This is a great film. I must admit that I thought I had it figured out. I naturally assumed the little girl was guiding the woman to her corpse to show her that the neighbor was a child murderer, and I figured she'd eventually find a way to escape from John's torture chamber and alert the authorities. Well! Imagine my surprise! Was the child ghost luring her to the cage or was the woman an unfortunate victim trying to help a child? Great short!
This was so good but very dark, deep, sad, tragic and unbelievably shocking when you find out what the storyline is to this film. It actually enraged me and made me so sad because (not this exact type of scenario in particular) but other stuff involving certain topics with children (if you know what I mean) happen every day to children all over the world at any given moment. The lead actress was amazing, and she nailed the role, and I can tell that the entire cast and crew involved with making this film really came up with some brilliant ideas on how to make it a story with depth and meaning. Thank you for sharing your work, I enjoyed this a lot!
Thank you for your comment and for watching the film. I am glad you enjoyed it. Horror can be hard sometimes when it reminds us of real life, but at the end of the day, this is a work of fiction and it's really just a creepy ghost story. (and we have ideas for sequels and perhaps Vanessa escapes???)
@@DeformedLunchboxI would love that but I would also love it if you show the corpse of Vanessa. But anyhow, ik it's going to be awesome, I discovered you like 2 hours ago and I love your short films!
WELL! That was disturbing. A compelling storyline in an ordinary, quiet suburb. It makes one want to look round the neighbourhood more closely. What really goes on behind closed doors. What's more chilling is, this could be happening right now under people's noses somewhere and no one will notice anything is wrong. It certainly held my attention the whole time. The acting, the gloomy atmosphere and the utter despair of her final predicament and obviously eventual death, were superbly done and will stay in my mind for some time. Credit to all involved in the production of this film. I will certainly be looking on Y.T. for more from the "Deformed Lunchbox" Team. 10 /10 (I am in New Zealand)
You should definitely watch Social House Films they make bangers! I've watched all of their horror shorts, you can also try Omeleto it's so good too! My personal 2nd favourite, after Alter, is Screamfest
That's your best short film so far, it was short and concise but the story was very well written and had a sad twist at the end. I really liked the makeup for the little girl who seemed actually dead (and that's something I wish to never see in real life)
ok hear me out- so you make a sequel where its John's POV and he's like a prisoner or something, we get flashbacks from his childhood where we see that he was best friends ( or very close) to the little girl and the creepy grandma was like his aunt or stepmother who manipulated him and forced him to lure in kids so she could get their blood ( and call it FIND YOU). Loved the film ( and my sister who played in it !).
My theory is that the old woman (which I’m gonna call Marcy because people say that’s what she looks like) needs blood to survive because blood was mentioned a lot. She spit out blood and because she spits out blood she needs more or else she’s gonna die. And John is her worker/son who traps people. The little child was forced to be a trap to Vanessa. And while Vanessa was entering they trapped her. So the old woman locked the door and John was hiding. He jumped on her and trapped her, now her blood will be donated until she dies a painful death. And while that she’s gonna be forced to be used as a trap. And they’ll trap someone else.
This is so well made that I was offended on watching it the first time but with art, you have to try to understand, and watching it a second time I appreciate that it is a great work of art! I apologize for not getting it the first time. Keep up the good work!
The way she says “it’s starting to feel like a cage” when literally at the end she is basically in one I feel so bad even though I know it’s just actors but it sure does look real
This is such a disturbing horror movie about a girl who mysteriously disappeared and the first person to see her dead was Vanessa who became the victim of physical manipulation. I wonder if it was based on an actual disappearance of girls who end up being imprisoned like a caged animal and physically tortured and manipulated through violent means. It’s also an extremely sad movie about a man who hides his violent past and possibly his dangerous criminal motives.
I thought at first he was using these victims to get their organs and blood for his mother as she's sick , but i guess he's just a psychopath torturing people.
Man, your production is top quality, the actors you get are amazing. This quality tops a lot of the big budget films out there. I can't wait to see when you make a feature film.
@@MoSherriCharlaSmith this is my opinion on the quality. How can you shit here and say I am wrong, it is my opinion? Just like it is your opinion that it doesn't top large budget films, lol. Just look at some of the "top" budget films out there.
