Out of all Sayonara remixes, this one strangely sounds like it can fit into a dystopian game. Basically, the MC of that game would be walking into this sort of city that would be abandoned and he/she would be the last remnants of humanity. I can easily imagine this song playing in that sort of situation. There's a feeling of loneliness, desolation, despair, and depression hidden within the song. Some remixes do have these but they are not as fleshed out as here. Honestly, this really is a really depressing song and reminds you of two obligations, one, to never leave a slightly depressed person hanging and two, to never gently open the door.
This version of 'Sayo-nara' is great. The original 'Sayo-nara' uses bizarre musical variations to convey the breakdown of the game program, creating an extremely eerie suicide scene. However, this version of 'Sayo-nara' feels like being trapped in endless darkness, much like Sayori, who suffers from severe depression
Она спрайт. Даже по сюжету, Моника говорит мол все эти персонажи всего лишь спрайты, которые влюбляются в нас. А если смотреть с точки зрения разработчика, то это лишь спрайт с заранее прописанными диалогами
@@Nitrosstuff True ENDING: MC: Fuck the club. Fuck the literature club. i just lost my best friend.. I am out of this town.. But then he realizes monika is waiting for him at the airport and mc rans off and closely gets inside a plane and gets away from this town
Her face looks cute as heck but the thing she is experiencing and the song is sad which made me remember that she likes to make her poems bittersweet, good job for creating a nice remix
I'm really glad you liked it! There's also an alternate version of this track that I'd created for DDLC Salvation Remake! It's called "By a Thread" if you wanna check it out too :)
Thank you! :) There's a reason it's not on my Spotify, I remixed an already existing track that Dan Salvato made, the melody is the same and belongs to him, so I don't think I have rights to publish it under my name on Spotify
I know Monika did all this but she did have a big reason or she was forced to do such, if doing such to someone with this one, it is suppose to be Paula Miner in place of her
It's honestly pretty comforting. Like not in the usual way but in the way of "I understand how you feel" and it basically shows exactly how one feels. Like "I relate to you" kinda stuff. Genuinely amazing
the fact that the algorithm is reccomending me this again is probably not a good sign 💀 (note, this probably doesnt need claryfying, but i think "💀" emoji has multiple meanings, like laughter, cringe, or literally "💀" like a skull reaction literally, idk how to describe it but yeah
"sad version" Actually it was true what he said, this IS sad or depressing and dark. The original, at least when you're intended to hear it and be scared by it from what I think. Which is the first playthrough of Doki Doki literature club because you're not expecting it, if you're going in blind. It's a song that follows a jump-scare so it's supposed to be scary or make you feel unnerved, disturbed something like that you know? i mean, MC even has a mental breakdown and is terrified of the game of hangman that has been played by Monika, if you get me.
Maybe something is wrong with me, but after listening to this version of sayonara all day, I now have an association of this video with space... Probably because it looks like some kind of helplessness of people compared to something great and mysterious like space... P.s. respect to the author, very well done!
Damn this got sadder then the original terrifying Sayo-nara OST of ddlc, hell yeah, this should be the new remade for the Sayori Death Scene, using this to make the saddest cutscene Act 1 or 2? I cant really tell-... "Dont Leave Sayori Hanging!"
This is my take on if the girls went to a playground: Sayori: Hey, Nats? Natsuki: What? Sayori: Can I go on the swings? Natsuki: No! I'm not letting a repeat of last time happen! *Sayori starts crying* Then the rest is just Yuri and Natsuki having an argument while Monika just lets Sayori do what she wants, as long as it doesn't involve death. Between the craziness, this version of Sayonara plays.
It seems to me that this is exactly what Sayori's inner state looked like before the confession. But after MC accepted or rejected it, she realized that nothing could make her happy. The last hope faded, and it was from that moment that she felt like the original Sayo-nara
@@Azazəl Good choice my friend! I'm really happy you came to this conclusion! If nothing good happened so far, there's literally an entire life ahead of you, besides we are so insignificant compared to lives of stars for instance. So we should value our extremely short lifetime and try our best to fill it with happy moments. I remember almost ending myself at some point, and I'm really glad I didn't. Take care and if you wanna talk, don't be afraid to comment some more or give your socials!
