This is awesome. Here's a more localized version of your translation I tried At the side of a snowed in road, Are you, who is swallowing back tears, cold? I've rubbed this windbreaker for you so much it's fraying. Changing careers didn't even scare you, Why do you need to hold on to this? With a heavy heart I had decided today was the day to drive you home. Forgive me for not sending flowers anymore As wounds still need to heal We only know to fear them After its pedals litter the cemetery in the heart If I am the only one you will marry... We will all return to dust in the end ... Waiting your whole life for some day will have a price Everyone only has these two hands The harder you hold on, the harder it is to get To get it you must first know how to accept losing it We once traveled down a snowy road together Why cry over good things? Who can have Mt. Fuji simply because they love it? Why not think that this sadness comes from your imagination You won't find it staining your eyes when you look at it in a test tube ... Forget about the grudges between us How many times have the cherry blossoms bloomed?
This is awesome. Here's a more localized version of your translation I tried
At the side of a snowed in road,
Are you, who is swallowing back tears, cold?
I've rubbed this windbreaker for you so much it's fraying.
Changing careers didn't even scare you,
Why do you need to hold on to this?
With a heavy heart I had decided today was the day to drive you home.
Forgive me for not sending flowers anymore
As wounds still need to heal
We only know to fear them
After its pedals litter the cemetery in the heart
If I am the only one you will marry...
We will all return to dust in the end
... Waiting your whole life for some day will have a price
Everyone only has these two hands
The harder you hold on, the harder it is to get
To get it you must first know how to accept losing it
We once traveled down a snowy road together
Why cry over good things?
Who can have Mt. Fuji simply because they love it?
Why not think that this sadness comes from your imagination
You won't find it staining your eyes when you look at it in a test tube
...
Forget about the grudges between us
How many times have the cherry blossoms bloomed?
好好听耶
Thank you for the translation! May I kindly ask you to translate more Canton songs so that I can show some more to my foreign friends please? 🙏