This was pretty good it sure looked liked it was freezing cold out there while cast and crew were out there filming all of you guys did a fantastic job making this classic I'm not sure how actors in general ever get used to filming movies in the freezing freezing cold wheather but you guys did an awsome job .
Holy moly! This is another top 10 in the same week first l, don’t feed the cat and now this what a year so far, it’s not even halfway through the year and you writers have created amazing art. Wow and great acting from the actress and the actor this is a scary shit once again top 10 job well done.
It's always a pleasure to watch a short that's original and well done. It was creepy enough for a daaaaaamn but not over the top. Glad you fell into my queue.
this was very well done and acted ..i cared about the victim .sad she almost got away .i hope the ghost helps her get away . we can live next door to monsters
The creepiest thing I see nowadays is the disgusting-faces people make and contemptuous-disregard for their coughing: after masking for so long; people just let their mouths do the weirdest things and hack open-mouthed at other-folk; did one quarantine erase the last century of decorum. Any-way, this movie seems like a metaphor for living in rental units till you cant afford to bleed anymore and never even lived.
Bah, esse com certeza o foi melhor short horror film da Deformed Lunchbox. Ele te prende desde o início até o fim, a atuação é muito boa, tanto que é que a gente consegue ver bem que a Vanessa, não só ela mas também todas as pessoas, sofreram demais no início da pandemia. Como ela mesma disse, trabalhar só em casa era como estar uma jaula. E também podemos ver que ela toma remédios com bebida alcoólica, não consegue fazer o relatório, recebe a notícia que seu pai está no hospital e sequer pode visitá-lo. Ela não está suportando, a equipe de produção conseguiu mostrar isso muito bem, e apesar de tudo, a Vanessa quer ajudar aquela menina A história é sinistra, eu também gostei muito dos filtros utilizados, pois dá aquele suspense e sensação de frio. Enfim, quero parabenizar todos que participaram na produção desse short horror film, obrigado por se dedicarem e disponibilizar ao mundo um trabalho impecável
Jae thank you for your review and for paying such close attention to everything. It means a lot to us that you enjoyed it, and we strive to make more films that are bigger, better, and scarier! Thank you for your words, I have just sent them directly to the director Scott. There are also some hidden themes in the film nobody has picked up on yet! So we hope people continue to find more secrets we hide in our films!
@@DeformedLunchbox eu vou sempre apoiar vocês, acredito que vão nos entregar cada vez mais qualidade e histórias arrepiantes! Eu vou trabalhar duro para encontrar esses temas e segredos ocultos. Ansioso para os próximos short films!
Oh dear God she was brushing like my mom😂I told her so many times that it isn't good for your teeth and gums. Anyways movie was good. I like the main lead she was so much intothe character
the mystery is that these people trapped strangers to kill them and to attract more strangers to fall on there trap they decided to make a kid scream to help and as the people saw the kid screaming like the girl at the starting the people think to save her but when they go under the house then they realise that it is a trap but till then then they get trapped forever in that house LOL am i right
What country are you watching from?
Canada!
does Las Vegas count as it's own country??
@@asplashofbloodmedia yes.
India
Iam indian and iam watching your vidos from India
I love how when she said "it's starting to feel like a cage" at 2:09 it was foreshadowing her fate
I love how you caught that 😉
@@DeformedLunchbox caught it? I thought it was meant to be very obvious lol
that kinda reminds me of - when you say "couldn't be worse" 😅
The Neighbor Was Strange To Begin With. The Little Girl Saying "Come Down Here And Find Me." My Initial Reaction Oh, Hell No!
THE OLD LADY LOOKS LIKE THE ONE FROM SANDWICH
FR
Is she tho?…
Bruh actually
Agreed man
@@Justadbdloverireallyamiswearok PRETTY SURE. BUT AT THE SAME TIME-
This is a great film. I must admit that I thought I had it figured out. I naturally assumed the little girl was guiding the woman to her corpse to show her that the neighbor was a child murderer, and I figured she'd eventually find a way to escape from John's torture chamber and alert the authorities. Well! Imagine my surprise! Was the child ghost luring her to the cage or was the woman an unfortunate victim trying to help a child? Great short!
