Edu Skills OET: Writing: George Gale: Purpose paragraph: OET letter:22-7-23: OET Writing made easy

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  • @poongothaip8590
    @poongothaip8590 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you father for the beautiful class
    First of all we have to ask the below 4 questions to gather the information for writing a purpose paragraph ( introduction para)
    1. Who is transferred? ( Patient)- Mr George Gale
    2. Where is he transferred to? ( Location)- Thank you for taking over
    3. What assistance is required? ( purpose)- post - fall care ( temporary residential care)
    4. IN what context assistance is required? ( context)- upon discharge
    Flexibility is our key
    Thank you for taking over Mr George Gale's post- fall care.I am writing to provide a brief summary of his background and plan for temporary residential care upon discharge.
    Or
    Thank you for taking over Mr George Gale's post- fall care. I am writing to briefly summarise his background and plan for temporary residential care upon discharge.
    TO provide a brief summary of= briefly summarise
    Where we can find the introduction info?
    Task- locate
    Whom you are writing to?
    What is their job role ( Designation)- writing task ( last portion of the case note)
    What's your role in the patient's care?- in the beginning of the case note ( soon after the date)
    What type of letter? ( purpose of the letter)- Discharge plan( most recent information) ( just above the writing task)
    Introduction
    IPCPC
    Initiation ( discharger letter)- Thank you for accepting
    Patient ( details)- Mr Dunbar
    Chief complaint/ main issue- Diabetes medication and dietary regimens
    Purpose- for the regular monitoring of his diabetes and encouragement to comply with his medication and dietary regimens
    Context- moving to centreville to live with his daughter
    Example
    Thank you for accepting Mr Dunbar into your care for the regular monitoring of his diabetes and encouragement to comply with his medication nd dietary regimens. Mr Dunbar is Moving to centreville to live with his daughter
    Once again Thank you father for your wonderful strategy for writing a complete introduction to get 3/3.

  • @Asha-i1t4u
    @Asha-i1t4u ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Explained well
    God bless you father

  • @lijalazar9164
    @lijalazar9164 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank you, Father....

  • @salahuddinkhan8557
    @salahuddinkhan8557 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    God bless you father it’s thousand time more from my expectations, it’s proven that EduSkills and father is is real angel for us , thanks father hats off .

  • @elangoemy
    @elangoemy ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Really very useful and got crystal and clear-cut explanations about the introduction and purpose para
    Who is transferred (patient name),
    where he is transferred to (location- into your facility),
    What assistance he is required - purpose (for temporary care and assistance for post fall ),
    In what context assistance is required
    And also when and where use of
    Has had - if a time frame is mentioned like since 2010 or For 6years
    had- past things
    has - present continuous without time frame

  • @Arshaashraf144
    @Arshaashraf144 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Very useful

  • @sumirangi1211
    @sumirangi1211 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you so much
    Father for such a beautiful explanation!! Heartly Thank you 🙏🏻
    I was struggling and used to see lot of videos
    Luckily 🤞🏻 i saw your video few days ago and seems like God helped me to connect with you along with this wonderful platform.
    Your way of explaining each and everything so well is like Awesome and i feel so greatful to connect with you Father!!
    Thank you again 🙏🏻🙏🏻
    Keep bless us by your super session and motivation.

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      You are very welcome

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  • @sheelammasunny6083
    @sheelammasunny6083 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you father

  • @silpak9544
    @silpak9544 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thank you Father for the informative session..🙏🙏🙏🙏👌👏👍

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      You are very welcome

  • @rejanibiju5645
    @rejanibiju5645 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you Dr Saleen Joseph for clearing my concerns regarding the usage of has & has had in oet letter. 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻😍😍😍😍Its very beneficial video. God bless you father🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You're most welcome

  • @catherinepamei78
    @catherinepamei78 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Thank you Father for your concerns and care and amazing classes. I'm learning so much. Stay healthy always.

  • @shanmugapriya8139
    @shanmugapriya8139 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    I am really glad father that you have taken my point into your class.....thank you so much....🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉💐💐💐💐💐💐💐

  • @divyadivakaran3002
    @divyadivakaran3002 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thank you father for the beautiful class, here very well explained how to write each paragraph.

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      You are very welcome

  • @sulochananayak8006
    @sulochananayak8006 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you fr. And thank you all the admin panel. It's a great for me to learn writing. Very informative.
    May God Bless you all.

