Hot damn. Is the GD content scene finally reaching it's golden era? It's amazing to see people do such high-quality documentaries now that SEA has left us :) My main complaint with this is that your script is pretty dull. It's a lot of "He did this. The next day, he did this. Then he did this." There's not much storytelling here, it's comparable to just reading a list of his achievements. I suggest trying to put a focus on a single aspect and building the story around that. For example, put focus on Zodiac or better yet, Tartarus. Make them the pinpoint of the story. Make every achievement before them just a step in the process to the big achievement. Make allusions to "the final achievement" that lies ahead. Make every easier-end list demon sound like warmup for the true challenge ahead. Include relevant details from other players relating to these levels, like Dolphy verifying Tartarus and Mullsy and Technical beating it. Include hints to the drama that went down with whether or not it was Mullsy or Dolphy who deserved credit for the verification. Great documentaries are ones that get across all of the information while presenting it in a story, something you can get invested in and something that sticks in your head long after. You are on the right path, your research and editing are already well up there. I know that writing a script is hard, but you can get there, with just a bit more practice and effort. :)
Thanks for the criticism, It's really helpful. I'll get better as time goes on, and the more scripted videos I make, I'll definitely focus more on making it not so repetitive sounding.
22:32 Sunix: Am I a joke to you? Jokes aside, obviously nSwishs achievement is way more difficult and impressive, but sunix also did. it once nonetheless.
Yeah, Sunix almoust beat all demons in top 50. But he need something like 3 or 4 levels to completed that thing. (Im not sure, but i think he dont beat all demons from 25 in that time. Thats why is nSwish first.) Btw sorry for my bad English. xd
Best corispondend (idk how to spell that) video on GD TH-cam. You need like 100k subscribers, and im suprised how you dont have it already! Rly good job!
as he was talking about him wanting to complete the top 25 I look to the right at the other videos and it shows him beating the yandere and getting the top 25 done, lmao.
Who is here after the nswish situation? I personally dont think nswish is a hacker. Even though the post on his account says otherwise, nswish's account got hacked and the hacker posted it. I do not think this legend is cheating, but i might be wrong.
Npesta: *beats kenos after 8 months*
Nswish 6 days later: *beats kenos*
Npesta:
*w* *u* *t*
I supposed Swish is better than pesta
Npesta hadn’t beat sakupen hell yet
Priest Jim yes he has
Sauron168 he didn’t beat it before he verified kenos, plus he wasnt really taking it seriously until the 2.1 creator awards were coming up
Sauron168
Hadn’t = had not, meaning Priest was telling you that Npesta did not beat Sakupen Hell before Kenos
I can't believe nSwish did a perfect Tyson fight and beat a Matt Turk record only to beat Tartarus in 4 days
That's Mycrafted
do u ever just go from checkpoint 1 to checkpoint 3 without hitting checkpoint 2 and the lap doesn’t count? so gay
@@Manu-ei2yj No Mycrafted is the japanese guy who discovered the first ultra shortcut on Grumble Volcano.
Best comment ever
@@FrasierEdits I could swear Mycrafted is the guy that can just pick Squirtle and go with it unlike anyone else.
It's crazy how fast he improved honestly.
Crynn 3 years without improvement in the game lmaofooooo
Arandomguy 96 cuz you probably didn’t have a plan to improve
Mekkismart you are a bit late but agreed xD
lol spaceuk lol
@@boo7948 LOL
Sunix was actually the first one to beat the Top 25 after beating Artificial Ideology in August of 2017. Good video besides that, though!
fuc
@@gmdblue lol
Yea but nseish is better than sunix anyways
'nseish'
@@unaura43 yep thats me
2:24 when the background music is copyrighted
whats that song with the kid singing it?
@@banks8645 time leaper by hinkik
2:35 That sounds like my friends brother pretending to be Etzer
You just reminded me of a cursed memory
@@aouix1388 what memory?
Its insane bcz he beat sonic wave and he sounds like a 13 year old
Mist fun fact he was 13
...
He was and why do ppl think that 13 year olds cant be skilled at gd
@[GD] Mia so your dad sounds like a 13 year old
@[GD] Mia woooosh
petition to rate Photonic Wave
That intro songs reminds me of Summoningsalt...
