Imagine being one of the best narrators on this channel just to get called a bot because of your speech intelligence and paying attention to enunciation. Don't listen, man, these gremlins just want to hurt feelings and they will never be satisfied.
That opening attack is reminiscent of the Sweeper Assault in HotWheels Acceleracers 4. Seemingly random, but very well calculated to confuse a robotic enemy.
I dug the story, But, it was way too condensed.. Like telling the story of WW2 liberation of Europe from D-Day to the fall of Berlin in a 10 minute lecture. Could have made it in a 2 or 3 installment story .. Would have made a. "good " tale into a Great story........
The way the RADIO (Reports Across Distant Interstellar Outposts) universe works we will hear details of the conflict in upcoming stories as prompts that fit come up!
The underlying the idea is interesting, but the narrative details are ... illogical ... again and again. I stopped listening half way through, so I can't tell if the story in its entirety is bad enough for a "thumbs down", but here's what I can tell you: * Your story suffers from the Hollywood Disease - "We have only a budget for 3 actors, a bit for CGI for one ship, but none for supporting roles or extended worldbuilding. But our average viewer only has 5 brain cells, so we have to keep things simple anyway. Therefore it's perfectly fine if those 3 "heroes" solve all the puzzles, overcome all challenges and save the galaxy all by themselves, while billions of other humans ... don't do anything." * The message/purpose/technology "deciphering" is completely ****, this is not how these things work. You _might_ get a hint that a signal has been travelling through space for a long time, yes. Or you might detect that a structure has been in space for a long time. To make any assumptions about the message/content/structure of the signal, you need something to compare it too, or you need to physically access the transmitter station and/or a receiver to either crack the transmission protocol or dig out the raw data from the computers directly. * Make up your mind, what the HORIZON and it's crew is. A warship that fought in the front lines of the last war? A special forces ship? A long range scout? All this will put constrains on it's capabilities and those of its crew - consider what you want/need for your story. * If a scout ship with such important data comes back, it won't simply dock and it's crew gather in the tea kitchen to solve the puzzle. Likewise, it seems unlikely that those who want to "contain humanity" would simply let them go - or let them arrive at earth without taking any further measures, especially considering that they seemingly know about "the humans"?! * etc ... sorry , I don't have the time to list everything or rewrite you story now. Maybe later, if I remember to come back to it.
FINALLY, I see my post!! The goal of the server is not to be a scam. It's to foster chat/banter/ideas being exchanged. I don't want to remain the owner of the server. Once the owner of the this channel initiate communication wit me, I'll transfer it over. I'm a programmer at heart, so I'll be doing a bot for the server. Details of it will appear in the announcements channel.
Another of these "humans-are-oh-so-special" stories with plot holes so big to drive an intergalactic species inhibiting space station thru... Additionally the author has obviously no idea how organisations work
What do you think HFY stands for? It’s Humanity Fuck Yeah. So yes, we’re the special, cool species for a change. How is that any less plausible than how classic sci fi has always gone, where we’re so damn weak and pathetic all the time?
I thought this channel was all produced by mankind, not machine. this sounds very generated. Put some personality into it, do better, you guys have been great for months, don't get lazy.
Well, someone else mentioned that the story could use more. Perhaps the end of the war is the prelude to this story? Untrusted allies in war is not a theme unknown in our own history, dig into WW2 for the best example I'm aware of. And reversals of fortune are quite common when the only ones you can trust are in your unit.
I love how the sound effects made the whole story more exciting.
The story itself amazing as well!
Take a drink every time precision is said
there are words we catch more than others
"but that ring... It's definitely not a natural formation"...... Dun dun dun duuuuun
Dun dun!
wait whose the narrator?
New person that narrated a story a few days ago
Either a new person or It's a robot🤖🤖🤖🤖
@@adamwitt8160 Has to be a bot, no inflections all the same vice and mispronouncing debris.
@@jasonboldt9918 Yes. Makes one wonder. We didn't see the narrator at the beginning which is normal with this channel.
Imagine being one of the best narrators on this channel just to get called a bot because of your speech intelligence and paying attention to enunciation. Don't listen, man, these gremlins just want to hurt feelings and they will never be satisfied.
Time to scare aliens, and make poor life choices!
That opening attack is reminiscent of the Sweeper Assault in HotWheels Acceleracers 4.
Seemingly random, but very well calculated to confuse a robotic enemy.
I dug the story, But, it was way too condensed.. Like telling the story of WW2 liberation of Europe from D-Day to the fall of Berlin in a 10 minute lecture. Could have made it in a 2 or 3 installment story .. Would have made a. "good " tale into a Great story........
