Spider-Man: Homecoming Pitch Meeting - Revisited!

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  • Step back into the pitch meeting and revisit the completely factual accurate conversation that led to Spider-Man: Homecoming Pitch Meeting - Revisited!! Complete with commentary from Ryan George who is now several years older!
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    00:00 Spider-Man: Homecoming Pitch Meeting
    04:50 Revisiting
    07:00 Rewriting
    09:52 Question Time!
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  • @MyBiPolarBearMax
    @MyBiPolarBearMax 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1913

    When Ryan does the voices during the re-writes i always think “man, he does such a good impression of those guys!”

    • @andrasbiro3007
      @andrasbiro3007 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +144

      Yeah, he probably could do the whole thing alone.

    • @Marwolaeth01
      @Marwolaeth01 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +82

      I legit found myself impressed at how well he performed as Producer guy. Then 10 seconds later I figured it out.

    • @GizmoFromPizmo
      @GizmoFromPizmo 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +27

      Amen! I loved the "Yeah, yeah, yeah!" and the "So you have a movie for me?" It was great.

    • @GizmoFromPizmo
      @GizmoFromPizmo 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +15

      Right! Redoing the voices is TIGHT!

    • @SchrijverMarcel
      @SchrijverMarcel 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

      Same!

  • @stallone8811
    @stallone8811 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +139

    "if you make a mistake, people WILL point it out" - says a guy who points out mistakes and inconsistencies for a living
    -Regards, People

    • @lonesurvivor8828
      @lonesurvivor8828 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      😂

    • @necron4306
      @necron4306 13 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      So youre pointing out the mistake he did by saying that?

    • @cristonsloan
      @cristonsloan 12 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      @@necron4306 🤣🤣

    • @stallone8811
      @stallone8811 11 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      @@necron4306 pointing out the irony yes xD
      I love Ryan though!

    • @marcsequence
      @marcsequence 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      @@stallone8811oh pointing out the irony is TIGHT!

  • @strawbarry7834
    @strawbarry7834 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +425

    Every time I watch Ryan edit his google docs, it feels like watching a master wood-worker restore an old piece of furniture. It's fascinating to watch and see the growth that has occurred over the years.

    • @ConeJellos
      @ConeJellos 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      Calm down.

    • @Hexen_Wulf
      @Hexen_Wulf 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +20

      ​@@ConeJellos Uh oh, it's the comment police.

    • @JonathanChase
      @JonathanChase 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@Hexen_Wulf ACAB includes the comment police.

    • @rompsteelwarofthering6490
      @rompsteelwarofthering6490 19 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      For real, I couldn't believe how good his new draft was, just on the spot like that.

    • @Paladin_HGWT57
      @Paladin_HGWT57 19 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      Oh, master woodworkers are tight!

  • @men3Z
    @men3Z 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +101

    Doing the voices during the rewrite makes that section soooo much better. Makes it more like he’s adding new jokes to experience, not just typing in a Google Doc

    • @burnacco
      @burnacco 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      YES

  • @luisbollain6553
    @luisbollain6553 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +917

    The "F**k you message" to Sony in the rewriting section caught me off guard 😂😂😂

    • @Kristjan_N
      @Kristjan_N 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +17

      yeah, seems Ryan likes Helldivers. :D

    • @LuisSierra42
      @LuisSierra42 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

      Very appropriate i'd say

    • @BCD10
      @BCD10 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +8

      Ryan makes me laugh out loud in every video he does, that got me good

    • @RedGuy-wy2gg
      @RedGuy-wy2gg 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      Subverting expectations, making people laugh since 1998000 BC

    • @pz7510
      @pz7510 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      this, and it should have been followed up with a Bat Man joke somehow

  • @saadrashid2754
    @saadrashid2754 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1231

    "If you make a mistake, people will point it out"
    Ryan George

    • @TheNinthGenerarion
      @TheNinthGenerarion 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +28

      Point it out*

    • @saadrashid2754
      @saadrashid2754 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +18

      @@TheNinthGenerarion thanks

    • @ptitdsf
      @ptitdsf 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      funny i watch this video just before this one

    • @AVdE10000
      @AVdE10000 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +11

      Oh, the irony

    • @user-km4lo8zz6z
      @user-km4lo8zz6z 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      @@TheNinthGenerarionlol on point

  • @SR-zp4je
    @SR-zp4je 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +29

    Ryan’s like ‘nah nah nah sister, you ain’t getting me to no secondary location’

  • @MatthewTheWanderer
    @MatthewTheWanderer 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +36

    I find it totally awesome that Ryan does everything on this channel by himself. The acting, the writing, the editing, the filming. Really impressive! And he keeps getting better.

