cries and rest will be same as in the story he speaks to Gorr and Told about his daughter ... Gorr realises everything. The End.
Marvel waste best villian... Also waste best actor potential.
This mohit's thor movie rewrite version is 100 times better than real thor 4 movie.
Bohat Achha Tha Mohit Bhai Bas Last main Guardians ke jagha pe past present aur future Thor ajata toh aur maza ata aur waha past ka Thor thoda pahle ajata aur use Gorr Torture karta toh aur maza ata
Your story was really very very good and it would be very awesome to see. But one thing, if Gor do not need strombreaker then why he goes to new asgard ??
To kill thor