I have been struggling with addiction. It is not mere coincidence i have come across this song. This song is literally feeding my soul and strengthening me in my fightback against the addiction i know i can beat and once more become great as i once was
For everyone that is going through a hard time in there life I hope that you make it back to happiness again, I hope that you all stay strong and pray, look for help and you are not alone even if you feel like you are 💯💪👑💖
Wise men say that we all have it in us to be unbeatable And they say that the lessons we learn are repeatable Why then do I feel like life is so unreasonable Even when so many people have already proven it’s feasible When will I have my day to shine in the sky Will I ever learn to win before I die I want so much to fly So much time has passed already Time has made me weak and heavy But deep inside I know I’m ready Why then are my hands so empty I search for victory every day But so many things just get in my way How much toll do I have to pay How many dragons do I have to slay Wish I might wish I may Have my victory everyday I’d be unbeatable in every regard I’d run every mile and pass every yard I’d go the distance and each extra inch I’d face every fear and never flinch When will I have this awesome power I count each passing minute and every hour To be unbeatable would be so great But to free my burden I must wait Until the day comes when I’ll be free For when at last I can be me…
Your Hook: (We run every mile to get better...our tears only make out faces wetter. We must fight the dark now a day with the light. I see it now that our future is bright. We can be the best just wait and until the end of us we must have a clean dish and a clean slate. ) My verse: I been told that I wont get far and look at me now. I tried to get better in life and I still wonder how. I been played and lied by many but I still got God to support me and I know he wont abandon me. My friend passed and I couldnt breathe coz he was close to me. I lost my girl coz she cheated and I had nothin else to do but write n drink. I wanna have a child and tell em that he can be the best and I wanna be in the music business to join rest of the greats and play on stage like Pac did in 96 but I will have to try and get this shit so with u n my family we can be unbeatable. hope u like the hook and my verse and tbh u did great I love wat u put n I do believe that both of us can get this music. And I actually have more verses and everything....if u wanna hear more or record or chat hmu brotha....again love the verse u did....that is meant to be recorded
I am here in 2020 from 2013 I kid u not 😭😭 this beat will always bring nostalgic motivation and faith. Wrote to this since a little kid and always listened to it to lighten my days when they dark. Thank you producer 🙏🏻
I LOVE THIS!! This one of the most beautiful, most magnificent sounds that ever graced my ears. It truly inspired me and brought peace, joy and happiness to my soul. Thanks for inspiring me with your beautiful talent!
So happy I found this. 😃♥️ It makes me think of driving through the back roads of a state with lovely scenery and majestic mountains. Maybe Utah... 😃♥️🤗😍 Picturing myself just driving through right now even though I'm not even in Utah anymore lol. ♥️😃
When I feel weak, I know that deep within I am strong, strong enough to carry on When times are hard and I feel like just giving up I know that deep inside of me that I am strong Cause off your song it keeps me strong helps my fears and gives me hope to carry on through no matter what I am a mother a friend a lover a sister a wife, but most off all I am Dawn first and foremost. I will never give up hope I will never give in or let other's pull me down ever again. Cause when other's do fall around me, I will be the last one standing The one who is stronger than the rest cause life is not merely a test but a leap of faith just to exist in the human race. Now who's got a big smile on her face cause life is to embrace So know my name see my face cause I do exist in this life in my own right to stand tall never let other's make me fall down Cause you see my name is dawn you'll only see me grow and become stronger.
Brilliant. Just for the record... It wasn't aimed at you ok got better things to think about Ok. Good luck and now we do not have to bother about what each other are up to cause now we r both free. I'll gladly leave you alone. Not bothered anymore Ok. Hope this clears up a few things for you aswell. Goodbye
Fr I've heard hundreds if not thousands of beats since I heard this my dude if you don't give it to me give it to someone this is still the period best period beat period ever period
Young people, can u hear the sounds! Feels like notes r floating all around. I said feel cuz u really can't see them, but all I wanted to do here is reason. Can u see God? No u can't. But u could feel him if u only gave him the chance. Faith is all u need, u could be saved at last. Time to be forgiven my friend of all of ur past. Jesus is the way, u can be saved. Don't let this world fool u n be lead astray. Hell is real man, n Jesus too! But trusting him! Is the ONLY way we can come through.
they say to never look down but its just too temptin' nobody's around no one payin attention i wanna make him proud with my christian invention but who can hear my sound when i'm in my own dimension tryna share my gift with the man up above havin to persist with the power of love they all told me not to write gotta keep it under wraps they all said i wasnt right not grown, male or black standin all alone wrong gender, wrong race only tryna get home wrong look, wrong place i was david with a stone and a giant in my face i was tryna get the throne i was tryna make the play but when i started runnin home i was too far off base cuz i had to be a clone or i had to be erased gotta do it on my own with these dreams to chase so me and my headphones just have to walk by faith
That moment when you're crushed, You've been reduced to dust. Stuck in a must of rust. But you know - that you must. Rush - the target - head on. As a phoenix reborn, there is no time to mourn. Soar till you score - and show them all that you had the potential. Full form - final and realized. Let them be surprised, as what lies, before their eyes - is you. And you can do - what you couldn't - or what you thought you wouldn't. This power you've put in - it changes it all. Your back was against the wall, you suspected a fall. Thought of yourself as just flaws. But now you see, what you can be, dive into not the river - but the sea.