I would’ve knocked that old lady over and told the cops! 😂 But that wasn’t in the script!!! 😂 Awesome film! I hope to see more! ❤
Yeah she froze too long looking at the old lady, i would have run up those stairs so fast . This was so creepy and terrifying .
This was so good but very dark, deep, sad, tragic and unbelievably shocking when you find out what the storyline is to this film. It actually enraged me and made me so sad because (not this exact type of scenario in particular) but other stuff involving certain topics with children (if you know what I mean) happen every day to children all over the world at any given moment. The lead actress was amazing, and she nailed the role, and I can tell that the entire cast and crew involved with making this film really came up with some brilliant ideas on how to make it a story with depth and meaning. Thank you for sharing your work, I enjoyed this a lot!
Thank you for your comment and for watching the film. I am glad you enjoyed it. Horror can be hard sometimes when it reminds us of real life, but at the end of the day, this is a work of fiction and it's really just a creepy ghost story.
(and we have ideas for sequels and perhaps Vanessa escapes???)
@@DeformedLunchboxI would love that but I would also love it if you show the corpse of Vanessa. But anyhow, ik it's going to be awesome, I discovered you like 2 hours ago and I love your short films!
thank you!!!!
WELL! That was disturbing. A compelling storyline in an ordinary, quiet suburb. It makes one want to look round the neighbourhood more closely. What really goes on behind closed doors. What's more chilling is, this could be happening right now under people's noses somewhere and no one will notice anything is wrong. It certainly held my attention the whole time. The acting, the gloomy atmosphere and the utter despair of her final predicament and obviously eventual death, were superbly done and will stay in my mind for some time. Credit to all involved in the production of this film. I will certainly be looking on Y.T. for more from the "Deformed Lunchbox" Team. 10 /10 (I am in New Zealand)
Between ALTER and this channel, I have no shortage of horror content.
Thanks Lunchbox for adding another channel for me to tune into.
I find ACMofficial to be pretty good too!
I mean there are way more channels lol. Grimoire Horror, ponysmasher, social house films, Isaac Ruth…
Just entered into the world of horror short films. Only aware of this channel and alter. But recommendations on replys helped me!!
You should definitely watch Social House Films they make bangers! I've watched all of their horror shorts, you can also try Omeleto it's so good too! My personal 2nd favourite, after Alter, is Screamfest
12:23 what does that mean
That's your best short film so far, it was short and concise but the story was very well written and had a sad twist at the end.
I really liked the makeup for the little girl who seemed actually dead (and that's something I wish to never see in real life)
ok hear me out- so you make a sequel where its John's POV and he's like a prisoner or something, we get flashbacks from his childhood where we see that he was best friends ( or very close) to the little girl and the creepy grandma was like his aunt or stepmother who manipulated him and forced him to lure in kids so she could get their blood ( and call it FIND YOU). Loved the film ( and my sister who played in it !).
That is a GREAT idea!
My theory is that the old woman (which I’m gonna call Marcy because people say that’s what she looks like) needs blood to survive because blood was mentioned a lot. She spit out blood and because she spits out blood she needs more or else she’s gonna die. And John is her worker/son who traps people. The little child was forced to be a trap to Vanessa. And while Vanessa was entering they trapped her. So the old woman locked the door and John was hiding. He jumped on her and trapped her, now her blood will be donated until she dies a painful death. And while that she’s gonna be forced to be used as a trap. And they’ll trap someone else.
I’ve been beyond excited to see this! DL never disappoints 🔥
I agree with you...
Totally unbelievable. Everyone loved working from home. Great work as always!
This is so well made that I was offended on watching it the first time but with art, you have to try to understand, and watching it a second time I appreciate that it is a great work of art! I apologize for not getting it the first time. Keep up the good work!
Everything was top notch, a very good film, that ending primed me for more.👏
The way she says “it’s starting to feel like a cage” when literally at the end she is basically in one I feel so bad even though I know it’s just actors but it sure does look real
It is based on a true story
@@DeformedLunchbox What…… I’m scared of basements now….
@@DeformedLunchboxwhat is the true story
This is such a disturbing horror movie about a girl who mysteriously disappeared and the first person to see her dead was Vanessa who became the victim of physical manipulation. I wonder if it was based on an actual disappearance of girls who end up being imprisoned like a caged animal and physically tortured and manipulated through violent means. It’s also an extremely sad movie about a man who hides his violent past and possibly his dangerous criminal motives.
