Aa, you guys have been so sweet in these comments! Ranger.. I AM SHOOK. The talent is ✨ immaculate ✨. The way you brought Adonis to life is incredible! Hnnn, I love it so much, honestly. The only thing I’d say is that the beginning running sequence was a little long for me- the best way to do those is to either make more happen in the sequence beside the running effects, or to make it like “stepstepstepthump” as a quick transition, if that makes sense. Although it may be just my impatience to hear you read it, haha. In any case... this definitely exceeded my expectations. And if anyone is wondering... yes, a part two has been written. 👀 I’m so glad everyone liked this script! My thought was that in normal yandere videos, you’re helpless and weak. But what if you’re supposed to be so much stronger and yet you still cannot do anything? I felt this feeling of helplessness would, like, increase tenfold this way and I wanted to test it. I’m happy to say that it worked! I could feel our character’s anger- the “istg i should be able to pummel this hoe but I can’t m o v e” feeling really got to me. Sorry for the long comment, folks, I’m just ecstatic to be the one to show off the sheer talent in this video hehe To be able to take words on a page and give them so much life- the stuttering and the way you could hear Adonis’s actions in how he reacted- is a gift, and I’m so excited to hear more from you, Ranger. thank you for giving my script a chance! I can’t wait to hear your next video. And thank you all for listening. Cheers!
I am super uber happy to hear you approved of and enjoyed this Audio Liz! I'm very happy I was able to being to life the character you wanted Adonis to be. Thank you for your feedback about the running sequence aswell, I'll endeavor to improve that sort of thing for future audios. I'm still learning and feedback like this helps me. I'm very excited for part 2 as this was so much fun to do! 👍🤗❤
I’m so so excited you’ve written part 2! You’re writing and other works are just so fantastic and I ADORE them ❤️❤️ His wonderful voice and your amazing writing go hand in hand, and I’m so excited to see what you tWo come up with, thanks again for the fabulous script and wonderful voice acting you Two!
Step one: pretend to be loyal and what not Step two: ask specifically for his blood Step three: drink a bit too much on “accident” (excuse? His blood is specifically addictive) Step four: wait for him to fall asleep and rip out his throat Step five: sell off the objects in the manor and move to a different country Step six: get kidnapped again because at this point I’ve been kidnapped within a year of escaping 😂
This certainly is the double edged sword situation for both Yandere and the Vampire. As both can easily kill the opposite party given any clear opportunity if they want. Props to Liz for this unique story plot between Yandere and Vampire, and to you captain Ranger, for for voicing the story, making the script to be alive.
It is indeed a very dangerous situation and I cant wait to see how it plays out. I think the yandere has a bit of an advantage since the vampire is already caught and has been blood starved for a long time now. Liz did an amazing job and I hope there is a part 2 to do.
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 Yes, Captain Ranger I agree with you. But it's to be noted, as long as the Yandere doesn't give enough blood for the Vampire to the point where they can completely regain their Inhuman powers, I think the Yandere will still be safe, considering the Yandere already has safety precautions in mind since he spied the Vampire for so long. It's like trying to tame and control a wild beast.
I love the aspect of a pacifist vampire, it's rare abe brings a unique situation to where on could be in a very weird kind of right as it would literally be like watching someone not eat for a while.
and let me go I don't like being chained to chairs cause this is far from my first getting kidnapped but it is my first time getting kidnapped as a vampire by a yandere
I just found this on my recommended and it was interesting. I don't think I have seen an ASMR like this when it comes to the vampire type. You did a fantastic job and have gained a new subscriber :)
Thank you very much and welcome to the Crew lol. I really liked Liz's flip on the vampire asmr type and is one of the reasons I really wanted to do this script. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I can imagine how we're so confused because this HUMAN has tracked us down and captured us. Not to kill us for being a vampire! No. To love us which would completely bamboozle me.
I agree. I'm very curious to see where this goes aswell and am looking forward to it. I do not control the script in this case however so part 2 is in the hands of Miss Liz. I hope you have a pleasant day, morning, afternoon, or night aswell 👍
What a cool twist on the vampire and yandere tropes! I don't think I've ever heard an audio quite like this. Is Liz planning on writing a second part??? I hope so!!
Indeed, I really enjoyed the way Liz flipped the trope here. I believe she is but I'm not 100% positive. You cant rush art however so we must all wait patiently. I'm looking forward to what occurs next
If someone tried to force me to feed like that then they would need a crowbar to get me off. Also, how did he pacify me at the lead-in? Did he hold a cross to me?
Lol I have my ways. Mwhahahah. And in the script I believe it said ku-thunk sound and sound of a body, metal, and wood hitting the floor so I believe you were bashed in the head
Tip: listen to this while drinking tea, preferable something red, oddly adds to the immersion lol. Also I only found out this was scripted later because I’m never read the links in the description and I honestly never would have if I hadn’t been specifically told under another comment! He sounds so comfortable with it I just assumed it was his own writing. I know I can’t work off a script without at least a week of prep if I’m not the one who wrote it, but then again he’s super talented.
Lol that a pretty good idea with the tea. I'm happy to hear that I sound convincing and not like I'm reading off a script. I find that script reading can sometimes break the immersion the artist is trying to create so I'm grateful to hear that didnt happen here. I try my best to get into character and throw in a little improv to make it feel natural.