Alright done heres my lyrics: [CLICK READ MORE] [Verse 1] (rap) I've always had a dream that I could go real far, Then I think what is far, is it really that hard? Could it come from just one verse or an album to start, All I care is that my life don't wait long and tare apart, Cuz I could be real fragile or I could stand up nice and strong, It all depends on if I really have the soul to stand on, To make my music come out fast so that my fans can last long, If I stop, I just know, my life is BAM gone, So I dream of the future, winner or a looser, Could I be the one that could reach and pass through her, Or could I be the drifter fading through lost worlds, That I can't find anywhere else but deep in dark pearls, People say focus in school you'll just figure it out, But what if I never do and then I'll black out, The void, no use from my eyes to boast and laugh out, Never mind its just a dream, a dark and daft route, [Chorus] (Sing) Should I stand and rise up high Or leave it as a dark surprise, Applause only comes if I rise, I want to be unbeatable, Could I stand and steer my roads, Could I burn off all my clothes, Show the world my inner goal, That I wanna be unbeatable, X2 [Verse 2] (Rap) Why can't we all just hold up our hands, Have peace that no enemy can ever stand, Like every dreamer gotta have a past, Well my past is pretty common and I still prey and ask, Why can't my strongest dreams all turn out true, It's like a curse with a barrier I can't break through, Like I have no living soul that my heart could prove, Like I have a small thought that wont budge nor move, Lets see if anybody cares that I can rap without no trouble, Lets see if anybody cares that I could burst right out my bubble, Nobody really cares but does that prove that I have a struggle, No it don't because nothing works out like a huddle, I don't see why my head tells me don't show the world your gift, I mean this gift could lead me to make my life a little less shit, Make my conscience and confidence do nothing but lift, But I'm still left isolated with my brain taking a hit. [Chorus] (Sing) Should I stand and rise up high, Or leave it as a dark surprise, Applause only comes if I rise, I want to be unbeatable, Could I stand and steer my roads, Could I burn off all my clothes, Show the world my inner goal, That I wanna be unbeatable, X1 only Please comment what you think. Ed Sheeran
Man, I'm just gonna go off the top of my head This song goes out to all those strugglin' to get outta bed Fuck the haters, they all straight liars, you nothin' less than an inextinguishable fire Don't copy others just do you and be yourself, even if that means stackin' grocery shelves You're nothing less than a star, and sometimes it's hard to see how far you've came When everyone around is you dragging you down remember you're you Anyone who ever doubted was an egg, they they believed, got up and flew I knew coming to the studio and recording was the right thing to do Cuz I had to get these lines off my chest, before you test me remember the Sun always sets in the West And rain ain't shit without the sunrise, so realize, the bags under your eyes Are a testament to the tests you've been dealt, and no matter how much you've been bent There's always an envelope to be sent, God loves you all the same even if you don't repent Do better than you have ever done, and smile the wetter you become Stand up, jump for the stars and land it, shoot for the moon, and before you know it soon You'll turn teardrops to a fuckin' monsoon Drop the lighter and drop the burnt spoon We've had enough of the deathstares and the nightmares We're through with not wanting to climb a flight of stairs Take flight till your hair blows away with the wind And sing knowing you just a piece of the puzzle of your fellow kin
I've been told to back down , but I ain't leavin I'm standing my ground , can't you hear the sound of the crowd , ain't nothin stopping me from roaming around , it's the sound of the bear the sets me different from you people you see , I relyin on em to keep me off the streets , pay the bills and help me eat , the lyrics set me free , I ain't ever takin off this crown , it's my own for now , I eat breath and sleep it so come on , I'll stop when you can prove me wrong , it takes real talent to stay strong , I'm the only real prodigie who's not find , as long as I'm standing tall , I ain't ever gonna make the wrong call , cause truth be told your hearts ain't cold , it's the mind playin tricks to make you belive I'm selfish prick , the desperate haters are bein controlled by the damn instigators , the backstage Sherlock Holmes investigators , tryin to rely on finding a lie , my stories straight and it's staying that way , I do this for the people who want to hear music , I encourage em to fuse and use it to just go off and lose it , and show how vicious and ruthless some people can be , that's my only dream , but if they want to fight they'll truly see , I can still take em on even in a one man army . Please Give thoughts or advice to help me write better , it would be greatly appreciated :)
Fucking kids making hits off of shit they made in they best friends basement , it's pure amazement how these mcees take it, faking a smile for a child who wrote a song about fucking eating mcDonalds, it's nuts how many stupid fucks would pay a couple bucks to listen to this fucking shit , if this is what it's come to than I drop my mic and quit , I thought I figured this hobbie and conquered it, but I guess not cause these people would rather listen to something fit for a twit, bunch of useless misfits rapping songs about banging a bitch , rapping about how they fucking hate they mom and father , what happened to this genres honor
Feelin' Unbeatable, it's unbelievable, but not that many people, can really see it though, fuck it, I'll celebrate victory, all by myself, since mostly music was there, for everyone else, that's why rappers should write, something memorable, so those who listen to it, would never lose hope, that's what motivates me daily, every second, every minute, and every hourrr, and every lesson it's no guessin' what could happen with possessin' this powwwer... hope it never gets to my head, hope I'll remember not to let it, hope that I won't go to Hell, and have faith to make it to Heaven, hope that people can see past, my flaws and mistakes, all I wanted was the love, so why do I face all of this hate? But I guess that's jealousy, that's what people keep tellin' me, we got so many people to worry about, so why act selfishly? I give more than I take after takin' more than what's been given to me, so regardless of our differences, ya'll ain't really too different from me, I'm just another chapter...Another page...Another open book... Another human...All you gotta do is read me...Nahmean?...