@@Azazəl Hey, try not to think about it deteriorating in particular, you should definitely see a medical professional if you have these symptoms. Until then, avoid triggers that could potentially worsen your condition (be it physical or mental). I hope you recover from that state, because remember, it won't last forever.
Hello hello! I wanted to ask if its alright with you if your songs can be used in a rhythm bullet hell game called Project Arrhythmia! Im mainly asking since i wanna use the DDLC songs :>
(in this little thing i did, speaks will be represented with " ", actions with * * and place and time with [ ] ) [Cementery, In Sayori's thombstone, 12:46 A.M, 2018] MC couldn't take it anymore, and he decided to visit Sayori... "One Year..." "One Year since my life fell apart" "One Year since i stopped being happy" "One Year since i found Sayori..." "Hanging..." "To the ceiling..." "Everything went from bad to worse since then" "I stopped going to school after that" "But tried going to the Literature Club some time after" "Only to found that it was disbanded" "None of us could handle it" "Losing our cheery Vice President" "I haven't seen any of the girls since then either" "And i still remember the funeral, the second worst day of my life" "The first one was when i found you" "I still remember everything like it was yesterday" "I didn't said a single word in that day" "It was hard enough to face the fact that you weren't there anymore" "And see everyone in there was..." "Horrible" "The Girls were there, crying out loud" "Yuri, sitting, sobbing" "Monika, Crying while looking at you" "Natsuki, trying to hide it, but she couldn't help it and started crying" "Your Family, Destroyed" "Your Parents, Demolished at the fact of losing their Sunshine" "And all of that being *my fault"* *MC starts Staring at Sayori's Grave * "Your Death was my fault" "Your depression getting worse was my fault" "Hell, maybe even it starting was my fault too" "And when you wanted me to help you" "I was so dense" "So fucking dense and stupid" "I treated you bad" "I was mean to you" "And all you wanted was to make everyone happy" "You just wanted me to spend time with you again" "And even then, i straight up ignored you for Natsuki at one point" "I thought that telling to you that i loved you will help and it probably made you feel worse" *MC Sits against the tombstone * "Man, my parents told me the same old crap to try and make me feel better" " 'It wasn't your fault' they said 'You had no way to know' they said " "But i just can't help it, i could be done more, i know it" "i still remember what i told you when we were kids" "You are my bestest friend and we will be together against the world forever" "Man, what a "Bestest" friend i was" "Didn't even bother to have a proper conversation with you in like 4 years" "Heck, i probably would've seen that something was up with you if i didn't let us to drift apart" "Even something little like walking with you was enough to make you feel a bit better" "But i was so selfish" "And you paid for it" *MC Pulls out a knife and starts crying hard * "I wasn't there for you, and now, you can't be here for me" "All because of me" "I wondered for a long time why you did it" "What was in your head when you did it i wondered" "How you were feeling in that moment i wondered" . . . "And i think i get it now" *MC Points the knife at his own throat and starts crying harder * "I know you wouldn't want me to do this" "If you were here, you'll stop me" "But, you're not here anymore" "...Because of me...." "i'm sorry Sayori" "I just hope i can see you again" . . . *MC stabs himself in his throat, a few hurt sounds came from him, but it didn't stopped him from falling unconscious within secondsn dying a few minutes later from bleeding out * All This was being seen by a Ghost Sayori, who was Crying Hard...