@@lem0n_juice397 i probably will now and thank you so much. I hope I can maintain creating good content that is enjoyed. Part 2 is currently in the wings and we must all be patient for it
How am I just now finding this channel?? I always say that the mark of a good story asmrtist is how well they can pull off the vampire trope, and you really sold it! Fantastic work, you've earned another subscriber!
Awww thanks so much for your kind words! Liz is the mastermind behind this audio though. I'm only three voice actor. Welcome to the Crew though! I'm glad you liked the video!
This is totally awesome! I love it when people flip the tropes around because the results are always so new and refreshing! A yandere human x vampire listener?! Holy moly, when I saw this I *knew* I had to hear this for myself and I wasn't disappointed at all. Keep up the great work! I hope you’ll make more cool videos like this because we don't get enough creature listener videos.
I'm very happy to hear you liked the audio and were not disappointed! Liz did and amazing job with this audio. I really enjoy it when tropes get flipped aswell and when the listener is the creature, which is one of the things I loved when I read this script. I will do my best to maintain or improve the quality of my videos! Thank you very much for your kind comment!
Him all the time : you can’t just starve that’s not your nature Me : YES I CAN him : no- Me : do you know Stefan Salvatore ?? Him looking confused Me : he did the same ! So SHUT UP🤣
I imagine the listener is crying becuase their drink from Adonis’ wrist was actually an attempt to quickly drain him, and when it failed they realized there was likely no way to escape, so the line “Aww, don’t whimper. I’ll be back soon !” Makes me think of that one drew gooden clip; “babe, don’t cry. He can’t hurt you anymore! ........wait are you cryin go about _me_ ??” LMAOO
@DankDabi practice , my friends and I in high school used to go to the pool together in summer. We used to see how long we could hold our breaths lol I’m still the champ at 3 mins , my friends still are at 1 min lol
Agreed! Liz made a fantastic story and I'm really having a blast with it. When I read the script I was blown away and super excited to voice act it. I love trope flips
Not that I am the creator or commissioner, but I want to share a couple thoughts. I simply adore this audio! I am particularly fond of the use of sound effects. The rummaging around for the potion sound really fills out the scene and the bit itself makes the character very believable, as if he had prepared for a bunch of possible situations, but was not sure which it was going to end up being, so his bag was unorganized. I cannot get over the bit where the character is out of breath. It is the best acted, paced, and most expressive bit of audio I may have ever heard. I have never heard that kind of thing get nailed so precisely. Superb voice acting, again, adds some very human depth to the character. I think that the running opening itself is pretty well done, but I can see where some people would prefer a shorter version. For me, I felt like the footstep sounds were a good length for adding a sense of tension. I also like a little bigger in an audio between the beginning and the start of the talking. I tend to listen at night and it takes a moment to get all settled after pressing play. The breathing sound effect is a great concept, but I personally find the transition a bit jarring and I can't stop hearing the loop in it. As for the content itself, I have only one minor criticism, and I honestly had to kind of reach for even that. On occasion, I am a little lost as to what exactly characters are doing. For example, when the listener is in the manor, it sounds like silver chains are being added in some way, but I get a little confused because the sound effect is quite short and I'm a little unclear as to how they were added in a meaningful way. I understand a little imagination is needed for RP, but it takes me out of it if something happens, and I have to do an evaluation of the rest of the scene setting to come up with what exactly did just happen. Again, this is a very minor criticism and something that in no way really sours the experience. Lastly, the listener being made to eat or drink forcefully really just hits me hard. I'm not sure how other people feel, but it is a very disempowering feeling for the listener. Which is exactly what I came for. And the fact that it is done TWICE and each time is a totally different situation and feeling, makes it so very effective for me. I apologize for the length, but I really wanted to add my two cents. Do with it what you will as a creator/creators. TL;DR: lots of praise for voice acting, writing, SFX, and content. Minor criticism of some specifics of scene setting and initial opening audio mixing. Scary vibes. Please scare me more. Edit: also thanks for not making this roleplay implicitly sexual in any way. People are way too thirsty. It's honestly nice to not have that vibe specifically included. I like having the option to add or subtract any subtext in my own head.
This is awesome feed back and I really appreciate you sharing! This kind of feedback helps me become a better content creator and gives me areas to work on. For the bag rummaging I actually used my backpack and just put it close to the mic. For the rest of the sound affects I had nothing to create them with so I added them in and that's kinda why they may not fit as well as they should. This was my first time adding sound affects on this kind of scale and amount, so it was a learning experience. There are definitely parts that I agree I could have done better like the running sequence transitioning into the listener's breathing heavy. I'm glad you enjoyed the Audio and I thank you for providing such great feedback. I'm glad to hear I nailed the human's heavy breathing, I just mimicked how I sound after a heavy workout. And yeah I doubt I'll ever do any sexualized content as I would feel uncomfortable and just awkward. Kissing sounds are already weird to do as is lol
@@KuraiYamino I agree and I look forward to making more of this series. Part 2's script is being created I believe but it will be ready when it's ready. Thank you very much and I will do my best to keep up or improve the quality of my content.
This is great. O.o Are you planning on maiking a part 2? I was thinking, since the yandere said they couldn't be the only food source for the vampire (us, listeners), would they kidnap other humans? I think that would be an interesting thing to include in the story.
Thanks so much! I had alot of fun with this video. And I look forward to finding out the answer to your question myself. A part 2 is in the works and I am definitely going to voice it when the script is done.