Well I guess my time is up now coz I cant bare the loss. I cried my eyes out to the point to where my heart is mooshy n soft. I pray to God for an end wen I lost my friend. He was 18 n young n with a kin. he had a baby comin n this man walked off with a bag full of death n sin. I wonder why I gotta sit cry I feel empty sometimes to where I wanna die. I try to pull my self up but the pain so grows. My girl left n I felt like a dead rose. All I have is my pencil n a beat. In the streets I need my hands so coz I dont believe in packin heat n but God grant men strength to feel just this one song n leave it on repeat.
Dope verses🙏🏾 Checkout mine 😋 It's literally in the comment section, it's like the newest post Infact I think it's like been like 12 hours just like your post
*I'm Sorry For Your Loss Bro.. I Know How It Feels.* *But Remember He's There & Watching Every Step You Take.* *Bare That In Mind That Someday You Will Meet Him Again.*
sorry for youre losses dude. i know what it feels like because i lost a sibling before birth. it sucks to lose one of youre own... trust me i know the feeling. i cried for 2 weeks till i finally told my friends why i wasn't myself. they told me ways i could feel better about life. here is what i was told... life is unfair and unforgiving... i get it but don't let it eat you up and consume you. try not to think of the past only think of the future. please DON'T be consumed by depression and please never hurt youre self or any one else.
Its always been about who I am Surviving like there aint no tomorrow trying to make money of o words on paper but I realize I am only getting lamer What do I do? What should I take? Fame and the hate? Or Nay and layer back. Then I know Pain is the only way to go! Who gives If I am bad? I just wanna go follow my Ideals to be free! and nothing but me.
Listen, I am unbeatable, more like I'm undefeatable, even when I'm defeated my effort is unbelievable, that comes when people believe in you, you achieve things inconceivable, and that is just the beginning of living a life that's feasible, so don't tell me what he would do, You gotta live live for yourself, you gotta live for the moment and not for somebody else, the world is not your opponent so why you fighting yourself, repeating "you can not do it" is only hurting yourself, there's people who have your back and people who'll back you up, when your fighting for more than you there's an extra level of trust, which brings extra levels of guts, so fighting back is a must, and then you will see its true, that you are unbeatable, why, because of others belief in you!
00:54 You´re distant, like in a book somewhere You don´t really know You don´t really care All the pain is gone All the troubles flown somehow finaly your life has turned around spending no more time wasted on those wounds no longer sitting locked down alone within your room you´ve been given wings so go ahead and fly I told you that you´d make it you shall come alive just follow your own stride listen to your heart No ears for the hater, no more time to fall apart all those chains are gone no more extra large aint got time to bare the weight of problems with unbroken arms you´re sucked right trough the roof into the open air all the feels are yours and they can lead you anywhere so go ahead and make it I know ill see you there Follow me tomorrow and we will disappear... Soar - high into the atmosphere............. we will take this journey you and I.......... Fly away from everything with no fear And we´ll find another place where .......... we can shine... /sry if my eng is off im Swedish, great song/beat love it.
Cracked ribs from the hugs that you'd give Sad grins mask the pain that I'm in Thoughts of you still reign from within Visions of beautiful sins Voices of madness Singing songs of sadness The devil took my soul Bitch you left me heartless
th-cam.com/video/zAAsykRfLwo/w-d-xo.htmlm00s-th-cam.com/video/zAAsykRfLwo/w-d-xo.htmlm23sTalking(If you ever dreamed of something special, something that you really want, you can't let life put you down, you just gotta go tuff, even if you think your failing, your not, your just getting close to your goal, and yes it will always be tough) th-cam.com/video/zAAsykRfLwo/w-d-xo.htmlm43s-th-cam.com/video/zAAsykRfLwo/w-d-xo.htmlm03sSinging(If you ever wanna get to your destiny, u gotta try before you wanna leave, if you think people's gonna stop me just remember you can't be me) Rapping(I was always picked on since I was a little kid always getting teased for the littlest things never could really do my own thing cause everywhere I go people laughing, ha they thing it's a joke now cause when I grow big who gone be the joke now, not me no, i'll be living my my dreams while all who was bullying will be on the streets. lol I was just randomly freestyling sorry if I was bad
Its funny how we go from being a baby becoming a child growing to a man meeting a lady joining the army or even the navy getting a dog creating a baby but this world is corrupt we live to die but were dieng to live we are miniscule to nature but we wanna be big . I'm doing 40 hour weeks with a boulder on my shoulder the worlds the same but my vessels getting older its getting harder I wanna cry but I can't handle the pain I think I need your shoulder theres thunder in the sky lighting to hard to bare all the lost souls are rushing through the air
Why the fuck do I always try to be like Eminem, I understand that I never had a fuckin chance, the chance was Slim, reality's finally kicking in, I don't know why, but they always ask me why I act like him, It's cuz I rap like him, But now I'm back again, I'm back to win, kids, I want y'all to grab your pens, and jot down every verse that i ever spat to slim, Thank God for him, cuz without him, man, i wouldn't be pushing through this shit, I'd be out of my mind, Id be losing it, God damn,man, im running out of time, Im running out of rhymes, Im running out of lines, Cuz I'm jotting down anything that pops in my mind, Punch lines? God damn, I'm just too tired to throw another one, This song's to anyone,everyone, and anyone, Might as well just hand a gun, to my haters just like Levy son, Hate me hun? Baby bum. Cuz your a baby and your a bum! What the fuck kalvin! You had one year left, this is it, you ran away and now your life's a wreck, your life's a ship that just fuckin broke in half and split, wake up kid! you need a fuckin reality check It seems like I had it made, but I'm feeling more like a maid, cuz I have to clean up this mess that I created, I made this mess, I don't know how I'm gonna say this kid, this ain't a race, I don't know how else I'm gonna relay this message. Did u get the last line? "relay" & "race"
Yea, I'm the man Here I go to rant While my opportunities expand I have these minority's To say I'm sorry b I know this isn't what we wanted We want success We wanted to stand out just to be the best We know life is testing us We don't want to sit on the bottom to having noting to eat Praying to god on my knees Maybe tonight will be the day I short my breath and die in my dream I did everything I was set out to be Went off for my team All these nights catching up to me Playing football being the best player on the team Drugs entered my life Now it's like I got a 8" knife stuck in my back Parents smokin crack Shits whack Dividing in my stacks I'm out here in all the lies speaking facts Reminiscing that I'm out on a mission To be the best No stress Nothing less played my moves so good that I won the game of king of the chest Now here we go to contrast That I'm just I guy looking for a girl with fat ass
You are unbeatable, unseekable (you are already are), your mind is sacred and your body is art. You are timeless, and not just the body, that's false, in the casket it's damned without bodily pulse. Atman is Brahman, the soul is God, Christ was a mystic but his poems were lost. Even Buddha never said there's no self, he said "this is not you", but miscreants were twisted, confused. Every single master said that you are a God, so don't forget this to maneuver in frauds.