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      Always welcome

  • @reenarobin3609
    @reenarobin3609 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you father for the wonderful explanation... 🙏🙏

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      You are welcome

  • @sistersaudinurse6847
    @sistersaudinurse6847 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Excellent classes. Thank you so much fr for your support

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      You are most welcome

  • @achusthegame9455
    @achusthegame9455 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you Father🎉

  • @jomoljames6393
    @jomoljames6393 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Thank you father for giving us a wonderful opportunity. ❤

  • @lijalazar9164
    @lijalazar9164 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thank you for accepting Mr George Gale's post-fall care .He requires temporary residential care upon discharge.

  • @smith4u1000
    @smith4u1000 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    ❤❤

  • @sabarilakshmikrish6617
    @sabarilakshmikrish6617 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you father giving this opportunity to

  • @saraswathi3443
    @saraswathi3443 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you, Father, you have clarified our doubts about where and when to use has & has had in the oET letter.

  • @TriptiSharma.
    @TriptiSharma. ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanku father 🎉😊

  • @glovin7368
    @glovin7368 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Thank you Acha for the wonderful class, it's really informative ❤

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      You're welcome 😊

  • @madhubalachoudhary2632
    @madhubalachoudhary2632 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you Father for excellent explanation, it is very much required.
    Thank you for your appreciating words for my purpose paragraph.

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      You are very welcome

  • @manjumanu1465
    @manjumanu1465 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank you, acha, for the beautiful session about the introduction paragraph.🥰🥰🌹🌹
    Thank you for accepting Mr George Gale at your facility for temporary residential care for his mobility issues and disorientation following a fall. He is being discharged today.

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      Always welcome

  • @bincymolreynold7296
    @bincymolreynold7296 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Acha yor letter is supported me a lots

  • @manickamimmanuel8974
    @manickamimmanuel8974 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    🎉

  • @priyathomas9162
    @priyathomas9162 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank you so much Father for taking such an effort to teach us.
    Purpose para
    Who is transferred?
    Where is he transferred to?
    What assistance is he required?
    In what context assistance is required?
    Has had with time frame since/ for
    Has- a factual statement

  • @MosaAnzak
    @MosaAnzak ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much father for your all efforts God bless you best mentor
    Father can you please upload more videos about writing its just my suggestion.. i am learning so much from your videos. Best teaching method🙏

  • @reenarobin3609
    @reenarobin3609 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you for accepting Mr George Gale into your facility, for temporary care and management for his ongoing difficulty with mobility and confusion following a fall. He is being discharged today.

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      So nice of you

  • @sunithad8210
    @sunithad8210 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I am writing to update the current health status of Mr Lionel Ramamurthy, who is recovering from pneumonia and requires continuing care and management following discharge back to your facility
    Thank you for seeing Ms Patricia Styles, who requires an urgent assessment and evaluation due to a suspected recurrence of pericarditis.
    I am writing to refer Jake Peterson, who has hair loss and associated depression and requires special arrangements for the examination upon transition to your university shortly.
    Thank you Fr Saleen Joseph for this wonderful session.💐💐💐💐

  • @arunamithun7243
    @arunamithun7243 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much father for the wonderful explanation 🙏

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      You are welcome

  • @Arshaashraf144
    @Arshaashraf144 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thankyou for seeing Mrs Naima Savory who requires further rehabilitative care and
    management. She underwent left hemiarthroplasty due to fracture left neck of femur on 25/05/2016
    I am writing to present Mrs Karen charm who requires further evaluation and management .She is suspected to have endometrial cancer.
    Thankyou for seeing Mandy Rones who is suspected to have early onset of separation anxiety disorder.He is being discharged today.

  • @jamesonshimpande8099
    @jamesonshimpande8099 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you Father and team for the good work you are doing God bless you.
    Iam writing regarding Mr George Gale, who is being transferred into your facility for temporal care and some assistance. He is recovering well from a fall and has unresolved urinary tract infection. He is being discharged today.
    May i join the daily live classs please.

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  • @Reeja.P.S
    @Reeja.P.S ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you for your wonderful class, Father🙏
    Thank you for accepting Mr. George Gale into your facility
    for temporary care and assistance for his lowered
    mobility and confusion, that
    occurred after a fall with a head strike. He is set to be
    discharged today.

