Modded Minecraft survival episode 3

My gameplay of Minecraft java edition the little company's and things that helped me create this video the music for the outro invincible part 1 by deaf Kev ncs.io/music TH-cam / nocopyrightsounds the website where I got my outro and intro panzoid.com/cr... thank you and I will see you in the next one peace

[@Sulimango11]

I came across this video and I really enjoyed watching it. Please take my advice as if it were a grain of salt but I have a couple recommendations. I can tell that you're really trying to make the best videos possible and I wanna help you out. Firstly, I recommend taking out the music or at least changing it to something that'd fit more with a Minecraft video, like birds chirping. People watch Minecraft longplays when they want to go to sleep or when they're studying, and this kind of music takes away from that vibe. I'd also recommend adding time stamps in the description and adding a little description talking about the video. I'd add a link to the kind of texture pack you use and I'd add tags to your videos so TH-cam's algorithm knows who to recommend the videos to. I'd make your longplays separate from one another, don't make parts, it makes it so fewer people watch your videos cuz nobody wants to start watching one of your videos just to see it's part 5. I'd also download iris and sodium instead of something like Optifine because sodium takes full advantage of your CPU and your game quality will be a lot better. I'd add a little bit of faraway shots and include a little bit of ASMR into your videos, like breaking wood for the fun of it or mining blocks that have a nice sound. I'd lower the sound when you mine grass and increase the volume when you mine wood and stone, you can do that using Davinci Resolve. Your title is also a little too long and your thumbnail needs a little work, thumbnails should be simple and not too cluttered, they should show the fruits of your labor, and most importantly, they should be easy for people on their phones to notice. What you should do when making your thumbnail is when you think you're done zoom your screen out a whole ton and look at it from that angle, if it's easy to understand what's going on in your video just by looking at the thumbnail and you can read all the words, then that's a good thumbnail. of course I don't do all those things myself, but that's also why I have no followers. If you have any questions, I'd be happy to answer them, and the greatest of luck to you!
btw, I wouldn't have one of those start screens, it ruins retention.

[@arandomgamer1232]

Thanks man ill take the advice for the next video