Sorry for this lame comment:( but I uploaded my first beat from fruity loops and would really like it if you guys could give me feedback on how it is! Its hard starting out on youtube and the least i could do is try to spread the word of my music. Thanks guys!
yeah im known as a soldier, and threw my life i've only gotten colder, im just tired of carrying all of this weight on my shoulders, It's so hard going threw life with a regrettable composer , and letting people push me around like a bulldozer ,,tired of being the only one real ya fucking posers, imposters, and boosters ,gonna spit on ya for some exposure cuz i grow tired of being a loner ,Stay smoking that fire so im a stoner,sticky ass shit with one hell of an odor they should of called it oger and i only buy it straight from the grower so forget about all the jokers .....
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Saw this video 10-12 years ago and I still come back time to time
I have been struggling with addiction. It is not mere coincidence i have come across this song. This song is literally feeding my soul and strengthening me in my fightback against the addiction i know i can beat and once more become great as i once was
More power to you brother
Repent and follow Jesus he will deliver you of your drug addiction
I hope you are well a year later. Best of luck to you.
Happy to read this 😍😍
eroScorp12 thank you brother
I came here after 10 years,still getting these goosebumps when I got back then.This is truly unbeatable and unforgettable❤
i just wrote something called Unbreakable its free i will publish it
2023 everyone?
For everyone that is going through a hard time in there life I hope that you make it back to happiness again, I hope that you all stay strong and pray, look for help and you are not alone even if you feel like you are 💯💪👑💖
Wise men say that we all have it in us to be unbeatable
And they say that the lessons we learn are repeatable
Why then do I feel like life is so unreasonable
Even when so many people have already proven it’s feasible
When will I have my day to shine in the sky
Will I ever learn to win before I die I want so much to fly
So much time has passed already
Time has made me weak and heavy
But deep inside I know I’m ready
Why then are my hands so empty
I search for victory every day
But so many things just get in my way
How much toll do I have to pay
How many dragons do I have to slay
Wish I might wish I may
Have my victory everyday
I’d be unbeatable in every regard
I’d run every mile and pass every yard
I’d go the distance and each extra inch
I’d face every fear and never flinch
When will I have this awesome power
I count each passing minute and every hour
To be unbeatable would be so great
But to free my burden I must wait
Until the day comes when I’ll be free
For when at last I can be me…
I like this,
Nice verse!
that was cool
Your Hook:
(We run every mile to get better...our tears only make out faces wetter.
We must fight the dark now a day with the light. I see it now that our future is bright.
We can be the best just wait and until the end of us we must have a clean dish and a clean slate. )
My verse: I been told that I wont get far and look at me now. I tried to get better in life and I still wonder how. I been played and lied by many but I still got God to support me and I know he wont abandon me. My friend passed and I couldnt breathe coz he was close to me. I lost my girl coz she cheated and I had nothin else to do but write n drink. I wanna have a child and tell em that he can be the best and I wanna be in the music business to join rest of the greats and play on stage like Pac did in 96 but I will have to try and get this shit so with u n my family we can be unbeatable.
hope u like the hook and my verse and tbh u did great I love wat u put n I do believe that both of us can get this music. And I actually have more verses and everything....if u wanna hear more or record or chat hmu brotha....again love the verse u did....that is meant to be recorded
Thanks! check out my channel for more raps.
2023 still my go to when you run out of gas 💯🔥🔥🔥
Forever the sickest beat of its time
That moment when you're still standing, but you can't go any lower than you are... You are unbeatable, still standing and the only thing to do is rise
best beat ever!!
Its been 5 years or so since I listened to this last. But I came back cause it has a special place in my life. Thank you for keeping it up.