  • @a.r.e.j.1693
    @a.r.e.j.1693 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +850

    The Birdman joke was brilliant, you're right to be proud of it.

    • @tokageki
      @tokageki 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +8

      I don't get it
      Edit: just got to the part where he explained it

    • @MaceDeMarco2010
      @MaceDeMarco2010 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +17

      @@tokagekithey cast Michael Keaton (Batman) as a Birdman.
      Edit: never mind, got it wrong.

    • @FruitMonger360
      @FruitMonger360 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

      At first I thought he was referring to Chris ´Birdman’ Andersen and I thought that was a really obscure reference.

    • @theotakux5959
      @theotakux5959 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +12

      I'm still proud of the laughs I got at my local theater when, at the end of the movie, I stood up and proclaimed I enjoyed "Spider-Man vs Batman"...
      Also surprised how many people didn't get the Birdman reference. It won Best Picture!

    • @tokageki
      @tokageki 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@theotakux5959 I've actually never watched it, or even heard about it til til now.

  • @reflactor
    @reflactor 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +525

    Watching you edit your script in real time is like watching a great magic trick, seeing pure comedy come to life instantly. Please keep this segment in all your revisits!

    • @antoy384
      @antoy384 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +8

      See, the filming, the image and editing aren’t necessary, just film yourself writing and we’re all laughing already.

    • @geraldhornsby
      @geraldhornsby 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@antoy384 Good to know!

    • @sarthakkhare9843
      @sarthakkhare9843 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

      Ikr?? It also shows just how much better he's gotten at this and how naturally it comes to him

    • @burnacco
      @burnacco 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      FOR REAAAAAL

  • @22coinstar
    @22coinstar 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +12

    Watching every pitch meeting and then watching every one again revisited is TIGHT

  • @rileymosman2808
    @rileymosman2808 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +8

    Love the rewrites, we basically get 2 for one pitch meetings. A fresh and evolved take.

  • @dietotaku
    @dietotaku 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +204

    "Ryan, I am DYING--"
    *Oh no!*
    "--to know..."
    *Oh, okay.*
    😂😂😂

    • @davewhitmore1958
      @davewhitmore1958 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +8

      Ryan is concerned about us, as we are concerned for him!

    • @jelita_
      @jelita_ 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +8

      The comedic timing is really important 🤣

    • @matthewlang737
      @matthewlang737 19 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      God, that moment was gold 😂

  • @Yattayatta
    @Yattayatta 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +383

    google doc segment is brilliant, it provides an opportunity for jokes that didn't make it or that were thought of later, while giving an insight into the process and how you have improved at the same time.

    • @LuisSierra42
      @LuisSierra42 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +17

      It is also a great resource for people who want to learn writing

    • @geraldhornsby
      @geraldhornsby 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +13

      And one thing it does is show how much the writing, the acting and editing has improved. The Google Docs section is wonderful.

    • @burnacco
      @burnacco 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      ABSOLUTELY

  • @MrDLYouTube
    @MrDLYouTube 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +10

    Who is this guy? His impressions of Writer Guy and Producer Guy is spot on! Good work!

    • @MijmerMopper
      @MijmerMopper 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

      You don't know? Its Ryan from the thing you where watching at some point 2 weeks ago.

  • @geraldhornsby
    @geraldhornsby 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

    Showing how you would rewrite these old Pitch Meetings is TIGHT!

  • @Pseudowolf
    @Pseudowolf 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +78

    I like watching these older ones and seeing how Producer Guy and Writer Guy got more and more unhinged over time. They’re generally calmer and more restrained in the earlier ones.

  • @arthurcoser
    @arthurcoser 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +186

    Love the google docking, it's like an extra pitch meeting

    • @Szokynyovics
      @Szokynyovics 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

      It is so good to witness how the magic happens.