Srry if this is a bit long, and i hope whoever reads this, likes this, i recommend you to read this while hearing the remix, also, srry if my ortography sucks, english isn't my first language, sooo... yes
Out of all Sayonara remixes, this one strangely sounds like it can fit into a dystopian game. Basically, the MC of that game would be walking into this sort of city that would be abandoned and he/she would be the last remnants of humanity. I can easily imagine this song playing in that sort of situation. There's a feeling of loneliness, desolation, despair, and depression hidden within the song. Some remixes do have these but they are not as fleshed out as here. Honestly, this really is a really depressing song and reminds you of two obligations, one, to never leave a slightly depressed person hanging and two, to never gently open the door.
Wow, that was really deep, thank you so much for your feedback! More tracks like this are planned to come out!
@@KiyoraTheFluff No problems. I just thought it might be a good review on the song.
@@atghwegaming3261 It is an amazing review!
@@KiyoraTheFluff Thanks
Holyshit
“sad version”
IT WAS SAD ENOUGH ALREADY
I TRIED MY BEST TO MAKE IT EVEN SADDER >:)
it was more shocking than sad
It felt like pure suffering and just the world coming to and end
Which is kinda soothing to me?
@@KiyoraTheFluff UR A MONSTER(!)
@@KiyoraTheFluffMONSTER
This version of 'Sayo-nara' is great. The original 'Sayo-nara' uses bizarre musical variations to convey the breakdown of the game program, creating an extremely eerie suicide scene. However, this version of 'Sayo-nara' feels like being trapped in endless darkness, much like Sayori, who suffers from severe depression
Poor Sayori she deserved better
Она спрайт. Даже по сюжету, Моника говорит мол все эти персонажи всего лишь спрайты, которые влюбляются в нас. А если смотреть с точки зрения разработчика, то это лишь спрайт с заранее прописанными диалогами
@@fleizer1002bro at least respect the character in question 😭
@@fleizer1002Monika too....
@@fleizer1002 all the dokis is sentience, but only the club president can become self-aware.
Rule number 1:
Never open doors gently.
Gracias tengo novia que ella me quiere y yo a ella pero es difícil pasar por depresión
@Tanner Hale If you haven't played the game, you won't understand
Exactly, break down your friend's door the next time he's late for something
Pft I’ll kick it open and leave dent
*opens door violently*
"in my hand, there is a pen that will write a poem of me and you"
"Monika: Hey Zephyr"
"Zephyr: Hm?"
"Monika: You kind of left Sayori *hanging* "
"Just then the king felt true fear for the first time..."
@@Nitrosstuff True ENDING:
MC: Fuck the club. Fuck the literature club. i just lost my best friend.. I am out of this town..
But then he realizes monika is waiting for him at the airport and mc rans off and closely gets inside a plane and gets away from this town
@@xZephyrOfficial Dont Fuck a club thats embarasing use your hands
Thats more creepy than sad
That would be cool in a horror ddlc mod
It's in the Salvation Remake 😄
This is where the depression came from 🥲
🥲
Her face looks cute as heck but the thing she is experiencing and the song is sad which made me remember that she likes to make her poems bittersweet, good job for creating a nice remix
I'm really glad you liked it! There's also an alternate version of this track that I'd created for DDLC Salvation Remake! It's called "By a Thread" if you wanna check it out too :)
I just listened to it, it’s pretty good too.
I'm surprised this isn't on your Spotify, it sounds beautiful
Thank you! :) There's a reason it's not on my Spotify, I remixed an already existing track that Dan Salvato made, the melody is the same and belongs to him, so I don't think I have rights to publish it under my name on Spotify
We murdering Monika with this one boys!🔥🔥🔥
Nah she was as much of a victim as anyone else
That's a little too far
I know Monika did all this but she did have a big reason or she was forced to do such, if doing such to someone with this one, it is suppose to be Paula Miner in place of her
@@Moodzilla2020she was desperate to Talk to someone real but the game script did not let her, so she did all that.
@@GuK0Cho Ok
It’s….beautiful? I dont know how to describe it. But it’s calming???