I am here in 2020 from 2013 I kid u not 😭😭 this beat will always bring nostalgic motivation and faith. Wrote to this since a little kid and always listened to it to lighten my days when they dark. Thank you producer 🙏🏻
I LOVE THIS!! This one of the most beautiful, most magnificent sounds that ever graced my ears. It truly inspired me and brought peace, joy and happiness to my soul. Thanks for inspiring me with your beautiful talent!
dude this beat is fricken awesome
So happy I found this. 😃♥️ It makes me think of driving through the back roads of a state with lovely scenery and majestic mountains. Maybe Utah... 😃♥️🤗😍 Picturing myself just driving through right now even though I'm not even in Utah anymore lol. ♥️😃
Wow... Speechless... Props to whoever made this beautiful work of art.
i like to listen to this every time i'm playing a sport i feel unbeatable...it brings the best out me
When I feel weak, I know that deep within I am strong, strong enough to carry on
When times are hard and I feel like just giving up
I know that deep inside of me that I am strong
Cause off your song it keeps me strong helps my fears and gives me hope to carry on through no matter what
I am a mother a friend a lover a sister a wife, but most off all
I am Dawn first and foremost.
I will never give up hope I will never give in or let other's pull me down ever again.
Cause when other's do fall around me, I will be the last one standing
The one who is stronger than the rest cause life is not merely a test but a leap of faith just to exist in the human race.
Now who's got a big smile on her face cause life is to embrace
So know my name see my face cause I do exist in this life in my own right to stand tall never let other's make me fall down
Cause you see my name is dawn you'll only see me grow and become stronger.
Brilliant. Just for the record... It wasn't aimed at you ok got better things to think about Ok.
Good luck and now we do not have to bother about what each other are up to cause now we r both free.
I'll gladly leave you alone.
Not bothered anymore Ok.
Hope this clears up a few things for you aswell.
Goodbye
Wtf O_o
LEJKAHH I think we just saw a broken relationship.
awesome
GettingPwnedWithStyle LeoGuitarize LEJKAHH this is revolutionary.
Fr I've heard hundreds if not thousands of beats since I heard this my dude if you don't give it to me give it to someone this is still the period best period beat period ever period
To song has and still continues to help bring me joy thru out my life rt big time thank you who ever made it. Never forget
Holy shit...
I'd pay money to hear Eminem rap to this.
Like money you would pay for the album? ,,,,
Athena Brown he said album not CD and the alternative method is downloading. Jesus I worry about the world.
MusicArcade ahahahaha
Athena Brown hey you made this beat
Athena Brown people say i sound like Eminem, check me out
Close your eyes open your heart and just try feel sensation hiphop music angel from the sky
Did
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Amazing progression .........
amazing beat, just wow..
drum beat kill the vibe
Essa base fica loka, com qualquer tipo de rap..
Rap do bem rap do mal rap das mina e dos muleque
Inspiring beat , keep up the good work
Very dope!
keep working man, this beat is dope
i'm studying right now, and I was thinking…. with this beat i can reach everything i want
Je l adore... elle est magnifique
Cool viens inbox
Beautiful work !!!
Beautiful work
Young people, can u hear the sounds! Feels like notes r floating all around. I said feel cuz u really can't see them, but all I wanted to do here is reason. Can u see God? No u can't. But u could feel him if u only gave him the chance. Faith is all u need, u could be saved at last. Time to be forgiven my friend of all of ur past. Jesus is the way, u can be saved. Don't let this world fool u n be lead astray. Hell is real man, n Jesus too! But trusting him! Is the ONLY way we can come through.
they say to never look down
but its just too temptin'
nobody's around
no one payin attention
i wanna make him proud
with my christian invention
but who can hear my sound
when i'm in my own dimension
tryna share my gift
with the man up above
havin to persist
with the power of love
they all told me not to write
gotta keep it under wraps
they all said i wasnt right
not grown, male or black
standin all alone
wrong gender, wrong race
only tryna get home
wrong look, wrong place
i was david with a stone
and a giant in my face
i was tryna get the throne
i was tryna make the play
but when i started runnin home
i was too far off base
cuz i had to be a clone
or i had to be erased
gotta do it on my own
with these dreams to chase
so me and my headphones
just have to walk by faith
Boom
Love it
banging
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lovely rap, u inspired me
S.Layn'Singh Music thats amazing how did u come up with that ❤
This beat is really unbeatable!!😃😃amazing and beautiful😃👏👏👏👏
Wow my favorite of all time!
You will feel unstoppable If You accept the music in your heart.
and when the music finish .. you will feel like old man ..all the pices stope
Perfect.
Awesome..love the beat, I felt it flow in and out of my soul, weird and drawing.
Perfect story telling instrumental
Freestyle On This Seems Like It Came Off Of A Football Video Tho ! :)
That moment when you're crushed, You've been reduced to dust.
Stuck in a must of rust. But you know - that you must.
Rush - the target - head on. As a phoenix reborn, there is no time to mourn.
Soar till you score - and show them all that you had the potential.
Full form - final and realized.
Let them be surprised, as what lies, before their eyes - is you.
And you can do - what you couldn't - or what you thought you wouldn't.
This power you've put in - it changes it all.
Your back was against the wall, you suspected a fall.
Thought of yourself as just flaws.
But now you see, what you can be, dive into not the river - but the sea.
Nice! great vid
Great Job!
Alright done heres my lyrics:
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[Verse 1]
(rap)
I've always had a dream that I could go real far,
Then I think what is far, is it really that hard?
