Short Mystery Film | WHITTLING AWAY | AWARD NOMINATED

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  • @cavemanfilms6706
    @cavemanfilms6706 4 ปีที่แล้ว +60

    I think most of these comments here are expecting some horrific, gorey mystery. However, this was simply a really great drama/mystery short about an overbearing father. The set up was really neat, leading us to believe that she was about to do something bad like kill herself, and then maintains that suspense build throughout the rest of the film such as when the blood drops into the water, or the phone call with the kind of creepy grandma. I sat here really expecting granny to have killed her or something. Then the dad goes and finds her and is awashed with relief to see her merely sitting by the water, whittling away. You can really feel the fathers self-awareness at that moment, realising he has been putting too much pressure on her. Really good stuff for a five minute short. Would love to see more like this.

    • @LeonardBillsMcGoatPryor
      @LeonardBillsMcGoatPryor 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      So then where did the drop of blood come from?

    • @DeanneM1726
      @DeanneM1726 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      It wasn't really happening and a front to make us think that she is in danger. I guess a glimpse into a panic fathers' mind. The mother was probably a practicing witch that is catholic living in a cottage; I don't know.

    • @resumewriterbrian
      @resumewriterbrian 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@LeonardBillsMcGoatPryor We solve many mysteries in silence, nature, and art. We discover many more, too. Seek peace, and then you will not only see one possibility. She simply cut herself while carving wood. It happens. Wounds achieved while making art are well-earned. Scars earned in the fight to live as one must are beautiful. Seek calm, before it is too late. There is no need to see only war in wounds.

    • @resumewriterbrian
      @resumewriterbrian 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      It's sad to see that people have lost any sense of what's good. The expectations are for something bloody -- or at least hard to figure out. The mystery of "where she is" gets ignited by the common and pathetic notion that a phone left behind means trouble. In this case, it meant she was paying attention to the right things. Where is she? Mystery enough. Where is he? Mystery enough. What is fatherhood? Mystery enough. What is an emergency? Mystery enough? An wood carver gets a cut, no mystery. No mystery why people imagine the worst. The mysteries of peace, calm, and creative time can only be revealed when you find them yourself. Love how the art covers the math homework. Her version of herself over the version of her the dad might idealize, when he comes to discover she has found her own ideal. We solve many mysteries in silence, nature, and art. We discover many more, too. Seek peace, and then you will not only see one possibility.

    • @roomahgaming
      @roomahgaming 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@resumewriterbrian Most of the viewers don't watch a film from artistic perspective or not cared enough to think deeply. Only those who carefully observes will find the beauty of it.

  • @timbragg4546
    @timbragg4546 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Its interesting because it starts out as if she is suicidal and than his mom says that one line, and when he finds her you know moving forward he will try to be a better dad, its clever.

  • @resumewriterbrian
    @resumewriterbrian 3 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    Gorgeous. If the mystery of where the mystery is plagues any viewer, that viewer must solve the mystery by seeking peace, quiet, nature, solitude, silence, craft. One cannot find oneself in the cluttered world of noise and notions.

    • @TrueIntent
      @TrueIntent  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you for the beautiful insight :)

  • @billgoldstein4215
    @billgoldstein4215 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    This is such a soothing film. It took me in an INSTANT from genuine worry...to total relaxation. It usually doesn't happen like that. I enjoyed this very much. Bravo for pulling this off---especially on pessimistic me.

  • @kushalsaraf007
    @kushalsaraf007 3 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    Where did the blood come from ?
    You can't just show something that is does not exist & call it a mystery.
    There should have been an explanation for the blood drops in the water.

    • @vghostszn4334
      @vghostszn4334 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      It came from the hand because she was testing the knife to see if it was sharp that’s why she grasped it in her hand

    • @TzU_PAi
      @TzU_PAi 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      That's the clue

    • @maxdeen1298
      @maxdeen1298 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      the drops of the blood is Because she had menstruation

    • @vghostszn4334
      @vghostszn4334 ปีที่แล้ว

      @mehrimazedehI asked her myself, she’s my sister so I had an easy way out

  • @8hweirdlive
    @8hweirdlive 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This is very underated the story is great the acting is great the visuals are great the camera work is great just everything about this short film is great this needs more views and praise

  • @zcwte
    @zcwte 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    mystery should be taken out the title

  • @aniketgodbole32
    @aniketgodbole32 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    You really know you stuff man. Very well directed film, if only you get a great script to use your skills to the fullest.

  • @XxNsraaaaoyXx
    @XxNsraaaaoyXx 6 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    Where is the mystery.??

    • @alkemiebala
      @alkemiebala 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Ahmad Almuthaffar
      The dog. And she is a cool bitch.

