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This is absurdly underrated

Dang this was beautiful, the film reminded me of casino royale.

I've loved listening to this series while I work factory work. It's so easy to digest, and so well written. It takes some creative liberties, but they never feel forced or out of character

This is the second rewrite I’ve seen and it’s awesome , it has an “independence day” vibe. The only con is the relationship between Claire and Maisie , after everything that happened in “Jurassic world” , and during “fallen kingdom” . I’d think Claire would be more opened to having kids by now.

Stand by for transformers

9:25 Hey, remember when it took like 10 guys with specialized equipment and gear to capture just one Parasaurolophus? Now it takes one fit guy with a rope to hold back an animal that weighs as much as 3½ pickup trucks.

As much as I like the ending, you could've end with Rexy, concluding her story... What happens is that Rexy is somewhere, alone, drinking near a river before spotting a herd of Parasaurolophus, roars at them with a chase, but then... *ROAR* ...a roar was herd from a distance. Rexy stops herself, in confused but in surprised... because it's not just some random roar, it's a roar...that she also has, and it could be... another one of her own? Curious, she responds with a roar, echoed through the valley, and she waited...before another roar responds her back, surprises her. She ran where the roar is coming from, and as she reaches there, there's nothing...but an open field... Rexy looks around, and she looks down in sadness, but not before a thumping sound coming from the other side. She looks in aggression as she is preparing herself until, a group of Rexes (Buck, Doe, Junior, Big Eatie, and Little Eatie) appears from the forest, and we get to see Rexy's expression of shock and disbelief, she found one of her one, spending 30 years alone makes her think that she is the last of her kind and letting her see one of her own brought tears in her eyes. The Rexes are circling around Rexy, accepting her, and it ends with Rexy doing her signature pose and a roar (call back from Jurassic Park 1993), before the screen cuts to black, credits.

Once again another fan out doing a billion dollar corporation phenomenal work my guy absolutely phenomenal

A superior conclusion would be the defeat of the Giganotosaurus (though not its destruction) at the hands of Rexy and the other T-Rexs, resulting in the loss of the Giganotosaurus' status as the dominant predator in the valley. The film could have concluded with the injured Giganotosaurus roaming the valley, as it would have been more fitting to allow the audience to witness the creature's recovery. The death of Zeb was an unnecessary and inappropriate plot device.

I really loved this and I think this could have been a good idea for the movie I thought the original movie was okay and I really liked the extended version but it still had problems I do have an idea for a rewrite on fallen kingdom I do love the movie it’s my favorite of the world trilogy but I really do wish we got more of the Indoraptor so in the rewrite I would let it live and it kills Eli mills and in the movie it’s put on a few field test and it starts to question what it is as looks at itself and videos from it’s cage with the scientist watching Owens tapes of blue and wonders what it’s purpose was once it escapes it communicates with blue and they cause havoc but it’s also revealed it has a sibling and it kills the sibling like how it dies in the original movie and goes out to the open world.

14:52 is that a godzilla revence or am i to deep in the hyper fixation?

This series is extraordinary! Thanks for all your work this is amazing

A very nice ending brought a lump to my throat.

You can lure the carnivores out instead of bombing.

Some minor changes: 1) Dr. Wu works for Dodgson of BioSyn that has taken over the weakened Ingen. 2) Dr. Wu doesn't like how Dodgson operates creating and selling the Indomenous Raptors as they have been refined for processing as directed killers. Secret Wars.

I want the longer version.

Do I hear a DUTCH accent?!

I thought rhaegar was born at summerhall

Beautiful ending but I watched a part of your season nine and I have to say it ruins this ending to turn her into the mad queen

Should have left off in season 8 in my opinion

Trash personalities get millions of view and this dude doesnt? Really? This deserves more views.

this is amazing dude. keep doing what you do

This is dark

Theres problems with this story from the start, you do know that for him to be king it means that his father would have died. It would be a big celebration as it seems here, this seems so unrealistic.

What happened to kaiju Chronicles?

Where are you dude?

Now that was a good movie

The banners of the Dragons. The banners... only banners, no dragons.

How after 2yrs does this have zero views? Just happened across this episode... this is great.

Will Zilla jr be in your series

5mins In and my god hell of a lot better. I’m writing this ring before the gang gets to the new park LOVING THIS

Where were you Friday?

Awesome plot, but I’d prefer Rexy to have more involvement

2:58 maybe you could rewrite the prologue because giga living in the time period where trex is inaccurate so make the rewrited prologue center around gigas backstory so it would make sense like give him a sad backstory which will make him an actual villain

In this rewrite is there any brutal kills and does the Giganotosaurus kill anyone because the movie dominion lacked death and had no good kills

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When will we see Godzilla and Kong…?

Will we see Zilla jr

Will Zilla jr be in yours book

I have a question when book 1 is done will you do book 2 and 3?

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how big is the Giganotosaurus in this rewrite?

If you write your own winds of winter book unwound buy that one and not George's 😅 Thank you for the content ❤️

This was written so well. I was captivated the whole time. You understood what Dominion did wrong and really improved on it. A great conclusion, I honestly got really emotional at some parts of the story. Definitely nostalgia speaking haha. I got really sad, because Dominion felt like an insult to someone who really loves the first Jurassic Park movie and its moral questions, and this rewriting was so so much better than what we've got. It's sad, that they really didn't care for what they were doing, except making money of course. Anyway, Thank you and have a good one!

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Who would you cast to play tembo (the original actor passed away)?

I'm enjoying it but wasn't it John Collington that led the crown forces at the battle of the bells?

Your rewrite was incredible man, definitely deserves more views and attention. I love how you really drove to work in characters we'd previously seen like Tim, Billy, Nick Van Owen and the Kirbys, in ways that flowed well and weren't the central focus. Really important as this is the final movie of the franchise. One of my favorite things you did was with the character deaths. This movie was a bloodbath and from a plot perspective, it's genius. It's one of the things I hate most about modern JW movies: they're scared of killing anyone we know, even to prove a point. Killing Berry, Billy, Zia, and Franklin very early on in the park was certainly a risky move to make, but I think they were all valid. Deaths of characters we know raises the stakes, and makes us hate the creatures that killed them. That's what I hated about Dominion, the Giga didn't DO anything. It didn't warrant being the villain because it didn't do anything to make us hate it directly. The only real issue I think I had with your story, is that you kind of made it seem like the Spinosaurus, Giga, Baryonyx, and Utahraptors were all in some sort of alliance, all working together and traveling together to kill. I honestly think that this could've been replaced by maybe a pack of Indoraptors or Atrociraptors that Ingen had been saving up to maybe ship out to a military sometime before Wu called everything off (with their leader perhaps having DNA from "The Big One" in Jurassic Park). That would make more sense than all those species somehow forming a bond. Then there's the final battle in Los Angeles. I can really see Universal doing something like this, especially with the battle in their own Studios. Henry Wu's sacrifice was great, and I give you SO MUCH CREDIT for having Claire die in the end. That took some real risk, but it was the right move. With the movie ending on such a somber note, it gave me Hunger Games vibes, which isn't a bad thing. But I loved the scene with all the characters in the end, especially Ian and Sarah's.

I think of Liam neeson as Jon Aryn as well!!