Finally able to get around to this, great work my friend. I only have one critique and it's minor, but still important. At 3:41, it was kind of hard to tell who was talking (mainly what voice actor was who). It's mainly because the shot was just in one position the whole time. The way you had it set up is that you'd think Superman was talking the whole time. I would suggest having a shot from Supe's POV showing that character's face to signify they were talking, or just having subtle movements to tell who's who if you want to keep one static shot. These cuts can come in handy for future projects if you want to diversify your cinematography. (Hope that made sense, this was the best way I could describe it.) Other than that everything was fine and very action packed. 10/10
I can’t begin to express how amazing this was the attention to details on the containment suit of Doomsday. The sound affect original and great. The practical affects amazing and the set design simple but effective. Man I hope my animations is at this level.
Great video man but definitely add more frames and take more pictures just so it looks more smooth and not choppy and definitely add more background music plus adding voice actors makes things better but good effort
Needed more frames, better voices, and some mouth animation. Understandable why you didnt have those things though. Still pretty good, I'll stay subbed if you continue to make more content like this.
Great choreography and action, the camera, editing, and especially the lighting and practical effects were excellent! But there are areas that need to be improved on. The animation was choppy at quiet a few points and the sound effects were either too quiet at times or not even there. All in all it was a good video but please take my advice and up the frame rate to 15 frames per second and check out the blast SFX on TH-cam, he has some really good DC Hero sound effects packs for free use, you just have to credit him.
@comics4lifeproduction660 you're welcome. And just know I mean none of my complaints as personal. I do see potential in you and I really want you to shine.
I can’t begin to express how amazing this was the attention to details on the containment suit of Doomsday. The sound affect original and great. The practical affects amazing and the set design simple but effective. Man I hope my animations is at this level.
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Finally able to get around to this, great work my friend. I only have one critique and it's minor, but still important. At 3:41, it was kind of hard to tell who was talking (mainly what voice actor was who). It's mainly because the shot was just in one position the whole time. The way you had it set up is that you'd think Superman was talking the whole time. I would suggest having a shot from Supe's POV showing that character's face to signify they were talking, or just having subtle movements to tell who's who if you want to keep one static shot. These cuts can come in handy for future projects if you want to diversify your cinematography. (Hope that made sense, this was the best way I could describe it.) Other than that everything was fine and very action packed. 10/10
I can’t begin to express how amazing this was the attention to details on the containment suit of Doomsday. The sound affect original and great. The practical affects amazing and the set design simple but effective. Man I hope my animations is at this level.
Awesomeness
Great video man but definitely add more frames and take more pictures just so it looks more smooth and not choppy and definitely add more background music plus adding voice actors makes things better but good effort
This is art!
Been awhile but Hey everyone. Don’t forget to like comment and subscribe so you don’t miss any new films coming out soon.
Yep that was fun! Awesome job!!
Thanks again! Don’t miss any other films coming soon like a TMNT short film soon
You are doing such a great job with these, the animation is so well done!
Man the action was phenomenal! You used the practical effects to a great degree! Keep up the good work 😎
Thank u bro, I saw your too the fight scenes and plot with thanos sending doomsday was so tuff
This. Is cool like the new DCU
Needed more frames, better voices, and some mouth animation. Understandable why you didnt have those things though. Still pretty good, I'll stay subbed if you continue to make more content like this.
I’m going to be present more specifically TH-cam so this information I will definitely incorporate into justice league the end part 2
You Know what? Make the better one
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can you doing justice vs legion of doom ?
Excellent work! Getting better every time out.
Great choreography and action, the camera, editing, and especially the lighting and practical effects were excellent! But there are areas that need to be improved on. The animation was choppy at quiet a few points and the sound effects were either too quiet at times or not even there. All in all it was a good video but please take my advice and up the frame rate to 15 frames per second and check out the blast SFX on TH-cam, he has some really good DC Hero sound effects packs for free use, you just have to credit him.
Thnx I do appreciate criticism and thank you for the sound effects channel I will definitely try to apply it to my next film
@comics4lifeproduction660 you're welcome. And just know I mean none of my complaints as personal. I do see potential in you and I really want you to shine.
Since why you had to use mayfair's doomsday figure to rip Captain Atom apart
And you let him smash Green Lantern's his head
Nicely done!
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Good stuff 👍
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906 views? Wtf TH-cam?!
😧😧😧😧😧 what thee heck did I watch
Superman get his arse kicked 🌚
did you base this off the death of super man and is this canon to end of jla@@comics4lifeproduction660
It’s apart of my universe but a different earth this storyline will be important later
I can’t begin to express how amazing this was the attention to details on the containment suit of Doomsday. The sound affect original and great. The practical affects amazing and the set design simple but effective. Man I hope my animations is at this level.
I will spam this comment for the TH-cam algorithm
I will spam this comment for the TH-cam algorithm