''Cursed Sands'' | ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I’VE EVER READ

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  • ''We were definitively lost out in the middle of the Kuwaiti desert, with no clear clue where we were or what direction we should go...''
    Thanks to everyone over on Twitter who helped me decide which thumbnail image to use!
    Tonight’s all-time epic story is ‘Cursed Sands’, an original work by Chili 1220, kindly shared directly with me for the express purpose of having me exclusively narrate it here for you all.
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  • @sexygrandmadarkness2722
    @sexygrandmadarkness2722 4 ปีที่แล้ว +152

    Oh yes 😊 Over 2:08:30 minutes of Pure Ecstasy 😚 that is your Voice Dr Creepen Thank you:) I hope that you and everyone else has a Fabulouslicious 😁 Friday Night too;) tomorrow my Birthday 🎂..I'll be 50 years old!!!! LoL 😂😂😂 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️💋

    • @Rambeau777
      @Rambeau777 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Happy birthday Grandma Darkness...hope it's a great one for ya!!

    • @sexygrandmadarkness2722
      @sexygrandmadarkness2722 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@Rambeau777
      Thank you;) my Sweetlicious Friend:) much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️ 💋

    • @ericharrison7518
      @ericharrison7518 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      @@sexygrandmadarkness2722 I think I just cringed so hard I had a stroke. Thanks.

    • @sexygrandmadarkness2722
      @sexygrandmadarkness2722 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@ericharrison7518
      You're welcome :) my Sweetlicious friend:) ... LoL 😂🤣😆 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️💋

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      wishing you a fantastic weekend!

  • @matthewhummel1572
    @matthewhummel1572 2 ปีที่แล้ว +38

    As a former Marine in an anti-armor platoon in the second Iraqi war, I could really relate to this one. There were a few creepy things that would happen there.

    • @branbranentertainment407
      @branbranentertainment407 ปีที่แล้ว

      Such as? 👀 did you experince anything?

    • @sajp8859
      @sajp8859 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      There’s no such thing as a *_”former Marine”._*

    • @matthewhummel1572
      @matthewhummel1572 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@sajp8859 there’s no such thing as an “EX” Marine. Lol, I am no longer active duty.

    • @sajp8859
      @sajp8859 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@matthewhummel1572 No Son--if you were in the Marine Corps, then you'd know this: _"According to the Commandant of the Marine Corps, no such person exists. “Once a Marine, Always a Marine.”_

    • @matthewhummel1572
      @matthewhummel1572 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@sajp8859 🙄 Dude, some of us aren’t fanatical about it. Yes, I’ll always be a Marine, but I’m no longer active duty. Therefore, technically I’m a former Marine. There’s no such thing as an “EX” Marine.

  • @burliesanford1863
    @burliesanford1863 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Excellent story Doc. , being a Marine from 1974 - 1978 I was at Camp Pendleton for 20 months , Okinawa for a year and finished out at 29 Palms . The desert during war games at night can be a bit eerie the shadows and various other things . Guard duty at night gives your mind plenty times to hear things that can be a bit unnerving . But I enjoyed my last 14 months in the Mojave Desert in the Corps . I'm glad we never had those fucked up sandstorms like in the story . Once again Doc. you pulled another rabbit out of the hat . Semper Fi , Thanks .

  • @krymsynrayne
    @krymsynrayne 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    *HOLY SHIT.*
    I think the only other story I've ever listened to that got me nearly as tense as this was Penpal.
    This is some of your finest work yet! Thank you so much for the time and effort you put in to it!

    • @___LC___
      @___LC___ 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      When does it get intense? I am an hour plus in and bored to death.

    • @audreyricci6383
      @audreyricci6383 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ☠️💀⚰️.

  • @oliviarinaldi5963
    @oliviarinaldi5963 4 ปีที่แล้ว +79

    If the Doc thinks this is one of the best he's read, I can't wait to hear this! Love ya Doc!

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      many thanks for your kind words!

    • @bigbiemacaw
      @bigbiemacaw 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      He says that about them all..

    • @sanderhoogeland9161
      @sanderhoogeland9161 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      catherine donoghue he has said that about several stories, but most definitely not all of them. And, well, that is what one of the best means.

    • @GR-bn3xj
      @GR-bn3xj 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Not bad but definitely not one of the best. This could easily be a 30-minute story. I normally love the long ones but this was dragged out way way too long for too little action

    • @michellegray9806
      @michellegray9806 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yes,Dr Creepen has done it once again,sheer brilliance &that voice!!!!!!!!from another sexy lady.