Wowow, thank you 😁
There's peace after death
@@Determinator21 that’s true
It is calming
@@Determinator21I will never know that peace and I’m honestly afraid to know
kinda random but
that moment when
that feeling when you relate to a character more than you should
Awwww :(
I have this feeling, it sucks
𝗜𝘁 𝘀𝗰𝗮𝗿𝗲𝘀 𝗺𝗲
I fear nothing.
Expect for girls
I do relate to Sayori down to most of her dialogue and behavior and habits
And this song is Labeled sad version when this song already is sad
sounds like music for a game trailer (in a good way)
It's actually in a mod already >:) DDLC Salvation Remake, I made quite a bit of tracks for this one!
Doki doki literature Life
(Ddlc2)
Please link the mod I wanna see! @@KiyoraTheFluff
Это успокаивает. в плане, что нас ждет всего лишь пустота, а не те мучения, которые я испытываю сейчас
It's honestly pretty comforting. Like not in the usual way but in the way of "I understand how you feel" and it basically shows exactly how one feels. Like "I relate to you" kinda stuff. Genuinely amazing
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)
@@KiyoraTheFluff Of course! Great work ^^
Don’t leave Sayori hanging guys!
Yeah, don't...
she left me hanging first.
PHRASING
I kind of left her hanging today, you know?
@@Hot_Tatar damn, you got the whole squad laughing 😒😒
Jesus that bass is insane
The looking on her eyes and the fact that she looks little and younger... It seems like a child who is losing her hope on changing for good
Dude, this song was already sad enough! WHYYYYY!!!!😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
Satori deserves better! SHE DESERVES THE WORLD!!!!!!
its a game dude
satori boy version i know right
Switcheroo mod reference
@@TheFloweringBUDD I meant Sayori, but that also works 'XD
I love fandom DDLC❤
This is actually rlly good 😭😭❤❤
Thank youuuu 😭😭
@@KiyoraTheFluff No problem!!!!
Heard this in salvation remake actual fire remix fr
Yup, it ended up in there, and thank you so much :D
If i ever give up, i hope to be found with this playing on my speaker
I hope it doesn't have to happen though... Take care, and remember bad things are temporal
the fact that the algorithm is reccomending me this again is probably not a good sign 💀
(note, this probably doesnt need claryfying, but i think "💀" emoji has multiple meanings, like laughter, cringe, or literally "💀" like a skull reaction literally, idk how to describe it but yeah
Htf did you make it more sad. Im impressed.
I'll soon upload the updated version that I did for DDLC Salvation Remake :P
@@KiyoraTheFluffholy macaroni
I love this
"sad version" Actually it was true what he said, this IS sad or depressing and dark. The original, at least when you're intended to hear it and be scared by it from what I think. Which is the first playthrough of Doki Doki literature club because you're not expecting it, if you're going in blind. It's a song that follows a jump-scare so it's supposed to be scary or make you feel unnerved, disturbed something like that you know? i mean, MC even has a mental breakdown and is terrified of the game of hangman that has been played by Monika, if you get me.
Maybe something is wrong with me, but after listening to this version of sayonara all day, I now have an association of this video with space...
Probably because it looks like some kind of helplessness of people compared to something great and mysterious like space...
P.s. respect to the author, very well done!
Wooow, never thought it'd be associated with space :O I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you :D
@@KiyoraTheFluff Thank you for your creativity :3
😁@@TTELbMEHb
Stress, shock, despair, fear
This song would honestly be perfect for the ending of the exit music redux mod
Damn this got sadder then the original terrifying
Sayo-nara OST of ddlc, hell yeah, this should be the new remade for the Sayori Death Scene, using this to make the saddest cutscene Act 1 or 2? I cant really tell-...
"Dont Leave Sayori Hanging!"
good for when yha feel depressed
This is my take on if the girls went to a playground:
Sayori: Hey, Nats?
Natsuki: What?
Sayori: Can I go on the swings?
Natsuki: No! I'm not letting a repeat of last time happen!