*Hm... I wonder why*
HMMMMMmmmmmmm....... 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔
Here you have it guys. The history of the guy who died 20 times at my TG part
@@fardpig4269 my old name was krotexx, erhängen means "to hang (someone)" and the challenge was made when bo, woom and some others started hating me
Dude! I can’t believe nSwish finally got 3 weathertenkos on Choco Mountain after 16,000 attempts! Absolute madlad.
No one has done it since
Video sounds more like history of mkwii ultra shortcuts
laughed harder than i should have
Three days after Abney 😳
I get the reference lmaooo
Nswish sounds like hotball1 and reacts like him lmao
nSwish is my favourite player! So thanks for this video. ;D
No one jumps to conclusions faster than this comment section
fr though
SummoningSalt vibes haha. Glad you're getting your rhythm back on yt bro :)
Amazing how quickly he beats the extremes wow he deserves the number #1. Also perfect montage!!!
He gets it anyways he beats the golden being the 1st one.
E
Aged well
damn he has a longer history than i thought, nice vid blue!
If sea and summoning salt mixed.
You give off the good old sea vibes dude. I was impressed by the mycrafted video and here again, it's the same. GJ
Hot damn. Is the GD content scene finally reaching it's golden era? It's amazing to see people do such high-quality documentaries now that SEA has left us :)
My main complaint with this is that your script is pretty dull. It's a lot of "He did this. The next day, he did this. Then he did this." There's not much storytelling here, it's comparable to just reading a list of his achievements. I suggest trying to put a focus on a single aspect and building the story around that. For example, put focus on Zodiac or better yet, Tartarus. Make them the pinpoint of the story. Make every achievement before them just a step in the process to the big achievement. Make allusions to "the final achievement" that lies ahead. Make every easier-end list demon sound like warmup for the true challenge ahead. Include relevant details from other players relating to these levels, like Dolphy verifying Tartarus and Mullsy and Technical beating it. Include hints to the drama that went down with whether or not it was Mullsy or Dolphy who deserved credit for the verification. Great documentaries are ones that get across all of the information while presenting it in a story, something you can get invested in and something that sticks in your head long after. You are on the right path, your research and editing are already well up there. I know that writing a script is hard, but you can get there, with just a bit more practice and effort. :)
Thanks for the criticism, It's really helpful.
I'll get better as time goes on, and the more scripted videos I make, I'll definitely focus more on making it not so repetitive sounding.
the icon i made for nswish is in a blue video omg im famous.....
where is the infamous "SHUT UP"
every time blue opens with that song i get jealous that he knows what its called
We’re finally landing by Home
blue I love your work man I mostly listen to these while playing gd
nswish is legit you guys…
the hacking thing has been disproved multiple times
Nobody:
Nswish when he beaten photonic wave: YES FINNALY YEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
22:32 Sunix: Am I a joke to you?
Jokes aside, obviously nSwishs achievement is way more difficult and impressive, but sunix also did. it once nonetheless.
Yeah, Sunix almoust beat all demons in top 50. But he need something like 3 or 4 levels to completed that thing. (Im not sure, but i think he dont beat all demons from 25 in that time. Thats why is nSwish first.) Btw sorry for my bad English. xd
@@adorafps You talking about Sunix? xd (Yeah, sorry i dont know all about all.) - Sorry for my bad English btw. :D
When nSwish Entered The City for his 100th extreme demon ;)
One day, he'll beat Silent Clubstep in under 10 attempts...
People who were Top1 for extreme demons
Cyclic/Riot - Sunix - Technical - nSwish
Who will be next?
dude what about btb?
and like fucking diamondsplash
@@ephraimsb2277 btb was never considered the best by anyone and diamondsplash was considered the best for like a week
@@sealio ya but top 1 for extreme demons means most list points no who's considered the best lol
mycrafted and rori???
Dude this such a high quality video honestly keep making these I love these documentary style videos.
Really good video. Great series as well.
Do we have the new sea here?
sea if he actually researched
I need those gnews segments back :(
1:27 you’re welcome
2:24 that sounds like 7 year old me trying to catch up to a song
Welcome to the GD pro community, we have 5 good players, the other 95 are hackers.