I thought at first he was using these victims to get their organs and blood for his mother as she's sick , but i guess he's just a psychopath torturing people.
WOW. I have just one word: MORE. This was GREAT. I'd love to see this as a full movie!
That was sick! I loved every disgusting minute of it too!
OMG!! This was Amazing!! Great acting, Great plot! I loved it! ❤
Man, your production is top quality, the actors you get are amazing. This quality tops a lot of the big budget films out there. I can't wait to see when you make a feature film.
No it doesn't. Stop lying.
@@MoSherriCharlaSmith this is my opinion on the quality.
How can you shit here and say I am wrong, it is my opinion?
Just like it is your opinion that it doesn't top large budget films, lol.
Just look at some of the "top" budget films out there.
This was great.Hoping to see some more long ones like this.Once again u did not disappoint.👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
This was pretty good it sure looked liked it was freezing cold out there while cast and crew were out there filming all of you guys did a fantastic job making this classic I'm not sure how actors in general ever get used to filming movies in the freezing freezing cold wheather but you guys did an awsome job .
Wow, naming your production company "Stone Soup?" That's a deep cut.
Holy moly! This is another top 10 in the same week first l, don’t feed the cat and now this what a year so far, it’s not even halfway through the year and you writers have created amazing art. Wow and great acting from the actress and the actor this is a scary shit once again top 10 job well done.
Outstanding film. Jumped a few times. Great story.
This is one of the best on this channel. Actually scary, not just gross
Love this, quite different from the usual stuff but u guys did a great Job, the storyline had me hooked 👍
👏🏼 Never go in the damn basement! Excellent!
This was excellent! I really enjoyed it. Great work.
Excellent short!
But the story at this point is MADE for a sequel in my opinion!
subscribed right now, 🙂🙂great movie and channel. Thank you
Wow, would this make a Great full length movie. Awesome job!!!!!!!
Very good short love to see full length movie of it can't wait for the next one respect from Australia
It's always a pleasure to watch a short that's original and well done. It was creepy enough for a daaaaaamn but not over the top. Glad you fell into my queue.
Ok who else is sending this in for spooky scary sunday?
Congratulations on over 100,000 VIEWS!
Big milestone for us!!!
It is amazing.excellent job
This is where the one of the oldest practices throughout time should've been utilized.
Minding your own f***ing business
Heyyyy! I missed tree of ur vids so soz. I luv that plot twist but I guess I ain't sleeping 2night! 😭✋️
I really likes to watch your long videos more than a short vines b.coz your contents were so .. superb
This seems like story of Anabelle 😧
NEW DEFORMED LUNCHBOX LETS GOOOOOO
this was very well done and acted ..i cared about the victim .sad she almost got away .i hope the ghost helps her get away . we can live next door to monsters
Well that sucks!!!
Bet she wouldn’t mind be cooped up @home now.😂🎉
Great movie!!!
Damn that was really good,..
That Ghost Little Girl got her gotten.
"Dart". You guys are canadian? Thats awesome! Im watching from Alberta!
100% Canadian!
Glad you noticed that haha
@@DeformedLunchbox I suspect not many would lol
Now she doesn't need to get those reports done her boss was hassling her about. Winner!
Excellent!!!!!! I want to see more!!
This is so goood!! The old lady looks like marcy from the sandwich film
Yup, that's her!
The Duolingo mafia captures 2 more victims.
ITS NOT JUST A FIND ME ITS THAT OHIO WANTS TO FIND ME
Was not expecting that ending
This one was a little tricky but Good ending: The girl was found and then it was the lady's turn to hide, then she had a good day and went to bed.
Deformed Lunchbox arrasando como sempre. O filme é realmente muito bom
Your short horror stories are the best 👌
Now I'll go hide and you find me.
This film will be perfect horror!
leaving us with this cliffhanger ending. i just wasted my 13 minutes 💀 but still, it's a good short film
This was def good that’s crazy that it was them this whole 😮time
That was crazy.
