Please don’t make these Common App mistakes

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I read the common app essay which significantly helped me get a spot in two joint BS-MD medical programs as well as the Ivy League, and I go through common mistakes that I noticed among the essay drafts that people sent me.
I start reading my essay at 15:19
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[@mauli.]

I literally cried on "You are my poetry." ( sorry for mistake , i tried to remember the line)
.. I relate so much here...
I write poetry and i got it from my mother too. Your essay made me fell sooooo much. The way I fell for my mum who wrote so extraordinarily and never had it published, never shared it to the world. I used to ask her Why? and she would lovingly tell me that I am the best thing she will share with the world. She said "I am somebody, and i am significant because it is you i gave to the world, you are a protostar right now Mauli, shine bright and share the light I gave you , light up the world my love ! "
And your essay gave me the same inspiration... I am so confused what to write my essay about , me struggling with my physical body and appearance but eventually finding confidence OR my writing and how it gave me something of my own in this world. YOU inspired me . Now i will write both and i think i will share them with you , maybe you can give me an opinion.... THANK YOU SO MUCH!! You are amazing.

[@dreammeaname]

Wow! Thank you for such a beautiful comment!🌟 It would be an honor to read your essay, please feel free to get in touch💛

[@mauli.]

@@dreammeaname Thank you for the reply! As soon as I complete it , I will make you read it, hope it turns out as great and touching as yours... ✨

[@marmar4424]

There she is, my favorite human again to rescue me

[@dreammeaname]

🤣💛

[@dr.nicolellen]

I wish I had this advice when I was writing my essay 20 yrs ago. Really well explained and love the way she speaks with her hands 🙌

[@jordanduring6701]

These tips are very helpful and I would also highly recommend her review service, her advice is very detailed and specific on what needs to be changed.

[@rebekahhong]

Thank you for sharing this ! I have watched your essay so many times and it continues to inspire me. These tips are so helpful ❤️

[@brithomas.]

You are so poised. This was amazing ❤️ I love your hair!

[@advaitshrikhande5816]

Wow. Your writing gives life to your words in a way mine just completely fall short of. I've read so many essays but this is the only one that communicates feelings in the way I want mine to. I see you've closed your fiverr page, but is there any way you'd consider reviewing my essay?

[@PrincessO-y5s]

How did you go about outlining your essay?

[@HappyDuck-kv7fo]

Your writing is so beautiful!! Are you still editing essays?

[@ruth7499]

Hi! Can you talk about why you chose Penn over Brown? Thanks for the tips:)

[@mohammadraminroeentan705]

And I love your voice.

[@momoyang9702]

Thank you!

[@momoyang9702]

I totally agree with what you said!!

[@polinalambina]

Thank u so much!!!