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 no it’s from JOJO. It’s the stand that can stop time th-cam.com/video/zpzELKy3lMg/w-d-xo.html. The one in DBZ Kai is a Jojo reference
Yeah being a vampire would be pretty cool. And I have to chain you up and make you drink blood cause you refuse to do it on your own. Have to take care of you afterall lol.
Thank you very much. And I absolutely agree, it was such a blast to read the script and it was so much fun to make. I look forward to what happens next as well.
Thank you very much! I'm glad to hear that. Miss Liz controls this storyline and we all have to be patient until it is finished. But I will absolutely make one when I get it.
I hope you enjoyed it! Yeah apparently he didnt like being compared to my channel and asked I give him credit for the video (which I'm not gonna do cause i had never even heard of his channel till he contacted me). Miss Liz gave me this script and requested I do it and she was the one who gave it to the other guy originally as well.
@@mushroomkaat2667 yeah he came across that way to me as well. He hasnt responded back to me since I gave him my response. 🤷♂️ not my problem if he is unhappy. He even posted in the comments of his video saying he had the script first to prove that he didnt copy me cause apparently alot of people were saying in his video he copied me lol. I looked at the comment section and didnt see any comments of the sort so I think he deleted them but I could be wrong 🤷♂️
Awww that's awesome to hear! Yeah Liz made one heck of a story! I'm very glad it keeps you entertained. Part 3 will be coming when it's ready so have no fear
Him: you still have to breathe... so if ill just- Block your airflow like that you will have to open your mouth Me: jokes on you! Breathes throught teeth*
I believe part 2 is being made but I have no control over it as Miss Liz is the creator of this amazing storyline. I am merely thr voice. But I hope we get a part 2 aswell
Nonsense! I know everything you need! You need me to take care of you cause you wont! What you want does not outweigh what you need! Lol thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it
I can take care of myself,sir. But, since im stuck here with you ill drink when you force me. I dont think i have a choicd in the matter. Ill just slowly wait it out until I have enough strength to get away. As long as i dont develop stockholms syndrome first. I WILL escape mark my words!
Aa, you guys have been so sweet in these comments!
Ranger..
I AM SHOOK. The talent is ✨ immaculate ✨.
The way you brought Adonis to life is incredible!
Hnnn, I love it so much, honestly.
The only thing I’d say is that the beginning running sequence was a little long for me- the best way to do those is to either make more happen in the sequence beside the running effects, or to make it like “stepstepstepthump” as a quick transition, if that makes sense.
Although it may be just my impatience to hear you read it, haha.
In any case... this definitely exceeded my expectations. And if anyone is wondering...
yes, a part two has been written. 👀
I’m so glad everyone liked this script! My thought was that in normal yandere videos, you’re helpless and weak. But what if you’re supposed to be so much stronger and yet you still cannot do anything? I felt this feeling of helplessness would, like, increase tenfold this way and I wanted to test it. I’m happy to say that it worked! I could feel our character’s anger- the “istg i should be able to pummel this hoe but I can’t m o v e” feeling really got to me.
Sorry for the long comment, folks, I’m just ecstatic to be the one to show off the sheer talent in this video hehe
To be able to take words on a page and give them so much life- the stuttering and the way you could hear Adonis’s actions in how he reacted- is a gift, and I’m so excited to hear more from you, Ranger.
thank you for giving my script a chance! I can’t wait to hear your next video.
And thank you all for listening.
Cheers!
I am super uber happy to hear you approved of and enjoyed this Audio Liz! I'm very happy I was able to being to life the character you wanted Adonis to be. Thank you for your feedback about the running sequence aswell, I'll endeavor to improve that sort of thing for future audios. I'm still learning and feedback like this helps me. I'm very excited for part 2 as this was so much fun to do! 👍🤗❤
That's a long comment
i hope dearly that you write a continuation because i want more than anything in the world for the listener to rip this guy apart
I’m so so excited you’ve written part 2! You’re writing and other works are just so fantastic and I ADORE them ❤️❤️ His wonderful voice and your amazing writing go hand in hand, and I’m so excited to see what you tWo come up with, thanks again for the fabulous script and wonderful voice acting you Two!
@@neckbackcripplinganxietyattack yEs! thank you so much
“Oh don’t freak out, your just chained” ah thanks man, now I’m calm.
I know, it's my way with words lol. I have a calming effect 😂😂
"It pains me to see you hurt yourself"
**puts me in stinging chains**
Lol My methods may be flawed but my intentions are noble. I cant let you get away and continue neglecting yourself.
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 the irony
Bruh
@@Iminlovewiththeshapeofyo Hi Shoto
@@Chaos_Toille heyy:)
“I’ve been watching you for a while, vampire” Oh so I’m a vampire now? Okay, Rawr
And I've been watching you long enough to know you would do that to lol
Rawwwwrrrrr
Oh ok ok ok ok....RaWr 😸
Rawr~
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 did you know rawr in dinosaur means I love you
Step one: pretend to be loyal and what not
Step two: ask specifically for his blood
Step three: drink a bit too much on “accident” (excuse? His blood is specifically addictive)
Step four: wait for him to fall asleep and rip out his throat
Step five: sell off the objects in the manor and move to a different country
Step six: get kidnapped again because at this point I’ve been kidnapped within a year of escaping 😂
Sorry but you missed the step of, happily follow orders and spend eternity with this human.
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 wait wait wait, how can I spend ETERNITY with a MORTAL???
