@@elecello Basically in measures 5-8, and measure 10 (and the following measures that repeat the same idea), I would do something different in the left hand. I think I understand why you had the left hand pattern tie into a half note, but I feel like the momentum of the piece you have from the beginning (and virtually everywhere else) just stops, or hits a brief lull. Like, you have this steady moving forward motion which then it comes to an uncomfortable halt (at least for me). If this were my piece (unfortunately, it's not ;D) I would have the left hand maybe go from constant eighth notes to quarter notes in the measures I listed, or have the eighth-note pattern tie into a dotted quarter, followed then by an eighth note as a pick-up to the eighth-note pattern again. Something like that! It's really a rhythm thing in the left hand. In other words, I would do something with the rhythm in the left hand to make those moments "slow down," so to speak, but not come to a complete halt. I hope that makes sense! Again, this is teeny-tiny nitpicking, but I hope it helps one way or another! You probably have more experience composing than I do, so please don't stop writing music :D
@@louiscucunatomusic Ohhhh, I see. As you commented the momentum of this piece halts at many places, and I really admire the alternatives you suggested. Thanks for the informative comment. Not many people give me technical advices, so I'm very happy of your comment. Please look forward to my next work!
Very delicate and gentle
Какая милая вещица! Простая, светлая и радостная! Браво!
Thank you!
How simple and beutiful can this get? Wow!
Very interesting and beautiful composition, keep up the good work!
Beautiful melody that I can listen to many times! Hope to see more of your work! 😀💪
Beautiful music, thanks for sharing your work 👍🤝
sounds cute, and I like it :)
Very nice
Beautiful! 🌺
Thank you!
Really sweet composition Kondo Yosuke. I really like the melody. It's very songlike. (:
Such a beautiful, elegant, yet simple and pure piece of music ! Amazing !
Domo arigato gozaimasu! LIKE 71 from Germany!
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Very nice!! Personally, there's a few TINY changes I would make personally, but this is a very sweet work! Keep composing!
Thank you for your lovely comment! To improve my composition skill, I would like to hear your advice!
@@elecello Basically in measures 5-8, and measure 10 (and the following measures that repeat the same idea), I would do something different in the left hand. I think I understand why you had the left hand pattern tie into a half note, but I feel like the momentum of the piece you have from the beginning (and virtually everywhere else) just stops, or hits a brief lull. Like, you have this steady moving forward motion which then it comes to an uncomfortable halt (at least for me). If this were my piece (unfortunately, it's not ;D) I would have the left hand maybe go from constant eighth notes to quarter notes in the measures I listed, or have the eighth-note pattern tie into a dotted quarter, followed then by an eighth note as a pick-up to the eighth-note pattern again. Something like that!
It's really a rhythm thing in the left hand. In other words, I would do something with the rhythm in the left hand to make those moments "slow down," so to speak, but not come to a complete halt. I hope that makes sense!
Again, this is teeny-tiny nitpicking, but I hope it helps one way or another! You probably have more experience composing than I do, so please don't stop writing music :D
@@louiscucunatomusic Ohhhh, I see. As you commented the momentum of this piece halts at many places, and I really admire the alternatives you suggested. Thanks for the informative comment. Not many people give me technical advices, so I'm very happy of your comment. Please look forward to my next work!
@@elecello Of course! I hope my comments are helpful for you in any way. I am most certainly looking forward to your future projects!