If you are interested in having someone read your essays and provide edits and feedback, I would be happy to help! My background: I was high school valedictorian, graduated from UC Berkeley with honors in 2015, and graduated with a master of occupational therapy degree in 2017. I worked as a writing tutor for four years and love to help the college application process. (I would be happy to provide proof of degrees if requested) Feel free to email me at kellyjohnson854@gmail.com My fee is $20 per essay. I will return your essays to you within 5 business days with edits, recommendations, and explanations for all advised corrections. Good luck to you both! ❤
I’m currently in the middle of the college essay process, but I don’t know which topic I should do. Should I talk about 1) How I persevered and overcame struggles through gymnastics such as mental blocks and a very disrespectful coach. 2) How I changed from being confused to which culture I belonged to/being ashamed of my culture to embracing it and being proud of it. Thanks in advance!!!
you can do a lot with either one! my advice is to pick whichever one you connect with more and the one that you can relate to a bigger picture. ask yourself which one holds more meaning to you.
This essay made me tear up a little bit. Anyways are you going into BU for film? And what song did you use while you were reading the essay? Much appreciated :)
Hi Isabelle. Your essay is awesome! I am a high school senior applying to college now. I am writing about my experience playing the violin, but I'm having a hard time connecting this experience with my characters that I want to demonstrate. Could you offer some suggestions in this case?
I guess it depends on what type of characters you're wanting to demonstrate! I think I would need more details on the essay, but trust urself and ur ideas! u got this!
I love your essay!! I am a senior and high school and BU is the dream... I am also wanting to pursue a major in film and tv production! Can you tell me a little bit about the program and what makes it stand out versus other programs?
Unfortunately, since I am still in the CGS program, I haven't gotten the opportunity to really experience the film major yet. As soon as I do though, I'll let you guys know!
Hey Isabelle. That was an amazingly written essay, I just a question about BU in general. When I asked some people about their experience at BU, they would say that BU is a very nice place and all, but one thing that struck me the most was that the school usually deflates grades and makes it very hard for students to achieve high grades, is that true? As BU was my dream school but after hearing things like that, i get a little scared.
super late response but yes, supposedly that is a thing. I haven't experienced it to a great effect myself, but some of my friends claim it's a big issue. but bu in general is rated as one of the most challenging colleges academically in the nation which is superrrr underrated...are you in college or heading to college soon? if so, where'd you end up?
Wow that essay was beautifully written. I’m a senior in high school rn and BU is my dream school!
Star565 same!!!
!!! good luck with the application process!! :)
If you are interested in having someone read your essays and provide edits and feedback, I would be happy to help!
My background: I was high school valedictorian, graduated from UC Berkeley with honors in 2015, and graduated with a master of occupational therapy degree in 2017. I worked as a writing tutor for four years and love to help the college application process. (I would be happy to provide proof of degrees if requested)
Feel free to email me at kellyjohnson854@gmail.com My fee is $20 per essay. I will return your essays to you within 5 business days with edits, recommendations, and explanations for all advised corrections. Good luck to you both! ❤
let us know if/when you get in!!
Did u GET IN????
best essay I have heard so far, so beautiful... made me tear up.
first of all, you’re so pretty!!!! but secondly, thank u for this! im a junior in hs and BU is at the top of my list!
of course!!! you got this
Bu is going to throw out my application before they even read my essay 😭
don't say that! u got this
Thank You! Ill try my best and hope for the best!
that’s a mood 😂
did u get in???
I actually ended up going to Denison 😂 Took a whole turn
omg tysm for this vid
i wrote a draft and lost motivation but i feel inspired again!!
That was so beautiful, i’m happy that I found this. Thanks for sharing!
I’m currently in the middle of the college essay process, but I don’t know which topic I should do. Should I talk about
1) How I persevered and overcame struggles through gymnastics such as mental blocks and a very disrespectful coach.
2) How I changed from being confused to which culture I belonged to/being ashamed of my culture to embracing it and being proud of it.
Thanks in advance!!!
Thr culture one!
you can do a lot with either one! my advice is to pick whichever one you connect with more and the one that you can relate to a bigger picture. ask yourself which one holds more meaning to you.
omg this is so helpful! subscribed :))
This essay made me tear up a little bit. Anyways are you going into BU for film? And what song did you use while you were reading the essay? Much appreciated :)
awww ahahah thnx for the feedback :) yes I plan to major in film and TV production! and the song is Tom Misch "Journey"
Hi Isabelle. Your essay is awesome! I am a high school senior applying to college now. I am writing about my experience playing the violin, but I'm having a hard time connecting this experience with my characters that I want to demonstrate. Could you offer some suggestions in this case?
I guess it depends on what type of characters you're wanting to demonstrate! I think I would need more details on the essay, but trust urself and ur ideas! u got this!
I love your essay!! I am a senior and high school and BU is the dream... I am also wanting to pursue a major in film and tv production! Can you tell me a little bit about the program and what makes it stand out versus other programs?
Unfortunately, since I am still in the CGS program, I haven't gotten the opportunity to really experience the film major yet. As soon as I do though, I'll let you guys know!
i just wrote mine about how getting a fender bender saved my life… i really hope bu likes it haha
This is such a beautiful essay and you’re so beautiful!! What’s your Myers-Briggs type? This is giving me INFJ vibes
I LOVE it!! Thank you for sharing (:
could you please do a video on the why bu essay?
yessss girl!!!
I love this essay
Is no one gunna talk abt how great her camera quality is?!
*Oh it’s just me :
Hey Isabelle. That was an amazingly written essay, I just a question about BU in general. When I asked some people about their experience at BU, they would say that BU is a very nice place and all, but one thing that struck me the most was that the school usually deflates grades and makes it very hard for students to achieve high grades, is that true? As BU was my dream school but after hearing things like that, i get a little scared.
super late response but yes, supposedly that is a thing. I haven't experienced it to a great effect myself, but some of my friends claim it's a big issue. but bu in general is rated as one of the most challenging colleges academically in the nation which is superrrr underrated...are you in college or heading to college soon? if so, where'd you end up?
You are soooo pretty
beautifully written but does it make sense
can you talk about BU supplements?? I want to go to BU so badly!
i'll see if I can find mine anywhere! :)
great essay
beautiful essay
This is awesome and u are amazing and beautiful.
you are so sweet!!! thank you
I can’t believe you saw what I said you are so awesome.
Very beautiful and powerful
I'm a senior high school student.
I really want to join BU!!
How you applied there ?😅
How many words were you able to build your essay upon?
I believe it was 250-650 words!
mine came out to 620 words
I'm going to apply but I've some questions.How can I contact you?
What’s your Major?
what song is this??
tom misch journey!
@@IsabelleBryan thank you!!!
Can you help me on my BU application?
This is my email evanasgueh@gmail.com
The music is to loud
I know :( messed it up while editing
CAN YOU. PLEASE CHECK MY ESSAY!!!!
You had to look up, in her eyes, not anywhere else ; |
sorry :/