@@gergyta9211 lol I'll always been I'm your heart
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 uuuhhhhh, alright mr. Yandere, thanks for being a voice in my head ❤️
@@gergyta9211 ofcourse, it's my pleasure 🤗😊
This certainly is the double edged sword situation for both Yandere and the Vampire. As both can easily kill the opposite party given any clear opportunity if they want.
Props to Liz for this unique story plot between Yandere and Vampire, and to you captain Ranger, for for voicing the story, making the script to be alive.
It is indeed a very dangerous situation and I cant wait to see how it plays out. I think the yandere has a bit of an advantage since the vampire is already caught and has been blood starved for a long time now. Liz did an amazing job and I hope there is a part 2 to do.
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 Yes, Captain Ranger I agree with you.
But it's to be noted, as long as the Yandere doesn't give enough blood for the Vampire to the point where they can completely regain their Inhuman powers, I think the Yandere will still be safe, considering the Yandere already has safety precautions in mind since he spied the Vampire for so long. It's like trying to tame and control a wild beast.
"You haven't eaten in a year"
Me : AND I'LL WAIT A THOOOUUUSSSSANNNDDD MOREE-
wait this isn't a musical-
Lol most of the only songs I know are sea shanties I'm afraid and they wont fit the context 😂
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 We gotta get this mans a ship-
@@BrianMcBrianson lmao
Him: don’t panic your just chained
Me: oh that’s fine, only Chained. no need to worry
Indeed, completely safe and I got the most comfortable chains I could find for you 😁
*holds up a cross even though its burning the crap out of me*
I'm a vampire now....
I didnt think I could even be turned into one.....
Dont worry, I'll make sure you are well taken care of my little blood drinker. Lol
I was already one to begin with.
Stays in, sleeps in the morning, likes the taste of blood, and has sharp teeth✔
I think I was a vampire to begin with
Lol we appear to have many vampires in here now
@@lavenderfair9636 same :)
I love the aspect of a pacifist vampire, it's rare abe brings a unique situation to where on could be in a very weird kind of right as it would literally be like watching someone not eat for a while.
Yeah I love this idea and this storyline in general. I love trope flips and/or alters and so am looking forward to more of this series
"Dont freak out your just chained"
Ok im very calm now
Excellent lol! I'm glad you are calm
Alternative title: sociopath kidnaps you to lecture you on self care, also you’re a vampire
Indeed. Self care is very important. Even for a vampire
how unfair this guy I swear I may not want to drink blood but this guy is another story
Now now dont be difficult my lovely lol. Just kidding
Hey nice joke
and let me go I don't like being chained to chairs cause this is far from my first getting kidnapped but it is my first time getting kidnapped as a vampire by a yandere
@@real_izurukamukura5483 oh aye but tis also the first time you have ever been kidnapped by me! Mwhahahahahha
well that's true this was two new kidnappings for me
I just found this on my recommended and it was interesting. I don't think I have seen an ASMR like this when it comes to the vampire type. You did a fantastic job and have gained a new subscriber :)
Thank you very much and welcome to the Crew lol. I really liked Liz's flip on the vampire asmr type and is one of the reasons I really wanted to do this script. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 It was awesome and you did a fantastic job :)
This new and I never heard this situation before
Yeah I dont think I have either. That's one of the reasons I loved this script and wanted to do it
pulls out gloc "how the turn has tables" shoots myself
Mental note: make sure I remove all firearms from my love when the wake up lol
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 GOD DAMN IT wait I’ll just find one when I escape 🐸✋😂
🤣🤣🤣 hmm oh yes how they have lol
@@amaneyugi6352 lol then you will never find one. Cause you will never escape mwhahahahah
@@bereaux94 lol indeed. All according to plan
I’m a vampire now....
Ight bet ima go hunter👀
Lol you probably are, but you seem to be neglecting that hunting and starving yourself
I can imagine how we're so confused because this HUMAN has tracked us down and captured us. Not to kill us for being a vampire! No. To love us which would completely bamboozle me.
Lol people do crazy things for love. And I cant wait to see how this series continues. Hopefully a whole lot of snuggles.
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 yesh 😌✨
@@eleanormcarthur9072 🤗
Verry good twist. I can see why you choose Liz's script.
Indeed, I really enjoyed the idea for it and had fun making it
This, this is wonderful. I always enjoy audios that flip tropes on its head and this is an excellent example. Keep up the creative work!
Thank you and I absolutely agree with you. I love audios that surprise the audience with a trope flip
Is it weird the way that my teeth are naturally formed, that it makes me look like I have fangs?-
I've got a little bit of that myself, as does my dad. I say its darn cool
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 I’d say it’s cool to! It’s a rare feature. At least, that’s what I have heard
@@starpupilsx indeed I've heard the same thing. I make my cousins laugh all the time when I give them the vampire grin
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 Same! Instead, my parents always laugh at my school photos, but in a good way!
@@starpupilsx nice lol.
This is an amazing story line. A part two would be nice, but you do you.
Have a great morning, afternoon, night, or whatever it may be.
I agree. I'm very curious to see where this goes aswell and am looking forward to it. I do not control the script in this case however so part 2 is in the hands of Miss Liz. I hope you have a pleasant day, morning, afternoon, or night aswell 👍
6:23 The yandere: don't panic, you're just chained!