  • @patrickconnors4602
    @patrickconnors4602 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Whoever wrote this was either a soldier himself, or certainly did his research. As a soldier I'm very impressed by his knowledge of weaponry, procedures and even the feeling after your first confirmed kill. Brilliantly put together. Only 20 minutes into it, but loving this story so far.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      yeah, this one was brilliantly written!

    • @patrickconnors4602
      @patrickconnors4602 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@DrCreepen he should seriously consider taking the next step in writing and try get into the publication of his work on paperback and hard copy.

  • @KillerxPotatoes
    @KillerxPotatoes 4 ปีที่แล้ว +25

    Hey Doc, I know you probably won't see this, but I love your narrations. Thanks for helping get me through undergrad and other tough times in my life. You have a real positive impact on people's lives. Hope you have a great 2020

    • @justaneditygangstar
      @justaneditygangstar ปีที่แล้ว

      This man sounds like a freaking Dishonored Villain and I love it

  • @martinakidikova6826
    @martinakidikova6826 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Ciara storm here in London 80mph ! Again perfect timing. I’ve just spend 2h completely emerged in to the story while the wind is crushing in to my windows.Thank you .

  • @riaaqua2814
    @riaaqua2814 4 ปีที่แล้ว +45

    Thanks for taking us on a longer ride, dear doctor, it will be surely captivating. Wishing you and my fellow listeners a lovely Friday night and a relaxing Weekend.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      many thanks for your kind words... you too

  • @ozzy9568
    @ozzy9568 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    8th!!! Thanks again Doc. These long ones are the best! I love catching them early, it feels like I'm hearing secret information that will be covered up soon.

  • @caz15
    @caz15 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Apologies for the profane username, decided to strive for anonymity when I was younger. Started listening when it was the only entertainment I could handle during a concussion a while back. Started out of necessity, stayed because it’s high quality. Love the vids, man.

    • @SariennMusic73
      @SariennMusic73 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You definitely CAN change your name every 3 months or so. Go ahead and getcha a good name. Your channel will stay the same.

  • @dorianchriste8645
    @dorianchriste8645 4 ปีที่แล้ว +21

    I love the long ones, Doc. You do an exceptional job of story telling. Thank you for the skill and labor it takes to complete each work. For me, another well spent evening with one of your works of art. You beat the crap out of anything on TV. 'Til your next one.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      glad you enjoyed it :)

  • @jaggirl
    @jaggirl 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thank you for your time and effort Dr. I know it was quit lengthy. You never fail to deliver, your very best..💯👍💙

  • @MrsCaranAmy
    @MrsCaranAmy 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    This story started out like a regular war story and a man with a phobia.
    As it proceeded, I found it had some nice touches of Lovecraft. Thank you. Have a wonderful day and stay healthy ♡

  • @loanianderson394
    @loanianderson394 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    Magnifico Maestro!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏
    Who needs Netflixs when we have you! 😍😊🧠

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      actually, I kind of need netflix :)

    • @loanianderson394
      @loanianderson394 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@DrCreepen 😊 si

  • @kconnor4568
    @kconnor4568 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    WOW!!! I had to spread this story over 3 different devices. I don’t often get a full 2 hours to just sit back and relax and listen to your stories. So I did the next best thing. As I said, this was spread over 3 devices, so I would sit back and listen to about a half hour then put it down and do some work. Then on to another device in a different place, the only “problem “ was that I would have to go back a little and repickup the story. This would go on for a while until I finished the story and it was definitely worth it.
    Thank you for this epic video. I still have a few more longer episodes but I put them on my Watch List, so I’ll have some great videos to listen to on long trips.

  • @yaeldragwyla8170
    @yaeldragwyla8170 4 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    This is one of the very best stories narrated on your channel. My only question: Why didn't either the military or the civilian psychiatrists think of hypnotizing the narrator? And why didn't the narrator think of contacting parapsychologists to see whether they had ever heard of something like his experience? Those questions aside, a great story. I heard it all the way through in spite of pain in my back that wouldn't let me sit still for very long -- In kept shifting around to keep it under control, then took two pain pills to deal with it so I could listen to the rest of it without distraction. Wonderful story!

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      that is a good question.

    • @jenothemississippianofmand5202
      @jenothemississippianofmand5202 ปีที่แล้ว

      Well it is implied that the Pentagon knew about similar phenomena and kept questioning him about his experience. Plus I believe his account was supposed to be non disclosure and classified.

