I'm sorry, but I don't think she could 1. create a dome-like structure, 2. get enough plant material and weave it into a net large enough to cover her structure, and 3. cover said structure with ground material -- all in 1 1/2 minutes. [17:13] How did Zelda get here?? How does she know what it smelled like? Isn't her suit filtering that out? [33:08] "Her scanner blurred a warning"? What is a blurred warning? Several times a word was dropped out. {34:12] "She's stabilizing the train"? She's NOT on a train.
Cute story, has a few points that could improve story. What was the point of the story. What was the goal, .i know this is science fiction but story lines needs more development. Thanks for the mental images.
Glitches, spelling errors in the subtitles, annoying burr in the AIs 'voice'. Not pointing towards a brillant record. The story subject, however, is not without possibilities.
I'm sorry, but I don't think she could 1. create a dome-like structure, 2. get enough plant material and weave it into a net large enough to cover her structure, and 3. cover said structure with ground material -- all in 1 1/2 minutes. [17:13] How did Zelda get here?? How does she know what it smelled like? Isn't her suit filtering that out? [33:08] "Her scanner blurred a warning"? What is a blurred warning? Several times a word was dropped out. {34:12] "She's stabilizing the train"? She's NOT on a train.
Cute story, has a few points that could improve story. What was the point of the story. What was the goal, .i know this is science fiction but story lines needs more development.
Thanks for the mental images.
Glitches, spelling errors in the subtitles, annoying burr in the AIs 'voice'. Not pointing towards a brillant record. The story subject, however, is not without possibilities.