Me: *yeah nice. JUST funking chained*
Indeed! Just chained. Nothing for you to get upset over or panicked about. You are complete safe
What a cool twist on the vampire and yandere tropes! I don't think I've ever heard an audio quite like this. Is Liz planning on writing a second part??? I hope so!!
Indeed, I really enjoyed the way Liz flipped the trope here. I believe she is but I'm not 100% positive. You cant rush art however so we must all wait patiently. I'm looking forward to what occurs next
If someone tried to force me to feed like that then they would need a crowbar to get me off. Also, how did he pacify me at the lead-in? Did he hold a cross to me?
Lol I have my ways. Mwhahahah. And in the script I believe it said ku-thunk sound and sound of a body, metal, and wood hitting the floor so I believe you were bashed in the head
Wow, instant subscription. You, good sir, paint a vivid picture. This was so unique and refreshing! Thank you!
Thank you very much and welcome to the Crew! I really enjoyed the script and making this video and I'm glad others enjoy it aswell!
Tip: listen to this while drinking tea, preferable something red, oddly adds to the immersion lol. Also I only found out this was scripted later because I’m never read the links in the description and I honestly never would have if I hadn’t been specifically told under another comment! He sounds so comfortable with it I just assumed it was his own writing. I know I can’t work off a script without at least a week of prep if I’m not the one who wrote it, but then again he’s super talented.
Lol that a pretty good idea with the tea. I'm happy to hear that I sound convincing and not like I'm reading off a script. I find that script reading can sometimes break the immersion the artist is trying to create so I'm grateful to hear that didnt happen here. I try my best to get into character and throw in a little improv to make it feel natural.
Just found your channel in recommendation and I wasn't dissapointed
I'm very grateful to hear that! Welcome to the Crew 👍🏴☠️
Now, this is epic
Agreed! And I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Me: sitting here listening to this
TOKYO GHOUL VIDES HELLO!
Lol I dont think I know that one. Might have to check it out later. 👍
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 OMG you so should P.S. I am a really big fan of you and your audio THANKS SO MUCH
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 and you should make a part 2! That is if you can!
@@lem0n_juice397 i probably will now and thank you so much. I hope I can maintain creating good content that is enjoyed.
Part 2 is currently in the wings and we must all be patient for it
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 yes sir I will be patient I promise
Woah this is really good! It’s so nice listening to something different!
I'm very happy to hear you feel that way! I couldn't agree more and it's one of the reasons I wanted to do this script so much
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 it’s so cool! You earned a new sub!
@@aperolwolfproductions5067 aww thank you! Welcome to the Crew!
How am I just now finding this channel?? I always say that the mark of a good story asmrtist is how well they can pull off the vampire trope, and you really sold it! Fantastic work, you've earned another subscriber!
Awww thanks so much for your kind words! Liz is the mastermind behind this audio though. I'm only three voice actor. Welcome to the Crew though! I'm glad you liked the video!
Yay one of the first people to see this :) love it
Lol congrats and thank you very much. I hope you enjoy it and have a wonderful evening or day!
This is totally awesome! I love it when people flip the tropes around because the results are always so new and refreshing! A yandere human x vampire listener?! Holy moly, when I saw this I *knew* I had to hear this for myself and I wasn't disappointed at all. Keep up the great work! I hope you’ll make more cool videos like this because we don't get enough creature listener videos.
I'm very happy to hear you liked the audio and were not disappointed! Liz did and amazing job with this audio. I really enjoy it when tropes get flipped aswell and when the listener is the creature, which is one of the things I loved when I read this script. I will do my best to maintain or improve the quality of my videos! Thank you very much for your kind comment!
Him all the time : you can’t just starve that’s not your nature
Me : YES I CAN
him : no-
Me : do you know Stefan Salvatore ??
Him looking confused
Me : he did the same ! So SHUT UP🤣
Tsk tsk tsk. But he wasnt the love of my life and responsibility. You are
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 I WANT PART 3 and PART 4🥲
I imagine the listener is crying becuase their drink from Adonis’ wrist was actually an attempt to quickly drain him, and when it failed they realized there was likely no way to escape, so the line
“Aww, don’t whimper. I’ll be back soon !”
Makes me think of that one drew gooden clip; “babe, don’t cry. He can’t hurt you anymore! ........wait are you cryin go about _me_ ??” LMAOO
He was preparing for awhile. He probably knows the tricks and has counters for them
Him: "breathing heavely"
Me: out off breath bruh out of breath bruh get some breath bruh (i know it doen't make sense)
Lol I had to run down a vampire, you would be out of breath to.
I know i just realized😐😥
@@wikibutprefersam8118 lmao
Oh cool, that's different. Nice!
Well played.
Thank you, I thought it's a super cool idea aswell and hope there is more to come
I can hold my breath for 3 minutes 😈,even in pain 😂. I feel like I’m in danger though 😅😅
Hehehe but can you hold your breath for 3min and 1 second? 😏 let's find out
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 never tested it .. but I like a challenge 😂
@@jessicles23 lmao best of luck 😂👍
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 lol ty 😂
@DankDabi practice , my friends and I in high school used to go to the pool together in summer. We used to see how long we could hold our breaths lol I’m still the champ at 3 mins , my friends still are at 1 min lol
Oh my god this is such a great take on reverse roles! I’m loving the human being yandere instead of the all powerful vampire!