Could it come from just one verse or an album to start,
All I care is that my life don't wait long and tare apart,
Cuz I could be real fragile or I could stand up nice and strong,
It all depends on if I really have the soul to stand on,
To make my music come out fast so that my fans can last long,
If I stop, I just know, my life is BAM gone,
So I dream of the future, winner or a looser,
Could I be the one that could reach and pass through her,
Or could I be the drifter fading through lost worlds,
That I can't find anywhere else but deep in dark pearls,
People say focus in school you'll just figure it out,
But what if I never do and then I'll black out,
The void, no use from my eyes to boast and laugh out,
Never mind its just a dream, a dark and daft route,
[Chorus]
(Sing)
Should I stand and rise up high
Or leave it as a dark surprise,
Applause only comes if I rise,
I want to be unbeatable,
Could I stand and steer my roads,
Could I burn off all my clothes,
Show the world my inner goal,
That I wanna be unbeatable,
X2
[Verse 2]
(Rap)
Why can't we all just hold up our hands,
Have peace that no enemy can ever stand,
Like every dreamer gotta have a past,
Well my past is pretty common and I still prey and ask,
Why can't my strongest dreams all turn out true,
It's like a curse with a barrier I can't break through,
Like I have no living soul that my heart could prove,
Like I have a small thought that wont budge nor move,
Lets see if anybody cares that I can rap without no trouble,
Lets see if anybody cares that I could burst right out my bubble,
Nobody really cares but does that prove that I have a struggle,
No it don't because nothing works out like a huddle,
I don't see why my head tells me don't show the world your gift,
I mean this gift could lead me to make my life a little less shit,
Make my conscience and confidence do nothing but lift,
But I'm still left isolated with my brain taking a hit.
[Chorus]
(Sing)
Should I stand and rise up high,
Or leave it as a dark surprise,
Applause only comes if I rise,
I want to be unbeatable,
Could I stand and steer my roads,
Could I burn off all my clothes,
Show the world my inner goal,
That I wanna be unbeatable,
X1 only
Please comment what you think.
Ed Sheeran
Do you record your music?
Moe Alka amazing
Awesome
Woah..... That was amazing.... Youve earned a sub, and you best believe that you can add one more fan to your list
Have u uploaded the song I want to listen to this brother.
Man, I'm just gonna go off the top of my head
This song goes out to all those strugglin' to get outta bed
Fuck the haters, they all straight liars, you nothin' less than an inextinguishable fire
Don't copy others just do you and be yourself, even if that means stackin' grocery shelves
You're nothing less than a star, and sometimes it's hard to see how far you've came
When everyone around is you dragging you down remember you're you
Anyone who ever doubted was an egg, they they believed, got up and flew
I knew coming to the studio and recording was the right thing to do
Cuz I had to get these lines off my chest, before you test me remember the Sun always sets in the West
And rain ain't shit without the sunrise, so realize, the bags under your eyes
Are a testament to the tests you've been dealt, and no matter how much you've been bent
There's always an envelope to be sent, God loves you all the same even if you don't repent
Do better than you have ever done, and smile the wetter you become
Stand up, jump for the stars and land it, shoot for the moon, and before you know it soon
You'll turn teardrops to a fuckin' monsoon
Drop the lighter and drop the burnt spoon
We've had enough of the deathstares and the nightmares
We're through with not wanting to climb a flight of stairs
Take flight till your hair blows away with the wind
And sing knowing you just a piece of the puzzle of your fellow kin
Sick beat!
wow i love this beat man good job u can tell theres alot of emotion behind this one
I've been told to back down , but I ain't leavin I'm standing my ground , can't you hear the sound of the crowd , ain't nothin stopping me from roaming around , it's the sound of the bear the sets me different from you people you see , I relyin on em to keep me off the streets , pay the bills and help me eat , the lyrics set me free , I ain't ever takin off this crown , it's my own for now , I eat breath and sleep it so come on , I'll stop when you can prove me wrong , it takes real talent to stay strong , I'm the only real prodigie who's not find , as long as I'm standing tall , I ain't ever gonna make the wrong call , cause truth be told your hearts ain't cold , it's the mind playin tricks to make you belive I'm selfish prick , the desperate haters are bein controlled by the damn instigators , the backstage Sherlock Holmes investigators , tryin to rely on finding a lie , my stories straight and it's staying that way , I do this for the people who want to hear music , I encourage em to fuse and use it to just go off and lose it , and show how vicious and ruthless some people can be , that's my only dream , but if they want to fight they'll truly see , I can still take em on even in a one man army . Please Give thoughts or advice to help me write better , it would be greatly appreciated :)
Fucking kids making hits off of shit they made in they best friends basement , it's pure amazement how these mcees take it, faking a smile for a child who wrote a song about fucking eating mcDonalds, it's nuts how many stupid fucks would pay a couple bucks to listen to this fucking shit , if this is what it's come to than I drop my mic and quit , I thought I figured this hobbie and conquered it, but I guess not cause these people would rather listen to something fit for a twit, bunch of useless misfits rapping songs about banging a bitch , rapping about how they fucking hate they mom and father , what happened to this genres honor
Feelin' Unbeatable, it's unbelievable,
but not that many people, can really see it though,
fuck it, I'll celebrate victory, all by myself,
since mostly music was there, for everyone else,
that's why rappers should write, something memorable,
so those who listen to it, would never lose hope,
that's what motivates me daily,
every second, every minute, and every hourrr,
and every lesson it's no guessin' what could happen with possessin' this powwwer...
hope it never gets to my head, hope I'll remember not to let it,
hope that I won't go to Hell, and have faith to make it to Heaven,
hope that people can see past, my flaws and mistakes,
all I wanted was the love, so why do I face all of this hate?
But I guess that's jealousy, that's what people keep tellin' me,
we got so many people to worry about, so why act selfishly?
I give more than I take after takin' more than what's been given to me,
so regardless of our differences, ya'll ain't really too different from me,
I'm just another chapter...Another page...Another open book...