    • @tomaszpiotrowski4569
      @tomaszpiotrowski4569 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      yeah yeah yeah

    • @ursidae97
      @ursidae97 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +8

      I love docking with Ryan

    • @Secretgeek2012
      @Secretgeek2012 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      ​@@ursidae97Go take a cold shower! 😂

    • @Liennie
      @Liennie 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +7

      Docking with Ryan is TIGHT!

  • @parsival
    @parsival 18 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    What these revisits make me realise is that I think it would be really fun to watch if you did a "remastered" of old pitch meetings, where you go back and remake the old pitch meetings with everything you've learned since, just to see how different and similar things would be.

  • @christophereric4
    @christophereric4 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    omg this “live re-writing” format is sooo much more work for him than previous ‘Revisited’ videos.. but ITS SO 👏 GOOD 👏

  • @jxchamb
    @jxchamb 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +153

    I think you underestimate how much fun the Google docs editing scenes are. Really enjoy it.

  • @conwarlock3537
    @conwarlock3537 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +245

    "A bird man, I can work with that." Recently watched that movie, now I understand that reference. Or, to put it in other words: He said the thing!!!

    • @Mister-Red
      @Mister-Red 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +10

      I thought he was talking about Batman

    • @MaceDeMarco2010
      @MaceDeMarco2010 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@Mister-Redsame.

    • @Lollaksyotuube
      @Lollaksyotuube 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

      How dense are you people?

    • @alex.g7317
      @alex.g7317 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@LollaksyotuubeOml 💀

    • @conwarlock3537
      @conwarlock3537 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@Lollaksyotuube yes

  • @kingsleycy3450
    @kingsleycy3450 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +10

    I think it reflects a lot of evolution if both you and the fans can see an old pitch meeting, and figure out how current you would make it snappier

  • @Disturbed626
    @Disturbed626 19 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    You're completely right about the unexpected bleeping joke. Even hearing you talk about it made me laugh.

  • @a_witcher94
    @a_witcher94 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +79

    i love the google doc sections so much i am at the point where i wish you would re-do your older pitch meetings .. that obelisk joke is tight!

    • @ChristofferLund
      @ChristofferLund 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      He could have a patreon or paid tier here where he posts remakes

  • @jacksonanderson8203
    @jacksonanderson8203 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +126

    After you've been doing these revisited pitch meetings for a while, you should revisit a revisited one

    • @johmyh14
      @johmyh14 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +13

      That's super easy, barely an inconvenience.

    • @donrol93
      @donrol93 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +7

      Revisiting a revisited is tight!

    • @Tfaonc
      @Tfaonc 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +15

      It would need to be the pitch for Inception. Revisit the revisited Inception pitch meeting.

    • @PeamThePanda
      @PeamThePanda 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

      Spider-Man: Homecoming REVISTED - Revisited again: Visited once more; we're doing another one PART 2

    • @cruz1ale
      @cruz1ale 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      live editing the live editing: "In this part of the video I wouldn't have scrolled all the way down to the third paragraph, I would've just skipped that"

  • @castlestar454
    @castlestar454 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    This is my favourite rewrite section you've done! I think it really showed how you think things through. Got an insight into your mind... In a non-creepy way

  • @Jeremy-lv8zc
    @Jeremy-lv8zc 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

    My dude, you are absolutely my favorite TH-camr. Thank you so very much for all the laughs…and more than a few poignant insights into flicks I love.

  • @aaaro88
    @aaaro88 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +57

    I like that you shifted from just you talking to over-exagering the character voices you use in later episodes. This made them a lot more interesting.

  • @lorelim
    @lorelim 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +94

    7:17 You can't just suddenly say the movie came out 8 years ago, you're gonna hurt my feelings.

    • @hedganian
      @hedganian 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +18

      Friends don't tell friends that the 1990s were more than a decade ago.

    • @EmperorSeth
      @EmperorSeth 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      If it makes you feel better, it was more like seven years ago!

    • @potato5813
      @potato5813 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      ​@@hedganian more than two decades ago*

    • @theonlyron
      @theonlyron 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @potato5813 So, still more than a decade ago

    • @potato5813
      @potato5813 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@theonlyron yeah, but it's a lot more impactful to say two or even three decades than just one

  • @BlandoGaming
    @BlandoGaming 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I love the insight into your though process the Google doc section gives us. Plus it's like an extra mini-pitch meeting as you're doing it! Thanks for all the laughs and I hope you and your family are well.