Agreed! Liz made a fantastic story and I'm really having a blast with it. When I read the script I was blown away and super excited to voice act it. I love trope flips
Not that I am the creator or commissioner, but I want to share a couple thoughts. I simply adore this audio! I am particularly fond of the use of sound effects. The rummaging around for the potion sound really fills out the scene and the bit itself makes the character very believable, as if he had prepared for a bunch of possible situations, but was not sure which it was going to end up being, so his bag was unorganized.
I cannot get over the bit where the character is out of breath. It is the best acted, paced, and most expressive bit of audio I may have ever heard. I have never heard that kind of thing get nailed so precisely. Superb voice acting, again, adds some very human depth to the character. I think that the running opening itself is pretty well done, but I can see where some people would prefer a shorter version. For me, I felt like the footstep sounds were a good length for adding a sense of tension. I also like a little bigger in an audio between the beginning and the start of the talking. I tend to listen at night and it takes a moment to get all settled after pressing play.
The breathing sound effect is a great concept, but I personally find the transition a bit jarring and I can't stop hearing the loop in it.
As for the content itself, I have only one minor criticism, and I honestly had to kind of reach for even that. On occasion, I am a little lost as to what exactly characters are doing. For example, when the listener is in the manor, it sounds like silver chains are being added in some way, but I get a little confused because the sound effect is quite short and I'm a little unclear as to how they were added in a meaningful way. I understand a little imagination is needed for RP, but it takes me out of it if something happens, and I have to do an evaluation of the rest of the scene setting to come up with what exactly did just happen. Again, this is a very minor criticism and something that in no way really sours the experience.
Lastly, the listener being made to eat or drink forcefully really just hits me hard. I'm not sure how other people feel, but it is a very disempowering feeling for the listener. Which is exactly what I came for. And the fact that it is done TWICE and each time is a totally different situation and feeling, makes it so very effective for me.
I apologize for the length, but I really wanted to add my two cents. Do with it what you will as a creator/creators.
TL;DR: lots of praise for voice acting, writing, SFX, and content. Minor criticism of some specifics of scene setting and initial opening audio mixing. Scary vibes. Please scare me more.
Edit: also thanks for not making this roleplay implicitly sexual in any way. People are way too thirsty. It's honestly nice to not have that vibe specifically included. I like having the option to add or subtract any subtext in my own head.
This is awesome feed back and I really appreciate you sharing! This kind of feedback helps me become a better content creator and gives me areas to work on. For the bag rummaging I actually used my backpack and just put it close to the mic. For the rest of the sound affects I had nothing to create them with so I added them in and that's kinda why they may not fit as well as they should. This was my first time adding sound affects on this kind of scale and amount, so it was a learning experience. There are definitely parts that I agree I could have done better like the running sequence transitioning into the listener's breathing heavy. I'm glad you enjoyed the Audio and I thank you for providing such great feedback. I'm glad to hear I nailed the human's heavy breathing, I just mimicked how I sound after a heavy workout.
And yeah I doubt I'll ever do any sexualized content as I would feel uncomfortable and just awkward. Kissing sounds are already weird to do as is lol
Him: I'll cover your nose
Me: I'll claw your hand
I'll handcuff you to restrain your arms.
“If I cut off your air flow you’ll have to open your mouth~”
Me: no. I shalth suffocate. *insert large intake of breath* oh shit.
Beel? Why..
@@ligma-qt8rq reasons….
@@twigsnsprigs5637🤨📸📷
@@ligma-qt8rq :)
@@twigsnsprigs5637 i can't- 😭
Omg I love this :) pls do a pt 2 if u can
Glad to hear it! And part 2 will depend on Miss Liz as this is her creation. I'm just the voice
I loved the unique story line in the ASMR and the video in general. This is a masterpiece 👏🏻👍
Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it!👍
Us: we haven’t done anything wrong!
Him: I know this, and I love you
Indeed. But I need to protect you
This is a very cool yandere story this needs a part two 😍 it's nice to have something fresh and not the same yandere story's
I'm very happy to hear you say that and I 100% agree with you. I really enjoy this as well and hope there is more to come.
WOWOW WHAT CREATIVE IDEA
I LOVE THAT❤️❤️❤️❤️👁️👄👁️🍾
Me to! I really loved the idea behind the script aswell as the script itself and I hope it continues to surprise us all
Him:I told you we're home
Me:oh,so we're back in the 12 foot deep hole underground😶
You bet your booty we are. Just not yours but in mine.
Adonis:iv'e been watching you for awhile vampire
Azel(shapeshifter):see your not wrong but your not right
Well atleast I'm not wrong. But I'm pretty sure I'm right
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 your not right trust me
@@sanguis. lol
13th like and before 80 views. This is an amazing audio and script. This is incredible. Keep up the amazing work!
Lol congrats there early bird 😂. I really enjoyed this script aswell and hope I get to do more of it
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 a second part /series would be amazing. But that is always up to the creator. Stay safe and keep creating amazing content.
@@KuraiYamino I agree and I look forward to making more of this series. Part 2's script is being created I believe but it will be ready when it's ready. Thank you very much and I will do my best to keep up or improve the quality of my content.
knife: *shing*
me: *terrified screaming without opening my mouth*
Oh you'll scream for me hehehe
*more terrified screaming*
@@HereForTheCake mwhahahaha music to my ears
i would scream more but my throat hurts now 😔
@@HereForTheCake awww sorry to hear that. Here drink this it will help with your sore throat hehe
I feel like I’m being kidnapped by Hiccup and the Jokers child 😂 I LOVE IT!!