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      You are very welcome

  • @dayanaantony553
    @dayanaantony553 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you father for this informative video.
    MrJake Peterson, an 18-year-old student, requires special exam arrangements and monitoring of his anxiety-associated depression due to hair loss. He decided to move to your University medical practice shortly.
    Thank you for accepting Ms. Patricia Styles requires urgent assessment and management of a possible relapse of pericarditis.
    I am writing to update the current health status of Mr Ramamurthy, who is recovering from pneumonia and requires ongoing monitoring. He is being discharged tomorrow.

  • @jas2045
    @jas2045 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Mr Gale requires your professional care and assistance to post fall following his discharge today.
    I am writing regarding Mr peterson who requires continuous monitoring and exam arrangements following the concerns of his university transfer.
    I am writing to refer Ms Styles who requires your professional assessment and management for pericarditis.
    Thank you for taking over Mr Ramamurthy into your facility after a hip surgery. He requires further treatment care and management following his planned discharge on tomorrow.

  • @binilasebastian4569
    @binilasebastian4569 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you for accepting mr Hakaku into your facility for physiotherapy and rehabilitation of his right leg.He is being discharged.

  • @romatuscano6552
    @romatuscano6552 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I am writing to refer Mr Gale who had an UTI after a fall. He requires assistance and temporary care from your facility following his discharge today.

  • @jomoljames6393
    @jomoljames6393 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    1.I am writing to request Mr George Gale who requires temporary care for his lowered mobility and assessment for his episodes of confusion at your facility .He is being discharged today.
    2.I am writing to introduce Mr Jack Peterson who requires monitor for his hairloss related to depression and organise his exam arrangements .
    3.I am writing to refer Ms Patricia Styles at your facility ,who requires am urgent assessment and management for her suggestive symptoms of pericarditis.
    4.Thank you for accepting Mr Lionel Ramamurthy at your facility who requires ongoing care and support for his activities of daily living.
    Thank you father and admin panel for this opportunity.

  • @silvythomas
    @silvythomas ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I am writing to refer Mr Gale, who require post fall care and assistance at your facility.He is being discharged today

  • @silvythomas
    @silvythomas ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I am writing to refer Mr Ghale who require post fall care and assistance at your facility.he is being discharged today.

  • @Shiji672
    @Shiji672 ปีที่แล้ว

    thank you so much acha🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      Most welcome 😊

  • @remyasreeprakash
    @remyasreeprakash ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I am writing to request a homevisit for Mr Mason Harper who requires further care and assistance to improve his mbility and self care up on dischage.

  • @evangelistsherazsaleem9794
    @evangelistsherazsaleem9794 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I'm writing to in regards to mr Lion Ramamuthy, who is recuperating from pneumonia. He is being discharged by tomorrow to your facility for continued care and management.

  • @nijakuriyakose6016
    @nijakuriyakose6016 หลายเดือนก่อน

    ❤❤

  • @evangelistsherazsaleem9794
    @evangelistsherazsaleem9794 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This letter is being written in regards to Mrs Patricia style,who has been diagnosed with pericarditis she needs an urgent assessment and management from your facility in order to attain good recovery.

  • @evangelistsherazsaleem9794
    @evangelistsherazsaleem9794 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I am waiting to refer Mr Jake Peterson 18 year old student,who has complaint of hair loss which is associated with depression.He requires a separate room for up coming exam due to extreme anxiety.

  • @madhubalachoudhary2632
    @madhubalachoudhary2632 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I am writing to refer Ms Patricia Styles, who requires your urgent assessment and management for relapsing pericarditis. She was discharged recently from Green Valley Hospital after receiving the treatment for Pericarditis.

  • @Parsiklasamsanparsiklasamsan
    @Parsiklasamsanparsiklasamsan ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Gdevening father I m from Pakistan how can I join ur live class on which time plz kindly guide me

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  • @remyasreeprakash
    @remyasreeprakash ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Iam writing to refer Mr Alfred Billy who underwent removal of basal cell carcinoma of the neck. He requires further assessment and management for his speedy recovery at your facility . He is being discharged today.

