You should not repeat the third in the chords and bass, for example double g Sharp in e Major or C Sharp in A Major. Repeat the fifth or tonic. For classical music this sounds more beautiful. (Read an elementary Harmony tractats) And take a look to cromatism. In general, not bad ideas
Sounds beautiful!
I like the little ornaments you do every now and then I might implant them to my own compositions
I like the theme ! Can I use it for my own variations on it ??
You should not repeat the third in the chords and bass, for example double g Sharp in e Major or C Sharp in A Major. Repeat the fifth or tonic. For classical music this sounds more beautiful. (Read an elementary Harmony tractats)
And take a look to cromatism. In general, not bad ideas