  • @codenamefulcrum3584
    @codenamefulcrum3584 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Why did the camera keep moving back and forth? That was a bit distracting... Great video as always though!! The rewrite was amazing. I love that you added that section

  • @dietotaku
    @dietotaku 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +31

    I LOVE the changes, especially Producer Guy shoehorning Iron Man in because "people like Iron Man," classic!

  • @Resh1477
    @Resh1477 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +40

    "Iron Man comes to save the day."
    "Is it smart for Spider-Man to always rely on Iron Man to do that?"
    "Why not? It's not like Iron Man is going away anytime soon. I mean, he's not going to die. That would be crazy."
    "Oh right, that WOULD be crazy."

  • @darwinism8181
    @darwinism8181 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Thank you for taking charge with the doccing, I'm new to this so I appreciate having a confident, experienced person show me how it's done. Truly a gentleman.

  • @Christopher-gv8yc
    @Christopher-gv8yc 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I really enjoy your "Revisited" series. It is very interesting to hear your thought process in hindsight. Please keep doing what you do and I will keep watching!!!!

  • @Briansgate
    @Briansgate 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +86

    seems like Producer Guy and Writer guy grew up and chilled out a little.

    • @xsanguine8
      @xsanguine8 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +11

      I think it was due to that Dollar Sign stroke Producer Guy had, they both decided to take it a little easier after that.

  • @bramverhees755
    @bramverhees755 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +20

    I’m really liking the Google Doc portion. It’s actually kind of educational for me as I want improve my writing. Accidental learning!

  • @k1ng5urfer
    @k1ng5urfer 19 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    i really do enjoy the revisions! thank you for making them a regular addition!

  • @WesleyWhiteside
    @WesleyWhiteside 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Love these pitch meetings and revisits. It gives a satisfying conclusion to older videos that didn't have all the catch phrases and mannerisms mastered yet.
    Have you thought of doing more Pitch Meetings for TV shows? One of my favorites is Friends. It would be great to revisit classic shows, maybe even some old cartoons with ridiculous premises like Tale Spin or Johnny Bravo.

  • @kyled.7748
    @kyled.7748 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +29

    I love these google doc segments. Its far more educational than it has any right to be lol

  • @emanuelgomez4891
    @emanuelgomez4891 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +33

    "Coz i have seen movies" , hahahahaha GOLD right there. xD

  • @MissSagittarian
    @MissSagittarian 6 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I really love these revisits. It's so interesting to see how your writing style has changed and developed.

  • @EmperorFool
    @EmperorFool 18 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I unexpectedly enjoyed the rewriting segment, especially that you acted the rewrites out rather than just speaking them normally--an amazing view into the creative process. ♥

  • @moiseulpasmoi
    @moiseulpasmoi 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +19

    Congrats on you being a dad and thank you for still banging out this videos

  • @shlemmon24
    @shlemmon24 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +16

    Love the MJ drawing with the red hair 😂

  • @xitaris5981
    @xitaris5981 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    TH-cam is killing it with their notifications. They sent me a notification 11 hours after I'd _already watched it_

  • @QBnoYouko
    @QBnoYouko 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I'm enjoying the Google Doc rewrite segments. Even when you're editing it as you go, you still act it out and it's just as hilarious!

  • @rockdalianninja1056
    @rockdalianninja1056 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +63

    Before I finish the video, “I’ll be so disappointed if you don’t draw Michael Jordan from the epic space jam”.
    After the video. “I was not disappointed, you are good at the comedy and I’m good at seeing the punchline.”

  • @joels5150
    @joels5150 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +61

    The mistake of having Peter’s love interest falling from a tower…not because it doesn’t happen (again), but because the Washington Monument is actually an Obelisk, not a tower. 😂
    Still my favorite bit from this Pitch Meeting.

  • @SanjayStiltskin
    @SanjayStiltskin 18 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    "Yeah-yeah-yeah! 😁😁" It's great watching you switching back and forth between the two characters as you type out the script 😂😂

  • @BaseStation
    @BaseStation 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Love the rewrite section! I mean… I love your whole video. But I especially love the rewrite portion.