  • @jijigeorge2684
    @jijigeorge2684 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Very good explanation
    Thankyou father
    Now I realised my mistake
    Mr Gale requires your temporary residential care for his lowered mobility and confusion following a fall.He is set to be discharged today

  • @priyathomas9162
    @priyathomas9162 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Purpose paragraph
    am writing to introduce Mr Jake Peterson, an 18-year-old student with alopecia-associated depression, who is moving to Marchbank University shortly. He requires your assistance in the monitoring of his condition.
    Thank you for accepting Ms Patricia Styles, a 62-year-old widow, who requires your urgent assessment and management for the possible complications of pericarditis.
    I am writing to update you regarding Mr Lionel Ramamurthy, who is recovering from pneumonia and requires your continuing monitoring upon discharge.

  • @lijaaneesh9742
    @lijaaneesh9742 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I am writing to refer Mr George Gale who requires temporary care and assistance at your facility. He is recovering from a fall and a urinary tract infection. He is being discharged today.

  • @silpak9544
    @silpak9544 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank u father for the wonderful session
    Iam writing to refer Ms Patricia Style into your facility, who is suspected to have relapse of pericarditis ,requires urgent assessment and management .
    Mr Lionel Ramamurthy is being discharge back into your care ,who is recovering from pneumonia ,requires contineous care and management at your facility after his discharge tomorrow.
    Iam writing to refer Mr Jake Peterson,who has hair loss and associated depression, requires contineous monitoring and organization of special exam arrangements .
    I dont know this purpose para is correct or not. Kindly correct me father if i wrote wrongly.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

  • @lijaaneesh9742
    @lijaaneesh9742 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    1. Mr Jake Peterson
    I am writing to refer Mr Jake Peterson who requires ongoing care and support. He was diagnosed with hair loss and extreme anxiety due to depression. He is being transferred to Marchbank University.
    2. Ms Patricia Styles
    I am writing to refer Ms Patricia Styles who requires urgent assessment and management at your service. She was suspected to have a relapse or complications of pericarditis.
    3. Mr Lionel Ramamurthy
    I am writing to update current health status of Mr Lionel Ramamurthy who requires ongoing care and management at your facility. He is recovering from pneumonia. He is being discharged tomorrow.

  • @tubinjacobsebastian8889
    @tubinjacobsebastian8889 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you father for this video
    I am introducing Mr Jack Pererson, an 18-year-old student who requires your support and assessment for his extreme anxiety related to a new university transfer that can predispose his alopecia due to possible depression.❤
    Reeja jacob

  • @manjumanu1465
    @manjumanu1465 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am writing to update Mr Leonal Ramamurthy, who was admitted to our hospital due to contact pneumonia. He is ready for discharge and will be back in your care tomorrow.
    Thank you for accepting Ms Patricia Styles into your facility for urgent assessment and management of pericardial.
    Thank you for accepting Mr Jake Peterson at your service to monitor and organize special exam arrangements for hair loss, and associated with depression.

  • @hafizaafrin5650
    @hafizaafrin5650 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Dear Admin panel,I would like to request to check my following purpose para,,,,
    I am writing to you regarding Mr.Gale who needs your professional assistance due to temporary residential care regarding his mobility and confusion following fall upon discharge.

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      Need improvement. Watch video about purpose para

  • @arunamithun7243
    @arunamithun7243 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I am writing to refer Mr Jake Petterson an 18-years-old student,who requires transition to university for a special exam arrangements. He has in depression due to excessive hair loss.
    I am writing to update the current health status of Mr Lionel Ramamurthy a patient of yours,who is recuperating from pneumonia. He requires continued care and monitoring upon discharged tomorrow.
    Thank you for seeing Ms Patricia Styles,a 62-year-old woman,who requires an urgent assessment and management of suspected relapse or complication of pericarditis.

  • @madhubalachoudhary2632
    @madhubalachoudhary2632 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I am writing to refer Jake Peterson, an 18-year-old boarding school student experiencing hair loss and associated depression. He will be moved to your university shortly and requires further monitoring and special exam arrangements.

  • @saraswathi3443
    @saraswathi3443 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I am writing to update the current health status of Mr Lionel Ramamurthy, a 63- year- old widower, who is recovering from pneumonia. He requires ongoing monitoring and continued care at your facilities after his discharge tomorrow.
    Thank you for accepting Ms Patricia Styles, who requires your urgent assessments and management for her possible complication of pericarditis.
    I am writing to refer Jake Peterson, an 18- year- old student, who is suffering from hair loss and associated depression. He requires special arrangements for the exam room and monitoring his condition. He is going to be transferred to your university shortly.