Lol oh my gosh! I've been told I sound like hiccup before but the joker is new and I love it! 😂 thanks for the laugh! I'm glad you liked the audio!
REJECT YOUR HUMANITY JOJO!!!
omg yes
Lmao nice.
Omg I love this! 🤣
The audience is amazing and I personally love the story sooo much its very unique!!plz make a part 2 if u can:)
Yeah I am enjoying the story aswell and cant wait to find out where it goes from here
When I see part 2 in my email I shall happily make it lol
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 Same lol
Ok Thank u for that"
@@decide6396 my pleasure
This is great. O.o Are you planning on maiking a part 2?
I was thinking, since the yandere said they couldn't be the only food source for the vampire (us, listeners), would they kidnap other humans? I think that would be an interesting thing to include in the story.
Thanks so much! I had alot of fun with this video. And I look forward to finding out the answer to your question myself. A part 2 is in the works and I am definitely going to voice it when the script is done.
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 I can't wait! ^^
Oh god I can actually feel his breath on my ears 0.o
Edit:you make one hell of a scary human
Cause I'm standing right behind you heheheheh. Jk jk
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 0.o scaryy
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 😁
@@esperanzagonzales39 lol yes fear me.
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 love the part two 😁😁😁😁
I got to admit that this audio is awesome I love it :D
Glad to hear it! I'm very happy to see how much enjoyment is being given to this audio!
Jeez your voice really reminds me of some anime character just can't tell who 🤔🤔
Lol thank you! If you figure it out please let me know.
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 oh your voice reminds me of the japanese version of kakashi btw love the vid! 😄
@@jedi_dikbuik1805 oh very awesome! Now is that Kakashi from Naruto or another Kakashi? I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed the audio!
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 yup kakashi from naruto (the japanese voice of kakashi)
@@jedi_dikbuik1805 sweet lol! He is one of my favorite characters so I feel very honored at your words 😊
0:37 you gave me a fucking heart attack
( f*cking )
Lol sorry about that. I guess that's one way to knock out a vampire though hehe
Him: I've been watching you
Me: Creep
📸 im watching you vampire, always watching 📹 lol
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 caught in 4k man 📸 ,we have the cyborg police on the way now
@@Ghostorchid-z7u lol the cyborg police never fail
Him: Puts on silver chains
Me: Unphased Oh you thought this would work? FALSE
Him: Nani?
Well they should still be strong enough to hold a weak vampire like you. Problem still solved
STANDO POWAH.
ZA WAURDO. *Dubstep fart*
*Escapes into the night*
Isnt Za Waurdo from dragon ball z Kai? Lol
You can try to run but you just wear yourself making it easier for me to capture you when I find you again!
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 no it’s from JOJO. It’s the stand that can stop time th-cam.com/video/zpzELKy3lMg/w-d-xo.html. The one in DBZ Kai is a Jojo reference
@@ARandomCustodian ah I gotcha. I only know it as a DBZ Kai line. Thank you for enlightening me
Another jojo reference-
I’ve always wanted to be a vampire 🥰 but why must you chain me up and force me to drink you’re blood 🥺 I do not want that..
Yeah being a vampire would be pretty cool. And I have to chain you up and make you drink blood cause you refuse to do it on your own. Have to take care of you afterall lol.
But the blood thirst never goes away it doesn’t matter how much I’m drinking...so why Starting
@@shadowriter0820 because my heart cant take you neglecting yourself this way lol
❤️❤️❤️Congratulations on 400 subscribers ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you! It seems like its flying and I'm kinda surprised actually
Congrats on 1k subs
@@Iifeinparis thank you very much!
1:23 thought my headphones were dying
No that was just my headset being crap. And I move my body when I do the audios and I think I bumped the mic
Hunan, grunting
subtitles, music
I apologize that I dont understand 😔
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 allow me to translate
,a human grunting
,*transcript /subtitles* ah yes music
@@Ghostorchid-z7u lmao sorry I dont have any translations on my videos
we NEED a part 2, this video is so good
Indeed but I will wait patiently for it to be ready
Can’t wait till he finds out I’m a dragon. I mean I do consume flesh and have similar strengths but there is a difference.
Wait you are a dragon?! Well this effects my plan... but not by much hehe
Soo GOOOD! Lovedd itt!
Stoked to hear it! Thank you!
I love all of your videos ❤ keep the great work !!!!!! 😚😚
It warms my heart to hear that 🤗. I plan on doing this for a while yet so I hope my audios hold your approval or get even better 👍
Really enjoyed this! It was a good spin on the yandere and vampire role play genre can’t wait to see if there’s a part 2
Thank you very much. And I absolutely agree, it was such a blast to read the script and it was so much fun to make. I look forward to what happens next as well.
Omg I love this !!!!!! Thank you❤❤❤
I'm happy to hear it and thank YOU! 🤗
The young ( relatively ) pureblood had felt something he thought he never could... fear complete and utter fear
Hehehe I can smell it in the air.
Found a new favorite channel
Me: yup
Awesome work and hope for a part 2
Aww thank you very much! And welcome to the Crew! I really hope for a part 2 aswell! I had a blast doing this script
I was listening to music that helps me fall asleep and I wake up listening to this - 👀
Lol excellent. I hope it was nice to wake up to
There has to be another part of this... I love this❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
So do I and I hope there will be more but the only part I control is how I voice the character. This script plotline is not in my hands.