  • @tonitarby6627
    @tonitarby6627 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Good evening Dr. ❤️ From NJ. Enjoying listening and scrubbing the house

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      hope it helps with the housework

    • @tonitarby6627
      @tonitarby6627 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@DrCreepen Definitely helps. Lots to do before dad gets to come home from the hospital. 😊

  • @cameronangel1013
    @cameronangel1013 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    As someone who has been threw 4 tours of active duty and combat I was truly impressed by the writing of the story especially in the beginning. And yes we did some well really weird stuff.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      glad to hear this one was accurate :)

    • @cameronangel1013
      @cameronangel1013 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @Michael S. Thanks teach 👍

  • @theknifeman7097
    @theknifeman7097 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Great work thank you

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      my pleasure :)

  • @zombie5310
    @zombie5310 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I actually stayed awake during that one.. usually fall asleep during your longer narrations, but this one.. I could not stop listening even when I had planned to take a break half way through.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      2 hours is a lot!

  • @scottvandenhemel6327
    @scottvandenhemel6327 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Your channel is enjoyable to listen to in any weather ,especially with temperatures of 16 degrees feels like 6,with upwards of 9 inches of snow to come. 8AM was 1 degree temp.

    • @Wi-Fi-El
      @Wi-Fi-El 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      The best is when it's the same weather irl as it is in the story. That way it's more creepy

  • @syko-c650
    @syko-c650 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Hell yes !! Creepen you rock! Your my favorite narrator. Jason Hill probably gets second but damn i love your stories.. Listen to em everyday!

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Jason is an excellent storyteller!

    • @syko-c650
      @syko-c650 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@DrCreepen he is excellent! But you sir are the best!! Much love from richmond virginia

  • @mynameisralfbob2276
    @mynameisralfbob2276 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    That was very well written! Would be an interesting movie! Well done as always DR.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      many thanks for your kind words :)

  • @SedDelMar
    @SedDelMar 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Strong tonic doctor!
    Thanks!

  • @Theadonistv
    @Theadonistv 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    When the dr says it’s one of the best, HE AINT CAPPIN!!!!!!

  • @cutenose38
    @cutenose38 4 ปีที่แล้ว +60

    Hiya doc its jenny and the cats. There is me and 5 of my 7 cats stuffed into my old comfortable recliner the other 2 are somewhere in the house probably plotting against me. The rest of us have our favorite drinks and are ready to listen. 😸😸😸😸😸

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      Hi Jenny, Hi cats!

    • @realism51
      @realism51 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      jenny luvaglia khajit likes skooma

    • @spaceboi2581
      @spaceboi2581 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Too many cat’s

    • @dreamsofmachines
      @dreamsofmachines 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      What the hell, hey Jenny, it's Robin! I listen to Doc's stories while I'm at work all the time, I never thought I'd see a comment on a TH-cam video from someone I knew in real life haha.

    • @cutenose38
      @cutenose38 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@dreamsofmachines i always listen to the doc and comment about how many cats ive got sat on me

  • @blanchfor
    @blanchfor 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    This is the truly the best story I have ever heard on this channel. Horrifying and the suspension of disbelief is just right. Great story, great narration!

  • @NOTB333
    @NOTB333 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Excited to listen to this one tonight! Love the long storys Doctor

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      enjoy!

    • @TheMattc999
      @TheMattc999 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Same, the longer the better. I pretty much invariably listen at work, so the more time I can spend actually listening as opposed to looking for something to listen to the better.

  • @itallia666
    @itallia666 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I remember about 1966, my parents & i were on a long ship cruise & we left our ship in Port Said in Eygpt to spend a few days in Cairo, ostensibly to visit the Pyramids & Sphinx & shopping too
    After our visit we had to rejoin our ship at some port along the western shore of the Red Sea.
    A special coach had been organised to get all of the ships passengers who had opted to go to Cairo, back to meet the ship.
    It was a surprisingly long journey from Cairo to the Red Sea port, & we were set to enjoy the trip.
    However once the sun set it was unbelievably freezing travelling through the desert!
    We'd been told to expect cold evening weather & its hard to imagine when the daytime temps are scorchingly hot
    So on our coach which was a luxury coach with heating & A.C.
    Even with heaters on the cold is
    Like travelling in a freezer!
    We were so grateful my mother had bought some pure wool Pashminas in Cairo, as we swathed ourselves in them for warmth.
    Also we ran into a sandstorm en route, to see it approaching was very scary, as it looked like a monstrous, gigantic herd of Sky Buffalos approaching on the horizon & is reddish brown
    The ferocious swirling wind & sand is frightening to be in,
    Our coach battled through as much as possible until visibility was nil & we had to stop.
    The noise of the wind & the abrasive scraping of blown sand against our coach was truely scary & we half expected all the paint from the coach to have been sanded off, you cant tell anyone how frightening it is,
    You have to experience it to know how dreadful it must be to be caught without shelter during such a sandstorm!
    Our coach was rocked like a cradle in the winds
    Luckily ours didnt last that long
    At least not the days it could have lasted, but we were late in rejoining our ship.
    We had to board a large fishing boat to get to our ship & because of the notorious currents in the Red Sea & esp at night, it took hours to board because as we approached the ship the currents pulled us away & so we stood on board, the fishing boat, freezing to death on the Red Sea for 3 hours trying to reach our ship ( it should have been a swift 3o - 35min trip during the day) we eventually boarded our ship at 3.45am feeling frozen & bedraggled!
    But it was worth it
    Seeing Cairo & the ancient monuments.
    Ive still not experienced going through the Suez Canal though!
    As we left our ship before it went through.
    I have been through the Panama Canal & its an amazing experience & a tribute to the captains piloting skills as the space between the side of the ship & the wall of the canal is almost reachable if you lean over the side, its just inches to spare.
    Thank you for this story it brought back memories from my desert experience
    Regards & Peace
    🇬🇧👧

