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1:04:27 i was reminded that he is 16 and she was 35 😂😂😂

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1:40:47

Poor Naruto he almost got raped

Poor Jiraya

Amazing, very good what if. Perfect…

Part 3

Could you add to what if Naruto was written by Jiraiya

Theres another one I cant find it was really good can you do that it one too?

Do we know what’s happened he hasn’t taken this long to post in ages

They should stay together

As soon as you had Naruto go to the demon lord world made this the worst story. To the point I stopped listening.

I loved this story but can you do one called the burning bone by ginjaa ninjaa I can't find it anywhere on youtube I saw it omces like a year ago and haven't been able to find it again

Kakasi

Only thing I don't like about this what if is that it doesn't tell us how strong Naruto is we have to guess and I don't like how Naruto ain't using shadow clones

Lets see, naruto would have mokuton since Madara had hashiramas dna and if naruto was Madara grandson he would have the genes also so if he was uchiha and namikaze and uzumaki he would have the rinnegan

Uchiha Madara is older than Dirt💀💀💀💀💀💀

I hate when they classify tailed beasts as demons when they are not

Do you have the sequel posted?

The part with Itachi.... Why??

This one was very interesting a lot of things that I said wow too. But it was just wrong over Naruto to be with the snake mistress. He and Hinata should have been together

Please add the new ones to the playlist too it skips around outside of the playlist

I like fanfics where Naruto writes a book on the side

not people romanticizing pedophilia

This is a really good story. It’s very well written really like it a lot like the personalities that was given to all the characters as cool that Naruto and Orochimaru got married ended up having two kids and it’s cool that everything worked out and their two kids are best friends with his other teammates And his sensei kid found it funny that he ended up building tree houses for all the kids and then added water cannons to them. It’s cool that Naruto ended up becoming the Hokage and it lasted 15 years. Then he retired. Then Rochi retired a few days later, and they packed up and left That was cool about the the saying of if you look up at the night sky and all that that was cool something tells me that Naruto and Romaro went back to the island that he owns and it’s really cool that this story ended on a good note and a happy one 2:09:48

I honestly still think that canon Naruto had every read to crash out as bad or worse than Sasuke. Being forced out of his orphanage and having learn to read, write and be completely 100% independent at 4 years old is straight demonic. Bro got abandoned by everyone who swore on his dead parents grave to protect him. Then the constant abuse by a literal entire city ya na fuck all ya’ll everybody dying!

Ahhhh yes Perry the platypus I know unveil to you my latest invention! The groominator 9000!!!

I am sorry but I really didn't like this story. To me you changed way too much of what made Naruto, Naruto. First there weren't enough battles going on. Second of the battles Naruto was easily contained or countered making him seem like a terrible fighter. Third Hinta should be the one with him. Fourth making a UNA made it feel too much like the real world instead of the fantasy to escape the real world which is why a lot of us (me) listen. Lastly the biggest change is Naruto's attitude and making him indifferent to is family. You tried to make him too much like Itachi instead of a contrast to him. At least that is my two cents on the matter.

Could you do what if Naruto was the seventh swordsman of the mist

Spoiler alert. Anyone who hasn't watched full video please don't read my comment until you have. Obito has always been my favorite Akatsuki mainly bc of kamui and how proficient he is with it. However I've always pushed to the back of my mind how much of a simp he is over Rin. This version of Obito is disturbing. Going into a dream world and reliving your life with a fake Rin is creepy but I can at least understand the reasoning when I get past him being a simp and not moving on.. but bringing her back from the dead while being a grown man and seeing her still a child, then proceeding to hold her hostage while you alter the world all so you can romanticize her and fuck her later is beyond disturbing. I personally can't imagine myself being stuck on a girl like that and before anyone says I can't relate. (Not to throw in a sob story) A girl I had a huge crush on and a close bond with committed suicide years ago but after some time I moved on. If I theoretically stayed on her all this time and brought her back, I can't picture myself having any desire to be with her seeing her as a teen and myself as an adult. This Obito is lost and he's so far out of tune that it's actually disturbing he'd do that. I do not like him in this story. I actually got uncomfortable picturing that. Protect Rin from this guy at all costs

1:16:55 ahh the famous grandmother shoe attack never fails.

No rush but is everything ok Dark Sage you just busy with School or something?

I thought mokuton is earth water and yin yang release?

Dudeee this deserves the part 2 and more

Can you update on Patreon

You can't end it like this. I think this is your best one. The only thing that I disagree with is that as a purist Narato needs to end up with Hinata and korini.

Fanfic seems a lil like the legion of Naruto fanfic but I like the video just saying

Damm it dudee , parts 8

Can we agree , danzo is an annoying son of a coward bitch in the name of a villain

Dude why was this arc soo fucking long

Damm , Zabuza pulled out a zoro

The thing is the real canon Madara would NEVER do this but it's good to hear him be giving a different act

1:40:49 comedy man 😂

54:11 ts a comedy 😭😭 😂😂😂

Nah Ngl part where Naruto got into Sarutobi office pissed me off a lil

What if Naruto was Jiraiya's apprentice from the start | Part 8

What if Naruto was Jiraiya's apprentice from the start | Part 8

What’s the sequels name