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there her okay but she then went ghostface happy Merry mum...

Her acting is so bad😭😭😭

Made no sense at all.

Huh

I don't get it either😂

the audio is horrible

the girl was so hot

A confusing ending

Invasion of the body snatchers?

WTF???

What the hell was that about?

Very good but needs better sound, i had to turn my volume way up !

B scary asf cuz f you was doing all that screaming and yelling for just because of a little noise

Wtf?

The acting was really bad, the story was worse and there was no ending.this one was poopy bum.

Very nice footage, hopefully mother nature was kind for you and your neighbours

Don't waste your time watching this crape

TERRIBLE acting.

Three weeks in, and these horror films never seem to end. This is awesome.

😱😱😱🤡

Congratulations 🎊

Great film good job 👍👍

As she gets into the car, he is both in front and in the back of her. It is not David any more. Something or some things evil have taken over his body.

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👎

Well, that was awful.

Good writing and quick film. The girls acting was horrible though. The way she held the can of soda was like she was advertising it and not drinking it. Also the way she grabbed the keys was awful.

Lame

strange, the sound channels are reversed. my other audio source is correct. don't know if it's the movie gets it wrong

Twins? Nice leave ya pal behind

Trash

😊😊👏

And then "Dueling Banjos" starts playing on the truck radio.

Can't make head or tails 😑😐😐

Great horror short, but I hate to be that guy, but right after they said there were no neighbors for a mile, you can literally see a house through the trees - 2:09

😍😍

You don’t get what?

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bad acting and predictable plot

Bad...

Bad,...

well not overly original it was realistic .in reaction for both its what you would expect to see and do your self .not much more i can say . well done and acted

What just happened

Very simple but really love the ending

Awesome! 👍

Is it a horror short film??🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

wtf?

I don't know if you're looking for feedback but I watch short horror films everyday and I have some thoughts. As others have mentioned the acting isn't great but I think it would be helped by some changes to the script that make it sound more like natural dialogue. The posing on the couch is very awkward and unnatural, from their seating positions to the way she's holding the can. And I get that the story is supposed to flesh out the characters a bit and set the mood, but in a film this short, it feels like way too much time is spent on a scene that doesn't accomplish anything new. This leads to my other thought, which is that the story ends just as it's getting good. Most shorts introduce the spookiness sooner, show you how it works, and THEN do the final scare cliffhanger, but it feels like you jumped straight to the last step. That's a cool scene in the truck but it doesn't feel final. This is the first truly odd thing that we've been shown, but then it just ends. I think if you cut down the couch scene and introduced a strange event there (for example, David hearing his OWN voice being copied outside, causing him to investigate), and THEN the film proceeded the way it already is, that great truck scene would have a lot more impact because we've already been introduced to the idea that this is no ordinary person talking outside, and we've been given a hint that it can mimic. It would feel less like it's coming out of left field. I think if you then showed Aubrey visibly trying to decide which was the fake, getting increasingly panicked as she can't decide, then you might be able to cut it there and keep the same cliffhanger ending. I understand if you don't care what randos online have to say, but at any rate it's always great to find smaller horror channels and I think this concept has a lot of potential.

That was stupid

*STRETCHED ACTING, GOOD STORYLINE, NEEDS TWEAKING AND MORE FLUID ACTORS.*