  • @EFontanezX20
    @EFontanezX20 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Lord, this storis are awesome. I got it playing on my loud speakers 🤣. Hell of a good job sir. Keep it up.

  • @loubowen8082
    @loubowen8082 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    you r great

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      many thanks for your kind words

  • @cassandrawright2781
    @cassandrawright2781 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Hey doc. Glad to hear u sounding better🤗😘.

  • @jwightman795
    @jwightman795 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Dude! Thank you!!! This is was amazing! The only inprovement was the music in the intense parts could have been more relevant.

  • @juaquinavellaneda4144
    @juaquinavellaneda4144 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Narration is as good as always

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I try my best!

  • @rwarts5150
    @rwarts5150 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    This is a really good story thanks again Dr Creepen

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      you're welcome!

    • @rwarts5150
      @rwarts5150 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@DrCreepen right on Dr what do you think of fugly face avatar image I called it My Face Not Art

  • @phyllindaiam2494
    @phyllindaiam2494 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is my third time listening to this story.. doc C you're right... This is one of your best narrations🤗🙋🏽‍♀️

  • @babalon7778
    @babalon7778 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Yay! I think I voted for this one.

  • @MadameRaven1
    @MadameRaven1 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Ah, the Dulcet tones of your voice, Doc. A lovely Friday!🌹🐦♥💀

    • @sexygrandmadarkness2722
      @sexygrandmadarkness2722 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Hi there 👋my Sweetlicious Friend;) .. well 🙃 tomorrow is my Birthday, I'll be 50 years old!!! OMG 😮 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️ 💋

    • @MadameRaven1
      @MadameRaven1 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Sexy Grandma Darkness a very happy birthday lovely lady!

    • @annettew5740
      @annettew5740 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Happy birthday!🎊🎉😊

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      enjoy :)

  • @cupcakehips9236
    @cupcakehips9236 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    2 hours!!! 😍❤ yeees!!! Gonna listen the hell out of this tomorrow when I'm crocheting

  • @Alex-bn4ht
    @Alex-bn4ht 4 ปีที่แล้ว +60

    Oh man... i feel really bad because i fell asleep 3 times during the story, and i had to go back every time. And I didn't fall asleep because it was boring, not at all, but because i'm too damn tired. I really miss the times when you had the luxury of not having a job and still being able to have a life... Want a realy scary story?
    Adulthood comes faster than you think
    Anyway, from the northest corner of Germany, i wish you all a beautiful day (and stay away from those sands :D )

    • @danchisholm1
      @danchisholm1 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I hear that.
      sending well wishes and hopes of rest and peace for you

    • @akasha9141
      @akasha9141 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Dr Creepens stories are the best cure for my insomnia

    • @gothgirl4evr881
      @gothgirl4evr881 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I always fall asleep listening to these no matter how good the story is. It's his voice it hypnotizes me to sleep. The thing that sucks about that is I have to go back to where I fell asleep n start again just to do it all over again. LOL.

    • @Alex-bn4ht
      @Alex-bn4ht 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@tyrannicalxeno9850 trust me, you're still in a 1st world country. At least you have wifi and a phone, or even better, a PC to write that :|

    • @GR-bn3xj
      @GR-bn3xj 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@tyrannicalxeno9850 yeah right. 99% of the world would switch places with you in a heartbeat. Go cry else where or move. The US has it better than almost the entire world. You just just be spoiled

  • @aprilleerose
    @aprilleerose 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I’m here!!

    • @ItWatchesWithoutEyes
      @ItWatchesWithoutEyes 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      [ Insert "okay" meme here ]

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      hello!

    • @aprilleerose
      @aprilleerose 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Michael S. I didn’t ask for your two cents but thanks!!!

  • @dylanmorris7357
    @dylanmorris7357 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Wow wasn't expecting this epic of a video today, but thank you very much for this Doc. I love it when you do these longer stories.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I enjoy them more as a storyteller, but they take soooo long to put together!