I'm glad you always have subtitles, my English listening is not very good, sometimes I can't hear😅 thanks you
As a gore fan, you don't understand how much of a blessing your channel is.
We have a new video coming February 1st.
You will like it (wink emoji)
The creepiest thing I see nowadays is the disgusting-faces people make and contemptuous-disregard for their coughing: after masking for so long; people just let their mouths do the weirdest things and hack open-mouthed at other-folk; did one quarantine erase the last century of decorum. Any-way, this movie seems like a metaphor for living in rental units till you cant afford to bleed anymore and never even lived.
Well that was freakin creepy!! 👍
this felt like a nightmare!
Wow eagerly waiting 🧟♂️
Dang this was creepy 😱 loved it!
My god this is so scary!! So real!
Very well done!
Bah, esse com certeza o foi melhor short horror film da Deformed Lunchbox. Ele te prende desde o início até o fim, a atuação é muito boa, tanto que é que a gente consegue ver bem que a Vanessa, não só ela mas também todas as pessoas, sofreram demais no início da pandemia. Como ela mesma disse, trabalhar só em casa era como estar uma jaula. E também podemos ver que ela toma remédios com bebida alcoólica, não consegue fazer o relatório, recebe a notícia que seu pai está no hospital e sequer pode visitá-lo. Ela não está suportando, a equipe de produção conseguiu mostrar isso muito bem, e apesar de tudo, a Vanessa quer ajudar aquela menina
A história é sinistra, eu também gostei muito dos filtros utilizados, pois dá aquele suspense e sensação de frio. Enfim, quero parabenizar todos que participaram na produção desse short horror film, obrigado por se dedicarem e disponibilizar ao mundo um trabalho impecável
Jae thank you for your review and for paying such close attention to everything. It means a lot to us that you enjoyed it, and we strive to make more films that are bigger, better, and scarier! Thank you for your words, I have just sent them directly to the director Scott.
There are also some hidden themes in the film nobody has picked up on yet! So we hope people continue to find more secrets we hide in our films!
@@DeformedLunchbox eu vou sempre apoiar vocês, acredito que vão nos entregar cada vez mais qualidade e histórias arrepiantes! Eu vou trabalhar duro para encontrar esses temas e segredos ocultos. Ansioso para os próximos short films!
Absolute horror. Well done!
Daman: You should make a short film on Cancer
I have a few scripts about it. Very creepy stories.
Отличный фильм👏, посмотрел 2 раза, чтобы все детали отметить.👍
storyline good, cinematography good ,lighting gud, sound very well.from uganda
I love happy endings😈
Wow! This is excdllent
I love givong myself nightmares
8/10 so good
Actress Performed well, Creepy Dude’s part was great 👍 thanks lunchbox 📦 🍱
This was pretty creepy
Great work!
USA! And that was a wonderful, disturbing, fantastic, warped, incredible, horrible film!! I loved it cuz it was so creepy! Great job everyone!!!
👍Great short film!! I'd love to see a sequel!!
You guys are the best
Thanks Big Mike
Freakin Amazing🔥🔥🔥
Please tell me it's just ketchup but the acting is soooo good
This was terrifying
Oh dear God she was brushing like my mom😂I told her so many times that it isn't good for your teeth and gums. Anyways movie was good. I like the main lead she was so much intothe character
Loved this A LOT! love from India ❤
hello deformed lunchbox I love to watch ur short horror flims!
That was a good one
This would make one helluva good horror movie, i wish it was a full movie
Brilliant film
I love this film❤❤❤
Nice. This 3 minute film is better than 99% of the horror movies made in the last 5 years.
3 minutes? 🤨🤨
Wow is this unsettling 😳🥺
This is why everyone needs a pet
the mystery is that these people trapped strangers to kill them and to attract more strangers to fall on there trap they decided to make a kid scream to help and as the people saw the kid screaming like the girl at the starting the people think to save her but when they go under the house then they realise that it is a trap but till then then they get trapped forever in that house LOL
am i right
You're missing a pretty key element. Why do they trap them?
Pls make a content on ..the addiction of smoking or some like the last swing something?🤯
I think our film 'Toast' is about addiction!
But thank you for feedback! We have many more exciting short films planned and coming soon!
I'm waiting 🤗so much
You’d think the little girl would come save her!!