IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 SAMPLE ANSWER | Band 9 | Chart + Table
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- Check out this full Band 9 sample answer to an IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 topic reported in one of the recent exams (a line graph + table).
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00:00 Task 1 Academic sample
00:31 Task: chart and table
03:20 Task 1 structure
04:54 Introduction
06:40 Overview
09:20 Body paragraph 1
12:17 Body paragraph 2
14:49 Full sample answer
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Task 1 word limit how much plz reply
@@simrandeepsingh6999 150 words minimum
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Hello. Thanks for the videos and PDFs. Unfortunately, this link is not working for me. Could you please look into it?
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Hello Asiya. I scored overall 7 band with just one week of preparation. I had my exam scheduled on 2 February 2022. Your videos helped me gain confidence and achieve success. Thank you so much :)
Hello could you tell me please what kind of topic did you get for the second task?
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i will have mine in 7jan and i started feel so nervous after i booked. How was it ?
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Hi, Thanks for the subjects you bring to us all of them are quite useful. I am preparing myself for the exam next week. Hope i can score a 7 band overall.
Thank you Asiya for your tutorial. I wrote my IELTS academic on the 9th of July, 2022, in Nigeria and I had a 7.5 band score. I followed your approach to answer my task one. I had a 7 in writing. I'm so shocked. Thank you so much. It was multiple pie charts that came out in the Task one of the writing test.
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thanks asiya! i got overall 7 with writing= 7 as well as reading=7 by just viewing ur videos for 2 days before my exams as i couldnot do much prep coz of covid!
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thank you for this video. it really helped me alot
Dear Asyia, I’m a fan of your videos and I thank you so much for all the free material you provide!
Last month I tried the Ielts Academic, unfortunately I didn’t get the result I was hoping: my writing was marked 6,5 (I needed at least a band 7 in every part) and I will need to retake the exam.
I was a little surprised by writing task 1: 2 maps to compare. I did my best implementing the usual structure but I think this affected my performance and I missed the required band for just half a mark.
Would you be so kind to show us a sample answer for this type of task? I would be so grateful to you!
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Keep doing the nice work.
I love the way you explain everything in details
Hi, seeking a review of my attempt from fellow IELTS aspirants:
The line graph illustrates the average number of children born to one woman between 1920 and 2019. The table below shows the average at which woman had their first motherhood in the same time frame as the graph which is 1920-2019. The common trend which can be seen in the graph is that more children were born to a woman in Kazakhstan than a woman in the UK while the table shows that a woman in Kazakhstan had motherhood at an early age compared to their UK counterparts.
Since 1920, there was an upward trend for both groups until 1960 wherein women in Kazakhstan gave birth to around 4.5 children and around 2.7 in the UK. Post that, we see a consistent decline until the late 2000s with a small uptick for Kazakhstan in 2019.
Furthermore, from the table, it is visible that the women in Kazakhstan gave birth to their first child earlier by 1-3 years compared to the woman in the UK. In the year 2019, both groups saw the age for their first motherhood peak with the women in Kazakhstan having their first child at the age of 27.6 and 28.9 the women in the UK.
How much did you score?
Very informative thank you so much ❤️
Thank you so much for the tips
Very helpful video mam thanks for this video
Hi Asia,
Is there any write ups you did relating to “explaining a construction plan of a building or a housing complex “ in academia writing?
Hi,
First I wanted to thank you for your great advices,and then I have a question.
Does writing a conclusion for task1 affect negatively on our score?
Hi Asiya, thank you so much. Your tips really make a difference. I got L-8.5 R- 9 W- 7.5 S-7.5. overall 8
Where you took the exam
@@MEANDMYSELF.... Noida, India
Well done ! Especially in writing section 👍 I wish you all the best in your forthcoming career.
How did u improve your reading???Do consider sharing tips.
Hi
You are great!
Thank you Asiya, because of your insights and IELTS tips I got overall band 8 score.
Splendid 💝
I love it when you say.. Let get started 🤑
I love your style of saying “let’s get started” I look forward to see more videos of yours for this line especially.
I have given my academic test, checked most of your videos and strategies for different tests and used it too. Hopefully, I should get good results, fingers crossed!! Thank you.
What's your result?
God bless you
Thanks that was beneficial ✨
Thank you for task 1 please make videos on task 2 It's really difficult for me
Thank you for the information
Hi, Asiya~!! I wanted to say thank you for all your videos and your guidance. Because of you, I was able to score a 8 band in my exam!! Thank you so much for all your wonderful content ♥️ ♥️
Could you guide me about how to watch her videos ?
Congratulations👏 dear academic or general i have my exam on 17 february any tips for any module pls share.. Just humble request thanks.!
To the people asking for tips, guys just follow Asiya’s videos and learn from her tips!! Also try to solve the IELTS Cambridge books. They’re available on the internet for free, no need to buy them. Good luck!!