  • @FIONA21ful
    @FIONA21ful 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Beautiful video , the motion of the boat was relaxing & luling me to sleep. , it makes me homesick for the village I lived in , in Greece , and my early morning beach walks out of season when it was so peaceful.
    Great reading as always Doc. 💚

  • @dondibaker7905
    @dondibaker7905 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I love this channel you where right this was absolutely amazing and the way you read all these stories is just brilliant this is probably my favourite creepy pasta channel

  • @jackiealpeter4993
    @jackiealpeter4993 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow! This one WAS good! You weren't kiddin' Doc! I've gotten to like the military/supernatural story,because of Breach and similar stories you've had. I have a Marine son-in-law, as I've mentioned before,so I had great sympathy for the characters,especially the protagonist. His PTSD came from fighting a foe no one would believe existed,poor guy. I'm late listening to this,but better late than never. Thanks for your hard work and dedication to bring us this gem. Very much appreciated. Best of wishes to you and yours. Peace.

  • @jeremyflemingii929
    @jeremyflemingii929 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    SUPERB AS USUAL! 5 STARS AND ANOTHER LIKE... BAM!
    🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟👍🤜💥🤛
    THANK YOU DR. CREEPEN!
    ME! 😁

  • @airpolygon2714
    @airpolygon2714 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    So it was about the gulf war! Not a paranormal desert! I'm glad, don't take me wrong haha, I'm starting my listen, chilling and with my favorite drink. Cheers! Let's get on with it now...

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I kind of misled you into thinking it couldn't be both!

  • @samanthaallshouse6281
    @samanthaallshouse6281 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    This story reminds me of one of my favorite quotes that I've always agreed with:
    "War does not determine who is right-only who is left"
    Bertrand Russell

  • @michax109
    @michax109 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    An excellent story that builds in suspense dreadfully well.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      exactly my feelings!

  • @Nonayabizness360
    @Nonayabizness360 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    A Dr Creepen naration is the perfect way to end my week . Thank you and have a beautiful weekend DR.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      many thanks for your kind words, you too!

  • @immauniwolf8040
    @immauniwolf8040 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Ahhh my good Dr , your time and hard work is greatly appreciated around the world.

  • @utacc2010
    @utacc2010 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Dear Dr. Creepen, thank you so much for this truly amazing story. Your narration and a very well written story makes this a Grand Slam XOXOXOXO

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      many thanks for your kind words!

  • @5TailFox
    @5TailFox 4 ปีที่แล้ว +60

    "So, we just made do with what we had..."
    He must've been 3rd Battalion...That was _our_ motto.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      sweet!

    • @ardent4273
      @ardent4273 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      What unit specifically?

    • @5TailFox
      @5TailFox 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      @@ardent4273 I was 3rd Battalion, Mike Company, Platoon 3110, my MOS was Motor T.

    • @ardent4273
      @ardent4273 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      @@5TailFox India 3070 Comm

    • @5TailFox
      @5TailFox 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@ardent4273 Semper Fi, Brother.

  • @ironsnowflake1076
    @ironsnowflake1076 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Thank you doc, this one was riveting & brilliant....reminded me of my childhood in the deep woods...we often ventured far into the woods...once outta sight of any human structure, felt like _anything_ was possible.
    Bravo! 👏👏👏

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      the joys of youth!

  • @nazc0
    @nazc0 4 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Absolutely amazing story, listened to the whole thing. I love the stories involving military personnel, and this one does not disappoint. Keep up the amazing work!

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      many thanks for your kind words!

  • @twindad3158
    @twindad3158 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thanks for sharing that amazing story with us Doc :-) GN

  • @bigcountrymountainman9740
    @bigcountrymountainman9740 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    When we first got to Fallujah, the Hummer that we were using was not an armored Hummer it was more of a transport vehicle. ... Lol it was one of the older Humvee trucks instead of the SUV and this thing was an absolute beast. It had an 8.6 twin turbo diesel and that b**** hit a hundred miles an hour so fast. It would do zero to a hundred and back to zero in just over 13 seconds.Just to give you an idea of how fast that is. A formula 1 or F1 IndyCar race car does zero to a hundred and back to zero in less than 9.5 seconds . One of our wrote, Hummer skyline R33 GTR v-spec on the back of it with a sharpie. He got reprimanded for inappropriate use of a combat correspondent tool.

  • @libertycowboy2495
    @libertycowboy2495 ปีที่แล้ว

    I was an M1 tanker with 11 ACR in the 80s. Can relate to alot of this. As a note, the driver almost always slept in his position (very comfy), but the rest of us slept on back deck. No way to get comfortable inside. If we crashed inside, we were beyond tired and always woke feeling like crap. Great tale.