  • @hmmmm2824
    @hmmmm2824 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +19

    I'm genuinely impressed by the drawings Ryan makes

    • @FightingCamel22
      @FightingCamel22 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      And the logical explanation as to what he drew

  • @KingRbyt
    @KingRbyt 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +40

    Revisiting Pitch Meetings Are Tight
    And Clicking on this was super easy barely an inconvenience

  • @TEMINIX
    @TEMINIX 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I love seeing how your writing has come so far. Seeing you write a Pitch Meeting is awesome.

  • @MenacingBanjo
    @MenacingBanjo 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Watching your re-writing was an absolute joy. It was magical to see you bring new life to the script.

  • @TherealGethmeister
    @TherealGethmeister 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +22

    Please do a pitch meeting for a muppet Christmas carol (or any muppets movie)

  • @thomasauer9370
    @thomasauer9370 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +37

    1:52 that birdman reference had me dying 🤣

  • @allyb3241
    @allyb3241 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I just love these revisits soooo much!!! Keep up the great work!!

  • @TeamWestAnna
    @TeamWestAnna 19 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Hey Ryan, I love the clean setup you're rocking now! Your lighting and new mic is *chef's kiss* 🤌

  • @Kranitoko
    @Kranitoko 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +22

    Spider-Man is the epitome of doing a backflip, snapping the bad guys neck and saving the day.

    • @realbadger
      @realbadger 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Do you mean "snapping the bad guys' necks"...? My autocorrect loves surprising me with "corrections" that are actually typos that I don't notice until I've hit Send...

    • @Kranitoko
      @Kranitoko 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      @@realbadger fixed.

    • @jeromevaleska2014
      @jeromevaleska2014 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      @@realbadger No, he doesn’t. He means “…snapping the bad guy’s neck…” You misplaced the apostrophe and added a plural. Also, you mean “…surprising me…” not “…surprising my…” and you capitalised “…send…” but here it should remain uncapitalised.
      Grammar Police, I know, but hey, I’m thorough.

    • @realbadger
      @realbadger 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      @jeromevaleska2014 He corrected it. I'd thought it was bad guys plural (hence the correct placement of the apostrophe, as I suspected Next could sound like "necks" being misheard.

    • @jeromevaleska2014
      @jeromevaleska2014 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      @@realbadger Haha, fair enough. Now what of the rest of the flaws I called out in your reply?

  • @Mohammed-dy6xb
    @Mohammed-dy6xb 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

    No matter how many times you revisit a pitch meeting...... never fails to make me laugh !!
    But for Ryan(s) ...its barely an inconvenience !!
    Thank you for spreading so much joy ⭐

  • @AllAxcess8427
    @AllAxcess8427 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I love these so much! Something magical about seeing it done and hearing it at the same time ^^ Thank you Ryan for doing these you wonderful person you 😋

  • @Kraidismyspiritanimal
    @Kraidismyspiritanimal 18 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Comparing this to your newest Rebel Moon 2 pitch meeting, you've definitely got your formula on point. It's nice to see the evolution of your characters, voices and witty remarks. Great channel!

  • @aurora2670
    @aurora2670 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +12

    Omg ive been trying to figure out where i knew you from! Your ryan george from the thing im currently watching!!!

  • @justinn8541
    @justinn8541 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +24

    Commenting on the previous content is tight.

    • @remylebeau34
      @remylebeau34 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      and its super easy, barely an inconvenience.

  • @timopper5488
    @timopper5488 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Not only does this “revisit” transport me back seven years in time to when you made the original video, roughly 2-3 years before I discovered you on TH-cam (yes, it was I who discovered you!), but it also gives me added value in the form of your self-critique. And I’m really glad that you pointed out your mispronunciation of the word “debris” so that I didn’t have to mock you mercilessly for it. Very kind of ya!

  • @ancapride
    @ancapride 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Ryan is a master of google docking. He always seems to wrap the tip of the new changes over the shaft of the existing piece so neatly.

  • @rachelrasmussen1101
    @rachelrasmussen1101 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +7

    That MJ is amazing

  • @JarethGT
    @JarethGT 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

    Love that you started doing the editing thing in these, it's cool seeing your writing process

  • @VladZer0
    @VladZer0 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    These videos are great, I used to rewatch pitch meetings over and over and is kinda the same but with new content. I think these videos are getting better and better.