  • @beenaanishkappil
    @beenaanishkappil ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Good morning father can I join today live class

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      Yes you can

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      Link to join OET FREE training and resources:(Telegram group)👇
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  • @pakaofun4550
    @pakaofun4550 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I'm Male Nurse Amous from Pakistan.
    I want to join your Oet course. So what is the plan of nurses. I was attempt OET last October but I can't clear it.
    My last October scoure;
    L 70
    R 210
    W 250
    S 310
    I need you help brother

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      Link to join OET FREE training and resources:(Telegram group)👇
      t.me/oeteduskills
      Be sure of my prayers and support 🙏
      1. Please register your name by texting your full name (First name + Surname) @ what's app
      *91 - 9448441393*(Edu Skills OET)
      Link to join free IELTS training ( telegram group)👇
      t.me/ieltseduskills
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      2. Edu skills OET
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      3. Edu Skills OET Facebook page
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      Kindly follow the Instructions given below regarding Edu Skills application:
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      ✔️ To make OET easy.
      ✔️ To fall in LOVE with OET
      Share the group link with your friends 😇
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      91944 844 1393
      oetskills@gmail.com
      Edu Skills International 🌹

  • @mdianacastelino
    @mdianacastelino ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you father. Now I came to know where I did mistake from this video.
    I am writing to request temporary residential care for Mr George Gale who requires post fall care from your facility. He is being discharged today.

  • @jijigeorge2684
    @jijigeorge2684 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Ms Patricia Styles
    Ms Styles requires your urgent assessment and management for her possible complication of pericarditis .She was diagnosed with pericarditis associatedwith viral influenza and discharged from the hospital on 25 August 2019 .
    Mr Jake Peterson
    Mr Jake Peterson requires your export advise and assistance for his hairloss associated with depression and anxiety.He is moving to Marchband University for his future studies shortly.
    Mr Lionel Ramamurthy
    I am writing to update the current health status of Mr Ramamurthy,whowas diagnosed with pneumonia.He is being discharged tomorrow and back to your facility for the continuity of care.
    Thank you Father for your wonderful class and giving an opertunity to write the purpose of 3 case notes in this you-tube comments.
    Kindly evaluate and give us feedback.
    Thank you 🎉🎉

  • @madhubalachoudhary2632
    @madhubalachoudhary2632 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I am writing to discharge Mr Lionel Ramamurthy back into your care after making good progress from Pneumonia. He requires assistance in maintaining good nutrition and managing his diet.

  • @madhubalachoudhary2632
    @madhubalachoudhary2632 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I am writing to refer Mrs Mavis Brampton, a 72-year-old widow admitted to the Northern Community Hospital on 10 January and diagnosed with pleurisy. She requires ongoing care, further monitoring and support for smoking cessation from your service post-discharge today.
    Please Father provide your feedback for this purpose

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      Please watch the video about purpose paragon this you tube channel….then please write again with answer to 4 questions given in the same video

  • @beenaanishkappil
    @beenaanishkappil ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mr George Gale is transfer in your facility for temparary residential care for post fall.he is being discharge today.

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      …need correction. Reach me @my WhatsApp

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      Link to join OET FREE training and resources:(Telegram group)👇
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      Link to join Edu Skills OET WhatsApp community 👇👇
      chat.whatsapp.com/EbxZkYoLiW3Jc0eIGMaEQN
      Be sure of my prayers and support 🙏
      1. Please register your name by texting your full name (First name + Surname) @ what's app
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      Link to join free IELTS training ( telegram group)👇
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      Kindly follow the Instructions given below regarding Edu Skills application:
      Please login with your details through the website link given below
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      Enter the details ( username, password, email ,first name, last name...... )
      For eg : your name - Aarish Midhun
      Username - arishmidhun
      Password- Aarish11# ( must have 1 Upper case letter, 1 lower case letter, 1 digit, and one 1 special character )
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      ✔️ To make OET easy.
      ✔️ To fall in LOVE with OET
      Share the group link with your friends 😇
      🔗 Link: t.me/oeteduskills
      5. Edu Skills OET English
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      8. Edu Skills OET Malayalam
      www.youtube.com/@OETmalayalam
      Mentor :
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      91944 844 1393
      oetskills@gmail.com
      Edu Skills International 🌹

  • @Drashti-bf8lm
    @Drashti-bf8lm ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hello Father,
    I'm Drashti from the Nursing field Belongs from Gujarat. It would be really appreciated if you could train me under you for the OET exam.
    I've texted you in the Eduskills Application. Please, reply to me if possible and I hope you'll consider my request 🙏
    With good regards 😇

