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Well some God's that might help. But the rest are doing the really smart thing and running away from Humans very very very fast.

Ok, sooooo..... is this just part 1?

Thank you for the heads up. Saved me 27 minutes. Maybe it’s because the smoldering remains of the smoldering colony was palpable

Just another unfinished outline.

Don’t waste your time. Story has no ending!

How does a "defense grid" destroy things "with a single shot"? Defense grids defend.

a story with no ending and it leaves you hanging farewell...

Yeah F this 👋

I swear if this turns into a half a tale I’m deleting this app ... let’s see

Not very good....thank goodness for fast forward.

This story needs part 2.

9:40 The writer left their personal notes in the story. Holy cow. And after listening for a little while, all the sudden I just realized this story is an amalgamation of three to four other stories which have been copied and pasted. There are gap discrepancies in events as if entire chapters are missing, Humans attacked first and the story doesn't say why, because it doesn't show any crimes committed by the Galactic Council. Plot. What was the plot? Humans reacted by destroying a Station, but the story doesn't say why? "Because the Galactic Council has said we are unpredictable we shall destroy their Station!" Well, I guess if the plot was to show how unpredictable humans are, I guess blowing up their station for no good reason would show that. We immediately are in a war footing, and the Diplomat is in charge of the warship. "Prepare Operation Papercuts and Paperclips, we're going to make them pay for calling us unpredictable." There's no plot, other than the Galactic Council calling Humans unpredictable, and in response the Humans blow up a space station. Was there a part one somewhere to this story? I'm serious. It's like you had a beginning, then the writer grew bored in the first 8 minutes and started blowing things up, because battles in space is better than some guy sitting at a desk trying to figure out what to write and couldn't create a proper plot. For the writer of this story, I am sorry you are bored to properly flush out the who and why, when it comes to creative writing, but this is one of the worst stories I've had to listen to so far. You even left your NOTES in the dialogue. That's like watching a movie as each actor on screen is holding a script and reads out load all the parts that aren't supposed to be spoken out loud. "Okay, this next scene now showcases that the planet Aldoron has been blown up by the Deathstar, so I want you to act like you're having a stomachache, to show that you felt the deaths of millions of people halfway across the galaxy." Could you imagine watching Star Wars as the director is in the movie explaining each scene WHILE IN THE MOVIE. If this was a "Draft" story, that doesn't mean you automatically print it. If this was a "Reaction Story", that still does not mean you cut and paste the beginning and end with no middle, which brings us back that this story was a Draft, and the Draft wasn't ready to be printed. And if this was a Draft, which I'm starting to suspect, write in the Transcript that the story hasn't been completely flushed out and that it is a DRAFT STORY and not fully flushed out for the readers, so you don't have to read comments like I have just posted.

Half arsed

What the fuck is up with these stories that stop without an ending! I don't know who writes these stories, but, you suck! And the title of the story doesn't match anything in the story. Stop using ai and finish the fucking story or don't post it. Assholes!!!!

No explanation why take only one child

If you're writing a multi part story label it with a part number. Sometimes, we want a short story other times, a chapter is enough. The headline implies a complete story. You didn't deliver.

As a pro writer, however small I am, I must say, "tell the whole story, or don't start the project at all!" Also, the AI narrator is pretty piss-poor. Not being able to understand written English with less than human precision is unforgivable. You will never get a Subscribe from me or the 5 million people in 96 countries who listen to my reviews, until you obtain a narrator who can actually read accurately!

Too much talk and repeat talk, turns it into bullshit, we don't need all the flowery explanations, that's just bollocks, filler, no substance

Incomplete, Best stop there, I think. Don't want to be too rude.

Last time I watch these half a story vids 👋bye

Edit/reply: 23 Nov. 1) Twenty-two minutes and NOTHING HAPPENED, plots should show some progress. There was not enough movement to even make me look for a sequel episode. 2) Too much verbage for that lack of depth... I will say: you did not use the same phraise multiple times ex: ''xxx knew the battle was far from over'. 3) All text- to- speech programs are... Kluge. I will give you credit in the fact your presentation did match with the description / title.🎉 Good Luck! Twenty-two minutes of nothing. At least you can taste the sugar in Cotton Candy. These "stories" are getting worse instead of better as time goes on.

Another all female woke bullshit stories...

Like listening to a soap opera, the AI tone is very monotonous and frankly I felt myself falling asleep by halfway while waiting for something to happen - so many words in the story but nothing happened and the Galactic Fleet was still there at the end and so the title made no sense.

repeat repeat repeat just get on with it

Good story tho.

Oh look the guy on the left has five fingers plus I’m assuming a thumb. Lol

STOP NOW! DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME No ending. Cut off the story mid-sentence, mid-battle. Total garbage, despite starting out good.

Stop uploading half a damn story

No damn ending! Take this WIP back and finish it! And do not ever publish an unfinished story again! 👎

What a fuck meaning less story.

This AI garbage needs to stop.

"You chose the wrong enemy" ❤

sooo boring

she? her ? how dare you sexist pig

Just cuts off… AI is really choppy too. I’d invest in a better one if you want to get more subscribers. Good luck

No conclusion.

WTF!!!

This story is not based on bravery but pride and stupidity. Elana is a dumb and stupid commander who should have sent for reinforcement. The story is just dumb and plain stupidity

"Aliens Break 3000-Year Peace for War, Only for Humans to Laugh"? Nowhere, no ending. You should be ashamed of yourself for making this non-story live.

Hate Cliff hangers.

bro can you add animation

This makes me laugh. Nuclear reactors are always critical when in operation.

3 millennia at war but all are officers of countless conflicts- doesn’t make sense.

Andromeda IS a galaxy, not a place in this one, you doltt.