Intro was very long. Most viewers leave after a few seconds if it's not immediately interesting. That doesn't mean it needs clickbait, but if you're not in it in those first few seconds, they won't stick around for you. I also caught the misspelling of porcupine place. Video could've benefitted from being significantly shorter. Audio could've been better. Less echoey. Keep creating!
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Intro was very long. Most viewers leave after a few seconds if it's not immediately interesting. That doesn't mean it needs clickbait, but if you're not in it in those first few seconds, they won't stick around for you. I also caught the misspelling of porcupine place. Video could've benefitted from being significantly shorter. Audio could've been better. Less echoey. Keep creating!
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment and let us know how to improve. This was really helpful!!