@@catilyn9217 thanks
@@arika6964 me too,same question.
Hello maam, greetings,
Can you plz make a video on how to generate ideas for writing task 2. I would appreciate plz plz plz maam
Thank you so much
I don’t know if it was just me but this one was very difficult to manage and make it at a reasonable length
Thankyou so much mam because i get overall 6.5 band in ielts after watching your videos
Thank you ❤a big thank you❤️🔥
Hi Asiya,
I had a question, in graphs like these, contextually speaking, can they be in decimals? Like 1.8 children? 2.7 children? or should we say almost 2 and almost 3?
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Ty for all your work! I scored 8 bands overall with only about 4 days of preparation:)
Listening - 9
Speaking - 7.5
Reading - 9
Writing - 6.5
I'm very grateful to you.
hw u prepared
Can u tell me my exam on 20 Aug
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I scored 9 overall.
How did you get the feedback for speaking and writing?
Thank you 💛 😊 💓
Well explained 😊😊
Nice explaining
Thank you 🇧🇹
Pray for me I watched two videos and figured out her name is Asiya not sasiya 😅
Thank you soo much today i got my exam.
Ur content is always remarkable😇💕 Please make video on punctuation marks in writing, I think we need to know about them so that we can use them correctly while writing essays.
Hello, Asiya! I have followed your guidelines and instructions for my IELTS exam and got a 7.5. Thank you very much for all your contents and videos. ❤❤
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Came to say Thank you got a Band 7
Is it okay to start body paragraph without to begin with or to commence with??
Please make a video on diagram writing task. This video is great mam
Thank you so much for this useful video! There is one thing I'd like to ask though. If I'm not wrong the usage of the phrase "time period" is redundant. I was once corrected by a native speaker friend for this. Wouldn't that lower our score in the writing task? Instead should we rather say "accross all periods"? I'd be super happy if you could clarify, thank you :)
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@@fanil0511 GUJARAT
If we want to write conclusion in task 1 , is it acceptable?
hi guys, I am a bit lost: is this the example for band 9- C2 of the IELTS examination? thanks
How do we handle the questions where there are lot of features or information in the graph?
Hi Asiya I have a question for you that an article as well as a preposition are countable as one word in IELTS Writing tasks 1 & 2?
Hello Asiya. for Introduction I have written...
The chart represents the average number of children's women had in UK and Kazakhstan in between 1920 to 2019 and the table shows the average age of women during the same time period, who become mother for the first time.
Please let me know about this ASAP coz i have exam on 27th Aug
hello i m facing a bit of difficulty in my reading section could you plz guide me
Good work, one doubt there that can we say about children with decimal, I think it should be approx 3-4 instead of 3.5 children
Hello mam g ....
I want to need your help for IELTS reading module
The major issue which I am facing is how to begin the writing task. Could you please help me with it ?
Be wary about placing a comma before respectively if it is located at the end of your sentence.
since Britain is not the same as UK, you think i will lose mark for those things?
Can u make more videos to task 1 pls
Is it necessary to provide conclusion or that is part of overview
Your lectures were a great help.
I would like to get an evaluation on this
The line graph illustrates how many children women gave birth to
on average in the UK and Kazakhstan during the period, 1920 to 2019.
While the tabular chart represents data about the mean age of mothers
when they had their firstborns for the same countries and time intervals.
Over time, there was a decline in the standard birthrate and an uptrend
in the childbearing age in both countries.
On the contrary, the number of children born in Kazakhstan,
that too at a younger age, were more as compared to their UK counterparts.
In the year 1920, the childbirth count per woman was approximately 2 and 4 in the UK and Kazakhstan respectively.
This was followed by a gradual increase for the next four decades reaching its peak in the year 1960, depicting a change of 1 child.
However, the later part of the century was on a downtrend for both nations.
The 21st century was a diverging point as the UK continued on the same trend, whereas a considerable climb was observed in Kazakhstan.
The information in the table tells that birth giving age in Kazakhstani women had been on a constant rise, while that of the Uk had its ups and downs.
Starting at the age of half past 23 and 26 years, reaching up to 27.5 and 29 years for Kazakhstan and UK respectively by 2019.
I have a silly doubt on it, please clear me, could you please elaborate the meaning of introduction sentence? How that sentence constructed and all? I don't get clear meaning of introduction sentence only. Rest of the things are okay for me.
Best
Am shocked I got a 9.0 in speaking 🔊 thanks a lot 🙏
Did you follow any format for speaking or were you just natural, i can speak but my tutors say you are not allowed to speak very informally and you should paraphrase the question give complex data and such, is it true?
Hi Asiya thanks for the tutorial !I have a question about the word limit; does the original IELTS TEST has its own word counter?How could I know that I've reached the optional amount?
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HI Asiya, I have been using some of your tutorials for IELTS preparation. I have an exam on 12 Feb and I am praying that I am going to pass...thank you for your videos, they are helping me a lot.