The way the RADIO (Reports Across Distant Interstellar Outposts) universe works we will hear details of the conflict in upcoming stories as prompts that fit come up!
The tower of babel an old Sci-fi trope.
Big nope vibes❤ looks like that unprofessional communication has truly taken the fleet by storm
Well, nice to meet you New Story Teller!!! You are doing a great job!!!❤❤❤❤❤
I'm pretty sure this narrator has done a few stories before- good job 👏
I must say i like the new thumbnail
Also i love this narator what a awesome voice
At least Sarah Chen didn't make an appearance.....
One reason I love this channel...real ppl narrative and the Chen Dynasty hasn't ruled here 😂❤
Happ New Year to us!❤❤ love it! Can't wait to see the wildfire this caused ❤❤ Thank You❤❤🎉🎉
Who is the speaker? he is good.
Who's this Ingenuity OP guy that's everywhere?
The underlying the idea is interesting, but the narrative details are ... illogical ... again and again.
I stopped listening half way through, so I can't tell if the story in its entirety is bad enough for a "thumbs down", but here's what I can tell you:
* Your story suffers from the Hollywood Disease - "We have only a budget for 3 actors, a bit for CGI for one ship, but none for supporting roles or extended worldbuilding. But our average viewer only has 5 brain cells, so we have to keep things simple anyway. Therefore it's perfectly fine if those 3 "heroes" solve all the puzzles, overcome all challenges and save the galaxy all by themselves, while billions of other humans ... don't do anything."
* The message/purpose/technology "deciphering" is completely ****, this is not how these things work. You _might_ get a hint that a signal has been travelling through space for a long time, yes. Or you might detect that a structure has been in space for a long time. To make any assumptions about the message/content/structure of the signal, you need something to compare it too, or you need to physically access the transmitter station and/or a receiver to either crack the transmission protocol or dig out the raw data from the computers directly.
* Make up your mind, what the HORIZON and it's crew is. A warship that fought in the front lines of the last war? A special forces ship? A long range scout? All this will put constrains on it's capabilities and those of its crew - consider what you want/need for your story.
* If a scout ship with such important data comes back, it won't simply dock and it's crew gather in the tea kitchen to solve the puzzle. Likewise, it seems unlikely that those who want to "contain humanity" would simply let them go - or let them arrive at earth without taking any further measures, especially considering that they seemingly know about "the humans"?!
* etc ... sorry , I don't have the time to list everything or rewrite you story now. Maybe later, if I remember to come back to it.
I agree with you. It is like seeing the same two people in the X-Men mansion.
Is that a new storyteller?
Narrator's second story
@savage9264 Do you know their first one?
@Shadowhunter9098 no. I just remember that it was from earlier this week
@@savage9264 ok.
Sounds exactly like Jason Sudeikis. lol
Nice!
This makes me want a new mass effect game but not from bioware after what they did to the dragon age franchise.
Good story 👏
Not the best story. Narrator is good though.
FINALLY, I see my post!!
The goal of the server is not to be a scam. It's to foster chat/banter/ideas being exchanged.
I don't want to remain the owner of the server. Once the owner of the this channel initiate communication wit me, I'll transfer it over.
I'm a programmer at heart, so I'll be doing a bot for the server. Details of it will appear in the announcements channel.
Writer here… what are you talking about?!?
🤷🏾♂️
I am the first
Well done!
Killroy was here
Another of these "humans-are-oh-so-special" stories with plot holes so big to drive an intergalactic species inhibiting space station thru... Additionally the author has obviously no idea how organisations work
This is a HFY channel the theme of “humans are so special” is a requirement.
What do you think HFY stands for? It’s Humanity Fuck Yeah. So yes, we’re the special, cool species for a change. How is that any less plausible than how classic sci fi has always gone, where we’re so damn weak and pathetic all the time?
Enter Bugs Bunny: "GNYAAAAH, SHADAAAAP!!! Seriously, Doc, what's your point?" 🙄😁
HFY may not be your category. Try other sci-fi categories and see if you find something more to your liking. Cheers!
This is like going to a comedy show and saying "GAWSH! WHY IS NOBODY BEING SERIOUS? THIS SHOW SUX!" 😂
I thought this channel was all produced by mankind, not machine. this sounds very generated.
Put some personality into it, do better, you guys have been great for months, don't get lazy.
a human did write this, but sometimes we miss the mark :(
@StarboundHFY okay that's good to know, I'm sorry if I've hurt any feelings.
Well, someone else mentioned that the story could use more. Perhaps the end of the war is the prelude to this story?
Untrusted allies in war is not a theme unknown in our own history, dig into WW2 for the best example I'm aware of.
And reversals of fortune are quite common when the only ones you can trust are in your unit.