Him: it stings doesn't it
Me: NAH 😃
Damn plan B I guess.
Oh, how the tables have turned... 😂
Indeed, have to be careful of tables. You never know what way they may flip lol
Id love to see a part 2 if there is one cuase this is real good man! ^-^
Thank you very much! I'm glad to hear that. Miss Liz controls this storyline and we all have to be patient until it is finished. But I will absolutely make one when I get it.
I just finished listening and this is wonderful I love it😊
I'm very grateful to hear that! Thank you 🤗
Oh dam , iv heard one other TH-camr make a video with this script. Interesting running into it again :3
I hope you enjoyed it!
Yeah apparently he didnt like being compared to my channel and asked I give him credit for the video (which I'm not gonna do cause i had never even heard of his channel till he contacted me). Miss Liz gave me this script and requested I do it and she was the one who gave it to the other guy originally as well.
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 dam , he sounds like a dick ngl
@@mushroomkaat2667 yeah he came across that way to me as well. He hasnt responded back to me since I gave him my response. 🤷♂️ not my problem if he is unhappy. He even posted in the comments of his video saying he had the script first to prove that he didnt copy me cause apparently alot of people were saying in his video he copied me lol. I looked at the comment section and didnt see any comments of the sort so I think he deleted them but I could be wrong 🤷♂️
Omg u just earned a new subscriber :) plz make part 2🥺♥️
Thank you and welcome to the Crew! When part 2 has been written I shall happily make it
This is definitely one of my favorite yandere rp videos ever! Been listening to it every night now. Would love for it to be a whole series *winkwink*
Awww that's awesome to hear! Yeah Liz made one heck of a story! I'm very glad it keeps you entertained. Part 3 will be coming when it's ready so have no fear
Hey im not years or days late
Lol nope, you are right on time
Him: you still have to breathe... so if ill just-
Block your airflow like that you will have to open your mouth
Me: jokes on you!
Breathes throught teeth*
Ah but I can also pour the liquid through your teeth 😁😈. Hope it doesn't go down the wrong pipe
POV: A Jimmy Carry impersonator just kidnapped you to his house
Lmao I do love Jim Carry. He is one of my favorite actors and I love doing impressions of his characters.
Him: don't Panic your just chained
Me: **has anxiety** *super sarcastic and panicked voice* oh really I didn't notice!
Oh... well you are indeed chained but you are here with me 😁. Perfectly safe. It's not like some creepy person kidnapped you or something
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 who's gonna tell him,not me
@@Ghostorchid-z7u tell who what?
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 "your basically ,a unhinged psychopath,yandere "
me getting twiighlight vibes
Lol, how dare you! This is a better love story than Twilight! Jk jk 😂
xD ik it really is xD
@@EX-DEN lol thank you for your kind words 🤗
When you said "well my dear" and a few lines after that you sounded like Johnny Depp as Willy Wonka
Lol awesome! I love Johnny Depp and am a huge fan of his acting so this warmed my heart. Thank you 😁
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 Johnny is my FAVORITE actor, his performances are one in a million, keep up the great audios!!! ❤🥰😁
@@sapphireparcival5428 I agree, infact I'm actually watching the Lone Ranger with Johnny Depp as I write this lol. I'll do my best
Me who is starving and has not eaten since yesterday:
Also me: yeah one more video
Lol I hope you got food after the video
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 I did
@@angxlicrose1812 excellent 👍👍
@@angxlicrose1812 you were starving yourself just like in the ASMR
@@lauratinalara1882 yes I was
The way you breathed in the beginning 😫
What did it bother you or something? Trying to make him sound out of breath. He just chased down a vampire
Wow this is so realistic
Lol glad to hear you think so
Holy shit this is amazing and is story/rp material. Absolutely love it and I have it saved now
Awww nice! I'm glad you enjoyed the audio! Liz made a great story for sure
once again rewatching this kajdjdk
I'm glad it has rewatchability lol
“I said stay still”
I... still... haven’t... gotten... enough... exercise! (Breaks free)
You've had enough for today!!
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 NO!!!
@@hutao7917 you havent been hydrating enough!
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 you’re right... hydrate or diedrate
@@hutao7917 mhmm
I really like the idea of this video I hope you’re making a part 2 if not that’s fine too
I believe part 2 is being made but I have no control over it as Miss Liz is the creator of this amazing storyline. I am merely thr voice. But I hope we get a part 2 aswell
I have never heard the end of this audio. I'm always asleep by the feeding bit
Lmao glad it helps you fall asleep so fast
let me go! You dont know what i want! Just leave me be! PS.-Great audio btw! ^_^
Nonsense! I know everything you need! You need me to take care of you cause you wont! What you want does not outweigh what you need!
Lol thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it
I can take care of myself,sir. But, since im stuck here with you ill drink when you force me. I dont think i have a choicd in the matter. Ill just slowly wait it out until I have enough strength to get away. As long as i dont develop stockholms syndrome first. I WILL escape mark my words!
@@astridwarrior9558 consider them marked. I guess I'll need to quicken my efforts for the Stockholm syndrome to kick in lol
Hey psst Ive only known your voice for 15 minutes so far but i love you already
Lol thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the audio and my voice. 😂 lots of love right back at you for leaving an entertaining comment
@@rangerpirateaudio9514 awe thank you!