*Sayori starts crying*
Then the rest is just Yuri and Natsuki having an argument while Monika just lets Sayori do what she wants, as long as it doesn't involve death. Between the craziness, this version of Sayonara plays.
It seems to me that this is exactly what Sayori's inner state looked like before the confession. But after MC accepted or rejected it, she realized that nothing could make her happy. The last hope faded, and it was from that moment that she felt like the original Sayo-nara
Implying that this song wasn't already sad enough lol.
Sayori...😢
:(
Yeah Don't leave her
Very nice
YO WERE KICKING DOORS WITH THIS ONE 🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💯💯💯
So sad :'
*Sayori gently opens the door.
seloko essa musica é muito boa(omg, this song is so good)
Thank you :D
So fucking good for fanfiction writing man ❤
Thank you so much! :)
Epic
Это успокаивает и одновременно вызывает панику...
Guys im thinking...about..
Noooooo :(
@@KiyoraTheFluff dont worry i spent 2 days to think about it and realised if i do that i wouldn't be able to meet my old friends again.
@@Azazəl Good choice my friend! I'm really happy you came to this conclusion! If nothing good happened so far, there's literally an entire life ahead of you, besides we are so insignificant compared to lives of stars for instance. So we should value our extremely short lifetime and try our best to fill it with happy moments. I remember almost ending myself at some point, and I'm really glad I didn't. Take care and if you wanna talk, don't be afraid to comment some more or give your socials!
@@KiyoraTheFluff Hey i think my Health is deterioring.
Ive had multiple nosebleeds and hearthaches.
@@Azazəl Hey, try not to think about it deteriorating in particular, you should definitely see a medical professional if you have these symptoms. Until then, avoid triggers that could potentially worsen your condition (be it physical or mental). I hope you recover from that state, because remember, it won't last forever.
this reminds me of an 80's horror / thriller movie.
:)
@@KiyoraTheFluff Omg hi! :)
@@vibrantgleam Heya :)
@@KiyoraTheFluff o ma gaw im interacting with the creator-
@@vibrantgleam Yup!
relatable.
:(
Monika really did insult sayori that made her kill herself...
I know she did this, but I won't blame her as she was forced to do this
Actually Sayori did killed herself
tbh, i somehow find this comforting compared to the original Sayonara 😭
God bless you💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Happy toughts!
Travmatik :(
Sayori had her bad day
I've found here vibe of LN2...
The dripping, I don’t think that’s water… is it?
AGH IVE BEEN HERE BEFORE. I forgot I’ve already commented on this and heard it before ahahah
😭
Hello hello! I wanted to ask if its alright with you if your songs can be used in a rhythm bullet hell game called Project Arrhythmia! Im mainly asking since i wanna use the DDLC songs :>
Of course! You can add me on Discord and I can make you some more
(in this little thing i did, speaks will be represented with " ", actions with * * and place and time with [ ] )
[Cementery, In Sayori's thombstone, 12:46 A.M, 2018]
MC couldn't take it anymore, and he decided to visit Sayori...
"One Year..."
"One Year since my life fell apart"
"One Year since i stopped being happy"
"One Year since i found Sayori..."
"Hanging..."
"To the ceiling..."
"Everything went from bad to worse since then"
"I stopped going to school after that"
"But tried going to the Literature Club some time after"
"Only to found that it was disbanded"
"None of us could handle it"
"Losing our cheery Vice President"
"I haven't seen any of the girls since then either"
"And i still remember the funeral, the second worst day of my life"
"The first one was when i found you"
"I still remember everything like it was yesterday"
"I didn't said a single word in that day"
"It was hard enough to face the fact that you weren't there anymore"
"And see everyone in there was..."
