ok.... wow this was hard to watch. a lot of the character are too big for the stages and the same goes for dave's entrance sprite,the percentages are all over the place, the animation was choppy and slow,some of the idles and sprites could use some work,the intro could've been shortened down,the pace needs to be slowler,and OH GOD IS THIS A TRAIN WRECK IN THE ANIMATION PART! but it's your first set so i can't complain that much plus i would talk about the audio as well but..i also have audio delay problems while editing so yeah.. (and this is all meant to be constructive criticism so please don't be mad at me) but as for the moveset itself... now i'm not into Rosedoodle's source but this was ok. i don't get neutral b but it's...weird but interesting i guess? (it could've been down b in my opinion),the side b is simple but a good recovery tool and a getaway option,WHAT THE HECK IS UP B?!??!?!?!? (it's way to simple and generic),down b is a nice counter,the final smash..eh... again this isn't that good but this lawl has potential and this is your first moveset so again i can't really juge it to much....just keep improving ok. ALSO I RECOGNIZE THAT SILHOUETTE FROM ANYWHERE. SNT BABY!!!!
I can’t wait to see Ricky Rogers ‘s move set
This would be my new main for sure
It's the lore that got me in
But it is the Beepu that drawed me in further
Nice :)
Decent enough.
ok....
wow this was hard to watch. a lot of the character are too big for the stages and the same goes for dave's entrance sprite,the percentages are all over the place, the animation was choppy and slow,some of the idles and sprites could use some work,the intro could've been shortened down,the pace needs to be slowler,and OH GOD IS THIS A TRAIN WRECK IN THE ANIMATION PART! but it's your first set so i can't complain that much plus i would talk about the audio as well but..i also have audio delay problems while editing so yeah.. (and this is all meant to be constructive criticism so please don't be mad at me) but as for the moveset itself...
now i'm not into Rosedoodle's source but this was ok. i don't get neutral b but it's...weird but interesting i guess? (it could've been down b in my opinion),the side b is simple but a good recovery tool and a getaway option,WHAT THE HECK IS UP B?!??!?!?!? (it's way to simple and generic),down b is a nice counter,the final smash..eh... again this isn't that good but this lawl has potential and this is your first moveset so again i can't really juge it to much....just keep improving ok.
ALSO I RECOGNIZE THAT SILHOUETTE FROM ANYWHERE. SNT BABY!!!!
Yeah, I agree. It is pretty much a train wreck.
@@thehoodedman4271 if you ever need help i can help you at anytime.
@@ryderwilliams5691 Will do!
@@ryderwilliams5691 Should I do an Update Patch first?
@@thehoodedman4271 you could like with Gordan Ramsey 's set (which is now deleted) or wait until you do more characters. It's honestly up to you.