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      Link to join OET FREE training and resources:(Telegram group)👇
      t.me/oeteduskills
      Be sure of my prayers and support 🙏
      1. Please register your name by texting your full name (First name + Surname) @ what's app
      *91 - 9448441393*(Edu Skills OET)
      Link to join free IELTS training ( telegram group)👇
      t.me/ieltseduskills
      (Edu Skills IELTS)
      2. Edu skills OET
      TH-cam channel
      m.th-cam.com/users/EduSkills
      3. Edu Skills OET Facebook page
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      4. Download the Edu Skills Application
      🙌🙌🙌🙌
      Kindly follow the Instructions given below regarding Edu Skills application:
      Please login with your details through the website link given below
      Link : app.eduskills.org.in
      🔻
      Click on Login
      🔻
      Create new account
      🔻
      Enter the details ( username, password, email ,first name, last name...... )
      For eg : your name - Aarish Midhun
      Username - arishmidhun
      Password- Aarish11# ( must have 1 Upper case letter, 1 lower case letter, 1 digit, and one 1 special character )
      🔻
      Wait for the response
      🔻
      Will add you to the appropriate batch.
      🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
      You will receive the next directions after completing the admission procedures... Stay tuned... 👍👍✅
      🌹 Android link:
      app.eduskills.org.in/login/index.php
      🌹 IOS link:
      apps.apple.com/app/eduskills/id6447760034y
      For instructions on how to enroll in the course watch the linked video:
      Enrollment video link - th-cam.com/video/aiojuxHKG0s/w-d-xo.html
      Edu Skills is a Non-Profit platform to positively influence LEARNERS through Experiential Learning pedagogy,
      ✔️ To make OET easy.
      ✔️ To fall in LOVE with OET
      Share the group link with your friends 😇
      🔗 Link: t.me/oeteduskills
      5. Edu Skills OET English
      www.youtube.com/@EduSkills
      8. Edu Skills OET Malayalam
      www.youtube.com/@OETmalayalam
      Mentor :
      Fr. Saleen Joseph
      91944 844 1393
      oetskills@gmail.com
      Edu Skills International 🌹

    • @Drashti-bf8lm
      @Drashti-bf8lm ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you so much father 🙏

  • @sinijainy8763
    @sinijainy8763 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am writing to refer Ms Patricia Style who is suspected to have complication of pericarditis,requires an immediate assessment and management.

  • @anjitha.cboban3763
    @anjitha.cboban3763 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Mr George Gale requires temporary care at your Nursing home for his confusion following a fall. He is being discharged today.
    Please provide feedback on this for my improvement 🙏🙏

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      👌👌👌

    • @anjitha.cboban3763
      @anjitha.cboban3763 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you father 🙏

  • @tonijoseph4266
    @tonijoseph4266 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am writing to introduce Mr Peterson who is transiting to Markbank University shortly and requires monitoring of depression, hair loss and special exam arrangements.
    I am writing to refer Ms Styles to your facility who requires an urgent assessment and management of relapse pericarditis.
    I am writing to update the current health status of Mr Ramamurthy who is being discharged back to your care. He requires your continued care and assistance following pneumonia treatment.

  • @rutgerkanarek1883
    @rutgerkanarek1883 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    *promosm* ☹️