  • @njalthemighty5378
    @njalthemighty5378 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I luv these re-writes, it really shows off your talent and process.

  • @dronix6624
    @dronix6624 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +9

    OMG IS THAT RYAN FROM THE THING IM CURRENTLY WATCHING????

    • @planetofthegapes
      @planetofthegapes 19 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      He's from the same video!

  • @Toto-95
    @Toto-95 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +8

    Oof the difference in quality then and now on that one is HUGE !
    Honestly just even the tone and acting, the then video is awkward it's very "i just started". Now it's very "overacted" for comedy but in a good way and it works wayyyy better ! like the "Oh my God..." intonation you do now is way better !

    • @dietotaku
      @dietotaku 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      definitely, comedy needs a bit of melodrama to work and Ryan has got that down to an exact science!

  • @Moewenfels
    @Moewenfels 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Your google doc-ing is fantastic.
    Even you nonchalantly talking about it and doing that "But people like Iron Man" had me ROARING. That and the extremely interesting insight of course.
    Thank you SO much for making these Mr. Ryan. Mr. George. Mr.. R.. Ge.. Mr. Pitch Meeting.

  • @eduardolago7562
    @eduardolago7562 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    You’re the best, man! You always crack me up! Hope to continue seeing you in many years to come. Congrats on being a father, I wish your daughter all the best, beautiful things in life!!

  • @Syraks
    @Syraks 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

    Screenwriter Guy: .......... **** you.
    😂😂😂

  • @sharky582
    @sharky582 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    I like the addition of Producer Guy forcing Iron Man into the script, studio notes are much more fitting for him and not for Writer Guy.

  • @Sherif-the-Watcher
    @Sherif-the-Watcher 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Ryan, your videos are a real piece of work
    In fact, WORKS OF ART

  • @fernandesdamian
    @fernandesdamian 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

    Love your videos! Still waiting patiently for a malignant pitch meeting

    • @aidanyelsma7762
      @aidanyelsma7762 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      I want a pitch meeting for The Room that ends with the producer guy kicking screenwriter guy out of his office because it sounds terrible and the screenwriter guy replying with “Screw you! I’ll just make it myself!”

  • @lucideandre
    @lucideandre 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +8

    The thing with Ned seems…odd to me.
    Like, him not having the best social awareness doesn’t clash with him being amazing at computer stuff. He’s more of a stereotype if anything, of a socially unaware nerd

  • @pacorka9943
    @pacorka9943 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The Google Docs section of these videos are the BEST! Literally a short comedy writing lesson and I get the euphoria of seeing your jokes come to life in front of my eyes/ears!

  • @Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad
    @Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +8

    Popped in my Head…you need to do a pitch meeting for the movie ARMAGEDDON!!

    • @Qmeister044
      @Qmeister044 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      Armageddon and Deep Impact and keep getting the two confused.

    • @Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad
      @Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      @@Qmeister044 yes lol they would be great movies to pitch meeting because of how impossible they were haha

    • @planetofthegapes
      @planetofthegapes 19 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      @@Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad The same as The Core, which I don't think he's done... question mark?

  • @Marwolaeth01
    @Marwolaeth01 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

    The tower joke definitely needed tightening up, hehehehe, but listening to it first time around my main criticism of it would be explaining the joke too much.
    "To make our film better than the old movies we'll have her fall from a different tower. It's a mistake. Is it? Yes it's an obelisk not a tower. Oh but you like the idea? Oh yeah I like the tower fall again thing."
    Without a full rework I think it should have simply been:
    "To make our film better than the old movies we'll have her fall from a different tower. It's a mistake. Is it? Yes it's an obelisk not a tower."
    I feel in your later Pitch Meeting's you have learned to trust the audience a bit more to get the joke.

  • @coffeebot3000
    @coffeebot3000 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I love the rewrite part. Your little readings of it is the icing on the cake.

  • @RGbcc
    @RGbcc 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I like trying to guess the drawing. The Jordan part was obviously but mj’s hair got me. Well done man in box.

  • @3v1l73ddy
    @3v1l73ddy 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    I actually really liked the slower pace of the washington monument joke in the original. Sometimes newer pitch meetings can be painfully fast paced.