Another human...All you gotta do is read me...Nahmean?...
yee
+Rayne Lee I wish I could like this twice. That was great
nice bro
+Rayne Lee bro ive been seeing you every where xD nice rap tho
upload video
So relaxing hip hop music!
Who still listens in 2024?? I’m OG at this point!!
Well I guess my time is up now coz I cant bare the loss. I cried my eyes out to the point to where my heart is mooshy n soft. I pray to God for an end wen I lost my friend. He was 18 n young n with a kin. he had a baby comin n this man walked off with a bag full of death n sin. I wonder why I gotta sit cry I feel empty sometimes to where I wanna die. I try to pull my self up but the pain so grows. My girl left n I felt like a dead rose. All I have is my pencil n a beat. In the streets I need my hands so coz I dont believe in packin heat n but God grant men strength to feel just this one song n leave it on repeat.
Dope verses🙏🏾
Checkout mine 😋
It's literally in the comment section, it's like the newest post
Infact I think it's like been like 12 hours just like your post
Thanx man
*I'm Sorry For Your Loss Bro.. I Know How It Feels.*
*But Remember He's There & Watching Every Step You Take.*
*Bare That In Mind That Someday You Will Meet Him Again.*
sorry for youre losses dude. i know what it feels like because i lost a sibling before birth. it sucks to lose one of youre own... trust me i know the feeling. i cried for 2 weeks till i finally told my friends why i wasn't myself. they told me ways i could feel better about life. here is what i was told...
life is unfair and unforgiving... i get it but don't let it eat you up and consume you. try not to think of the past only think of the future.
please DON'T be consumed by depression and please never hurt youre self or any one else.
+FireBird_8899 777 thank u I deeply appreciate it
Its always been about who I am
Surviving like there aint no tomorrow
trying to make money of o words on paper
but I realize I am only getting lamer
What do I do?
What should I take?
Fame and
the hate?
Or Nay
and layer back.
Then I know
Pain is the only way to go!
Who gives If I am bad?
I just wanna go follow my Ideals
to be free!
and nothing but me.
pretty amazing man
:D
+Saurav G from your head?
yeah
This is the definition of perfection.
Very nice beat i cant stop to listen this one.. congratulation...
Listen, I am unbeatable, more like I'm undefeatable, even when I'm defeated my effort is unbelievable, that comes when people believe in you, you achieve things inconceivable, and that is just the beginning of living a life that's feasible, so don't tell me what he would do, You gotta live live for yourself, you gotta live for the moment and not for somebody else, the world is not your opponent so why you fighting yourself, repeating "you can not do it" is only hurting yourself, there's people who have your back and people who'll back you up, when your fighting for more than you there's an extra level of trust, which brings extra levels of guts, so fighting back is a must, and then you will see its true, that you are unbeatable, why, because of others belief in you!
So Awesome bro. Truly inspirational
It is truly inspirational I agree
Only rap so far that actually goes great with the beat
u got the only bars that stood up on this 1 bra bra
#like
#preciseprestige
00:54
You´re distant, like in a book somewhere
You don´t really know
You don´t really care
All the pain is gone
All the troubles flown
somehow finaly your life has turned around
spending no more time
wasted on those wounds
no longer sitting locked down alone within your room
you´ve been given wings
so go ahead and fly
I told you that you´d make it
you shall come alive
just follow your own stride
listen to your heart
No ears for the hater, no more time to fall apart
all those chains are gone
no more extra large
aint got time to bare the weight of problems with unbroken arms
you´re sucked right trough the roof
into the open air
all the feels are yours and they can lead you anywhere
so go ahead and make it
I know ill see you there
Follow me tomorrow
and we will disappear...
Soar - high into the atmosphere.............
we will take this journey you and I..........
Fly away from everything with no fear
And we´ll find another place where .......... we can shine...
/sry if my eng is off im Swedish, great song/beat love it.
***** Thank you :>
Legend instrumental 💪💪
It's 2018 and I still come back to listen to this song sometimes
my brother told me that this is the song you will hear when you go to heaven........ I believed him! xD
Ur brother have right Engel ;)
What will be the song if it's not heaven?
when you go to hell they mean
Can I use it for my channel videos? I will put the link on the description
yo, i think you should try contacting him/her on facebook
the discribtionejduc says so
Love the flow of the beat..
LOVED THE BEGINNING ;) NICE TUNE
Cracked ribs from the hugs that you'd give
Sad grins mask the pain that I'm in
Thoughts of you still reign from within
Visions of beautiful sins
Voices of madness
Singing songs of sadness
The devil took my soul
Bitch you left me heartless
th-cam.com/video/zAAsykRfLwo/w-d-xo.htmlm00s-th-cam.com/video/zAAsykRfLwo/w-d-xo.htmlm23sTalking(If you ever dreamed of something special, something that you really want, you can't let life put you down, you just gotta go tuff, even if you think your failing, your not, your just getting close to your goal, and yes it will always be tough)
th-cam.com/video/zAAsykRfLwo/w-d-xo.htmlm43s-th-cam.com/video/zAAsykRfLwo/w-d-xo.htmlm03sSinging(If you ever wanna get to your destiny, u gotta try before you wanna leave, if you think people's gonna stop me just remember you can't be me)
Rapping(I was always picked on since I was a little kid always getting teased for the littlest things never could really do my own thing cause everywhere I go people laughing, ha they thing it's a joke now cause when I grow big who gone be the joke now, not me no, i'll be living my my dreams while all who was bullying will be on the streets. lol I was just randomly freestyling sorry if I was bad
I love how you wrote "raping"
+VuSuGames Them damn typo moments I guess, lmao.
