yoo mr bj i have two guestions first how many words will this story have and second is more of a fic idea so naruto the hated one , i love how you write the konoha coucil so i thought of like even worst naruto gets banisher or something happens like naruto finds something by incident like his fathers notes or some shit like that so he runs away to kiri and he gets more powerfull but because of his love for konoha he dicides to go back to konoha idn my idea was to make more of like naruto x anko x kurenai so make anko and kurenai more of an friend at the start maybe like anko saves him from a mob bacause she feels bad for him bacause the villigers treat her the same and introduces kurenai to him and she becames more of an older sister turned lover later i wanted to write as well but as you can see my english writing is horrible i have so many ideas but i write horribly and dont have that much time btw i love your stories
@@bradleykucera6371 ok basically I have a idea for a fic where naruto is a full uzumaki but hiruzen uses a jutsu that is in the scroll of seals to change his appearance. Naruto is raised by hiruzen in the sarutobi household and trains with asuma frequently. MIzuki tries to get him to take the scroll of seals saying he can become a chunin early. Naruto not believing him but still wanting to see the scroll would go and get it finding the jutsu that changed his appearance and when he tries to change his appearance he ends reverting it. He finds out his parentage and begins learning uzumaki techniques as well as his fathers. He would end up finding a contract to the shinigami that allows him to gain new broken abilities but unless he wants to end up in the shinigamis belly when he dies he must take a certain amount of lives. If there was to be a harem it would probably be temari, yuugito, mabui, ino, Kurotsuchi
@@patriksmejc9995 haha, I built all of this fic up to that scene. When I first thought about Jiraiya writing Naruto, that scene was the first one that came to mind. It was so clear that I cranked out the first 200k words of the story in a week. And I work full time…
Bj could you do a what if that has something to do with naruto sasuke and itachi being best friends(itachi and sasuke are twins) and shisui keeps both eyes but gives them to naruto
@@DrMutal That's completely respectable. I went way harder on the lemons in this because it was supposed to be modeled after Jiraiya. I admit that it seems like a lot, but it was my goal to emulate Jiraiya while writing his.
Hey y'all, hope you enjoy the madness! I had so much fun writing this chapter. Please enjoy and let me know what you thought of it!
yoo mr bj i have two guestions first how many words will this story have and second is more of a fic idea so naruto the hated one , i love how you write the konoha coucil so i thought of like even worst naruto gets banisher or something happens like naruto finds something by incident like his fathers notes or some shit like that so he runs away to kiri and he gets more powerfull but because of his love for konoha he dicides to go back to konoha idn my idea was to make more of like naruto x anko x kurenai so make anko and kurenai more of an friend at the start maybe like anko saves him from a mob bacause she feels bad for him bacause the villigers treat her the same and introduces kurenai to him and she becames more of an older sister turned lover later i wanted to write as well but as you can see my english writing is horrible i have so many ideas but i write horribly and dont have that much time btw i love your stories
Can I give you a fic idea
@@GalacticAvenger1 yes, but I won’t make any promises. I have a couple fics in the pipeline
“free bird seal” lmao a small aspect of it whenever a hyuga goes into battle free birds solo plays in their head
@@bradleykucera6371 ok basically I have a idea for a fic where naruto is a full uzumaki but hiruzen uses a jutsu that is in the scroll of seals to change his appearance. Naruto is raised by hiruzen in the sarutobi household and trains with asuma frequently. MIzuki tries to get him to take the scroll of seals saying he can become a chunin early. Naruto not believing him but still wanting to see the scroll would go and get it finding the jutsu that changed his appearance and when he tries to change his appearance he ends reverting it. He finds out his parentage and begins learning uzumaki techniques as well as his fathers. He would end up finding a contract to the shinigami that allows him to gain new broken abilities but unless he wants to end up in the shinigamis belly when he dies he must take a certain amount of lives. If there was to be a harem it would probably be temari, yuugito, mabui, ino, Kurotsuchi
Orochimaru, at the start: i hate that kid
Orochimaru after narutos match: i am a huge fan of your work
1:49:16 😂😂😂😂😂 this has to be downright the most hilarious scene I had the pleasure of listening too
Nice part 3
This is honestly a good story!
@@YUIWER thank you! What do you like most about it?
I'm loving this story and am hoping for more parts.
When i saw the upload i couldn't help but smile and be excited for another round of awesome story telling 😅 time to get some popcorn 🍿
Haha, hope you enjoy it. Let me know what you think! Did I go hard enough on Sasuke?
oh my gosh, I laughed so hard at the hotel scene 😂
@@Sarniikhan glad you enjoyed it. That was the scene I had first when writing this fic. Everything before this was a buildup to that scene.
🎉😂 It was definitely worth the build-up for that scene to play out, hahaha 😂 poor Sasuke....he got ptsd on so many levels hahaha
@@Sarniikhan haha no joke! OMG that scene was so fun to write. Did I do it wel enough?
Why did bro do sasuke like that omg 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
@@patriksmejc9995 haha, I built all of this fic up to that scene. When I first thought about Jiraiya writing Naruto, that scene was the first one that came to mind. It was so clear that I cranked out the first 200k words of the story in a week. And I work full time…
Love this fic please continue it
@@matthewbrown2469 more coming
🔥🔥🔥 ready for the next part
@@benjamintemple149 it will be coming soon. What did you think was the most fire about this episode?
Compliments to Bj yet again but lots of love for darksage
Bj could you do a what if that has something to do with naruto sasuke and itachi being best friends(itachi and sasuke are twins) and shisui keeps both eyes but gives them to naruto
@@YaqeenMarais Hmm, my writing schedule is booked up but I could keep it in mind.
Part 4 please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
I love the video was great please make next part 4❤❤❤😊😊😊💙💙💙😊😊😊🖤🖤🖤😊😊😊💛💛💛😊😊😊💚💚💚😊😊😊💜💜💜💜💜💜
next part please
Sasuke is fucking traumatized
Part 4 please
this story is no where near as bad as i figured it would have been and thanks for time stamping when lemons stop
am I that bad at writing the lemons? Sorry...
@@bradleykucera6371 some people like myself just dont care for them however the fic is great. just would be a bit better imo without sex scenes
@@DrMutal That's completely respectable. I went way harder on the lemons in this because it was supposed to be modeled after Jiraiya. I admit that it seems like a lot, but it was my goal to emulate Jiraiya while writing his.
Hi
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SASKE NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO