Woah....this is so romantic story....i love it author. But please dont make a sad story this time. I want feel them with a romantic love story....ahh....my heart just for Jenlisa
Hi author you are back.. 🌹 Wow, this story was a real fast JenLisa couple and it's so romantic. I hope I am that brave to do things in public. 😜😜. Very good start of this episode. Thanks for coming back with a new story. Your ABWY story will fresh in my mind and my heart. Hope you can fill me up with this next one. Thanks 🌹 Thanks Author for sharing 😘 JenLisa Forever ❤️ ❤️ PS : Oh went through the teaser, I will feel roller-coaster again later stage 😢😅😁😜
Awww... I was actually nearly at episode 10 but I back again to read in the start, I just can't stop from myself to read it from the start it was really make my heart beat fast author, and I really love all you ff, your beautiful words that make my heart beat so fast and with the romantic moments in this beautiful story oh my goshhhh... Author I'm in love with you amazing story ❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍, I start to read it back again because I don't to end this story so fast... Ahahhaa
Remember all of you here or most of you here are newbie and young but it's not acceptable because being a writer have no label or basis to be a good writer it depends on how persistent you are and positive to look forward for making a good story and connect with your readers. Comments at some point will help you to grow and improve not to give you lies praised and put you down but at the end of the day it's your work it depends on you how you will handle and combine it to have a good result. Observe how they react o your new story they already knew your previous story and they are hoping that this would not a long chapters and sad story again like before that only sad, tradegy, and breaks up please make a new style make it more light and connected this time. Learn to balance your story into sad then romance then happy moment don't focus only on the third party, making the lead star always into a stressful situation to be honest this is what I felt here again when I read your teaser. Are you really a fan of this BP? Are you really into reality? What is your basis to create story? What is your reason why you creating or written a story? I hope you will not make a long chapters like until 40 plus that makes your viewers annoyed and stressful for waiting then nothing change with the flows.. this is all just an advise this time it will be clear as water to observe your work and you iif you will make some changes or still the same then nothing tondo for you if you won't change for good. Commitment s important never give any reason that makes you in a crucial situation in the end. Try to listen, and observe your work, think positive for the advise given to you, and have some courage to ask for guide, observe the others work so you have guide to create a better one most important thing is be humble and learn to get along with your readers and observe the changes fix your work if needed. Balance your story don't stress your readers and viewers let them enjoy and feel your story so they could feel you too. Believe me as many authors of different stories I am with here and books. Better to low down your pride with dignity and high expectation with your work than to be arrogant but nothing to be praise in the end but only dissapointment. I know you know what I mean. So looking forward for your work.
I guess this story will have a super stressful chapters again like the first one. Looks like wanted to have a long story but the positive result is only on the last part. Nothing change and never learned from the previous. I hope it would not happen here and the author have a guts to listen this time also have a care to observe the reaction of viewers not only his own perception. This is only a reminder coz if you observe your subscriber and viewers are not change too. Try to observe how the other good authors create their own story they have a uniqueness in their work and connection with the readers. Try to read " career over love, lost heart, pervert photographer, revenge or love, our love never faded, new professor is my wife, 24/7 with you this are some off the story with the good author for your guide only. Even if you can write story it doesn't mean it's fit you, sometimes you need guide to create something that can relate and make your audience happy not only for your own satisfaction or Basta nakagawa Lang mg story okay na yun. I hope you know how to listen too when some people give you suggestions it's not about you but your work. Good luck!
Every story about jenlisa always the same story .. Why u guys can make a difference story ? Why always make jennie leave lisa or lisa leave jennie because their want her love happy .. After their together .. Always same story .. I like to read jenlisa story before but now it's bored to read .. Even this not my story but i can know already what gonna happen and the ending
nice start author.. so romantic eyyy... and its beautifully describe the details of their romantic moment..
Amazing first episode....Good job authornim....Next please....:)
Woah....this is so romantic story....i love it author. But please dont make a sad story this time. I want feel them with a romantic love story....ahh....my heart just for Jenlisa
Interesting story...
Excited to the next episode!!!! Great job author.. keep up the goodwork and stay safe always..
Author next ep please😘😘😘😘 waiting
Aww author why all of your story is nice hihi btw plss next again and keep safe
Waiting for next episode
just make them strong💖
Keep up the good work authornim 😊
OMG thanks author your back again god bless😇😊✌ hoping you upload soon
ommoomoogosshh first part but it's getting interesting wwwoooaah moreee eps
Hi author you are back.. 🌹
Wow, this story was a real fast JenLisa couple and it's so romantic. I hope I am that brave to do things in public. 😜😜. Very good start of this episode. Thanks for coming back with a new story. Your ABWY story will fresh in my mind and my heart. Hope you can fill me up with this next one. Thanks 🌹
Thanks Author for sharing 😘
JenLisa Forever ❤️ ❤️
PS : Oh went through the teaser, I will feel roller-coaster again later stage 😢😅😁😜
Oohh new ff huh
Nexxxxt plzzzz asaaap
Im sorry author im late😅 but youre back i been waiting for your new story, btw its good😍😎😘
OhMayGhaaad...... It's only the 1st part but I'm going to die of shivering.. waaah.. I'm gonna die right now.. send help please.. 😆😆✌✌
Awww... I was actually nearly at episode 10 but I back again to read in the start, I just can't stop from myself to read it from the start it was really make my heart beat fast author, and I really love all you ff, your beautiful words that make my heart beat so fast and with the romantic moments in this beautiful story oh my goshhhh... Author I'm in love with you amazing story ❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍, I start to read it back again because I don't to end this story so fast... Ahahhaa
Finally you're back with the new ff,, thank you author-nim... Fighting
it's also beautiful story author next episode plss asap author
I repeat it again i really miss this 🙁😢
You're back!!! Welcome back.. I will follow your story like I did, before.... Keep it up... Fighting!!
Omg God another good stories I like it keep it up author
KEEP SAFE and Godbless
Yeeyy new story...hey author i wonder how many episode this story have?
I dont know but ill try to keep it short than the first one
@@itsmekitten7596 okie author..im looking forward on this story hehehe...keep up the good work author
why is there a lyric you just bothered i can't read properly becouse the lyric is blocking the letter
Remember all of you here or most of you here are newbie and young but it's not acceptable because being a writer have no label or basis to be a good writer it depends on how persistent you are and positive to look forward for making a good story and connect with your readers. Comments at some point will help you to grow and improve not to give you lies praised and put you down but at the end of the day it's your work it depends on you how you will handle and combine it to have a good result. Observe how they react o your new story they already knew your previous story and they are hoping that this would not a long chapters and sad story again like before that only sad, tradegy, and breaks up please make a new style make it more light and connected this time. Learn to balance your story into sad then romance then happy moment don't focus only on the third party, making the lead star always into a stressful situation to be honest this is what I felt here again when I read your teaser. Are you really a fan of this BP? Are you really into reality? What is your basis to create story? What is your reason why you creating or written a story? I hope you will not make a long chapters like until 40 plus that makes your viewers annoyed and stressful for waiting then nothing change with the flows.. this is all just an advise this time it will be clear as water to observe your work and you iif you will make some changes or still the same then nothing tondo for you if you won't change for good. Commitment s important never give any reason that makes you in a crucial situation in the end. Try to listen, and observe your work, think positive for the advise given to you, and have some courage to ask for guide, observe the others work so you have guide to create a better one most important thing is be humble and learn to get along with your readers and observe the changes fix your work if needed. Balance your story don't stress your readers and viewers let them enjoy and feel your story so they could feel you too. Believe me as many authors of different stories I am with here and books. Better to low down your pride with dignity and high expectation with your work than to be arrogant but nothing to be praise in the end but only dissapointment. I know you know what I mean. So looking forward for your work.
Thanks for your kind advice.❤
On behalf of the author.
15:03 thx authour i now its i mistake but you made my sad day into a happy one ily n/a
Oh thanks, I didnt notice it, there was a problem before I exported it the file was replaced, i didnt saw this one
I guess this story will have a super stressful chapters again like the first one. Looks like wanted to have a long story but the positive result is only on the last part. Nothing change and never learned from the previous. I hope it would not happen here and the author have a guts to listen this time also have a care to observe the reaction of viewers not only his own perception. This is only a reminder coz if you observe your subscriber and viewers are not change too. Try to observe how the other good authors create their own story they have a uniqueness in their work and connection with the readers. Try to read " career over love, lost heart, pervert photographer, revenge or love, our love never faded, new professor is my wife, 24/7 with you this are some off the story with the good author for your guide only. Even if you can write story it doesn't mean it's fit you, sometimes you need guide to create something that can relate and make your audience happy not only for your own satisfaction or Basta nakagawa Lang mg story okay na yun. I hope you know how to listen too when some people give you suggestions it's not about you but your work. Good luck!
Excuse me what is the tittle of the song that Lisa sings?
best part by Her
wнen ι recall тнe тraιler or тeaѕer oғ yoυr ѕтory ι canт нelp вυт тo ғeel υneaѕe ιтѕ lιĸe мy нeaт ιѕ already вroĸen. нeнe. вυт тнιѕ ғιrѕт epѕ gιveѕ мe мore eхcιтeмenт тo waιт ғor тнe neхт one тo coмe. canт waιт ғor мoooorreee! ĸeepιт υp oυr ĸιттen aυтнornιм. тaĸe care.
one oғ мy ғav aυтнor. 🖤
Every story about jenlisa always the same story .. Why u guys can make a difference story ? Why always make jennie leave lisa or lisa leave jennie because their want her love happy .. After their together .. Always same story .. I like to read jenlisa story before but now it's bored to read .. Even this not my story but i can know already what gonna happen and the ending