Song would be excellent but you’re blowing your load wayy too early. Keep the synths cutoffs down and the snare doesn’t need to be as complicated-make either a 16 loop with the syncopated snare or a 32 bar loop. It takes away from the song. Also work on your synth spacing-when everything is wide nothing pops. Nice chorus, but a phaser or flanger would be excellent on a few on the synths. Also-you could do the cutoff on the lead synth by note-so when it plays the higher notes it opens up the filter. And your delay is too wet id take it a few db. The lead synth also needs to come down by at least 3db but probably more-it’s overpowering your mix. Lastly, needs more high hat db-and with modulation so it doesn’t sound awful. Some side chain compression would do the whole mix wonders. Eq needs slightly more bass, mids need a small bump, less on the mid highs, and a bump in the ultra highs.
Thanks for all the advice! I'm no professional, only started about a year ago and I'm learning everything myself. I'll try these things in my future songs.
@@Xertyk737 I’ll be honest man this is incredible for a year. Try listening to your mix at lower volumes and it’ll be easier to hear what stands out and what can be adjusted with volume. Last piece of advice is put a compressor on multiple instruments and put them into groups-it really glues things together. Also, I would highly suggest cracking all of your vsts-use rutracker (it’s a Russian site but it’s vetted by forum users)-and sample packs. This would hit so hard if the kick and snare came through-and again you really need to look into volume balancing. I’d highly suggest izotope ozone 11 cracked (it’s easy)- and it has an auto mastering thing. Sorry to draw on but really your biggest problem is the filters are too open (or not eq’d properly) and your individual track volumes are just not correct for when you want to master it. Otherwise the idea is wonderful man keep it up! It’s almost too easy to be too complicated but simplicity is the hardest to master for people like you and I.
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Song would be excellent but you’re blowing your load wayy too early. Keep the synths cutoffs down and the snare doesn’t need to be as complicated-make either a 16 loop with the syncopated snare or a 32 bar loop. It takes away from the song. Also work on your synth spacing-when everything is wide nothing pops. Nice chorus, but a phaser or flanger would be excellent on a few on the synths. Also-you could do the cutoff on the lead synth by note-so when it plays the higher notes it opens up the filter. And your delay is too wet id take it a few db. The lead synth also needs to come down by at least 3db but probably more-it’s overpowering your mix. Lastly, needs more high hat db-and with modulation so it doesn’t sound awful. Some side chain compression would do the whole mix wonders. Eq needs slightly more bass, mids need a small bump, less on the mid highs, and a bump in the ultra highs.
Thanks for all the advice! I'm no professional, only started about a year ago and I'm learning everything myself. I'll try these things in my future songs.
@@Xertyk737 I’ll be honest man this is incredible for a year. Try listening to your mix at lower volumes and it’ll be easier to hear what stands out and what can be adjusted with volume. Last piece of advice is put a compressor on multiple instruments and put them into groups-it really glues things together. Also, I would highly suggest cracking all of your vsts-use rutracker (it’s a Russian site but it’s vetted by forum users)-and sample packs. This would hit so hard if the kick and snare came through-and again you really need to look into volume balancing. I’d highly suggest izotope ozone 11 cracked (it’s easy)- and it has an auto mastering thing. Sorry to draw on but really your biggest problem is the filters are too open (or not eq’d properly) and your individual track volumes are just not correct for when you want to master it. Otherwise the idea is wonderful man keep it up! It’s almost too easy to be too complicated but simplicity is the hardest to master for people like you and I.