    • @nkrishnamurthy5954
      @nkrishnamurthy5954 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Life itself is a mystery.

    • @StryzerCorporation
      @StryzerCorporation 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@nkrishnamurthy5954 indeed

  • @samikshasahu8868
    @samikshasahu8868 4 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    how tf was this movie even nominated for an award

  • @KelniusTV
    @KelniusTV 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    What kind of young girl has a deer's head in her room?

    • @apoksubutai5237
      @apoksubutai5237 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thought the same lol.
      Anyways, great film

    • @akashachuas
      @akashachuas 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That's why it is called mystery short film

    • @Alkis05
      @Alkis05 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Maybe she likes hunting.

  • @Mainlythingswithwheels
    @Mainlythingswithwheels 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    great fiming and editing! but didn't get the ending...

  • @RahimBahrain
    @RahimBahrain 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    I think mystery here is there's no mystery...!

    • @TrueIntent
      @TrueIntent  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Abdul Rahim Hasan exactly!

  • @6Four6Films
    @6Four6Films 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    What was this fimed on and edited with please? It looks really profesional!

    • @TrueIntent
      @TrueIntent  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      This was shot on a Canon C100 mark II with Rokinon prime lenses. Edited on Adobe Premiere. Thanks for the complement!!

    • @6Four6Films
      @6Four6Films 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@TrueIntent No problem. Thanks for getting back to me!

  • @shonenbag6478
    @shonenbag6478 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I loved following this plot! Truly kept me guessing!

  • @mikewilson2036
    @mikewilson2036 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    that is drama not mystery. we new she was down by the water should of kept that part from us.

  • @hamdqusair4646
    @hamdqusair4646 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    i can watch this over and over again and i wont get bored

  • @JerryThres
    @JerryThres 8 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Nice work Akram!! Beautifully Shot!

  • @sinlesscondemned
    @sinlesscondemned 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I didn't get it. Can somebody please explain?

    • @alkemiebala
      @alkemiebala 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      MORINA BAKSHI
      She killed the dog and she has that killing instinct.

    • @umeshgawas
      @umeshgawas 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      But we could hear the dog in middle of the film.

    • @alkemiebala
      @alkemiebala 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      umesh gawas Dead dogs don’t bark. That was before getting killed.

    • @vielkadenerson2534
      @vielkadenerson2534 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      For a change had a happy ending but most of the viewers didn't like it .

    • @vielkadenerson2534
      @vielkadenerson2534 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Oh shit ! Did she kill the dog ?

  • @amiritayda470
    @amiritayda470 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is award winning?

  • @micheled8764
    @micheled8764 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I'm sorry. Not good.

  • @manzana5408
    @manzana5408 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    That's it?

    • @LB-qs3bt
      @LB-qs3bt 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      its a five minute short, dude. not a lot of time for a shyamalan twist :P

    • @manzana5408
      @manzana5408 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LB-qs3bt , lots of 5 min shorts have an ending.

    • @LB-qs3bt
      @LB-qs3bt 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      ABC 123 out of curiosity, what didn’t you like about it? I thought there definitely was an end - a satisfying one at that; the enigma is “where is his daughter?” And he finds her... in the end.

    • @roomahgaming
      @roomahgaming 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Lots can happen in 5 minutes shorts, but given the time frame of 48 hours is tough to pour depths in 5 minutes film unless you have tons of experiences. I once created a visual novel within 48 hours with a help of a friend for the storyline, we thought there were no red flags and the readers seems to be enjoying it, at least 72 positive comments were received. Although, upon trying to refine and make an update for the visual novel, I found there's so many red flags that only those who carefully observes will find. I found them, so that's not a good sign.

  • @TinyTreasures
    @TinyTreasures 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    DONT MAKE US JOK

  • @hiarmyonces1831
    @hiarmyonces1831 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Amazing production

  • @binibiningkim1238
    @binibiningkim1238 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Didn't get it

  • @myleshunterfilm
    @myleshunterfilm 8 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Well done and what a fantastic logo

  • @roccgg
    @roccgg 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Well done ✔

  • @Inconnu0001_
    @Inconnu0001_ 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    ma prof d'anglais m'a donner une compréension oral

  • @martareis6198
    @martareis6198 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    What??

  • @jenh4812
    @jenh4812 4 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    Just wasted 6mins of my life. Makes nearly no sense

  • @slicktrain
    @slicktrain 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This was a waste of my time

  • @rjbinning7535
    @rjbinning7535 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Garbage mystery

  • @yourstruly10913
    @yourstruly10913 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I am sure even the guys who made this also don't know what is motto behind this,pathetic,

  • @morneymohammed8139
    @morneymohammed8139 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    nice twist.