  • @Lemurai
    @Lemurai 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Good old Camp Pendleton, I wonder if they ever got around to installing individual stalls for the literal lines of exposed toilets in the barracks. After seeing that I knew I was joining the Air Force.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      would love to hear more of your recolections

  • @karlak2977
    @karlak2977 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you for the Story Dr.Creepen!💕

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      my pleasure!

  • @Ceresdeath
    @Ceresdeath 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Fantastic brilliant I'm so very enjoying is to this Dr creepen

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      many thanks for your kind words... as always :)

    • @Ceresdeath
      @Ceresdeath 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Your welcome

  • @spencer5028
    @spencer5028 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    I was stationed in 29 palms, I volunteered to deploy to Okinawa at every opportunity

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      how was it?

    • @ischemic2115
      @ischemic2115 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Lmao 29 is a shit hole outside base

    • @dkaio1389
      @dkaio1389 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Yeah 29 is hell.

  • @kellyholmes4554
    @kellyholmes4554 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thankyou so much for all of your time and effort!! ❤❤❤

  • @joleenphillips2415
    @joleenphillips2415 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Oooo!!! Sounds like its gonna be a good one for hot chocolate

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      good choice of beverage!

    • @joleenphillips2415
      @joleenphillips2415 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@DrCreepen You got it. ! It's the best thing to cure those winter Blues.

  • @melissahollowell7255
    @melissahollowell7255 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    That cat is gonna eat your corn dog when you aren't looking.

  • @ItzSyn4pse
    @ItzSyn4pse 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow Dr. You respond to every comment, that's insanely respectful! Much love and excellent story!

  • @mememe8070
    @mememe8070 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Great story and awesome narration as always thank you for your hard work!👣

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      many thanks for your kind words!

    • @mememe8070
      @mememe8070 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@DrCreepen if you didn't put in all the time and effort that you do I'd never be able to sleep. I go to sleep with one of your play list and when I wake up I listen to the one's I slept through. You always keep me wanting more. I'm really hoping for more werewolves are assholes story's soon. Much love to you💐

  • @flirtishatennent1411
    @flirtishatennent1411 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Trust me, Doctor, when I say I'd much rather stay in for the weekend listening to you 😁

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      as long as you enjoy the stories, it's all good :)

    • @flirtishatennent1411
      @flirtishatennent1411 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@DrCreepen Yes, indeed!

  • @scottybranch3063
    @scottybranch3063 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Had a certain H.P. Lovecraft vibe that I really loved!

  • @rederratic3550
    @rederratic3550 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    This was one of the most incredible stories I’ve heard on this channel! Excellent narration, Doctor.

  • @kimlambert159
    @kimlambert159 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi Dr. Creepen! I love the long stories but this one was so good it went by in a flash! I love this author snd your voice togrther. This story really came to life for me. Super cool

  • @brendastewart72
    @brendastewart72 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Many more stories enjoyed this past year, & yet this remains at the top of my all time favorites! Thank you very much!

  • @Quazar-gu1zw
    @Quazar-gu1zw 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I just finished listening to the story. Thank you for all you effort putting this together. It was amazing. :)

  • @babs340
    @babs340 ปีที่แล้ว

    Kudos to the writer and Dr. Creepen for this fantastic tale.