I also have an IELTS on the same day as yours :3 hope u will get the score you wanted
Hey how did it go?
@@dakkeyk.1885 hi how much you got
Should we write a conclusion paragraph?
But I thought we shouldn't change "line graph" or "the chart and table"?
From your previous videos you write the intro and overview in different paragraphs. Now they are combined in 1, I’m getting confused.
Hi, could you share some tips to keep the word limit under check for questions with two charts, especially where there is a lot to discuss in both charts like this question?
Specifically for this question, don't you think not talking about the increase in average children born to UK women from 2000-2019 and about the decrease in the average age of UK women in 1980 as an anomaly to the general trend will harm the score for 'highlighting each key feature'?
What are type of words that are not counted in IELTS writing?
Please clear the doubt!!!
How many years' data did you mean by between 1920 and 2019? Just 2 years or 100 years?
I'm asking this question because, 'between' represent only two things. According to your question topic, you used only two years data, 1920 and 2019.
But according to your chart, there you used 100 years data from 1920 to 2019. And 1920-2019 also means 100 years.
So, what would be the accurate question topic? --------child in two countries between 1920 and 2019 or --------child in two countries from 1920 to 2019.
(Between, and) Vs (From, to)
I think it's just a typo or biggest grammatical errors!
Please make it clear.
I find Writing Task 1 extremely difficult...
I'm not sure I'll get a good score...
But I'll work hard :)
I know! Learning some vocabulary and practicing helps :)
OMG Kazakhstan?(im from kazakhstan) thank you so much teacher😭
So am I :)
Please help me to share you writing passage
The graph illustrates the number of children women had on average within the UK and Kazakhstan between 1920 to 2019, while the table shows the average age of first childbirth within the same countries. Overtime, a general trend of changes in age and country of childbirth can be seen in the graphs with women in Kazakhstan having their children earlier than women in the UK.
In 1920, the average British woman gave to about 2 kids compared to women in Kazakhstan who had over 3 kids on average. Regardless of the growth in Kazakhstan which peaked significantly in 1960, the birth rate experienced a gradual decline in both countries until the year 2000. Between the years 2000 and 2019, first childbirths in both the UK and Kazakhstan averaged almost 2.0 and 3.0 respectively.
Nevertheless, in terms of age at first childbirth, females in Kazakhstan preceded those in the UK by at least 3years. Despite the slight drop in the year 2003 by Kazakhstan, both the UK and Kazakhstan experienced a gradual growth from 26.5 and 23.5 in 1920 to 28.9 and 27.6 in 2019 respectively.
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Hi Asia i am your big fan, your all videos i saw but sometimes i feel hard ielts is not easy plz give a templete for writing task 2, i will be give ielts final exam 26 february, i am so afraid 😓😓From Bangladesh
Could you can talk about the double diagram, please teacher 🥺🥺🥺 l need it
I’m not getting it… how is it 4 years interval?
How to writing mam please tell me
Can we write an essay and send it to your e-mail, to give us a feedback?
ma'am its both women's and woman's????
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Hey Asiya, excellent write-up as always. I would like to clarify one bit though, the "average British woman" does not quite convey the same meaning as "British woman on average had approximately 2 children", does it ?
Hi! Thanks! Agree, the meaning is slightly different, but fundamentally still the same. If women on average have two children, then an average woman also has two children. Don't dig too deeply ;)
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hello Asiya, I have a question. My writing task 1 usually is quite good, but, when it shows percentages %% I usually add them in my report as they are, obviously adding comparisons where relevant, etc. My teacher, however, said that repeating % as a word or symbol might make me lose points. To be honest, I cannot make maths during the test, like fractions or things like this, it is very complex, and even more when the percentages are like 42%, 17%, 38%, how do you make a fraction of this??
I would like your opinion, as I did not find this declaration in your courses, and this might help other users. Thanks.
Hi Evelyn! It's totally okay to repeat percents. It's good to use expressions like a half, two-thirds or one in three/one in four to show some flexibility, but there's no way to replace 17% or 42% and I don't think you should.
@@FasTrackIELTS than you Asiya. I used both, fractions and percentages and I got criticized by my teacher because he recommended not mixing both. I don't get it. What do you think?
Hi, Asiya
Is it necessary to write the conclusions in the writing task1?
No, Task 1 doesn't need a conclusion
@@FasTrackIELTS is it for idp?
@@kidscorner5588 both implies the same format
Could anyone help me with the my question? Is it OK to say "the average British woman" in first sentence of the second paragraph? It sounds a little strange to me, because it seems that it's talking about the average number of children that a woman gave birth.
There are different ways to say it. An average woman has 2.3 children. Or a woman has on average 2.3 children. There are on average 2.3 children per woman. I guess N2 and 3 are more common, but all are correct.
In contrast; after 2010, japan population has increased suddenly almost as same as its dramatic decline of first 3 years. (Is it a correct sentence? Please take a look medam.