You know it's gonna be good when they use the Summoning Salt Intro music
*beats sonic wave* OMG *hyperventilating*
beats the golden “i verified the golden lets gooo”
remember when people thought this guy was inhuman like Space is now
Literally, as we know now.
hacka
So proud of Nswish for getting all 32 wr on Mk 64
He sounds like he is old and young at the same time
Recent achievement: The Golden verified
nSwish after verifying The Golden: oh my god i verified the golden.
If Nswish is a hacker, then that's TWO videos on this channel that aged like milk 😐
He is a hacker he confeced rn
@@emanuelavucaj9008 lol are you blind? It was the hacker who posted it, the list mods say he is legit
I don't play or watch this game at all and just watched the whole video. Corona kicks in
RodrigoYiyo=No
Blues =Yes
Npesta: beats a level after a year. nSwish: beats it in less than a week. Npesta: *25 cent suicide booth*
This video gets recommended 15 minutes after nSwish beats the golden lmao
I cant decide who’s story is more inspiring. Mycrafted or nswish (Enish xD)
he sounds like the next sirguillester, but better
Ur basically the new SEA1997
But without drugs
that was weird when he beat his own level
I NOW LOVE NSWISH BECAUSE HE SAID AUSSIE MOMENT
(His reaction to Devil Vortex)
LOL i literally just finished watching a summoning salt vid and i come here and it's the SAME MUSIC
Truly one of the best players we have Ever seen
XVMincraft7582 GD the best
When he beat cata, he sounded like an 8 year old, wtf
24:13 kénos.... Blue what is wrong with you it's kenos LULW
nSwish: beats extreme demon in 5000 attempts
Blue: makes video with 5000 views
you know that your a good player when you get a video made on you by Blue
i watched this video again, what a video bro
Summoning Sal- oh its ANOTHER ONE
Am I the only one that is stupid enough to think that you were going to say SalC1
The first song really gave me summoning salt vibes
Insane Video thx for the info of this amazing player
That moment when someone named Blue has red icons
Best corispondend (idk how to spell that) video on GD TH-cam. You need like 100k subscribers, and im suprised how you dont have it already! Rly good job!
Correspondent?
Now his channel is gone
Beginning song is: HOME- We're Finally Landing , for anyone who wants the song.
Intro reminded me of summoning salt
I really like to see this sea1997 like content. I’d love to see more
Why does blue always sound like he has a sore throat
This aged well
ikr
eh nswish is legit
Man Nswish Grew a Moustache and wore a Cowboy Hat just to beat Tartarus? Man.
as he was talking about him wanting to complete the top 25 I look to the right at the other videos and it shows him beating the yandere and getting the top 25 done, lmao.
Amazing. Simply amazing.
that singing at that one part is hilarious
Zodiac took the top from crimson planet
And then he goes on to beat the golden and take the #1 gd player space. If he doesn't win gd of the year I will be mad.
I keep coming back to watch this for no reason 🥲
The good old days when your documentary content was the best one 😢
Who is here after the nswish situation?
I personally dont think nswish is a hacker. Even though the post on his account says otherwise, nswish's account got hacked and the hacker posted it. I do not think this legend is cheating, but i might be wrong.
Even paqoe confirmed that nSwish was legit
nSwish singing time leaper is the best thing ever
Now he deleted hisyt sad times
4:00 TheUltimatePhase [M E D I U M D E M O N]
my man would've turned the sonic wave race into a 2 week affair.
you know he's a god when his 6th extreme is SW
Spaceuk when his 5th regular demon was The Golden
@@judahsagawa5749 that's sad because having SW as your 6th demon is insane but now it looks so bad when comparing to space
13:50
"I can't wait to see what 2.2 and 2019 brings!"
Me : aha.. AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA
The guy who made white girl wednesday
Correction: he beat _Burgerlust_
Cool, he verified Celestial Force, I actually am making a level and was hoping to call it that. Oof. It too was an Extreme.
Blue Presents
this aged okay
Yes because he’s a legit player
Ah da first intro was so cute lmao.
Ah like the good old days when Sea was around
👏THE👏FPS👏BYPASS👏IS👏NOT👏A 👏HACK👏
Nswish should verify mega buffed innards
And technical should verify death corridor finale
This guy is not human I swear
Listened to the bgm, thought this was Summoning Salt
24:26 U SAID RENEVANT LMAO
I’m subbing just for the summoning salt intro
Summoning salt presents.
Well done video
My first extreme demon gonna be low death
Any level? Hey Nswish, here's exasperation