omg 😱 ( TNT explosive 💣) Minecraft gameplay💯💥

On minecraft.net, this is the description of Minecraft: Minecraft is a game about breaking and placing blocks. At first, people built structures to protect against nocturnal monsters, but as the game grew players worked together to create wonderful, imaginative things. It can also be about adventuring with friends or watching the sun rise over a blocky ocean. It’s pretty. Brave players battle terrible things in The Nether, which is more scary than pretty. You can also visit a land of mushrooms if it sounds more like your cup of tea.
Now, I have taken enough English classes to know that this will not get me a good grade. I feel like someone should rewrite it to make Minecraft seem more exciting (because it is).