Rofl
+Alexcia xA hey man would u mind if i used some of that in song im doing
Dope
Ooh. Awesome❤
Damn.....sick as hell dude
Finesse my lyrics, I’ll just speak through your vocal chords
Till’ I’m mainstream, I ain’t hearing shit - I’m local, bored...
Its funny how we go from being a baby becoming a child growing to a man meeting a lady joining the army or even the navy getting a dog creating a baby but this world is corrupt we live to die but were dieng to live we are miniscule to nature but we wanna be big . I'm doing 40 hour weeks with a boulder on my shoulder the worlds the same but my vessels getting older its getting harder I wanna cry but I can't handle the pain I think I need your shoulder theres thunder in the sky lighting to hard to bare all the lost souls are rushing through the air
Not bad :)
This Cold, the rhyme scheme is so smooth
Love it
I’ll be your shoulder any day !!!
Touched by your words. Amen
one of the best inspiring beats ever heard.
Love this!
Why the fuck do I always try to be like Eminem,
I understand that I never had a fuckin chance,
the chance was Slim, reality's finally kicking in,
I don't know why, but they always ask me why I act like him,
It's cuz I rap like him,
But now I'm back again,
I'm back to win, kids, I want y'all to grab your pens,
and jot down every verse that i ever spat to slim,
Thank God for him, cuz without him, man, i wouldn't be pushing through this shit,
I'd be out of my mind, Id be losing it,
God damn,man, im running out of time,
Im running out of rhymes,
Im running out of lines,
Cuz I'm jotting down anything that pops in my mind,
Punch lines? God damn, I'm just too tired to throw another one,
This song's to anyone,everyone, and anyone,
Might as well just hand a gun,
to my haters just like Levy son,
Hate me hun? Baby bum. Cuz your a baby and your a bum!
What the fuck kalvin! You had one year left,
this is it, you ran away and now your life's a wreck,
your life's a ship that just fuckin broke in half and split,
wake up kid! you need a fuckin reality check
It seems like I had it made, but I'm feeling more like a maid,
cuz I have to clean up this mess that I created,
I made this mess, I don't know how I'm gonna say this kid,
this ain't a race, I don't know how else I'm gonna relay this message.
Did u get the last line? "relay" & "race"
im using this for a song ! credit for beat goes to you
ive been really busy with my new album sorry man. but this Is for sure a project im looking toward to doing.
Mystic
dont bother cause im using it and it will be killa.
its free to all n let actual raw talent take the piece
good luck pal
oh i will i got plenty of raps...looking forward to seeing your side of it.
let me guess yours going to be vulgar which is not real music nor rap :)
i am going to share it everywhere just love it
Amazing!! It's unbelievable music ever!
Yea, I'm the man
Here I go to rant
While my opportunities expand
I have these minority's
To say I'm sorry b
I know this isn't what we wanted
We want success
We wanted to stand out just to be the best
We know life is testing us
We don't want to sit on the bottom to having noting to eat
Praying to god on my knees
Maybe tonight will be the day I short my breath and die in my dream
I did everything I was set out to be
Went off for my team
All these nights catching up to me
Playing football being the best player on the team
Drugs entered my life
Now it's like I got a 8" knife stuck in my back
Parents smokin crack
Shits whack
Dividing in my stacks
I'm out here in all the lies speaking facts
Reminiscing that I'm out on a mission
To be the best
No stress
Nothing less played my moves so good that I won the game of king of the chest
Now here we go to contrast
That I'm just I guy looking for a girl with fat ass
Matthew Taddeo wordd
the millisecond delay on the strings, try to adjust ..
Damn you
Ricochet Invader 2 yeahh
Offset staccato strings. Its deliberate.
You are unbeatable, unseekable (you are already are), your mind is sacred and your body is art. You are timeless, and not just the body, that's false, in the casket it's damned without bodily pulse. Atman is Brahman, the soul is God, Christ was a mystic but his poems were lost. Even Buddha never said there's no self, he said "this is not you", but miscreants were twisted, confused. Every single master said that you are a God, so don't forget this to maneuver in frauds.
Love this beat ❤️
I seen an old comment of mine on this Vid.....Omg, I was trying to rap....AHAHAHAHAHA I sounded like an idiot! xD
Don't Make me angry. You wouldn't like me when I'm angry!!! >:)
wooooooord.
Sick beat.
Sorry for this lame comment:( but I uploaded my first beat from fruity loops and would really like it if you guys could give me feedback on how it is! Its hard starting out on youtube and the least i could do is try to spread the word of my music. Thanks guys!
yeah im known as a soldier, and threw my life i've only gotten colder, im just tired of carrying all of this weight on my shoulders, It's so hard going threw life with a regrettable composer , and letting people push me around like a bulldozer ,,tired of being the only one real ya fucking posers, imposters, and boosters ,gonna spit on ya for some exposure cuz i grow tired of being a loner ,Stay smoking that fire so im a stoner,sticky ass shit with one hell of an odor they should of called it oger and i only buy it straight from the grower so forget about all the jokers .....
You got it!!
Still occasionally turning this on. Found this when I was 21, now I'm almost 31... xD Amazing beat. Just incredible!
This is the best instrumental I have ever heard in my entire lifetime. Not even joking. Amazing job.
Luv this!
Just EPIC
Awesome bro
I Really Enjoyed this Inspiring Uplifting selection of music :)
💪 Dope!
Awesome man
Dope track ! Respect
yo this thing is heavy for real !!!
love it x
Once Again Stood up Ready To Beat This Hard LIFE!!
Great beat.