"Horrible"
"The Girls were there, crying out loud"
"Yuri, sitting, sobbing"
"Monika, Crying while looking at you"
"Natsuki, trying to hide it, but she couldn't help it and started crying"
"Your Family, Destroyed"
"Your Parents, Demolished at the fact of losing their Sunshine"
"And all of that being *my fault"*
*MC starts Staring at Sayori's Grave *
"Your Death was my fault"
"Your depression getting worse was my fault"
"Hell, maybe even it starting was my fault too"
"And when you wanted me to help you"
"I was so dense"
"So fucking dense and stupid"
"I treated you bad"
"I was mean to you"
"And all you wanted was to make everyone happy"
"You just wanted me to spend time with you again"
"And even then, i straight up ignored you for Natsuki at one point"
"I thought that telling to you that i loved you will help and it probably made you feel worse"
*MC Sits against the tombstone *
"Man, my parents told me the same old crap to try and make me feel better"
" 'It wasn't your fault' they said 'You had no way to know' they said "
"But i just can't help it, i could be done more, i know it"
"i still remember what i told you when we were kids"
"You are my bestest friend and we will be together against the world forever"
"Man, what a "Bestest" friend i was"
"Didn't even bother to have a proper conversation with you in like 4 years"
"Heck, i probably would've seen that something was up with you if i didn't let us to drift apart"
"Even something little like walking with you was enough to make you feel a bit better"
"But i was so selfish"
"And you paid for it"
*MC Pulls out a knife and starts crying hard *
"I wasn't there for you, and now, you can't be here for me"
"All because of me"
"I wondered for a long time why you did it"
"What was in your head when you did it i wondered"
"How you were feeling in that moment i wondered"
.
.
.
"And i think i get it now"
*MC Points the knife at his own throat and starts crying harder *
"I know you wouldn't want me to do this"
"If you were here, you'll stop me"
"But, you're not here anymore"
"...Because of me...."
"i'm sorry Sayori"
"I just hope i can see you again"
.
.
.
*MC stabs himself in his throat, a few hurt sounds came from him, but it didn't stopped him from falling unconscious within secondsn dying a few minutes later from bleeding out *
All This was being seen by a Ghost Sayori, who was Crying Hard...
Srry if this is a bit long, and i hope whoever reads this, likes this, i recommend you to read this while hearing the remix, also, srry if my ortography sucks, english isn't my first language, sooo... yes
Damn man, that's some pretty dark stuff you wrote here.
Also you don't have to apologize for your English, it's pretty good
@@KiyoraTheFluff thx
You're telling me the original is NOT sad?
😶
@jaime__les_patates still.
another french?
𝗦𝗶 𝘀𝗶
It took me a little too long to understand _why_ it was silent.
Can i use this on my mod?
Of course!
@KiyoraTheFluff 🙏
It sound more mysterious than sad
(My english is kinda sh1t xd)
No worries! When I did the remix my English was kinda ass too, that's why I called it "sad" because I didn't know many words back then xD
@@KiyoraTheFluff Ohhh, that's so funny to read, it's like me xD
D o y o u l o v e t h i s ‽
WDYM SAD VERSION it's sad on its own
im genuienly scared
WHAT THE HELL WAS THE ORIGINAL SUPPOSED TO BE!!!!
Apple music pleaseeee!
Might be after the DDLC mod I was doing it for comes out >:)
I thought sayo-nara is sad already. Now i know it can be even more sad
Anyway, why is Sayori hanging around
Isn't this in the Salvation mod?
It is! 😁
Como um jogo que parece tão fofo consegue meche tanto com o psicológico
MORE SAD?
Indeed
For me this is not sad... Is scary for some reason ☠️
Wouldn't think a combine shotgunner would be scared, I found your weakness >:)
@@KiyoraTheFluff oh sure? I don't think so >:)
Yo después de ver mi rule 34:
...
Куда грустнее то?
Ono
...
Quién está picando cebolla 😭
Fun fact: *coke* belongs on pizza
Controversial take 🤨
original arent sad enough?
There's no limit for sadness 😭
col
(crying out loud)
its scary not sad for whatever reason
I like the dark background it has, not just sad, more like, something is just wrong here.
😂😂😂(😶😶😶)
fnaf end credits:
I can understand how its feels