  • @foxrecon19d
    @foxrecon19d 4 ปีที่แล้ว +32

    I knew that when the US Army 82nd Airborne deployed their entire division to Saudi Arabia in 1990, we would be getting into one hell of a big firefight, and I wanted to be in on it. We don't deploy that many paratroopers somewhere unless we intend to seriously kill stuff to death. So, in August 7, 1990, I quit my band and cut off all my glam metal hair (I saw the beginning of Full Metal Jacket and didn't want some sadistic barber butchering my scalp) and strode into the local US Marine Corps recruiting office and confidently declared that I wanted to be a Devil Dog tank crewmember. The recruiter, naturally was ready to sign me up, saying that the Corps would gladly welcome a highly motivated, highly dedicated young Marine recruit into their force of M60A1 Patton tank battalions.
    "WHAT????" I said. "The Marines don't operate the new M1 Abrams? Look, I like the M60 Patton and all. It's a great tank. But the Marines are still operating the older M60A1 and they are going against the best tanks that the Russians had to offer! Hell, the Saudi Arabians are operating the more modern M60A3!"
    The Marine recruiter shrugged, "The deployment came faster than our transition into the M1. We'll get the Abrams soon enough. But for now, we are going to war in the M60A1."
    I, at least, had to admire his honesty. But, if I wanted to go to war in an Abrams, it wouldn't be with the Marine Corps. With a heavy heart and a lump in my throat, I crossed the hallway and entered the US Army recruiting office. Thirty years and five combat MOSs later, I finally retired. I still managed to serve with the Marines, though, during my last deployment to Iraq. There were a little over 300 of us, mostly Marines, surrounded and outnumbered hundreds-to-one by ISIS lunatics on a small compound we still owned inside Al Asad.. The Marine colonel in charge welcomed us Army guys by saying, "Gentlemen, we are outnumbered and surrounded. There are 12,000 screaming ISIS fanatics between us and BIAP. They got us exactly where we want them."
    Marines are a never say die group of warriors and I'm glad they are on our side. I love this story about a Marine M60 crew completely decimating some ancient evil. I can only imagine how the AAR went:
    After Action Report: C2/3, Charlie Company, 1st Armored Battalion, 1st Marine Division,
    "Surrounded. Outnumbered. Blah...blah...blah... What else is new? Told my loader to load beehive, gunner, target a bunch of prehistoric Scooby-Doo spook rejects. Told driver to run tank in a wide circle as me and the loader engaged with coax while the gunner fired beehive. Target scattered. Told loader to load SABOT and instructed gunner to target the Halls of Montezuma looking thing sitting in the middle of the desert. Ancient god, smoked. Nothing follows."
    Come to think of it, I have some stories of weird stuff which has occurred after 30 years in the Army and several years of being deployed. Maybe I'll drop you a note?

    • @Mygg_Jeager
      @Mygg_Jeager 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Quick question, if your tank is inexplicably lagging behind and the radios stop working in a sand storm exactly like this one, wouldn't it be wise to fire off a short burst of 762 into the lead vehicles turret?
      The armour would obviously stop it. And the whole platoon would suddenly start paying attention, thinking they're in enemy contact.
      I doubt that's legal, but desperate times, right?

    • @dennisacklin3301
      @dennisacklin3301 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @Florida Ladybug maybe,. LONG term regermortis? Just Joshen ye. !😁😁😁🙏🐸

    • @dennisacklin3301
      @dennisacklin3301 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Got to thank you for your service. Sir. 🙏😶😶😶😶😶😶😶

    • @andrewdarby2729
      @andrewdarby2729 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Mygg_Jeager you know I thought the same damn thing

  • @RedVRCC
    @RedVRCC 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I can really appreciate a story like this since it features a tank crew. Plus the author seems to actually knows what he's talking about.

  • @georger2748
    @georger2748 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Inspired by the ‘lost city of Ubar?’ Also similar to Lovecraft’s ‘nameless city....’

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      recommendations!

    • @saralund7207
      @saralund7207 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      It was very Lovecraftian in theme. But you can't go wrong with that. I loved the story. Excellent author, and, as always, excellent narration.

  • @stevietricks
    @stevietricks 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Well that sure helped while I was painting the house today. Thanks again good sir (Doffs hat)

  • @nizzlenotes3892
    @nizzlenotes3892 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    We're late Doc, but this is damn fine like normal. Gonna have to listen in two parts because I got to do stuff later today, but hey I fail to see how a long one is a bad thing ;)
    Always a treat to listen to you now with my puppy to snuggle with. Cheers, my friend.

  • @sirenetyx792
    @sirenetyx792 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    A nice long story! Wonderful 😊 If the Doc says it's good, it's going to be great. Thank you Dr. Creepen 🤗

  • @LocomotiveThought
    @LocomotiveThought 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you for the labor intensive story. Seeing incredibly unbelievable things is better kept to yourself...

  • @cadillacdeville5828
    @cadillacdeville5828 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Happy Friday with the good doctor himself 😊😘😘

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      and to you :)

  • @tryintolive1960
    @tryintolive1960 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hey I was right, this is what I chose on your poll earlier for what I thought the story was going to be about. Waited all night to get home and settled in. Got everything ready, my favorite drink and i’m ready to get lost in your voice. 🙏🏼

  • @melindajohnson383
    @melindajohnson383 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow. Just wow. Where do I begin? The voice of velvet? The music that is the heartbeat of the story? The stories that weave and bend through my mind and imagination? The narrative combined with the art of your voice filters out the noise of my day. What a gift.
    I subscribed to your channel and your tales have filled my playlists. I appreciate that you have even given me the 30 minute stories for my ride. It takes the torture out of my commute and I'm smiling on arrival instead of being stressed. You've become my favorite travel companion. I'm so glad I've found you.
    Thank you for sharing. I'm looking forward to a long spine-tingling affair of words.

  • @erikh614
    @erikh614 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Another great one from the absolute top narrator we got here. Thank you Dr. C!