  • @noornm8733
    @noornm8733 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Date: 17 August 2023
    Day: Thursday
    Topic: Writing Sub-test, Purpose paragraph
    Now I am going to share my learning experience
    First of all, we should have to ask the below 4 questions to gather information for writing a purpose para.
    1. Who is transferred? (patient)
    2. Where is he transferred to? (location)
    3. What assistance is required? (purpose)
    4. In what context assistance is required? (Context)
    Example:
    Thank you for taking over Mr George Gale’s post-fall care. I am writing to provide a brief summary of his background and plan for temporary residential care upon discharge.
    Comparing: Now we will compare the written paragraph with the above 4 questions whether we missed any info or not.
    1. Who is transferred? (patient) Ans. Mr George Gale
    2. Where is he transferred to? (Location) Ans. Thank you for taking over
    3. What assistance is required? (purpose) Ans. Post-fall care ( temporary residential care)
    4. In what context assistance is required? (Context) Ans. Upon discharge
    N. B: Flexibility is key, so try to learn as much as possible be patient, and try to learn more and more.
    Example:
    Thank you for taking over Mr George Gale’s post-fall care. I am writing to provide a brief summary of his background and plan for temporary residential care upon discharge.
    Or
    Thank you for taking over Mr George Gale’s post-fall care. I am writing to briefly summarise his background and plan for temporary residential care upon discharge.
    to provide a brief summary of = briefly summarise
    Now the question is, where we can find the introduction info?
    Here are the details:
    Whom you are writing to? What is their job role/ (designation)?
    Ans: In the writing Task (last portion of the case note)
    What’s your role in the patient’s care?
    Ans: At the beginning of the case note (soon after the date)
    What type of letter? (Purpose of the letter)
    Ans. In the Discharge plan (most recent information) / (just above the writing task)
    Now if we see the ISBAR which was taught by Father to write an introduction para
    I: Introduce & identify
    IPC²P:
    I: Initiation
    P: Details of the patient
    C²: Chief complaint (main Issue)
    P: Purpose
    Example:
    Thank you for accepting Mr Dunbar into your care for the regular monitoring of his diabetes and encouragement to comply with his medication and dietary regimens. Mr Dunbar is moving to Centreville to live with his daughter.
    Now if we dissect the whole information then:
    I=Initiation (discharge Letter): Thank you for accepting
    P=Patient (details): Mr Dunbar
    C=Chief complaint/main issue: diabetes, medication, and dietary regimens
    P=Purpose: for the regular monitoring of his diabetes and encouragement to comply with his medication and dietary regimens
    C=Context: moving to Centreville to live with his daughter
    Thanks Father! For your wonderful strategy for writing a complete introduction to get 3/3.

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      Great 😍👍👍👍

  • @smith4u1000
    @smith4u1000 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    ❤❤

  • @pakaofun4550
    @pakaofun4550 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I'm Male Nurse Amous from Pakistan.
    I want to join your Oet course. So what is the plan of nurses. I was attempt OET last October but I can't clear it.
    My last October scoure;
    L 70
    R 210
    W 250
    S 310
    I need you help brother

    • @EduSkills
      @EduSkills  ปีที่แล้ว

      Link to join OET FREE training and resources:(Telegram group)👇
      t.me/oeteduskills
      Be sure of my prayers and support 🙏
      1. Please register your name by texting your full name (First name + Surname) @ what's app
      *91 - 9448441393*(Edu Skills OET)
      Link to join free IELTS training ( telegram group)👇
      t.me/ieltseduskills
      (Edu Skills IELTS)
      2. Edu skills OET
      TH-cam channel
      m.th-cam.com/users/EduSkills
      3. Edu Skills OET Facebook page
      m.facebook.com/oeteduskills/
      4. Download the Edu Skills Application
      🙌🙌🙌🙌
      Kindly follow the Instructions given below regarding Edu Skills application:
      Please login with your details through the website link given below
      Link : app.eduskills.org.in
      🔻
      Click on Login
      🔻
      Create new account
      🔻
      Enter the details ( username, password, email ,first name, last name...... )
      For eg : your name - Aarish Midhun
      Username - arishmidhun
      Password- Aarish11# ( must have 1 Upper case letter, 1 lower case letter, 1 digit, and one 1 special character )
      🔻
      Wait for the response
      🔻
      Will add you to the appropriate batch.
      🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
      You will receive the next directions after completing the admission procedures... Stay tuned... 👍👍✅
      🌹 Android link:
      app.eduskills.org.in/login/index.php
      🌹 IOS link:
      apps.apple.com/app/eduskills/id6447760034y
      For instructions on how to enroll in the course watch the linked video:
      Enrollment video link - th-cam.com/video/aiojuxHKG0s/w-d-xo.html
      Edu Skills is a Non-Profit platform to positively influence LEARNERS through Experiential Learning pedagogy,
      ✔️ To make OET easy.
      ✔️ To fall in LOVE with OET
      Share the group link with your friends 😇
      🔗 Link: t.me/oeteduskills
      5. Edu Skills OET English
      www.youtube.com/@EduSkills
      8. Edu Skills OET Malayalam
      www.youtube.com/@OETmalayalam
      Mentor :
      Fr. Saleen Joseph
      91944 844 1393
      oetskills@gmail.com
      Edu Skills International 🌹