  • @cylondorado4582
    @cylondorado4582 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +10

    Is it bad that I want him to do Schindler’s List just so I can hear him say, “[Anything that happened in the movie] is TIGHT!”?

    • @PompeySomerstown
      @PompeySomerstown 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Yes. Especially if it's "little girls in red"

  • @danieldavis7784
    @danieldavis7784 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The "OH" in front of the really reply to the super easy barely an inconvenience is nice!

  • @greylotus1
    @greylotus1 13 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I really enjoy this new format of editing the old scripts. Awesome way to add even more depth to this series!

  • @graduator14
    @graduator14 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +20

    Hi Ryan, please do a Pitch Meeting for The Room l! I've been asking for 4 years!
    I would say wow wow wow..........
    Wow!

    • @imomedvidek
      @imomedvidek 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      room is already a parody of itself, would be hard to make into pich meeting, imho.

    • @NickChad
      @NickChad 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@imomedvidekplus, since the guy who starred in it also paid for it, wrote it, and directed it the pitch meeting would just be one guy pitching the movie to himself. Can you imagine?

    • @imomedvidek
      @imomedvidek 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@NickChad I imagine that pitch for The Room, was just Tommy Wiseau jerking off while yelling random parts of the script.

    • @graduator14
      @graduator14 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@NickChad That would be quite meta!

  • @boyeatsworld-vr9ci
    @boyeatsworld-vr9ci 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +7

    Accurately calling writing lazy is not a sin.

  • @_grumpytoad
    @_grumpytoad 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Love these re-visits and the re-write sections. It's fun to see how you would expand the dialogue and add more jokes. ☺

  • @danielwright3688
    @danielwright3688 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Love your videos. I really enjoy the sincerity of the revisited stuff!

  • @4plus20isHappy
    @4plus20isHappy 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +9

    “Game pitches would be TIGHT!”

    • @JoeyGBean
      @JoeyGBean 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

      i agree! i just don't think he has time to play games with his new daughter

    • @sexydictator3241
      @sexydictator3241 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      ​@@JoeyGBeanhis wife could do them, maybe? 😄

    • @bestintheband5114
      @bestintheband5114 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      @JoeyGBean actually I feel like he could play the games without his daughter, she's probably not old enough to play yet
      (It's a joke, don't worship me)

    • @4plus20isHappy
      @4plus20isHappy 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      @@JoeyGBean All the more reason. “Isn’t it nearly impossible to afford a kid these days?”

    • @BFedie518
      @BFedie518 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      He's talked about the video game pitch meetings before. They would simply take too long to make. TV shows are already pushing it.
      They would be fun to see though.

  • @jimmypopjr
    @jimmypopjr 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +15

    Ryan - would you ever consider doing Pitch Meetings for famous/popular songs? Could be a lot of great material there.

    • @usernametaken748
      @usernametaken748 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Some of his sketches on his personal channel @RyanGeorge are basically that. th-cam.com/video/1QPdQ5TPCMo/w-d-xo.html

  • @BasicDrumming
    @BasicDrumming 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I appreciate you and thank you for making content.

  • @redsoxu571
    @redsoxu571 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I especially enjoyed the web doc edit this time around - seeing the Washington Monument joke both tightened up and brought into the present (even more funny) PM style was like a little bit of magic!

  • @BatmanFan76
    @BatmanFan76 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +91

    This actually does remind me. Peter literally didn’t want the Iron Spider suit in this movie, but in Infinity War he suddenly wants it for no reason.

    • @arthurl7493
      @arthurl7493 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +60

      It gets attached to him without him knowing to survive space.

    • @TheNinthGenerarion
      @TheNinthGenerarion 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +36

      He doesn’t choose the suit, it was sent to him

    • @Thebassmaster6969
      @Thebassmaster6969 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +26

      I wonder if anything happened between the movies that might have changed Peter’s mind, like, I don’t know, an alien invasion that’s threatening half of all life in the universe

    • @user-zh6go1ou9n
      @user-zh6go1ou9n 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +21

      He didn't want IT He needed to Survive in space giving Iron spider suit Something to do

    • @Sum_Guy
      @Sum_Guy 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +16

      That's not how it happened. It was used to save him and he was stuck with it because they were in space

  • @Psychs_IVXX
    @Psychs_IVXX 17 วันที่ผ่านมา

    its so cool watching your script writing process in this video