  • @maryjanerhoades3651
    @maryjanerhoades3651 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Dr. Creepen...I'm curious as to what else lies in "Dr. Creepen's vault" 🖤😘 I couldn't imagine attempting to make it through another slow painful day without my few favorite narrators to keep me going and my mind off pain as much as possible 🖤🤘

  • @ksolaris
    @ksolaris 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Loved the story! Don't know why but in my head, i was visualizing everything in a sort of stargate or starship troopers setting minus fancy laser guns and whatnot. Could totally see this as a movie or short netflix series.

  • @jenothemississippianofmand5202
    @jenothemississippianofmand5202 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The fact that the pentagon took interest in the characters story should have keyed him in them believing and covering it up. His commanders weren’t tripping because they’d already been briefed. I love the details that it was the sandstorm that transported them to the dimension and that no matter what direction they went into there was nothing but desert. Like a nod that they were no longer on earth. I like to think they stumbled onto an ancient alien crash site or a temple of an ancient civilization. The radio not working and the compass going crazy are great nods to in other dimensions physics don’t physic. It almost reminds me of the backrooms with them no clipping into an infinite space.

    • @itallia666
      @itallia666 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Lol its like the planet Dune from the film of the same name
      Dune ( origionally a brilliant book) was a Desert planet & they mined a sort of mineral called Spice that was highly prized, whoever controlled the Spice mining, controlled the planet.
      The Spice was produced by these gigantic sand worms that travelled under the desert like fish in the sea.
      Its a great book & the origional film was excellent
      Well worth viewing!
      Peace
      🇬🇧👧

  • @CartersKidsSteveInTheEve
    @CartersKidsSteveInTheEve 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Can’t wait to listen....

  • @JadedBelle
    @JadedBelle 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This was an incredible story! Wow! Hate that I waited so long to come back to this one. I haven't missed many so it's ironic that I just now got around to one of the very best! Thanks as always Good Doc!

  • @Sarah-said
    @Sarah-said 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks for bringing us another awesome episode Doc!

  • @sonofAnonymous
    @sonofAnonymous 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for the these readings! I especially loved this one!

  • @utaker160
    @utaker160 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Best story I've heard 👂 loved it! Keep it up Doc always love getting that notification of a new story!

  • @AxiomIndustries
    @AxiomIndustries 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Very nice

  • @purplevladgirl6888
    @purplevladgirl6888 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Fantastic...and over 2 hours long. Thanks DC

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      my pleasure

    • @purplevladgirl6888
      @purplevladgirl6888 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Dr. Creepen Thank you for such a long story, it was great and you narrated it perfectly. I felt like I was there with sand between my toes! 🤗

  • @michaellockhart6176
    @michaellockhart6176 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Marines! Gyrenes! Fightin' Machines!
    Ahuurrooah!!! My Jarhead bros make that vomit sound but they are super-kick-arse!!!

    • @ericharrison7518
      @ericharrison7518 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Just...no. For one, they're not "super bad arse" they're crayon eating simpletons that shit all over our FOB in Iraq because the Corps apparently never potty trained their little crayola monsters. Secondly it's Oorah not...whataver that was you just said.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      sounds painful

    • @michaellockhart6176
      @michaellockhart6176 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Only on the ears 😄
      I was Army but some of my USMC friends adopted me. A true honor. We constantly gave each other crap but in the end we were one team...

  • @LordBitememan
    @LordBitememan 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Helluva feat just getting that recorded. In all honesty, I'd be more worried about freezing to death than the mystery critters. ;)

  • @lucy_Bad_Bunny
    @lucy_Bad_Bunny 4 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    Lol I had to do a double take I thought it said "cursed sandals". Love the videos btw and I love you even more and I'm getting my tea and cookies ready to listen to your amazing voice

    • @joleenphillips2415
      @joleenphillips2415 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hmmmm... Interesting story idea

    • @lucy_Bad_Bunny
      @lucy_Bad_Bunny 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@joleenphillips2415 lmao you right

    • @joleenphillips2415
      @joleenphillips2415 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@lucy_Bad_Bunny Muwahahahaha
      Beware the accursed sandals! They will take your luck, they will take your fortune... Beware! They will take your soul!!! 💀💀💀

    • @michaellockhart6176
      @michaellockhart6176 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      The scandals could also steal soles

    • @phihelix8777
      @phihelix8777 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@joleenphillips2415 yeah it does seem like something good could come out of those two words. Can't take them off, they make you walk on and on to some unknown horrible fate.

  • @katlenm9041
    @katlenm9041 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Loved your reading of the book.. and your voice was so agreeable to hear. One of the few times I listened to a story in one go.